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JNDSD~My take Wednesday 22nd February 2017 ~ To pastures new..

His love once empowered her but now it only disenchants . She senses an emptiness of waking up from a bad dream. Her love was blind, but now she sees .. she thought they would overcome all recent hurdles. She did and he did too , but the doubt of his giddy mind swamped his heart with the quagmire of qualm, till their love was swallowed in it! Now, to Vividha its an enlightenment of the truth he didn't love her enough, to smite his misgivings about her love for him. It's like not just facing the darkness of her anger at his deed, but fury also at herself.. how blinded she was in his love .. she lost the ability to question and foresee.. even though he had said we'll walk together as far as we can.. perhaps he never meant eternally.. perhaps he was the realist in their love and she the idealist. Yet she defends herself with a tear or two in her eyes.. she blames the many triumphs they both scored in their love over unfortunate circumstance... that brings her now to the stage of life where she doubts his return too.

A wave of concern in a poignant situation often draws ill-wishers to sit on the fence and derive pleasure. Foreboding words from Kalindi like the marriage is off! Contrast with Sujata and Ravish's optimism that Atharv will come. Ravish's word suggests waiting. While Sujata's ring of approaching doom. Yet Vividha knows that Atharv will not return..that's how well she knows him..he had mentioned we'll walk together as far as we can... but those moments she now faces, where instances of love when everything seems fixed, final and forever..doubt wormed in and the forever love now turns into this provisional waiting for the groom to return. Despite voices around her giving hope, Vividha has a piece of breaking news for all!

Atharv too receives breaking news the shadow of death passes over him and life once again grants him the opportune moment where he still has the time to correct all the wrongs he inflicted upon his beloved Vividha. Now nothing remains, but to fly like the wind and end once for all the delay of uniting with her till eternity. But the tension in their story takes place yet again.

For Vividha the wait for Atharva is beyond the level of her stamina. Enough of being taken for granted! Yes she is irate with him for being a lying toad, a cheat and a liar.. but to me Vividha rage is not just for Atharv its is also for herself for being, so utterly nave, so hopelessly gullible, and so madly in love with Atharv..the truth has made her free! She trusted him blindly and I'ts him who betrayed her trust. Never did she lie to him, but he withheld the truth, the real reason of his refusal to marry her..funny but even now Vividha does not know..it's a well kept secret..

Seeing that he will not return.. and she is still a bride ready to be married off.. Vividha single handedly makes the decision that she will give credence and value to the man who always stood by her from the day she first married him! Ravish ! would he accept the hand of a friend in marriage? After some reluctances and some subdued joy from his mother Suman, Ravish does give his consent to Vividha.. she even gives him her sincere assurance that as of now.. he will never see tears of sorrow in her eyes.. is this then Vividha's way of assuring her yet again husband to be, that she will try to love him and that Atharv is now a name of the past?

But Atharv is very much alive and kicking and heading her way , till providence one more time gives him a bang on the forehead! This bang; the missed calls to Vividha's phone, and Sujata hearing from Atharv ,stopping the ceremony.. and end of episode... Are all ominous of some resounding changes in the story line! So all accidents are not mere acts of misfortune but rather cruelly contrived creations by CV's to frustrate us viewers.. in my view.

Basically the episode, to me is all about how Vividha reacts at being treated by Atharv after all the dilly dallying he actually comes clean by being the absent groom. One sees the women whom Atharv loves dearly suffering. Sujata s suffers and swallows her tears, takes taunts and acidic remarks from Suman who maligns Sujata about both her past and present. Still Atharv's mother stands tall with her head held high for she knows her boy would never even harm a fly without sound reason. The other woman whom Atharv loves.. Vividha protests uncontrollably about the treatment she receives.. for me Vividha's reaction is justified .. I see her more in the light of the modern verses the traditional .She is young modern educated woman, who heralds from deeply traditional roots. Those, that Vividha hangs on too, along with the values she was brought up in. However when it came to marriage.. she felt her consent was never taken into consideration. Hence now with Atharv as being the runner, far as she can make out.. it seems, for Vividha to fight for her right to take her own decision about her marriage. Of recent,it has become a crucial one, for her .. who she marry's.. ? tension.. surrounds the storyline..

After 4 years... Mahadev..is drawn to the tabela.. whose child is the lad?? Hamlet53 23.2.17

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hamlet! I try to read your posts everyday but it doesn't always work out that way. I know though, that when I do, you will never disappoint. Your writing is so beautiful- flows like poetry (it makes me rather envious) 😆- and your commitment so concrete that you are able to make so much sense out of scenarios that quite frankly make me just want to turn off my television.

'Her love was blind but now she sees.'

The above was my favourite line; stunning!

Please keep writing.

🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hammie hammie hammie,
What happened to ur papaji k pant?why is it this shprt today n where is my fav introduction?a change in style?ppl definitely read ur work but as some of ur readers said, one need to have words to comment, which most of us dont have.ye mujhe hi dekhlo, i love u, thats why i try hard to write something about ur post.otherwise ye to awesome post, ye bolneka bhi i dont have that guts to appreciate such brilliance.creativity is like flow of water, no need to stop it, give it any shape, just to let it flow...it is never to b stopped.i have always told u, readers dont make a writer.writer makes his readers.and about symbolism?the one who has the third eye, must keep it open, n if he shares what he can see, it becomes a masterpiece.i m reading FA, those were outstanding pieces of writing, those flashbacks, a doomed dutta with a split mind, that was out of d world, each scene gave me goosebumps, n i felt like i was dutta protecting my kala tai.. hammie u know what u r capable of.just write, n publish.

Coming to this particular take, it is again brilliant as u focused on vividha's thoughts, her firm belief turning into disbelief all on a sudden, her memories of atharva got corrupted...n she again jumping in to another conclusion.

U r right.Atharva is accident prone.uske sar pe kitne bar lag gya, bechara always go through this, dear cvs, have mercy on him.

Irony of fate, when atharva was with vividha he was pushing her towards ravish, now d moment he decides to return, he got that bang...

A leap, interesting.i saw the post leave pics.both d leads look stunning. 😃

Please keep writing.dont deprive us from ur magic.love u hamesha.
Edited by simpleAnna - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Alishah-


helloo Alishah.. good to see you mate..
Hamlet! I try to read your posts everyday but it doesn't always work out that way. I know though, that when I do, you will never disappoint. Your writing is so beautiful- flows like poetry (it makes me rather envious) 😆- and your commitment so concrete that you are able to make so much sense out of scenarios that quite frankly make me just want to turn off my television.


'Her love was blind but now she sees.'

The above was my favourite line; stunning!

Please keep writing. well... I was so stunned with the yet another bang he recieved..that I went.. Atharv is so accident prone.. when they feel like they hammer at his block... cvs are so obviously contrived... was low today.was wondering... is my writing good enough...[ haaa.. look for sympathy] and look what I get from such a lovely comment hammie smiling cheek to cheek..😃 sure mate will continue to write.. as long as the characters inspire me.. although the story sure made me shake my head.. Shivani .. was very impressive in role..

🤗 cheers mate and once again many thanks for reading and commenting..love hammie

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Hammie,

I was eagerly waiting for your post before i logoff for the night :)

I understand Vividha's feeling of betrayal, totally hurt and broken and due to which her mind incapable of any thinking at all...Atharv has to bear the consequences of his earlier actions and adding to it are life's circumstances that are always pitted against him.
But what do you think are Ravish's reasons to say yes ? To me her repeated insistence was so obvious of her broken trust/ego and her resulting actions driven by rage, but why isn't Ravish a self-composed person and until a moment ago who was re-assuring Vividha, able to read her mind and avert the situation ? He knows her too well by now ?
And his flashbacks at that moment did not reason well with me about his interpretation of Vividha's situation and her outburst.

Alas, in her lowest times, Vividha had none to console and calm her down :(

I have to keep repeating to myself, this is a TV drama and not be so stressed about this :)

Love,
Vish

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hammie do we go and look for new pastures since this show and the CV's are hell bent on breaking up the leads ...

I agree love was blinding Vividha and now with this rejection from her one and only love she will have to pour all that love into her son...

So Atharva finds out a little too late that nothing is wrong with him and the way he finds out sitting on a bench with a stranger that happens to be a Doctor and soon with the help of another Doctor on the phone ...really !!

Anyway Atharva is not dying and so the story takes a leap and here we go again on another roller coaster ride between these three lovelorn individuals...

I don't blame Vividha for her reaction but getting married to Ravish... I thought she would be smart and just leave them and start afresh somewhere far from them all...

Hammie thanks for your wonderful take and I am hoping that Atharva and Vividha have solved as to WHY Atharva was misdiagnosed and who was behind it...

Take care, keep writing Hammie and delight us as usual...
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Hammieee... brilliant take dear ham once again..though I can feel the setback u received after recent development by cv's😛.. still man ur jst perfect to the t.. the way it flows was magic indeed dear ham.. jst like gems woven exquisitely😳

Ohhh in the end I do feel atharva is saved frm butchering ham.. somewhere I do feel it's vividha who was unable to pass the final test of trust.. khair.. jo bhi ho..me do thinks vividha's opportunistic there grabbing the last chance she could get hand on.. may be u will think m not empathetic much n judging her..she was alone left behind in mandap by her groom.. come on man she's vividha the empowered Vividha...🤔
'Behooda mazak' 😛 the wrd used by cv's. ..ths s wat they actually did with is viewer..BEHOODA MAZAAKK...😆..that's dentist cum neurosurgeon cum angel cum wat-not doc used that wrd..🤣

bt ham plz hav faith yaar we know how contrived n illogical these cv's can get jst to stretch serials.. I'm hopeful ths will be sorted in btw ViTarva...😛 they're meant to be yaar..

