Kuch Rang pyaar ke ase bhi/pt 11/pg73/12 nov - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1

Dad why you taking so much tension

Dekhna ye tender hume hi milenga

.

I hope son

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He going towards lift but stop seeing one girl who wearing black sort dress which coming above knees but on above grey coat wearing then her black leggings which hiding her legs, he not know why he checking out, but she standing in corridor and reading some file and like she thinking something, her hair coming on her face, one hand try to holding files and in another hand she have pen, sometime she put hair behind her ear but again come to her face, she blow the air make her hair flew but again come to her face, she pouted and again she curled hair behind ear and try to think and at last she get the point , her face tell to him, her sad lips curved to beautiful smile, her eyes twinkling with happiness, she take step towards him , make him lose, he try to remove gaze from her face, oh god she sees me, he try to move but she come closer and press the lift button, he inhale her fragrance , his hand moved to touch her hair , but before he get chance she enter in life, he don't want to lose this , he also come into lift, he take out the phone and take her snapshot of side face ...she left and he take deep breath , thank god she don't catch you , if she knows you seeing him and like thief take her snapshot too don't know what going happen with him.

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Maan where you gone this time

Kitna time laga diya tumne yaha aane me

Maan : sorry dad

Wo file na mujhe mil nhi rhi thi

Ussi mein bs time lag gya

Raj : hmm

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Maan coming with dad after getting tender of school and seen her angelic face again , she standing with some lady...

Maan (think) boss hongi ye lady iski

Bechari ko kaise dekh rhi hai

Dekho uski smile hi gayab ho gyi

.

Haste huye kitni pyaari lag rhi thi

.

Ram : maan where you lost

Maan : nothing dad

Ram : then why you standing here

And what you seeing actually

Ram sees all around and don't get which thing his son and getting so much attention too...

Maan : chalo dad

Ram : yaha ek business party hai

Your uncle veer invite us

If you want you can come with me

.

Maan going deny but stop her voice

Yes mom am coming with you for attending khurana party

Maan : yes dad

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Veer : hello Mrs. Handa

Rano : good afternoon Mr. khurana

I want to see these samples and finalized all things fast

Then we start manufacturing for your proved designs

Veer : Mrs. Handa

First enjoy the party and take lunch

Tb tak mein ye sb apni team ke sath dekh leta hu

Geet bte

Aap tb tak party enjoy kriye

.

Raj : veer

Veer : bhaisahab aaiye na

Am happy to see you maan beta

Maan : uncle ab aa gya hu na

Veer : sorry Mrs. Handa

He is my elder brother Raj Khurana

Owner of Khurana Consturctions

And his son Maan Singh Khurana

Raj: hello Mrs. Handa

And you young lady

Maan only know about her young lady but her dad not said any word further and now with hope eyes he sees towards geet , waiting some reply from her.

Rano : Mr. Khurana

She is my elder Daughter Geet Handa

Try to learning business working with me

Raj : that's good beta

He placed hand on her head, she pass small smile , and her gaze meet with maan, who continuously staring her, she not like, she give him angry glares to him, he feel caught and turn the face seeing her angry eyes...

Maan (think) maan surely she thinking you are some loafer type boy

Your first impression goes in drain

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Mohinder : Rano tum ase kaise decision li sakti ho

Atleast ek baar meri se nhi

Geet se toh pucha hota

Its about her life

.

Rano : geettt

Geettt

.

Geet cum down running her mom voice , her heart beat is fast but she said in mid yes mom.

Rano : can I don't take any decision for you

Geet : you can mom

Rano : it's about your life

Geet : mom you can take any decision

Rano : can I need take permission for you

Geet : no mom

Rano : so Mr. Husband

Clear

Mohinder : rano try to understand dear

I know you can take decision

But its about her full life

She have totally right to choose life partner own self.

Geet down eyes lift up about hear life partner she look towards dad and get her mom choose someone for her...before her father argue with mom...she said in mid : sorry dad

I have no problem with mom decision

If she choose someone

Am ok with this

Rano : that's like my daughter

She come beside geet and encircled hand around her shoulder...

Rano : mohinder

Surely after meeting with him

You like my choice

He is sharp minded and son of top business man

Mohinder : geet bte

Abhi tumhari mom ne kuch final nhi kiya hai

After meeting with him

You can say NO too

Rano : mohinder

Mohinder : rano geet need time to absorb all things

Hai na beta

Geet :

Rano : in evening his family coming for dinner

So get ready

Geet : ji mom

Rano : as per our status

I think you wear Western gown

Mohinder : I don't think so rano

She not going for any party

Beta

Tum koi suit ya sari phehna

Rano : mohinder today generation not like all this

Anjali : hey mom

Hey dad

What's going on here

Mohinder : anjali help your sister for evening get together

Aur ha

Dhyan rahe ye suit ya sari hi phehne

Rano : par

Mohinder : bs

Rano : ok

Geet do what your dad said

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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: maaneetfavo

awesome CS di.😃


now waiting for part 1


thanku ji
i already posted part 1
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
Great start. So maan was blown away seeing geet for the first time. He was lost in her. Geet noticed him how he was staring her n she didn't like the thing. Omg rano fixed geet's alliance without asking her wish. Mohindar supported geet saying if she doesn't like the boy then she can deny for the alliance. Waiting for next dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Beautiful and Lovely part..
Intresting cs..
Maan toh 1st time geet ko dekha ka clean bold hai lol..
Geet ka 1st impression maan ka liya acha nahi hai maan usa niharne ma jo busy tha..
Geet ka life ka decision uski mom leti hai aur geet ko koi problem nahi wo agree hai unka baat par..
Geet ko dekhna koi aaraha hai par kaun maan hai kya?
Waiting for next part..
Thanks for pm (in advance)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
great start but some blooper, somewhere u wrote Ram insted of Raj just needs edits, i think the boy is maan?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
Nice cs
Awesome part
Geet is like her mom
Maan get bowled when first saw her
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27

already updated ji
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: idunno

great start but some blooper, somewhere u wrote Ram insted of Raj just needs edits, i think the boy is maan?


actually i feel this while typing but dont have time to recheck
so left it 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Wow wonderful cs n dangerous rano aunty. I think its first time that rano handa is so disciplined n strict n some rude too. Maan is totally fida on geet LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT. Now what is their future.
Waiting for next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30

hi thanks 4 da amazing update! well written! Maan eyes Geet! he takes her pic n is blown away bt her! they meet officially! Rano fixed Geet's marriage without her consent! Mohindet upset as he wants Geet 2 chose her life partner! Mohinder is a nice dad while Rano is dominating! Geet agrees with her mom's choice! Is it Maan??? update soon

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