ViTharv OS- The Reunion!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey I am back with another OS on ViTharv!

I really don't know what I had started with and what this OS has turned out to be. I wanted ViTharv together on Holi. Hope we will atleast see a glimpse of these on Holi in show.


ViTharv OS- The Reunion!



She sat there in the garden, seeing everyone enjoy the festival of colours. She had promised Sujata chachi that she will atleast join them in the garden. She had decided not to play since the day Atharv had left her, ditched her and his mother and gone far away from their lives. Not long ago, she was fighting the society for the man, she loved. Today she is fighting the society and herself for her son.


All she ever wanted in life, was to lead a simple life with the man she loved, with the man who taught her the meaning of life, with the man who made her fall irrevocably in love with him. She remembered their first meeting in the cow shed and their fight! Little did she know, that their meeting would change the course of life. The man she detested, the man who insulted her father, would one day give her the best moments of her life.



Atharv had been right all along, about her father's true character. She had always placed her father above him, she had always placed her trust in her father more than him, and she had let her father dictate her life from her childhood till now. She had been very timid, shy, obedient and sometimes arrogant. Her pride for her father had shattered that very day, when her mother finally told how he was a wife beater; he was a cruel husband, a soul less father.



That day she finally realised the difference between her father and her husband. Her father tried to control her, Atharv gave her freedom. Her father tried to claim his daughter, Atharv had given her the freedom to claim him. Her father had clipped her wings in her childhood; Atharv not only gave her wings, but taught her to fly. Her father made her obey him, his dreams were laden on her, Atharv told her to dream and helped her achieve her dreams. Her father, she respected him because he was her father, but Atharv commanded respect. Her father claimed to love her, but Atharv proved that he loved her. Her father believed in ego and status, Atharv believed in relations.

As soon as her son, Vivaan came running towards her to apply her colour, she knelt down on her knees and he happily applied colour. After Atharv, only he had bought the colours back in her life, he had bought that lost Vividha.



His blood went from ice cold to boiling.



As Vivaan ran away to play along with his friends and family, a very similar hand grasped her and went inside her house. Finally when she tried to understand what happened, she saw him standing in front of her.


Vividha: "Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? Jaane do mujhe!" she screamed while trying to get out of his grip.


Atharv: "Aapko rang lagane ka haq sirf mera hai...aaj holi hai aur sirf mera haq hai aap par, aapko pehle rang lagane..."

Vividha: "Wo haq kho chuke ho tum..." she said angrily.

That's when Atharv revealed how he was cheated by the doctor, for four years he was kept in a different family, drugged by the very family who probably he was about to accept. He finally broke down, he admitted that he was stupid enough to let himself go away from her. How he suffered in the past 4 years, when her dreams haunted him.



Vividha slowly took his entire being, his eyes were red and brimming, his body was shivering, and he was hurt beyond words. The incident had deeply impacted him. She gently pecked his lips, he surrendered to her love. She broke the kiss to see him faintly smile, acknowledging her presence around her.



He caved in and hugged her tight; he finally shed those tears he had held back from innumerable nights. He finally felt relived, relived that she was here and he didn't have to be strong in front of her. He could peacefully cry, and she would take care of him.



Vividha was relieved to see him, back to her, where he belonged. She remembered how she would sometimes keep staring at the empty bed in the tabela and talk to his photo. She had held back her tears, her feelings, her fears and her love for a long time. All she wanted was to go and crush in his arms. Be safe and secured again. She had missed him, more than anything in life. She had missed those moments, of stolen moments, of stolen kisses and of every time they were intimate. She had declared that she was his and his only. She remembered the moment when she had kissed him in the library. She remembered when she had kissed away his pain, soothed his anger. Her touch was all needed to calm him down, bring back his calm and composed nature. She was not the woman who would sacrifice the man she loves, she was in love and had every right to claim him back, she had no qualms about bearing her soul in front of him, cause she knew, he will understand, she had no qualms about crying in front of this man, cause she knew, he will wipe her tears away and be her rock, she had no qualms about sharing her aspirations before him, cause she knew he will give her the much needed motivation to follow her dreams and soar in the sky. He had given her wings, he had given her hope, he had given her confidence and he had empowered her. He had been that person in her life, which was hers only! He was all that mattered to her.

As she gently broke the hug, he cupped her face and tenderly pecked her forehead. She took him to the window, and she pointed towards Vivaan.


Atharv: "Hamara beta..."


