Cinderella Series~ NRI's Cinderella ~~Last part @ 35 on 17-03-2017~

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Jinro Soju

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Posted: 8 years ago

#141

have no time to write anything else, giving out just link, and thanks for the comments

Part 4

little bit steamy, so have fun

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xAishuuux

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Posted: 8 years ago

#142

**When you are on point even on a Monday surprise** :)))

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crazymaneetian

@crazymaneetian

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Posted: 8 years ago

#143

Hi

M just not sure whether I replied to part 3 or not or did I just fall asleep after readng it...anyways...really nice build up and first meeting...both have each other's face imprinted on their minds...i could visualize the meeting scene and the dupatta flying...well written...and the message he send her was spine chilling...wow so the story begins now...what about the other characters ...will they feature actively in the story or will it be just these two?

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Posted: 8 years ago

#144

Geet tried to make him understand their position that they are not meant to be together but Maan made his intentions very clear...I am very shocked that Geet offered him to be with him for one night...

does she love him but knowing the difference between their status she wants just one night with him as memories for life time...

waiting for next part...thanx for pm...

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

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Posted: 8 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: crazymaneetian
Hi

M just not sure whether I replied to part 3 or not or did I just fall asleep after readng it...anyways...really nice build up and first meeting...both have each other's face imprinted on their minds...i could visualize the meeting scene and the dupatta flying...well written...and the message he send her was spine chilling...wow so the story begins now...what about the other characters ...will they feature actively in the story or will it be just these two?

mainly on these two, as it will be very short no practical logical linking well there is just flow 😆😆😆

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hira2010

@hira2010

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#146

Hunter's lamb meet was just opps
;)
Let the game begins

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nadia khan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#147

Awesome update wow really good I am so loving this story geet was trying to avoid maan she still didn't know maan had taken over the company she worked in maan had waited 2 days for his lamb but maan hen she didn't show up he gave her a notice to come for work or get fired geet had no choice but to go maan came to know geets arrival he pulled his lamb in his arms shocking geet no doubt he had started loving her geet tried to make him understand that they don't belong with each other even offered to sleep with him one night so that he can move on but maan isn't gonna leave his lamb so easily

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Sudha

@babelicious

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Posted: 8 years ago

#148

Thanks for the pms. I read all Oses as well. This was such a sexy and hot update ... Maan is so dominating ... n mad abt her. I loved it and looking forward to see where this goes

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sanum23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#149

Superb pt

geet avoid to come office he waited fr hr but at last send warning notice to hr she was afraid wen she came he told his secretary to send hr in his cabin she came and he held hr in his arm geet try to understand him it's just a bet but maan not ready to leave hr she again try to say him she no match with hr she can spend night and than he will move on but he said his thirst not over in one night