RANDOM MOMENTS-shraman drabble series(updated pg 43) 06/05/17

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: evaviego
How cute .
May all of us get such caring husband like Shravan.

Nice one Dolly 😊

Thank you eva😆

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: amlavs
Lovely...
ShraMan are definitely ek duje ke vaaste...❤️

Thank you

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Safire

@Safire

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Posted: 9 years ago

#153

I don't know how I missed this...

So cute!!!!

Ye naya Naam mujhe bohut pasand aaya~~Mr.Rabbit Malhotra!!!!

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: Safire
I don't know how I missed this...
So cute!!!!
Ye naya Naam mujhe bohut pasand aaya~~Mr.Rabbit Malhotra!!!!

Haha thank you 😆😆

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: Nik03
Res 😳
****
Unres
Lovely lovely update dear... 😳
Sumo pmsing n Shravan in romantic mood...Mood swings got better of her n fight..bechaara Shravan 😛
he bhagwan ye saare dard ladkiyo ko hi kyu?...So true😆
Ice cream for Sumo...n KNPH...Aww 😳
The ending was soo cute...❤️
Amazing work dear... 👏
Cont soon...!! 😊
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik

Awiieee thank you so much for this cutie comment Nikky nik 🤗

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Spandana

@sptrno

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#156

Awww adorable as always dear!!

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Sunain

@Sunain

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#157

Dolly!!!🤗

dekho yahan bhi puhach gae...finallly!!😆

DRABBLE 1(DRESSING UP)

Oye hoye...it was hell beautiful...❤️❤️❤️

was full of love and their romance was...engaging one..indeed..u penned it really Beautifully!

Shravan jaisai pati har larki ko mila😳😆

Btw Shravan's way was❤️...😳😉

DRABBLE 2 (MORNING SCENES)

"Shravan i love your weight on me...it feels that i am somewhere safe...esa lagta ki koi h jo mujhe puri duniya se protect karega...jo mujhe kuch nahi hone dega. ..i feel loved"...❤️❤️❤️

Wel mera case aisay hai i can only sleep when m surrounded by my pillows my besties and i have the worlds most weirdest way of sleeping..thts wht my family says😳..😆

Flashy was really cute..😳

"Vese i like hickeys"

"Kyu ?"

"It marks you mine"

"I am already yours "

"I like the world knowing it"...so heart touching...i soo love this person!😳

Was a dazzling one!..i loved it to core!❤️

Beautifully Penned!👏

DRABBLE 3 (KITCHEN ROMANCE)

Ouch...Shravan k pait mein dard...Sumo ka tiffin wapis bhejwa dea...Mis Lousi k sath Bruch...Sumo ko sab pata cha gaya...😲..ab kya ho ga😕😆

Sumo hell gussa and Shravan "Sumo ko manofiy mission" par...haaay...moment to watch yar

The ending...kya bolon...was hell hot..sizzling one😳😉

I so loved it!

Their moment was engaging one😳

Was hell Brilliantly Penned!👏

Kamal kar ditta ni Dolly😆

DRABBLE 4 (THE PUNISHMENT)

"You miss people you forget baby...you are always there in my mind ,my heart ,my soul..."...So true!

Awwh...this one was full of love and cutoo moments..i so loved this one...and u did a mind blowing job the way u penned it..was Fantabulous!👏

"Oh who wants cakes and pastries when I have my special strawberry"...❤️...😳

this bold Sumo is⭐️

ohh their moments their kit kit...every thing was hell lovely...So beautifully penned!

Indeed he earned a sweet punishment!😆

I must say it was Shramanliciously Delicious!😳❤️..oh..and My favorite!😉

DRABBLE 5 (CRANKY SUMO)

Ohh these Pmsing...thy really sucks...aur oper say mood swings...

Thy both fought...😲

Preekar hi kami thi larnay ki...😆..thy are cute though😳

Google baba ki jaa ho..kitni dobti hoi kashtiyan bachatay hon gay yeh😆

Awwwh..their moment was enchanting...thy are soo adorable❤️

"Mr. Rabbit malhotra"...Nice one!😉

Awi..the ending was super duper cute...loved it!❤️

Was really Beautifully Penned!👏

Dolly!Dolly!Dolly!

woah man!...really this drabble serious is an outstanding one!

loved it!

Hope to get more soon!

