Happy Anniversary -shraman os

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys our Edkv turned one today happy anniversary to all edkvians and the stuff down there is as cliche as the title. ..here you go

"Sumo yaarr utho na...kitni alsi hogayi ho tum"

"Acha me alsi? Tum to kuch bolo hi mat"

"Sumo please...acha aj date kya h? Shravan abhi nahi yar...no questions get back to bed and sleep" she pulled him and placed her head on his bare chest holding him to her tightly

"Huh ! Alsi" he said and slept again

She woke up after another 15 mins

"Sorry shravan i had to do this" and whispered a slow HAPPY ANNIVERSARY to him and pecking his lips before running for a shower

"So is everything ready? Please koi kuch bhi gadbad nahi karna...just do as instructed" she said in a bossy tone to the malhotra clan standing there listening to her like little kids

"Done sumo madam" pushkar said in a teasing tone

"Ha suman beta tum bilkul chinta mat karo ...sab ache se ho jayega" said Ramnath assuring her

"Ha beta tune itna sab kuch plan kiya h...we'll make sure everything goes good" said nirmala

"Thank you ma...chaliye ab sab normal behave kariye. ..I'll go and wake shravan up"

Saying this she leaves to wake her sleeping beauty up

"Shravan. ...utho baby chalo bohot late ho gaya h...u'll be late for office"

"Thodi der pehle someone was saying so jao na" he said imitating her

"Oh please! I really do not sound like that"

"You do baby I've heard EVERY sound you could make" he said cocking his brow

"Chii yar subhe subhe shuru..mchalo get up and get ready fast"

"Sumo suno to"

"Haan?"

"What's the date today"

"28 feb. ..kyu?"

"Are you seriously asking me kyu?"

"Shravan subhe subhe bore mat karo yar...i need to leave for pct fast kuch kam h to bolo varna bye"

"Bye" he said angrily and went towards the washroom

"Sorry shravan i have to do this jaan" she murmered to herself and left taking her bad

AT THE BREAKFAST TABLE

"Good morning everyone"

"Good morning beta"

"Bhai vese thodi der me afternoon hone vali h"

"Chup kar " he said whacking pushkar's head

"So bhai what's the plan for today?"

"Plan...kuch special h kya aj?" He asked hoping that everyone remembers that it is the most special day of his life on this way last year he got back his sumo and his mom...his family completed that day and a small function was held consisting only tiwari and malhotra clan where shravan and suman were tied in the bond of marriage

"Ya to ye sab bhul gaye h...ya fir pakka kuch undercover planning chal rahi h...pata lagana padega shravan beta" he murmered to himself

"Acha papa me soch raha tha vo kuch cases pending pade h to unhe read kar my aj Sunday h or sumo bhi busy h to"

"Haan beta ye thik rahega"

"Nahi matlab i was asking aj ap logo ka koi plan to nahi h na"

Pushkar almost choked on his food thinking "he bhagwan agar bhai ko sumo k plan k bare me kuch bhi pata chal gaya to sumo wrestler pakka hum sab ko kachcha chaba jaegi"

"Plan nahi bhai...koi Plan nahi h...infact aj to me bhi family duty pe hu Trisha k vaccinations h or preeti ka checkup appointment"

"Preeti puttar kya hua tujhe" kamini asked concerned...she has realised that holding grudges against these people wouldn't lead her anywhwere and moreover shravan opened his own firm so malhotra and associates were pushkar's so she has accepted the family and had turned into a caring women

"Mujhe kuch nahi hua. ..mujhe kya hua h?" She asked confusingly looking towards pushkar " or trisha ko to last week hi vaccine laga tha" she said feeding her 10 months old daughter

"Oh god ye ladki marvaegi" pushkar thought "Are preeti tumhaare sir me dard tha na kal. ..or trisha ko am an or vaccine lagana h...don't you remember" he said successively while poking preeti from underneath the table

"Oh haa haa yaad aya...humein Jana tha...chalo utho we need to go...bye all" she said and they left hurriedly

"Han nirmala mujhe bhi tumse kuch kam" h Ramnath said to her...they both realised that their and shravan's happines was in them living together so they tried forgetting all the grudges and started living happily together

Everyone left giving some or other reason and shravan sat there defeated

"Shravan kya kar rahe ho?" She called him up in the afternoon

"Sumo please bore mat karo kuch kaam ho to bolo varna bye" he said imitating her

"Sorry na shravan...vo late ho rha tha " she said hiding her smile

"Haan to?...esa karta h koi. ..subhe subhe chilla k mood kharab kar diya"

"Acha sorry baby suno na abhi pct a sakte ho bohot zaroori kaam h"

"Kya hua sumo? " he asked tensed

"Nothing to worry about ...bas tum a jao"

And in next 15 minutes he was on the door of pct

"Baap re...ud k aye ho kya"

"Kaam bolo jaldi"

She made him sit in the car and wrapped a cloth around his eyes

"Blind fold kyu kar rhi ho?"

"Sshhh...chup karke betho"

She drove them to a beautifully decorated place and opened his blindfold

"Wow sumo this is so so beautiful...lekin ye itna decorated kyu h?"

"Happy anniversary hubby...and welcome to our marriage"

"Happy anniversary sumo he said hugging her ...one sec? Marriage?? What?"

"Yes jaan we're remarriying"

"But sumo in kapdo...we're not even dressed kuch bataya bhi nahi or ese achanak..."

