keep me out of the equation!

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JNDSD~ My take Monday 20th February 2017 ~ keep me out of the equation!

Humans can be resilient , even the weakest ones will try what is best for them to come out of messy scenarios they encounter in life. However this too is no surprise that humans can try ways of escaping from predicaments they face, by altogether avoiding undesirable consequences of issues surrounding them. When squabbles, sticky, complicated situations get more difficult and out of hand, people do wish to be out of the loop.. especially when people find themselves in a one to one with another, or as part of a group. They want to be out of the equation ! out of an unresolved event. For an unresolved issue shows more a gap of views and less of coming together at a central point! In the episode , we see this unresolved conflict, the issue of Vividha and Atharv s imminent marriage carries on further. Vividha's willingness and Atharv s reluctance are at loggerheads .Ravish the champion peacemaker wants to walk out of someone else s mess ! seems he's had enough! Recently all three of the super trio, Atharv,Vividha and Ravish seem to walk on egg shells .Each one has a moral issue that makes them obdurate in their stance and thus even if they want to step out of the equation. The trio find themselves very much part of it.

His love for her has been an equation.. as Atharv has always seen Vividha on par with him. Yes he refuses to marry her but he cannot just walk out of this equation which has some variables.. for him the only variable that matters to him is her! for old times sake he tries to reason with her..in time she will realize that he was right all along, that eventually her respect for Ravish will transform into love. Now even his gentle feel upon her shoulder can lead her on! and so Atharv withdraws his hand lest he defile one whom he with a heavy heart passes on to his equivalent Ravish.. more insults from this stubborn oafish beast her love Atharv Sujata .. vividah bellows like a banshee !get out! Out! He was being obnoxious! For Atharv it was shock plus deep smarting. ,she loathes him! but hell isn't that what he wanted? that she loathe him through and through?

Approach of the warrior turned peacemaker.. this scene to me is all about non -military psychological undermining, where Ravish ,makes use of psychological tactics to disconcert and disadvantage Atharv and Vividha both! in their mindsets by causing them both uncertainty , fear or anxiety! Ravish too takes to role play like his half brother Atharv to bring out the true sentiments of the two lovers..so that both Vividha and Atharv can see they are both trapped in the alley way! and the only option to them is to kiss and make up and get on with they have pending on the cards.. get married! The scene has a certain bravado to it when Ravish charges in as the savior of a damsel in distress Vividha , to save her from her awkward beau Atharv! In typical army style Ravish roughs up his older brother!he by the collar literally drags him down before all for an award winning performance! For that is what it is .. Ravish is in no way going to lay into Atharv like he had done to him. Instead he would launch a caustic, pungent , psychological war against both Vividha and Atharv.. firstly he has both of them wondering what he is up to? Well it is mind games which Ravish plays..his strategy is clear first he targets Atharv .. he is fed up of offering clarifications to him that yes he loves Vividha but that she only loves Atharv and by throwing her back in his face! Atharv rubs salt on his wounds! Ravish assumes the corrosive approach of his mother Suman to gradually puncture Atharv's anger by accusing him from ruining his life since birth...it's bad enough.. to tolerate his existence in his family! on top of it the girl he loves ends up loving him too! Atharv retorts, if their marriage smarts him then why is he bending backwards to get them married? Does he want to be seen as a god? Ravish gets the moment when he can slap Atharv and further rough him up!all for special effects! In turn Vividha slaps Ravish as he so desires.. but Atharv keeps his lid on ..and restrains and bounces off Ravish's first degree treatment military style, by remaining unmoved.. Ravish swiftly changes his strategy and launches a scathing attack on Vividha.. he attacks her for messing about him and his family! mocks her integrity and intent! Scoffs at her up bringing ! calls her names selfish! Stupid! and finally he almost verbally threatens her and that is it! Game up Atharv nearly goes for Ravish's jugular! and slaps Ravish! Ravish ceases his army style attack on foes as his two targets reveal what he is looking for and aimed to show all.. that his targets, namely used their minds to assesses their love and its present outcome .. he points out that in matters of love it's the heart that needs to take decisions.. seeing that they both love each other. As when one is attacked the other leaps to rescue and defend the other! It's time to kiss and make time ..and the warrior peacemaker emerges victorious ! when Vividha embraces the man she loves! her Atharv .. her heart presses against his..and it looks like the marriage will go ahead as planned..

Atharv arms almost go around her upper back.. but his true sorry state freeze their move..one look at his mother speaks of the cry from the inner recesses of his heart..the performance was certain a curtain call for Ravish.. but for Atharv a swansong that naught can hear.. but it is a wailing that swans make before they die.. they die singing their song.. let me hold you then, my beloved Vividha as this may be our last embrace.. ...

