Shivika TS - A Beautiful Evening || part 3 updated

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Hey Muskaan here . i am going to post my very first TS . my first attempt i know i m a bad writter but today i get some guts and going to post this story . I

Please give your support and hit like button. If u like my TS please comment. Hope u would extend your warm support to me. Please ignore grammatical mistakes.

So here it starts


Today is a very tried day for shivaay meetings after meetings .And last meeting with his foreign client is so annoying .all agreement already done about project but still they are discussing a baseless agreement of project but as this deal is big he cant let them go that easy . He is SSO...Shivaay Singh Oberoi he know how to make profit . he is shrewd businessman thats why he is so successful . After a tiring meeting he statrs working on his next deal his eyes fixed in laptop . Suddenly his office phone rang

Tringg...Tringg .


Shivaay : hello


Khanna : sir hello vello chodiye


S: watch your language Khanna .


K: sir kya aaj aap Annika Mam k sath kahi bahar Jane wale the kya ?


Shivaay suddenly realised that he again forgot about his date with his lady love .but he also know that this time she will not spare him like always but a sudden idea pop up in his mind that How khanna know about it ?


K: Sir kya hua ? Kaha kho Gaye aap .Annika Mam bhuat gusse me h aur aap abi b baaton me khoye hue h

S: hey hold on how you get to know that about date ?? tumhe kaise pata ki wo gusse me h ?


K: Kyuki wo neeche khadi hai and guard par chilla Rahi h ??


Shivaay thinks a bit and tell Khanna to say that he was not at office . On the other hand annika snatch Khanna's mobile and listen what shivaay told.


Waiting a bit confused shivaay asked Khanna why u don't replying me ?? Are you there ?


Suddenly a voice come from other side and shivaay worried a little as he hear her voice


Annika : haa hai na Khanna bhi yaha hai aur aap bhi . She said sternly .


S : Annika listen I can explain . Mujhe yaad tha but ...Before he complete Annika cut her In middle and said


"But aap phir se kisi meeting me busy ho Gaye ... Aapke clients NE meeting ko late finish Kiya ... Jabki sari details pahle se hi final thi ... wo late aaye ...meeting bhuat important thi isliye postpone nahi kar paye...And bla blah blah ..." .As she know all his excuse now she is used to it afterall .


S : Annika exactly you know meine Khanna ko kaha bhi that but usne hi ye meeting final ki aaj k

liyebut you dont worry next time aisa nahi hoga bcz I'm thinking I should fire him .


Annikq in angry tone Shivaay aoni galti Khanna ke sar par mat daliye .Aap ko pata bhi hai ki aap SE ek jhoot bhi nahi bola jata hai ??


Its not like that he cant lie . he is perfect in that how to cover up a lie in a real truth but in sudden he didint get any idea as if his brain lost all his intelligencey


Shivaay speak in sweet voice .. Annika actually to be honest me tumse jhoot nahi bolna caahta isiliye ye excuse banaya ?

A: shivaay ager aapko lagta hai ki mein aapki iin meethi meethi baaton me phas jaugi to me bata Rahi hu this time Aisa nahi hone wala hai . She said in a confident voice .


S: Annika .. meri bat suno ..

K : sir wo ja chuki hai ..

Shivaay shocked and yelled" Khanna tum khade kyu ho roko ussey me abhi neeche aa Raha hoon" .

K : yes sir .


In few minutes shivaay come downstairs he saw Khanna standing there and ask him about Annika's whereabouts .


K : sir wo mam chali gayi me gaya that tab tak . he said calmly .

Shivaay was angry but he know it's not Khanna's fault but him . It was the fifth time when he forgotten about his date .And he remembered annika's words


"Shivaay this is the last time me aapko maaf kar Rahi hu par ager next time Aisa hua Na to me sach kah Rahi hu me aapko maaf nahi karne wali hoon ." She said in a very angry tone and now these words are echoing in his ears .


Shivaay PoV : shivaay u made a mistake again and now there is no way to made it up . You have to do something different very different to apologise her .He starts thinking how to make her happy suddenly a idea pop up in his mind .

Will continue soon . please give urs feedback good ..bad ..all will be accpected .
Love Muskaan

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Shivaay starts working on his plan to make her happy as she always complaing him that he's so unromantic . . He arranged a beautiful and romantic evening at Oberoi's farmhouse . farmhouse are located near a beautiful lake and the area is deserted.

After all the arrangements and decorations finished . He drives off towards her house but now it not less then a lion's den .


