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PART 24 ( B)

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riddhima and jade001 @ guys ur right.geet attempt suicide because of maan said move on her life. last part also i mentioned maan faced geet 's sherni avator soon. but geet decision really bad one.maan angry her because he dont want lose her in his life..

Geet runout outside and hug maan tightly.maan also reciprocate her hug because he eagerly waiting with her every moment.

Geet: Sry maan plz forgive me I did it like stupid with crying face.

Maan remembered she had serious condition in icu- .his body became stiffened and stay away from her hug.

Geet: Maan with moist eyes

Dadi, Vicky ,swara come to hall.

Maan: Dadi we need go to our mansion.so pack ur everything said with straight face.

Geet mind: Maan plz talk directly instead of using dadi name with cute lovely look to maan.

Maan: Dadi I am saying why still standing infornt of me.

Dadi: Maan beta u want say anything to geet say directly not using my name.

Geet: Dadi iam not come with ur mansion.

Maan glare to geet and but geet not stopped her bak bak

Geet: My husband not talk with me.why I come to ur house.my maan call me mishty...with his loving voice.otherwise iam not come with u dadi with dramatic ways

Dadi rolled her eyes mindthought: dramabazz

Swara and Vicky enjoyed both maaneet state.

Maan tried say something and ragupaa voice intrepet.

Raguram: Obviously princess u not stay in km with serious face.

Geet face fell down and everyone shocked mainly maan.

Dadi : Raguram beta I thought u accepted maaneet marriage but why not allow geet .

Raguram: Maaji I accept maaneet marriage.but maaneet marriage didn't happened in proper tradition. So I thought we will arrange our children marriage soon.until their marriage geet will stay with us.

Maan: But uncle we already married..

Raguram: Maan beta , geet my first child.i want to see my child marriage.plz beta accept my wish

Maan half heartely accepted his decision and went out with angry face even though not forgot angry glare to geet.she reply puppy look

Geet mind voice: Geet ur stupid, maan said that time u packed ur things this cannot happened.papa not dined go to km.maan already angry with me.now iam stay away from him until our marriage.hey babaji plz help ur favourite child.

Maan mind thought: geet what I will do with u. yeah I angry with u even I angry with my self.insake of me, u attempt suicide. My ego not accept ur stupid decision.my heart said run to ur mishty but my mind said stay away from u.even u also think I give u punishment.ur punishment hurt me more than u.in these 2 days iam not spoke with u.it became hell for me.now ur stupid argues ,uncle decided stay away from u until our marriage.i am not forgive u soon geet .

*****

Sanskar car:

Choti head placed to janumaa.one side her tears flowing like river in her eyes. Janu caring her lovingly even her eyes also moist.janumaa thinking if annapurana ji separated choti from her.

Choti closed her eyes remember horrible past.

Mageshwari family very traditional,good name in society but they thought only boys heir of family not girls.durgaprasad and annapurana mageshwari one only son is sanskar maheswari.he age of 5.annapurana give birth to ragini mageshwari ( choti). durgaprasad not like Annapurna gave birth to girl child.he not care about ragini baby.ragini scared infront of her dad.even she not call him father infront of him.she not get any father love .but sanskar love her princess so much. Ragini is sanskar life.

Ragini age 5 ,sanskar 10

Ragini placed her head in his lap: bhai why papa not speak with me even he not play with me.

Sanskar : ragumaa,sweety ur bhai with u.u don't need anyone love with caring her softly.

Ragini:papa said iam bad omen for him.if I will go out from our house ,he will become happy with moist eyes.

Sanskar cupped her cheeks: don't say once again ,u will go away from me.ur my life sweety.ur bhai nothing without u.

Ragini: I love u bhai.u not leave my hand right

Sanskar: I am not leave ur hand until my last breathe.

Years also moving like clouds moving.ragini now 9 yrs old and sanskar 14 yrs old.

Durgaprasad joined sanskar to boarding school.poor ragini baby alone in mansion.annapurna love her daughter obviously she is her mother.she love her own blood but she never against her husband word.

Sanskar admitted in boarding school hospital because he have high fever . He is serious condition like bed death condition .everyone went to seeing sanskar.

Durgaprasad trust his mageshwari guruji word blindly.so he is going to meet guruji in ashramam.

Guruji: I know durgaprasad u come to see me.ur son life is danger with polite voice.

Durgaprasad: ha guruji plz save my child.he only heir of my family.

Guruji: I already told send ur daughter to any orphan.she is not good for ur house especially sanskar.if she stay with sanskar definetly sanskar go away from us permanently in this world.if u want then keep ur daughter with u

Durgaprasad:nahi guruji, I need my son.

Guruji: hmm go join ur daughter to any orphan.

Durgaprasad: ok guruji I will do

****

Hospital

Durgaprasad told guruji words and his decision to annupurna

Annapurna:she also our daughter.how will u do with her.she is not orphan to join any orphanage with slow and crying voice.

Durgaprasad: I want my son safety other than iam not think anyone with angry pitch voice.

Ragini heared her parents conversation.her little souls shattered her parents don't want her in their life.

Choti enter sanskar room and sanskar laid to bed in unconuious state.ragini hold sanskar hand.

Choti/ragini: bhai,wake up in ur sleep.everyone want me separated from u with crying face

Sanskar heart beat raised and his body jumped in bed and choti panicked seeing his condition.doctor treat sanskar and after minute sanskar come to normal condition.

