RISHBALA FF - Love Starts From The Valley Of Death (discontinued)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi friends...
Here is my new story...
When i was sitting with my daily thoughts i got this idea suddenly...so just developed a rishbala story from it..here is a small prologue...
Aiswarya...
Thanks...








Love Starts From The Valley Of Death


Prologue..


Madhu washed her face & looks at the mirror..she found tears in corner of her eyes..she again washed her face but the flow of tears is not stopped...she wipes her tears & tried to become normal by thinking it was all her fate..she want to bear it..she have no other option..tomarrow is her marriage...usually girls r happy in this time but how she can..?she back to bed & tried to sleep..its already 12 am..marriage is on next morning 9 am..9 hours to go..after that she is the wife of balraj chowdary who is elder than her father...she rise from the bed and thought.."no i cant..its better to die than that of marrying him.."she wipes the last drop of tears in her eyes...
"Yes..its better to say good bye to this life which only gave me tears.."she stands from her bed & moves towards a desk & sat on a chair which is near to it...
She wrote a letter and placed it on the desk...she opened the door slowly & get out from her home..its not safe for a girl like her to be out in this time..but she is not at all scared...she continued her walk and reached near deep cliff...
Its a secluded area.."no one come here to save me.."she thought & tried to jump off the cliff..but some one hold her from back & pull her towards him..she turns her face & saw a man looking like a greek god holding her..
"Leave me.."she shout..
"Y u r trying to die.."man..
"Y u want to know that..?go and mind your bussiness.."madhu..
"Go from here this place is not good for u.."man.
"I hate my life i dont want to live any more.."madhu..
"Y u hate your life this much.."man.
"You dont understand that.."madhu.
"I can understand..actually me too hate my life & came here to end my life.."man..
Madhu looks him from toe to head..
"U came to end your life & dont allow me to..?"madhu..
"Ok..whats your problem.."madhu..
"Its a long story..i will tell u that when v reach at heaven.."man.
"If v commit suicide v will not get heaven but go to hell.."madhu.
"Ok..then before v going to hell or heaven tell your problem to me v can share our problems & then can die peacely.."man.
"Oh forgot to tell one thing..i am rishab kundra..u can call me rk.."rk..
"I am madhubala..u can call me madhu.."madhu..they shook their hands..
"Ok now start telling your problem..y u want to die..?"rk..
"Tomarrow is my marriage..
But i dont like it..so i decided to end my life.."madhu.
"For this small reason u r going to die.."he raised his eyebrows..
"This is not a small reason..he is older than my papa..& its his third marriage..i cant live as his concubine.."tears rolled from her cheeks..
"They y u agreed for this marrige.."rk.
"I am forced to take this decision..my papa borrowed some money from him when he have some finacial crises...my papa is unable to give the money back..he asked for some time but he did'nt allowed...2 days before he came to our home and tells he dont want the money back but for that he want to marry me or else he will Visit the court & my papa is send to jail then..i cant bear it..so i agreed.."madhu..rk feel pity for her..
"Y u want to die becoz of that crap..?now i understood death is not answer for anything..its an escape from life like a coward...my problem is nothing before yours..how fool i am to think of death becoz of a silly reason..i just quit & u too.."rk.
"But..."madhu..
"Believe me...i will save u from that crap...oh what is his name..?"rk.
"Balraj chowdary.."madhu..
"Ha..ballu..ok..come lets go.."rk.
"where..?"madhu..
"Come na.."rk..madhu looks him with doubt & thought "how can i believe a stranger.."
"You can believe me.."rk..madhu's eyes swelled..
"How u know what i thought..?"madhu..
"Its easy..this is night,secused area,me & u only here,i am stronger than u and totally a stranger...u only think like that..if u believe me come with me..or else the cliff is here u can jump off..."rk..
"I believe u.."madhu..
"Then come..a surprize is waiting for that ballu.."rk.madhu looked him puzzled..they walked through the road..in between she looks him & thought.."who is he..& y he is helping me..?"in thoughts she walked along with him...

Waiting for your reaction friends..
If u like this story plz hit the like button & drop your reviews...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start Aishu..
Balraj wants to marry Madhu.
She tried to finish her life.But RK saved her..
Why did he want to die?
He didn't say...
What is problem between ballu and RK.
eagerly waiting ..
update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: dharsii

Nice start Aishu..
Balraj wants to marry Madhu.
She tried to finish her life.But RK saved her..
Why did he want to die?
He didn't say...
What is problem between ballu and RK.
eagerly waiting ..
update soon..

Thanks akka..balraj & rk is connected...he know him before...will update soon..its difficult to manage both stories at a time..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey aah..
Congo for ur new story :)
The title is really intense..
Love the start..
Thanks for pm :))
Sorry, the like is not working properly
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for new story...
Nice start ..
Loved it ..
Madhu tried to kill herself ..
RKK saved her n himself too😆
He adressed balraj as ballu??
Thnks for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

Hey aah..
Congo for ur new story :)
The title is really intense..
Love the start..
Thanks for pm :))
Sorry, the like is not working properly

Thanks aan 😊...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: RijaMalik

Congrats for new story...

Nice start ..
Loved it ..
Madhu tried to kill herself ..
RKK saved her n himself too😆
He adressed balraj as ballu??
Thnks for pm..

Thank you so much..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Older than Madhu 's Father Balraj is a mad man. Madhu is like a Daughter to him, dear God pls save her. I guess knight in shinning Armour is going to to it. Pls continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mikolingam

Older than Madhu 's Father Balraj is a mad man. Madhu is like a Daughter to him, dear God pls save her. I guess knight in shinning Armour is going to to it. Pls continue

Thank you so much for reading..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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congrats for new story aishu. .
interesting start. .
madhu marriage was fixed with balraj. .who is elder than her father ..
she is going to commit suicide. .
then rk stop her ..
and said he will help her. .
thanks for pm ...

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