Tring..Tring..

Annika's house bell ranged and she very well know who was on the doors. She opened the door and try her best to not to look at him .

" Ager aapko lagta hai ki mein maan gayi hoon toh let me tell you am still angry " ,she said angrily .


" Ager Aisa hai toh mujhe ander aane kyu diya " he said while a smirk crept on his face .


"Kyuki mein nahi caahti ki aap phir se bahar koii Tamasha kare " , said sternly and made her way towards kitchen .


He also following her and stood behind her while he wrapped his hands on her waist and his chin rested on her shoulder .


" Leave me Shivaay ",she said while struggling in his embrace .


"Never " he said romantically to make her happy .


" Ager aapko lagta hai ki mein aapki in she had sii mitthi baaton me aa jaogii to aap galat hai ", she said confidently .


And starts making her Masala Chaii and put the milk in pot .While he try to change the topic ask her


" Tum Chaii bana rahii hi Lau mein bana deta hoon ", he said softly .


"Koii zaroorat nahi hai aap jaiye na apni meeting attand kijiye " she taunt him .


While so he tight his grip on her waist and said ,

" Lagta hai tumhe merii baahon mein rehkar chaii banana accha lag Raha hai ", he said in a teasing tone and smiled .


"Ai..sa k..uch...nahi.. hai " , she said abashed and struggle to get rid of his embrace .


" Ya ... I can see that .. okay let's make a deal " he said normally .


Deal ?? She asked confused .


" Hmm " with a pause he start speaking again " Mein tumhe chod Dunga but uske badle me tumhe mere sath chalna hoga " he said while brushing his lips on her shoulder .

" Mein aapke sath kahi nahi jaogii ." With a stern tone she said bcoz she dont want to show him that she getting effected what he was doing.


"Choice is yours " he said with a smirk and he start give her wet open mouth kisses on her shoulder as she wears a off shoulder top he made her way towards her neck while his hands rested on her waist making circles .


Suddenly a shiver ran through her spine she closed her eyes in anticipation but still her brain want him to stop but her hormones don't want to let him stop .


In the meantime he turn her so her face facing him nd start his sweet torture with full of passion again he starts giving more senselessly kisses on her crook of neck and while his lips so close to her and he was about to claim them suddenly he heard a voice .


"Ok..ay ... " , She said while her lips are trembling .


He stopped and go back make distance from her said " Perfect ... But I want you should take some more time ... Don't you .. " he smiled sheepishly and winked .


Her mouth is now on a perfect 'O' shape . He left the kitchen made his way towards her bedroom . And she was still remembering the things just happen and cursing herself to get trapped by him again but ' How can someone resist when his lover is so passionate . ' she comes out of her thoughts when she hear a familiar voice .

" Mere bare me soch rahi thi na " , shivaay asked while a cute smile spread on his face .


"Haan... She realised what she said and to cover up it she said angrily Haan aur nahi toh qki aap to mere bare mein sochte nahi hai ...ager aapko apni meeting , bussiness, clients se fursat mile to socho na par nahii aap kyu sochoge bhala ...mein hi pagal hoon jo paaglon ki tarah aapka restaurant me ait kar rahi thii..she starts spitting her anger trough words while he thought Why he ask such a stupid question ? he just awaken a sleeping lioness . he was cursing himself for doing it.


to light up the moment he put his hand on her mouth to shut it . and said sweetily " Go and get ready we are already late ." a smile on his face to calm her down .


She very well know that this man always dominate her with his this sweet smile which spreading on his face and driven her crazy . His smile have something which can made any girl crazy about him but she also know that this Smile is only for Her ...for His Annika . Urrrgh ...No annika you can't let him go without any punishment . its high time now . that was yours fifth date when he not come . her mind recalled her that she was angry with him which her heart forgot for sometime and lost in his smile .


"Go and change na , or else I have my own ways " shivaay said smirking .


Annika realised what he just say . And suddenly she made her way towards bedroom without any second thought . While locking the door she yelled


" I Hate You Bhaggad Billa "


Shivaay heard it and took some speady steps towards her bedroom when she closed it with a jerk . And he smiled on her antics . Her antics which made him fall in love with her more and more .



After some time he hears a click of door opening while he was sitting on sofa he turn to see her and get mesmerised by her .

She looks beautiful damm Beautiful . He was so lost in her . While she made her way to the main door and opened it . And get near his car he also followed her and they drive to their destination .