She nodded in agreement. He pulled her in a rib crushing hug.


Vividha: "Ab rang lagane ka pehla haq tumhaare bte ko diya hai..."

All he did was smile while tears clouded his vision. He had lost her, but had come back to claim her. Now he had a son. Their baby, their son!

He slowly pulled her in his arms and both stood there listening to their hearts beat in rhythm. Later he gently took her hand in his and carefully removed the Kadas and placed a soft kiss. She just stood there. He then took over the necklace and once again he laid butterfly kisses along her nape and her bare neck! She had started to melt in his arms and he knew that! He just had to go near her to have her weak in her knees. She was responding to his touch. And that was just what he needed and he continued her assault on her. He then removed her maang teeka and left his marks on her. He had marked her as his! Only his!

As he was about to pick her up and romance her, their son knocked on the door.


Vivaan: "Mumma sab aapko bula rahe hai..."


Atharv wanted to spend his first ever Holi with their son, he had already lost 3 years of his life, but Vividha held him back.


Vividha: "Rehne do na...aaj tumhaara waqt sirf mera hai..."


He encircled his arms around her waist and pulled her closer. He tucked away her hair to one side, and laid butterfly kisses along the length of her neck. He forced her blouse down, kissing her shoulder. She was melting with his every touch. He still had the same effect on her, which he had years ago. She turned facing him. She slowly started unbuttoning his shirt, while his lips wandered over her bare shoulders and his hands creating patterns on her back. She pushed him back towards the wall. She kissed his chest passionately. He picked her up and put her down on the bed. He took her lips in a passionate kiss; slowly easing them open as they both drowned themselves in each other, their tongues fiercely battling, their love shining through. They parted to breathe, staying in the embrace feeling the emotions running high in both of their hearts.

He kissed her again, almost wanting to get over with, but not daring to yet, not sure which way to turn; and he didn't want to hurt her feelings. It was all a little more difficult that he'd thought. But as they kissed, he forgot about everything; and the ugliness of her past slipped slowly from her. There was no memory, no time, and no other person; there was only Atharv and his incredible gentleness, his endless passion and love for her, as he moved ever so gently toward her, and they moved closer and closer, until suddenly they became one and she could feel herself melt into him and she could bear it no longer. It was all so exquisite, and then suddenly they both exploded in unison and Vividha lay in Atharv's arms in complete amazement. There was no similarity at all with what had happened to her before, no memory, and no pain, there was nothing but Atharv now and the love they shared!

Vividha finally spoke in the entire moment!


Vividha: "Thankyou for being so gentle Atharv!"


Atharv pecked her forehead and pulled her closer in his embrace. They snuggled closer to each other, to feel the love they had for each other and the promise they had given each other, to stay together in health and sickness, in sadness and happiness.


As they had promised each other, a relation of equality, a relation of love, a relation of respect.

The End!

I hope I have lived upto the expectations of ViTharv fans!😳

Positive criticism welcome!

Love,

Mayu

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saharsonu thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Plzz can we get this now like Rite Now.
Mayu as usual love it.keep it up.
This OS is ray of light for me in these days😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I want this scene

Beautiful as always 😳
Edited by Ultimatevikku7 - 8 years ago
fusilli thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good work... I hope to see the intense Atharvividha in our show now.
MysticNights thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is a beautiful one-shot. Awesome.
Edited by MysticNights - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awe it's beautiful mayu. .
The reunion on holi like ur OS seems to be coming true likely. 😆

Loved it :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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heloo Mayu... just read your Vitharv OS.. brilliantly put together ,mate.. so apt to the thought behind it,fits perfectly in the currently runnng strand. Mayu, in particular I enjoyed the backdrop references to vividha's relationships with her father intially, and the changes to her personality after she comesacross Atharv.. very helpful for me as I joined the JNDSD bandwagon only recently in January 2017.
thanks Mayu, for an engaging piece of creative writing..hope to read some more of your creations... love hammie
taraka2005 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mou 🤗

awsm lovely OS !!!


i badly need to see this happen on my screen 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Reserved as usual!
[waiting for the day I can read and comment right away lol]
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is too good!

Love it when he comes from behind and hugs/pulls her. Never rough but strong yet gentle.

You describe everything so well.

I'm glad you made vividha say,"you're only mine for for now"

Lovely job! Uff if only our story's reunio was this sweet
Edited by Pagalpinky - 8 years ago

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