Yet one more time Vividha preens herself for her love ..her Atharv .. how Ravish who wished to be out of the equation.. due to her willingness and Atharv's rejection actually ironed out creases in their seemingly hopeless situation. Now happy days are here again..she dreams of being with her love.. she had to fall in love with him it had to happen..not long to go now my heart..

Yes Atharv loves her by his heart..she will always will be the one woman who wanted to marry him.. yes she was his bride back in the day when they had vowed eternity into their everlasting love..now it seems temporary ..he has to check his heart! for his mind fails him.. he knows now what he has to do.. fade away ,ride away in the sunset. He has the heart to bottle his grief ..but to give Vividha impending doom he cannot contain. Yes he will do the honorable thing although many will see it as his cowardice .. but if putting your woman before your self is cowardice than Atharv rather be that! than a selfish brave heart !

So when the woman who bore him comes to Atharv, he looks her in the eye and with tears hanging in his eyes he explains to her about the inevitable hurt , that headed Vividha's way.. he will be giving it to her now.. instead of delaying it.. for the bigger truth than Ravish and Vividha's equation is that her son Atharv's equation..the mother of all truths that he is dying ... hamlet53 21.2.17

Another poignant episode.. the super trio engaged in full on drama.. things seem to be sorted! wedding all set to happen but not without the big question.. but where is the groom? the image of the two empty vases crashing to the floor are ominous symbols for me, are the brothers in future going to be at logger heads with each other ??

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie phew and a hug.this is outstanding. Hammazingly amazing hammie, so proud of myself for knowing u, n being friends with u.

Speechless, what can i say, where to start?the equation? So well described, from d title to the total storytelling.marvellous.

Amazing u saw ravish as a warrior who has turned into peacemaker. šŸ‘ how can u even think like that?we normal human beings fail to see, but u, ur specs have special power u use it while doing takes, right?

The ending, u make my heart bleed.i havent seen the episode, i dont know what performance VSC gave, but u made him look like a fantastic character who is about to leave.my heart cries for him.

Keep writing.love u hamesha.hamesha.
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You always write such beautiful words. But today's epi there was just the end moments that pulled at my heart. The moment where Sujatha comes and stands beside Atharv when Vivi is hugging him...you equated the pain to the swan singing. I can't tell you how much that just made my heart ache. It was such a brief but poignant moment just like the time when right before blurting out to Sujatha the truth, Atharv tried so hard to swallow the words along with the pain of his mother's accusations.
The other part that stood out to me, is the tearful hope in Vividha's eyes as she readies herself once more for a life with her love. This time though the tears seem so omnious, like she knows something isn't right. There is a hesitancy in her smile unlike the first time she was getting ready...its like she has an instinct that forces her to tell herself that this time she shouldn't let this moment pass and must grab on with both hands lest it be a dream and she'll wake up to another nightmare.

These two just squeeze my heart.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I was waiting for this write up with my popping eyes n here it is. Yes u analysed everyone quite correctly. šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -JC-


helloo JC... your monu chavani siggy never fails to cheer mešŸ˜›
You always write such beautiful words. But today's epi there was just the end moments that pulled at my heart. The moment where Sujatha comes and stands beside Atharv when Vivi is hugging him...you equated the pain to the swan singing. I can't tell you how much that just made my heart ache. It was such a brief but poignant moment just like the time when right before blurting out to Sujatha the truth, Atharv tried so hard to swallow the words along with the pain of his mother's accusations. oh yes undoubtedly... that stare and nod he gives sujata showed whatt a fine actors both are.. a mothers near hysteria , but fighting to keep a brave face for her son

The other part that stood out to me, is the tearful hope in Vividha's eyes as she readies herself once more for a life with her love. This time though the tears seem so omnious, like she knows something isn't right. There is a hesitancy in her smile unlike the first time she was getting ready...its like she has an instinct that forces her to tell herself that this time she shouldn't let this moment pass and must grab on with both hands lest it be a dream and she'll wake up to another nightmare.
yes VIvidha.. her apprehension and anticipation are all heightened by a good choice of the song.. the contrast with how he feels..
These two just squeeze my heart. JC.. after six years I havemoved by love story.. have a variety of channels where Iam but none impressed me except.. this pair.. Atharv and Vividha! ..loving the highs and lows of the story.. lovely to hear fromyou JC.. love hammie

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Originally posted by: Ilovecoffee

