SwaSan Drabble [Blast in Sanskar's car track]

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Your Happiness



"Sanskar, tum thik ho na, kahi dard to nahi ho raha?"

Sanskar sighed, closing his eyelids, hearing the same line in every one hour from his wife, Swara. Since the time of that blast happened in Sanskar's car, Swara was running around him, taking care of his every small need. Thankfully he escaped from the car in the crook of time; he wasn't hurt much except few scratches on his hand and a little wound on his head. But Swara's concern was on some altogether different level.

Sanskar's mind being with plenty of thoughts and emotions, just nodded a bit, without saying anything. Laksh and Swara's smiling faces, they way they talked being carefree with each other kept flashing before his eyes over and over. He sat straight on the bed, getting up in a moment.

"Tumhe ye sab karne ki jaroorat nahi hai, Swara." His cold tone draped in words as if they meant nothing to each other, hit her heart like a sharpened knife.

"Kya kaha tumne?"

"Wahi jo suna tumne. I'll make sure ke hamara divorce jald se jald ho jaaye, taki tum aur Lucky... Tum aur Laksh..." he terribly failed to even imagine that, leave aside saying but quickly added, holding his emotions in his control, "Taki tum aur Laksh ek sath apni nayi zindagi ki shuruwat kar sako. Mere liye kal bhi tumhari khushi sabse jada important thi, aur aaj bhi mere liye tumhari khushi hi sabse jada matter karti hai."



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Just a random write-up.



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dear Harshada,

It was a very beautiful one - a simple tiny one yet managed to convey the depth of Sanskaar's desperation - both his pain at the thought of losing Swara and his wish of always seeing her happy.

Keep writing, missed you and your stories.

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Harshu :)
This is very small Bt very beautifully written & meaningful! Despite the length, it conveyed Sanskaar's feelings fully! Even though Swara had very very less to say, still it conveys her emotions as well.
I still remember when we heard about this track (which never aired unfortunately), most of us were so excited bcoz we wanted to see Sanskaar's importance in Swara's life & if she would have realize her own feelings or not!
Your this tiny drabble satisfied me so much! Though it made me lil greedy as well to know further, how Sanskaar's cold yet heart warming words affected Swara!
Harshu, can you give us some more? Can you continue a lil more?
Loads of love & hugs <3
~ Nupur
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nynaeve

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Dear Harshada,

It was a very beautiful one - a simple tiny one yet managed to convey the depth of Sanskaar's desperation - both his pain at the thought of losing Swara and his wish of always seeing her happy.

Keep writing, missed you and your stories.

love,
Nyna




Hey Nyna, thanks a lot for dropping by.😳
I am always so happy whenever I see you.
I am glad you had an enjoyable read.
This was very random. I was missing swasan so thought of writing but I am caught up with too much college works these days. So gave in to thought of a drabble.

I missed you too Nyna.
This forum is like a second home.
I get such a pleasure posting here which I do not, by posting anywhere else.
I am hoping to be here for long now.


Much Love
- Harshada

Edited by LoveToWrite - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Harshu :)

This is very small Bt very beautifully written & meaningful! Despite the length, it conveyed Sanskaar's feelings fully! Even though Swara had very very less to say, still it conveys her emotions as well.
I still remember when we heard about this track (which never aired unfortunately), most of us were so excited bcoz we wanted to see Sanskaar's importance in Swara's life & if she would have realize her own feelings or not!
Your this tiny drabble satisfied me so much! Though it made me lil greedy as well to know further, how Sanskaar's cold yet heart warming words affected Swara!
Harshu, can you give us some more? Can you continue a lil more?
Loads of love & hugs <3
~ Nupur





Thank you so much Nupur.
Glad to know you liked it.
This is a drabble Nupur and drabbles are meant to be short...around 100 words.
I actually wanted to write a short os but wasnt having much free time.

Even me too. I wanted a concerned and caring Swara for Sanskar that time. But this track never came. That was a disappointment.


Really? I am glad if it did.
I was thinking of writing short drabbles on tracks since it didnt take much time, and I can also get happier by writing.
I will surely try to write more to this.

Much Love
- Harshada


Edited by LoveToWrite - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res for tomorrow..
Have a good night, Harshada!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Harshada...
Soo small update...but liked it...i just love sanky...his selfless and unconditional love...do continue if possible...want more...swara's reaction...

Talia
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Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Res for tomorrow..

Have a good night, Harshada!



Hey Sharon🤗
Good Morning dear😳 Have a great day ahead.
Unres in free time. 🤗

Much Love
-Harshada
Edited by LoveToWrite - 8 years ago
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Harshada...

Soo small update...but liked it...i just love sanky...his selfless and unconditional love...do continue if possible...want more...swara's reaction...

Talia




Thank you so much Talia.
I am glad you liked it.
I surely will try to.😳

Much Love
-Harshada
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Res for tomorrow..

Have a good night, Harshada!


Hi Harshada,

It was short and succinct write up, portraying Sanskaar's emotions in that plot. Glad that the accident didn't exactly happen in the show and led to some beautiful scenes.😳

I am really glad to see you back here. Good luck with your personal commitments. Do stay in touch over here.😊

Cheers
Sharon

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