Before he could complete she sealed his lips with hard and missed him passionately and he replied with same fervour

"Shaant hubby shaant...me shravan malhotra ki biwi hu...koi kaam adha adhoora nahi karti...everything has been arranged"

She took him inside and everything was decorated beutifully

As they entered she got on her knees and said "Mr. Shravan malhotra you know that i am not as expressive as you but i have will and always would love you for my entire life...will you please do me the honour of being mine"

He got down on his knees and hugged her tightly "Yes Mrs. Malhotra" and whispered in her ear "I would love to make you mine again...or ab uth jao varna don't blame me if some oldies get a heart attack right here"

"Besharam chalo...shaadi karni h"

"Aj fir ek baar"
He said dreamiliy

The dresses were already present he wore his favoraite black coloured sherwani which she chose for him and she wore a cliche red lehenga because he wanted to see her like that..

He sat there in the mental waiting for her as the pandit chanted mantras ...finally she came and his breath struck and his heart stopped thudding...same was with her her eyes pooled up and her feet could not move...

Finally they were sitting together hand in hand and then he made her wear the mangalsutra whispering a sweet I love you in her ear and she blushed making him smile...next he filled her already filled partition again with vermilion and a lone tear made it's way from her eye and he caressed her cheek with his thumb earning gasps from the pandit and the oldies in the crowd

It was the time for the vows they moved hand in hand around the holy fire promising each other to be together...to laugh ,cry,Love and love together forever and always ...

Though living in the malhotra mansion since a year she became emotional at the time of bidaai and bid adieu to tiwari clan with shravan by her side consoling her

The grah prawesh was a fun affair and with lot of teasings the again newly married couple were retired to their room

"Thank you so much for this life long memory sumo...I wished I could do something like this for you" he said hugging her from behind

"You need not to hubby you have me a bigger gift by living me always"

"I'll do that forever my life"

"Me too shravan"

"Ab tumhaare gift ki baari"

"Kya laye ho?"

He opened up a box which had 2 love bands one with sumo and another with chashmish written on it...

"Wow shravan these are beautiful...but chashmish kyu? "

"Beacuse shravan can stop loving you someday but your chasmish would never

With that she hugged him tight and he held her tight

"Sumo"

"Hmm?"

"Suhagraat time" he said beaming with happiness

"Fir se"

"I wish this could happen everyday"

"Besharam"

He lifted him in bridal style and placed her on the bed and switched off the lamps making her his again

THE END

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Swarn283 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very cute it was. Romantic! Cutely romantic 😳
Hope no oldies got any attacksšŸ˜†
Please don't hesitate before bringing these stuffs, cliched or not we love every version of ShraMan stories.
Lovely OS Dolly dear
Keep writing
Swari
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: theGoldenGirl


Very cute it was. Romantic! Cutely romantic 😳
Hope no oldies got any attacksšŸ˜†
Please don't hesitate before bringing these stuffs, cliched or not we love every version of ShraMan stories.
Lovely OS Dolly dear
Keep writing
Swari



Haha thank you swari...glad that you liked it😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww. ..Sumo went down on her knees to propose Shravan.
Dolly tum ek ek karke mere saare khwaab poora kar rahi ho through your drabbles and OS. Aisa karti hoon, poora list hi de deti hoon tumkošŸ˜†

I just love to read these post marriage Shraman moments and this was another super cute one from you! Loved it!

Shravan in a black sherwani ..iske baad main kuch khaas padh nahi paayišŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Aww. ..Sumo went down on her knees to propose Shravan.

Dolly tum ek ek karke mere saare khwaab poora kar rahi ho through your drabbles and OS. Aisa karti hoon, poora list hi de deti hoon tumkošŸ˜†

I just love to read these post marriage Shraman moments and this was another super cute one from you! Loved it!

Shravan in a black sherwani ..iske baad main kuch khaas padh nahi paayišŸ˜†


Haha thank you so much reshma...khwaab hum sab k almost same hšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res 😳
****
Unres
That was soo awesome Dolly...ā¤ļø
Loved it soo much.. 😳
Sumo's surprise was soo awesome 😳
Loved how the whole family got involved in the prep...ā¤ļø

Sumo's proposal n Shravan's reaction...Aww!! 😳
Loved how you described all marrige rituals...
Shravan's gift...ā¤ļø
Beacuse shravan can stop loving you someday but your chasmish would never...Aww!!!...I soo loved it ya..ā¤ļø

All in all the whole OS was superb... šŸ‘
Loved every bit of it...ā¤ļø
Keep these coming bud...!!
Thanks for the pm 😊

Loads n loads of Love n šŸ¤—
Nikka sa Nik šŸ˜†
Edited by Nik03 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely os ...
It's very cute...it's v sad tat v r not enough lucky to see such things on out show...
Any way verrryyy happpyyy to read here...
Plz do write more stuffs like this...ready to read on anytime..
Love. ,
LavSriya

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really a beautiful piece...
Sumo hiding the Anniversay planning from Shravan and family also obliged...
Shravan also use his Lawyer brain to know what is cooking..
Good that chachi accepted everyone wholeheartdly. ..
Their marriage ceremoney was emotional. ..
"Beacuse shravan can stop loving you someday but your chasmish would never" ohh such a beautiful line...
Beautifully penned. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Excellent OS...
Sumo wants to give a surprise to Shravan in their first Anniversay šŸ‘ and family members help her out..
Kamini chachi also has no grudge against Shravan any more... .
Good that niru kaki and ramu kaka also clear their misunderstanding and living happily...
"Ud ke aye ho kya " šŸ˜‰ 😃 Sumo bulaye aur Shravan na aaye aisa ho sakta hai kya..
Sumo proposing Shravan, really love it..
Their marriage moment Relived again.. ..
"Beacuse shravan can stop loving you someday but your chasmish would never".. that's true.. .

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dolly aaj to cuteness is raining on the forum. šŸ˜†and tumne to romanc eki bhi barsaat kara di .šŸ¤—

Happy #EDKV1 dear 🄳

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