Rishta Humara: FF Author's note- 4/15/2017

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi everyone! I'm Meera, silent reader of the forum. I just have been getting a lot of inspiration from the current tracks on Ishqbaaz and Dil Bole Oberoi, and I decided to write it down. Let me know if you like the idea/absolutely hate it. Please be gentle, I'm not the greatest writer and it's my first fanfic ever 😆
Rishta humara- Prologue

"Shivaay, I didn't push Kamini Aunty! She was trying to take and throw Sahil's crutch and I just-"

"ENOUGH Anika! I've heard enough! Wherever you are, things always seem to go wrong! I trusted you to take care of the situation but the exact opposite happened. Tumhe idea bi hai ki yeh rishta kitna important tha Prinku ke liye? Iss parivaar ke liye?"

"Shivaay, why can't you trust me on this?" Anika begged, tears streaming down her face.
"Anika, I know you probably are right in this situation, lekin meri majboori ko samajhne ki koshish to karo! Why do you have so much of ego about this?" Shivaay groaned.
Anika said nothing. Shivaay sighed and left. Saahil entered the room and looked at his didi's tear stricken face. He sat down next to Anika.
"Didi, maine decide kar liya, jab bhi me iss ghar me ao, to badi problems hamesha hoti hai. Me vaapis school jaa raha hoon, taaki koi aur garbad naa ho." Sahil said dejectedly.

"Iss ki koi zaroorat nahin hai Sahil. Lekin agar tumne yeh faisla kiya to maine bhi faisla kar liya. Me is ghar mein aur din nahin rahoongi. Here, no one even takes a stand for me. Not even Shivaay. Itna sab kuch ho jaane ke baad bhi vo mujhe pura bharosa nahin karte. Why should I stay? Akhir rishta kya hai humara?" Anika whispered.

Please let me know how you like it! I know it's a very slow beginning, but I'm just having some starting trouble. I think I have a lot of surprises planned in this story, but I'll have to see how it unfolds in my head. Thanks for reading!😊

-Meera

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing concept
Anika is so right at her place
She should leave because of her self respect
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesomeee..
its true shivaay is doing everything for his family...
but why anika has to pay for it...always
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 1- Rishta Humara

That night...

Anika swiftly and quietly packed her suitcases along with Saahil's in the dead of the night. She checked her wallet. The money that she had saved up secretly to attend an English tutoring program was deposited in her account which she had the credit card for. A tear rolled down her cheek but she hastily wiped it away. She took out five envelopes from her suitcase, in each one enclosed a note. One to Dadi, one to OmRu, one to Pinky Aunty and Shakti Uncle, one to Kamini Randhawa, and one to Shivaay. She passed the envelopes to Khanna, who was standing next to her. Everyone else in the house was asleep.
"Khanna ji, aap please yeh envelopes sab ko de dijiye. Agar kisi ne poocha ki maine aapko yeh envelopes kab di, toh boliye ki maine yeh envelopes aaj subhah di. Me nahin chahti ki aap ki naukri chali jaye meri vajah se." Anika said, zipping up the suitcases.

"Madam aap aise kaise jaa sakte hain? Kisiko bataye bina?" Khanna said sadly, holding the envelopes in his hands.

"Yaha Dadi aur OmRu ke alava koi bhi meri izzat ke baare mein sochte hai kya? Toh main kyun batao sabko?" Anika murmured softly.

Khanna looked down at his feet. He could understand why she was leaving. Sighing, he picked up her suitcases and quietly carried them out the front door, taking Saahil with him. Anika looked around at the house one last time. Before she could start crying again, she hastily took her handbag and headed out too. She had decided, that she would never step foot in this house again.

The next morning, when Shivaay got to the dining table to have breakfast, everyone was abnormally quiet. Om was silently clutching an envelope and his father was reading something intently. Dadi was crying quietly on Priyanka's shoulder. He approached Dadi.
"Kya hua Dadi? Aap ro kyun rahi hain? Aap theek to hain na?" Shivaay asked.
Dadi kept silent and continued to cry. Shivaay went to Rudra who had his head hung in sadness.
"Kya hua Rudra, tum batao mujhe."

Rudra also kept silent. Shivaay, frustrated, yelled, "Damnit, koi batayega mujhe ki hua kya hai?"
Pinky, smiling, came forward and said, "Vo manoos Anika chali gayi hai finally Shivaay!"

"Chali gayi matlab? Kahan?" Shivaay asked worriedly.
"Vo iss ghar ko chhod kar chali gayi hain Shivaay," Om said quietly.

"Fhat the Wuck?! Kyun?!" Shivaay said, shocked.

Khanna, who had been standing there silently, handed Shivaay an envelope. Shivaay opened the envelope, and started reading. He grew very pale and collapsed on the chair next to him.

"ANIKA!!!"

Sooo, how was it? Leave your comments please! Thanks for reading! I'll be back with an update ASAP!
-Meera
Edited by journalgirl321 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow ...
first par agayi...
loved it...
she should leave...its true...she deserves better...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update...
Anika left oberoi mansion...it is shocking news for Shivaay...
What will happen next?

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Just wow
Loved it
Cont soon ;)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey! Loved this thingy. I really feel pity for Anika. She is now stucked among a bunch of selfish peeps and she is letting herself played along. Well, wont ramble about show. Drama toh chalta hi rahega.
coming to your update, what i like is, atleast you have made her character strong. She left, a wise step indeed.
waiting for your next chap.
keep it up.
cheers:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It is amazing Meera...👏
Anika, finally left Oberoi Mansion...
Hope Shivay understands her importance...😕
I know that Shivay would have some problem which forced him to act like this but he should understand that Anika also has self respect and heart...
Loved the concept ❤️
Continue soon
Please pm me when u update😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful story!!! Do continue soon😉

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