I was waiting for this write up with my popping eyes n here it is. Yes u analysed everyone quite correctly. šŸ‘ šŸ‘


hello coffee and I love LattešŸ˜†!... ohh good you liked how I covered it .😃 its agood feelng that all can share their views here.. thanks for reading and giving an encouraging response.. much love hammie
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Originally posted by: simpleAnna

hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie phew and a hug.this is outstanding. Hammazingly amazing hammie, so proud of myself for knowing u, n being friends with u...erhhh safed coat.. the feeling is mutual.. thanks for being one committed reader.. ummmh, really Iam humbled

Speechless, what can i say, where to start?the equation? So well described, from d title to the total storytelling.marvellous.
the truth is the super trio are beginning to mean something to me..hence my subjectivity towards them..
Amazing u saw ravish as a warrior who has turned into peacemaker. šŸ‘ how can u even think like that?we normal human beings fail to see, but u, ur specs have special power u use it while doing takes, right?
its true though.. the man is a fauji..coming from an army background.. yet this man for whatever his reasons maybe.. has actively worked to bring peace..
The ending, u make my heart bleed.i havent seen the episode, i dont know what performance VSC gave, but u made him look like a fantastic character who is about to leave.my heart cries for him.
all three ravish,vividha ,and Atharv supported each other in ahighly dramatic scene... Atharv's scene with his maa... brings out the actor in his finest... make me happy , watch the episode for my sake.. will you?
Keep writing.love u hamesha.hamesha
you lady chillax! look after your self... enjoy but don't trouble your mother!!šŸ˜†... and wapis tu aye ge na??🤣.. love hammie

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Hammie outstanding take once again sweetheart. .
Yeah keep me out of the equation..how Ravish fr Vitharv's sake n Atharva trying the same vividha's sake bt in the end we kno Atharva's going to win ths Race.. hammie jst loved ur musings in the take.. he preferred to be Cowardice fr her sake.. fr him ofcourse it wud be anyday preferred to be cowardice than to be Selfish Brave heart... BRAVO ham..!! Can't be put better than ths wen ppl.around questioning his each n every move..šŸ˜†

SORTED..!! Bt seems back to square one.. I do think Ravish gonna sacrifice in the end n will marry Vividha😳 hayye bt we kno she can never love him bac.. ths super trio of urs is super se bhi operrr sach main. !! 😳 n yea the showdown btw these 3 was jst amazing..I wonder how they're incomplete without each other .. šŸ˜›

Thnk u so much fr gving us ths treat daily without fail ham.. the journey has been incredible so far all thnks to u.. love u


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hammie any way you equate ...you can't keep me from saying that your posts are getting better and better...which is making it so much more interesting to watch ...

Atharva is hell bent on trying to make a very angry Vividha understand his decision but she is in a foul mood and rightly so, tells him to get out...

Vividha is not going to hate him that easily but she will if Atharva does not smarten up and be honest with her and explain his reasoning...

Ravish tries his way to show both of them to admit that they are made for each other...will it work ? Atharva seems to be still holding back from hugging Vividha when she so easily goes to him for comfort and love she knows that he can only give her...

Hammie you are right , there has to be some more drama of all this before both Atharva and Vividha realize that there is more to this drama than what they see...

Take care, happy writing...


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Originally posted by: NusiSg


hellooo nusi, its unusually quiet in my house.. visitors gone...
Hammie outstanding take once again sweetheart. .

Yeah keep me out of the equation..how Ravish fr Vitharv's sake n Atharva trying the same vividha's sake bt in the end we kno Atharva's going to win ths Race.. hammie jst loved ur musings in the take.. he preferred to be Cowardice fr her sake.. fr him ofcourse it wud be anyday preferred to be cowardice than to be Selfish Brave heart... BRAVO ham..!! Can't be put better than ths wen ppl.around questioning his each n every move..šŸ˜†
thanks for accepting my sentiments.. Atharv..'s pereseverance astounds me.. all three actually show their stamina...
SORTED..!! Bt seems back to square one.. I do think Ravish gonna sacrifice in the end n will marry Vividha😳 hayye bt we kno she can never love him bac.. ths super trio of urs is super se bhi operrr sach main. !! 😳 n yea the showdown btw these 3 was jst amazing..I wonder how they're incomplete without each other .. šŸ˜›
well if Ravish marry's vividha.. atharv will be the winner.. its what he wanted all along! will vividha agree though??
Thnk u so much fr gving us ths treat daily without fail ham.. the journey has been incredible so far all thnks to u.. love u
thank you Nusi.. for giving your interesting comments daily... me have to see today's episode.. .. hope... and look here doctor sahiba.. take rest.. much love ,yours hammie


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