PS..suman was stinky poisonous Rat in the episode n I hated her to the core.. she need to shut her gutter mouth fr the sake of humanity. 🤔

U make me proud Ham with ur perseverance always.. 😉 love u sweetheart
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Originally posted by: simpleAnna

Hammie hammie hammie, hi taz... you come with your bag of complains? humm...
What happened to ur papaji k pant?why is it this shprt today n where is my fav introduction?a change in style?ppl definitely read ur work but as some of ur readers said, one need to have words to comment, which most of us dont have.ye mujhe hi dekhlo, i love u, thats why i try hard to write something about ur post.otherwise ye to awesome post, ye bolneka bhi i dont have that guts to appreciate such brilliance.creativity is like flow of water, no need to stop it, give it any shape, just to let it flow... now whose words are these yours... I know you have a heart for poetry and have penned verses too... some thought provoking ones too...
it is never to b stopped.i have always told u, readers dont make a writer.writer makes his readers.and about symbolism? .. but readers do provide the madness for writers to deliver more.. the one who has the third eye, must keep it open, n if he shares what he can see, it becomes a masterpiece.i m reading FA, those were outstanding pieces of writing, those flashbacks, a doomed dutta with a split mind, that was out of d world, each scene gave me goosebumps, n i felt like i was dutta protecting my kala tai.. hammie u know what u r capable of.just write, n publish.that was a different era.. different story..here mind you,Atharv was the one who engaged me the most.. and still does so.. oh taz.. will visit FA... I know am neglecting it.. will come..you keep reading.. plz..
Coming to this particular take, it is again brilliant as u focused on vividha's thoughts, her firm belief turning into disbelief all on a sudden, her memories of atharva got corrupted...n she again jumping in to another conclusion.
its the "little does she know the truth element" that will continue the story..
U r right.Atharva is accident prone.uske sar pe kitne bar lag gya, bechara always go through this, dear cvs, have mercy on him.
lets hope.. cvs too have an idea of where all his bumps are leading too..
Irony of fate, when atharva was with vividha he was pushing her towards ravish, now d moment he decides to return, he got that bang...
formula..much used one dramatic irony runs the show
A leap, interesting.i saw the post leave pics.both d leads look stunning. 😃
yes.. they sure do.. what interests me .. what happened today.. haven't seen it ..
Please keep writing.dont deprive us from ur magic.love u hamesha
ohhh you and your magical way of bending my elbow..😛.. good to see you reading and giving comments... much love.yours hammie
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Originally posted by: vspdandeli


Hi Hammie,
hi vish..😊 ..good to see you again
I was eagerly waiting for your post before i logoff for the night :)
really? my posting timing is out of place with the rest of the forum.. but me pleased you catch it ..😊
I understand Vividha's feeling of betrayal, totally hurt and broken and due to which her mind incapable of any thinking at all...Atharv has to bear the consequences of his earlier actions and adding to it are life's circumstances that are always pitted against him. .. or is it what destiny has ordained for them..erhhh actually the cvs..
But what do you think are Ravish's reasons to say yes ? To me her repeated insistence was so obvious of her broken trust/ego and her resulting actions driven by rage, but why isn't Ravish a self-composed person and until a moment ago who was re-assuring Vividha, able to read her mind and avert the situation ? He knows her too well by now ?
And his flashbacks at that moment did not reason well with me about his interpretation of Vividha's situation and her outburst.
Ravish.. I suspect thinks he is doing the honorable thing by marrying vividha... thing is all except Sujata knows why Atharv is away and off... but the irony is that at the end of the episode too .. its left opened ended for the leap to slide into place
Alas, in her lowest times, Vividha had none to console and calm her down :(
except... sujata?
I have to keep repeating to myself, this is a TV drama and not be so stressed about this :)
Vish... that's what I have to remind myself too..
Love,
Vish listen mate,love listening to your views..keep reading and commenting .. much love hammie

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Originally posted by: Dolly-heart


helooo dolly! great to see you
Hammie do we go and look for new pastures since this show and the CV's are hell bent on breaking up the leads ...

I think its anew trend Doll.. to show couples split up on the basis of MU and story is based upon them ducking,missing or in solitude pining for each other... PDMHMD.. the dharsti show is working on the same mindset.. may be happily married lives are to boring and ordinary ..
I agree love was blinding Vividha and now with this rejection from her one and only love she will have to pour all that love into her son...
whose the father.. that is the question?
So Atharva finds out a little too late that nothing is wrong with him and the way he finds out sitting on a bench with a stranger that happens to be a Doctor and soon with the help of another Doctor on the phone ...really !!
nooo the man was a dentist😆... me shaking my head... cvs clearly think we are daft!
Anyway Atharva is not dying and so the story takes a leap and here we go again on another roller coaster ride between these three lovelorn individuals...
we do indeed and tonight... have yet to see it..
I don't blame Vividha for her reaction but getting married to Ravish... I thought she would be smart and just leave them and start afresh somewhere far from them all...
its.. still unclear to me is he only Husband in name?
Hammie thanks for your wonderful take and I am hoping that Atharva and Vividha have solved as to WHY Atharva was misdiagnosed and who was behind it...
actually this is such a valid point..👏... will this happen? them ever investigating?
Take care, keep writing Hammie and delight us as usual... erhhh have to leap mentally to join the leap in the programme... thanks Dolly... yes..lets see what happens next... meanwhile enjoyed your comment .. much love hammie

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