Thanks for the pms dear😉

Love

Sunii!❤️

Edited by Sunain - 9 years ago

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Reeba shukla

@ReebaS

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Thank you reeba😊

Pleasure is mine baby

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: Sunain
Dolly!!!🤗

suniii🤗

dekho yahan bhi puhach gae...finallly!!😆

Finally😆

DRABBLE 1(DRESSING UP)

Oye hoye...it was hell beautiful...❤️❤️❤️
was full of love and their romance was...engaging one..indeed..u penned it really Beautifully!
Shravan jaisai pati har larki ko mila😳😆
oh I wish!
Btw Shravan's way was❤️...😳😉
awiee thank u dea ❤️

DRABBLE 2 (MORNING SCENES)

"Shravan i love your weight on me...it feels that i am somewhere safe...esa lagta ki koi h jo mujhe puri duniya se protect karega...jo mujhe kuch nahi hone dega. ..i feel loved"...❤️❤️❤️

Wel mera case aisay hai i can only sleep when m surrounded by my pillows my besties and i have the worlds most weirdest way of sleeping..thts wht my family says😳..😆
mee too soo weird that I can't even explain😆😆

Flashy was really cute..😳

"Vese i like hickeys"

"Kyu ?"

"It marks you mine"

"I am already yours "

"I like the world knowing it"...so heart touching...i soo love this person!😳

mee too😳 same pinch

Was a dazzling one!..i loved it to core!❤️
Beautifully Penned!👏

thank u jaani

DRABBLE 3 (KITCHEN ROMANCE)

Ouch...Shravan k pait mein dard...Sumo ka tiffin wapis bhejwa dea...Mis Lousi k sath Bruch...Sumo ko sab pata cha gaya...😲..ab kya ho ga😕😆

Sumo hell gussa and Shravan "Sumo ko manofiy mission" par...haaay...moment to watch yar

The ending...kya bolon...was hell hot..sizzling one😳😉
I so loved it!
Their moment was engaging one😳
Was hell Brilliantly Penned!👏
Kamal kar ditta ni Dolly😆

oye thank u jii!!!

DRABBLE 4 (THE PUNISHMENT)

"You miss people you forget baby...you are always there in my mind ,my heart ,my soul..."...So true!

indeed

Awwh...this one was full of love and cutoo moments..i so loved this one...and u did a mind blowing job the way u penned it..was Fantabulous!👏

"Oh who wants cakes and pastries when I have my special strawberry"...❤️...😳

this bold Sumo is⭐️

she's my fav😆

ohh their moments their kit kit...every thing was hell lovely...So beautifully penned!

Indeed he earned a sweet punishment!😆

very very sweet😆

I must say it was Shramanliciously Delicious!😳❤️..oh..and My favorite!😉

mine too...thanks Hon!😃

DRABBLE 5 (CRANKY SUMO)

Ohh these Pmsing...thy really sucks...aur oper say mood swings...

I swear😲

Thy both fought...😲
Preekar hi kami thi larnay ki...😆..thy are cute though😳

haha thanks😆

Google baba ki jaa ho..kitni dobti hoi kashtiyan bachatay hon gay yeh😆

many many...including me😆

Awwwh..their moment was enchanting...thy are soo adorable❤️

"Mr. Rabbit malhotra"...Nice one!😉

Awi..the ending was super duper cute...loved it!❤️

Was really Beautifully Penned!👏

hawww thank u so much for this sweetest comment sunii☺️

Dolly!Dolly!Dolly!
woah man!...really this drabble serious is an outstanding one!
loved it!
Hope to get more soon!
Thanks for the pms dear😉

Love
Sunii!❤️

suniii...sunii...sunii thank u so so much honey for this sugary comment...this brought a big big smile on my face😃

Edited by Namiksfan - 9 years ago

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#160

heyaaa!! Look who's back...so this one is like again a complete random one i was really forced to write a happy peice after INSEPARABLE SOUL'S so this is dedicated toSANJH and MADHU to whome I gave a heart attack and ARPITA who almost gulped me becoming an anaconda and RESHMA jisko aj tak he samajh nahi aya mene shraman ko kyu mar dala?😆 and all the people including DIPS and LUBNA who cried reading that...enough of blabber and yes one more reason EDKV TURNS ONE TOMMOROW...and meri ANU darling this is for u too

DRABBLE 6 (REVENGE)

"Sumo lagwale na jaan...itna bada kuch nahi h jitna tum soch rahi ho na"

"Nahi nahi...bilkul nahi shravan ...mujhse nahi hoga"

"Lekin ye tumhaare liye zaroori h na sumo...or fir me hu na tumhaare saath"

"Zaroori h kya shravan?"

