One Shot: The beginning

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prema_ks

@prema_ks

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

You are a magician Shikha 😳 See how you turned the old place into a beautiful one. Missed reading your stories.

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
welcome back! beautiful OS! superbly written! Indeed its js the beginning! it was an arranged marriage! Geet's thoughts well portrayed! she married her dad's fav student! she clears her doubts with him n he assures her! 👏⭐️😊

Thank you

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Beautiful os. Title is so apt. The begining of relationship after marriage. All the minute details of the things and maaneets gesture towards eachother is so well written. Can u plz continue this os and write more parts ?

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: ChandlerBing

Thank you

no need to say thanks... I shld thank u 4 entertaining us! U r a versatile talented n brilliant writer! pls update RDE, WOL and ur other stories 😊