Edited by Muku007 - 8 years ago
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They are going to their destination while the roads are becoming dark as they going .Annika who looking outside to ignore shivaay now getting a bit restless due to darkness while shivaay understand her feelings put his other hand on her hand which were rested in her lap and trembling a bit suddenly Annika feels a warn palm on her hand she look at their hands and then straight in his eyes which were silently telling her that He Was Here For Her

She smile and think that how understanding boyfriend she have But she also know that how a Bhulakkad Premii shivaay is .


Finally they reached their destination while shivaay stepped out from car and open the door of car for Annika .

Annika also come out and while shivaay put his left hand on her eyes before she could speak he put his finger on her lips " Sshhh ...Kuch mat bolo ..Bas mere sath chalo. He said calmly and took her right hand in his hand and moved from there .


After a while he removed his hand Annika open her eyes slowly and get surprised by the surrounding .


The beautiful lake water making sweet noise . Red and white roses were decorated perfectly . The tress which have green leaves now decorated with lights everywhere on tree to vanished the darkness which occurred bcoz it's quite a late evening. But most romantic thing she found is "I Am Sorry " which were not written not decorated with flowers but with Fireflies . Yes fireflies which she loved the most as only the one thing which always shower the light in depth of darkness .


The fireflies which kept in small glass pots and also secured with lid. It's so lovely to watch she was so Happy . Shivaay did all this for Her ...Only for Her . She feels that she was now on cloud nine . She turn around to see him .


Shivaay who was just staring her with his kanji aankhe and a smile spread on his face as he know that she definitely love it .He saw her turning around .They both were facing eachother . Both faces were glowing and have a smile .


He asked "did you like it ."

She said " No ...I love it ...It's just ... She stopped in mid way as she didn't find a proper word to describe what she feels now . She thought that Shivaay should do something but something like this is far away from her thoughts .


She don't know what to say so she just placed a kiss on his cheek and said " I Love You Shivaay " .

Shivaay hugged her and said " but some time before someone telling me that she hates me ". He said teasing tone and grinned .

She realised what about be talking " ya I hate you but still I can't stop myself loving you ". She said and snuggle more in his chest .



They had their dinner . Talk some romantic and also fight cutely .

In the night when they both were sitting on lakeside the moonlight showering on them they were in each other embrace .

Shivaay ask her " how was the evening ?"

She said smiling " It was a beautiful evening I live in my life since now . I don't have words to describe it and ya now I'm not going to call you Unromantic . She said and grinned .


"Shivaay kya aap mujhse humesha itna hi pyar karoge " she asked him .


"Nahi...He said she raised her eyebrows a bit he continued "issey bhi zayada " he said with his smile .


"Aur tum ??" He asked back.


"Khud se zayada " as she completed .


He capture her lips and they start kissing .

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Okay I know the end is not so good but alas I don't have time to write more and I don't want to leave my story in m iddle m really sorry frnds . Thanks for urs love and support I never thought you all love it .

Spclly thanks to Nimik sorry I don't know urs real name Nd ya how can I forget my chutki Anya .

Anya when u told me that u love to read my story I feel so happy . Thanks for urs love .

Muhaaa

Big hug to all my frnds .


Edited by Muku007 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update.
Now Shivaay should do something romantic 😆
And thn Anika will be happy 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is so lovely!
Ahhh, how i wish these days come back in IB, so chilled and everything filled with so much of fun!
Without these villains, JUST family members and permanent characters who would just do random mistakes and all that!
YHM and YRKKH have been doing this exactly!
anyways, loveddd it!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing ts...
Shivay ko bhi short term memory loss ho gaya Tha.. 😆
Let's see what is Shivay gonna do to make up for his lady love😳
Continue soon
Please pm me when u update😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing
Shivaay is such a bhulakadd
Poor Khanna
Looks like Shivaay is gonna do something romantic 😳
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start. Waiting for the next part.
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Originally posted by: Nohsin10

Awesome update.

Now Shivaay should do something romantic 😆
And thn Anika will be happy 😳



Hmm afterall he is so Romantic 😳
Thanks
U r my first commenter 😳
Edited by Muku007 - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fariba

This is so lovely!

Ahhh, how i wish these days come back in IB, so chilled and everything filled with so much of fun!
Without these villains, JUST family members and permanent characters who would just do random mistakes and all that!
YHM and YRKKH have been doing this exactly!
anyways, loveddd it!


Hmm
I hate the Kamini Daksh entry
Btw thanks for liking it
Edited by Muku007 - 8 years ago

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