"Ha sumo tumhaari tabiyat itni kharab hui h last 3 months me...you need immunity jaan"

"Shravan lekin me medicine le rahi hu na

"But that is not making any difference that is why we are here no" he said stroking her back and moving fingers through her hair

shravan and sumo were sitting in a hospital room waiting for the doctor to give her immunity shots

"Mam please forward your hand and keep it straight"

"Doctor please...Or kuch nahi ho sakta I'll regularly take medicines...please"

"Mam this is important"

"Shraavaann"

Sumo look into my eyes...meri taraf dekho acha tumhe nahi lagvana na injection nahi lagate h but iske baad i have a plan hum pehle movie dekhenge or fir "he slowly signals the doctor to give the shot "iske baad kulfi khaenge or..."

"Ouch ..."

"Done"

"Shravan you cheat...you bas***d...you ass. ...you crazy man how could you do that.. cheater kahike...I hate u" she said whacking his chest

"Oww sumo lag raha h yar"

"Acha...lag raha h...mujhe itnaa bada injection lagvane k baad lag raha h...you ass i'll kill you"

"Dukh raha h bol ke itni zor se mar rahi ho"

"Tum. ...tum naa. ..I hate u"

"But I love you" he said picking her off the hospital bed after pecking her lips and placing her on the front seat

In the process her hair gets struck in his shirt button and she removes it slowly

"Sumooo" and he leans in for capturing her lips but she pushes him

"Don't touch me"

"Itna gussa? Sorry na"

"Shravan get lost "

He moves towards the driver's seat muttering "oh god bohot zyada gussa h ab kya karu?"

"Acha sumo chalo kulfi khane chalte h...or tum zyada kha lena ok"

"Chalo"

They go to their favoraite india gate ka kulfi vala she eats 7 and he gets only 4

"Sumo sirf 4? Esa mat karo na baby"

"Thik h fir mujhse baat bhi mat karna and DON'T TOUCH ME"

she knew it well where nothing else worked DON'T TOUCH ME would always and it did

"Acha thik h...ab to ghar chalo"

"Acha sumo ab to meri punishment khatam hui na ab can i please touch your highness"

"Bilkul" she says and starts opening the buttons of his shirt walking towards the door of their room and removes it completely And slightly pushes him and closed the door on his face

"Sumo...ye kya bachpana h yar...open the door"

"Abhi saza complete nahi hui Mr. Malhotra" she huffs and goes for a shower

"Bhai ap ese kyu khade ho?" A confused pushkar asked him

"Ha shravan puttar kuch to bol"

Vo actually...vo na...ha vo kya h na lalaji garmi bohot h na to mene socha ki ac or fan k bill kyu badhaye?

Lekin puttar February k mahine me kaha garmi hoti h?

Are mujhe lagti h lalaji...acha ap log itna ready ho k kaha ja rahe ho?

Are vo kamini k bhatije k bete ka birthday h na vahi. ...vo suman puttar ki tabiyat kharab thi na isliye tum logo ko bola nahi

Ha sahi h lalaji...ap log chaliye

Chalo khayal rakhna beta hum rat tak ate h

Ji thik h...saying this he went into the backyard and sat on the swing and unknowingly went into a deep slumber beacause of the tiring day convincing sumo

Half an hour later sumo came out freshened up and started searching for him and finally found him sleeping on the swing in the fetal position ...she knelt down in front of him and started caredding his hair as he looked cute and sinfully hot together with hair falling on his head a cute pout and bare body...she felt that his body was hotter than normal

"Shravan...shravan utho"

"Haan...haan ...aachoo ...haan sumo ...aachoo kya hua aachoo tum thik ho ?...aachoo

"Shravan oh god! Tumhe to sardi ho gayi and thoda fever bhi shayad...itni thand me bahar ane ki kya zaroorat thi?"

"Andar acha ...aachoo nahi lag rha tha aachoo"

"I am sorry shravan" saying this she hugged him tightly rubbing her warm hands on her back

"Sumo"...aachoo

"Hmm"

"Vo back rub karna band ...aachoo...karo naa"

"Kyu? "

"Kuch kuch ho raha h"

"I swear i'll kill you human...Acha chalo andar medicine deti hu"

"Or kapde bhi do please"