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priety.priti

@priety.priti

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Oh ramu kaka ka sanskari beta jo thahara...woh to lakh shukar hai sumo se hi pucha can i kiss muze to laga tha kahi ramu kaka ko hi na jake puch le 🤪🤣

no kiss till 6 months...bechari ke andar ki malika ko sula diya

cute OS...

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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Nicely Penned.

Great start to first time writing. 👏

Suman's POV. I loved it. and i seriously mean it. ❤️

Great job.😊

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Everybody's million dollar question 6 yrs of marriage no kiss..may be they enlightened after long that they are married...nehin iss zamane ne mein koun itne saal door rahenge...

Nice OS dear that too first time..

Vinu

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Hey Sreyu,

First of all congrats on your first OS. And that too a beautiful one.

6 months no kiss. Shravan can be that slow. Cause he is in love.. 😊 and still so Shravan Kumar.😆

The wait was over and how. Flow is perfect. Emotions done right. Nithing over the top. I liked it. Sorry comment karne me poora ek din late ho gaya.

Do write more will be waiting. And please do PMs if possible

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Rini

@sreyu

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: deltadawn
Hey Sreyu,
First of all congrats on your first OS. And that too a beautiful one.

6 months no kiss. Shravan can be that slow. Cause he is in love..😊and still so Shravan Kumar.😆

The wait was over and how. Flow is perfect. Emotions done right. Nithing over the top. I liked it. Sorry comment karne me poora ek din late ho gaya.

Do write more will be waiting. And please do PMs if possible

Thank you so much dear! I felt just like 😲 when you commented in my story! I'll surely try to write more. 😳

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