Ariya SS::Bas Mein Tere Kabil Nahi..(Completed) - Page 53

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: etfr

Superb Amazing update

Love it
Finally after all hurdles ariya are married happily..
Her parents also accept their marriage by heart..
Nicely written
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Thanks dear...

Glad u like it..
Will try to update epilogue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cuppypie121

Superb update

Finally ariya married 😃



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

awesome

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cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago


Part 13(Epilogue):-

One day..

Choree n Riya back from investigation n walked inside conference room..

Shree:-hey bhagwan ye Arjun sir aur rathod sir..sari investigation hamse karwate he..aur khud dono aaram se cabin me baithe honge..

Chotu:-nahi bhagwan..iss shree ki bakwas tum baad me sun Lena..pehale kuch chamatkar dikha ke bas garam coffee aur thoda sa kuch khane ko mil jaye jaldi..

Riya roll her eyes looking to her best friends..

The trio become quite when they saw samjun are in conference room sitting on their usual sit..

Choree n Riya also sit in their usual chair..but get shocked to see coffee mug kept in front then..

Shree:-ye coffee kisane banayi..?

Arjun:-meine..

Chotu(shocked):-aapne..?

Arjun:-kyo ?kuch problem he..?

Chotu:-no sir..

Shree(mutter to Riya):-wah..kya baat he ri..tera asar hone laga he Arjun sir pe..

Riya blush..

Choree started sipping their coffee..

Here Riya found a chit of paper beneath her coffee mug..

She took it..n look Arjun ..he smrik..she hide that chit in her hand..n look to choree n Sam through corner of eyes..they are too busy..she open the chit beneath table..

Its the same chit she gave Arjun expressing her feelings..

She had write I love u on it..

She realize her handwriting..

She smiles to herself..

But then her gaze fell on below her written words..

Today something more written on it..

"I love u too.."

She realize its arjun's handwriting..

She blush..n look to Arjun through corner of her eyes .

Arjun smile n wink to her..

N signal her to come to his cabin..

Riya nod her head in negative with fake glare..

Hear Sam saw Arjun's smile his signal to Riya..n riya's nod..

He cough loudly..

Ariya act as normal..

Sam:-Arjun..kam me man nahi lag raha toh cabin me Jake aaram karo..aur ha..Riya ko bhi sath le jao warna cabin me bhi tumhara dil nahi lagega..

Choree giggle..n Sam laugh..

Riya blush..while Arjun give fake glares to all n left to his cabin..

Sam signal Riya to go behind Arjun..n choree almost push her from there..Riya is so embrassed ,she almost run from there to arjun's cabin..

Choree n Sam laugh ..


After some more days..its Sunday..

So etf has plan a small picnic n all are on beach..

Choree are busy in their masti..

Sam is wondering on beach..while ariya busy in their talk..

Arjun(looking to sea):-Riya ek baat puchu..?

Riya:-hmm..?

Arjun:-kya sach me mein tumhare Kabil hu..??

Riya stared him..n without answering she ask him.

Riya:-kya sach me mein aapke Kabil hu..??

Both stared each other .

Their trance broke up when Sam speak up..

Sam:-tum dono abhi bhi woh Kabil..na Kabil wali baato ko leke baithe ho..?oh come on guys..muzse pucho toh tum dono ek dusare ke liye perfect ho..issiliye ye baate chodo..

Arjun:-itne dino me pehli baar tune kuch kaam ki baat bolo he..I agree with u..he na Riya..?

Riya smiles..n nodded..Sam make puppy face..

Arjun forward his hand n Riya give her hand in his ..

Both started walking towards sea..



Sagar ki ret pe dil ko jab..

Ye banayegi meri ungaliya..

Tere naam ko hi pukarke..

Khanakegi meri chudiya..


Tuzme ada aise he aaj..

Udati ho jaise titloyan..

Pheeki ab na kabhi hogi..

Ye ranginiyaan..



Tere mere ware sapne..

Band aakho ke tale me hein..

Chabi kaha dunde bata..

Woh chand ke pyale me he..

Fir bhi sapne kar dikhau sach toh..

Kehna bas yahi..


Mein tere Kabil hu ya tere Kabil nahi..

Mere tere Kabil hu ya tere Kabil nahi..




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Posted: 8 years ago
Note:-

So here this story also ends..

Hope u like it..n enjoy reading it..

Thanks for all who appreciate n comment the story..

Thanks to all silent readers also..


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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome fab end
Loveit
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Posted: 8 years ago
awsm epi thanx for the p.m
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Posted: 8 years ago
good akhir sam ne tair kiya ki dono ek doosare ke kabil hei


wonderful epilogue

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Posted: 8 years ago
Very beautiful end
Love this story
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice epilogue Di
Will miss this story
Pls write more on ArIya
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