Dp: Annapurna u seeing ur own eyes.she enter sanskar room .he become more critical.if she stay with him.my son not alive.he will die soon

Ragini run to sanskar room : bhai I will go away from u after that nothing happened to u.i love u bhai ...kissed his forehead ...eventhough he s in unconscious state but tears flow in his sanskar s eyes .

Durgaprasad joined ragini in orphanage but first annupurna not accept his husband decision.she never raise her voice infront of her husband right only she cried thinking her fate.

****

( guys I am not trust this type stupid thought one person birth is bad omen to other person life how it is possible and girl not weak compare to boys.why some people not understand.boys only heir of family.. now girls changed their thought but some villages this issues going on even cities life also woman dominated by parent ,husband and law house ...some ladies not raise her voice infront of husband even he is wrong...hmm our society need to change or women need to change...)

Ragini scared more.everytime sanskar protected her but now her bhai not with her.

Ragini crying face: Bhai iam scared plz come to me..where r u bhai...

Warden: When day u come this place that day itself u did only crying.. .shut ur mouth otherwise I will lock u in dark room with shout angry voice

Ragini stop her cry but sobbing silently.

Maheswari mansion

Sanskar parents bring sanskar to mansion.

Sanskar eyes searching his jaan.he missing his jaan so much.

Sanskar: Maa where is sweety

Ap: Wow sanskar ..tears flowing in her eyes.

Sanskar: Why u crying.where is my Ragini maa with worried voice

Ap: Ur papa joined our Ragini to orphanage.she narrated everything to sanskar

Sanskar disgusting look to his maa.

Ap: Sanskar beta

Sanskar : Don't call my name in ur mouth.todayitself I have noone in my life except my sweety...my Ragini and went to his room.

Sanskar hold Ragini photo in his hand: Where r u sweety...ur bhai leave ur hand..iam not good brother.I will find u soon dear and hug Ragini photo tightly slept.

Orphanage

Warden really bad character.he misbehaved with many girls chidren.his lusty eyes fallen to choti.

One day morning time

Warden: Ragini come to store room

Ragini enter store room .it is dark place.warden hugged Ragini in lusty ways.poor soul tried relief from monster grip but her weak body not allow to help.

Ragini shout: Bhai...save me...continuously.

Warden close her mouth and ragaini bite his hand.he remove his hand that second choti opened store room door but that monster caught her..once again she shout..

One girl hearing choti voice ,enter the store room and seeing monster tried misbehave with little girl.

Girl anger raised and her eyes caught one iron rod and pick up the rod quickly beat that monster.

Thud..heavy sound

Girl beat warden head through rod.warden tried caught girl timegod he faint to ground.

Girl hugged Ragini but Ragini tried remove her hug because she thinking monster once again her molest.girl understand ragini fear.she consoled and cupped her cheeks.

Ragini looking girl face and girl give little smiled to Ragini.

Girl: Choti...lets go outside.

Ragini heart said she stay in safe hand and Ragini hugged girl tightly.

Girl: Noone touch u bacha

Ragini remember sanskar face to girl face.she sobbed in her shoulder.

Outside

Lady: Geet beta where u went..i searching everywhere and whose is this child. With caring voice

Yeah girl none other our Geet.and geet narrated everything to janumaa.

Janumaa eyes moist hearing in this age she faced big problem

Janumaa hugged Ragini tightly and kissed her forehead and Ragini fear reduced .

Ragu paa arrested warden.ragupaa come to inspection for orphanage in north India side.he specifically appointed for inspection from government.time god he bring geet and janumaa to orphange.geet saved choti from monster.

That night janumaa, raguram and geet stayed in orphanage.ragini not leave geet hand even single minutes.geet also have some unknown feeling to her choti.

Ragupaa kissed geet forehead : Good night princess.

Ragini remember: She never get father love in her life and she moist eyes look up to papa

Papa kissed Ragini forehead: Good night little princess.

Ragini: U call me princess with cute voice

Papa placed Ragini in his lap: Yes princess why u asking dear.

Ragini: My father never called me princess.I thought every father like him father not love girl child.but uncle u love di so much with moist eyes.

Janu, raguram understand how much she faced problem in her life

Geet: Choti, call him to papa not uncle

Raguram caring her hairs lovingly: Yes princess call me papa.

Ragini hugged papa tightly and crying vigrously

Janumaa: Why u both make my child to cry.this is not fairs my child not hug me but hug her papa.

Ragini hugged janumaaa: Maa...

Janumaa: Princess ur maa with u

Janu telling fariy tale stories to Ragini.

Ragini: Maa angel meaning kya hai

Janumaa: Angel mean whenever u have problem she come to save u.she give u every happiness.

Ragini: Like di.she only save me and give me papa and maa.di my angel.

****

Next day news published in paper.

Sanskar saw Ragini photos in newspapers and ramukaka helped sanskar come to orphanage.

Raguram, janumaa and geet packed their things.

Ragini: U leave me alone in this place with crying voice

Geet: My choti come with her di.iam right papa.

Janumaa and raguram nods their heads..

Sanskar come to orphanage and seeing choti with geet .

Sanskar: sweety

Ragini saw her bhai and run to hug him tightly and she cried so much.

Sanskar: sweety don't cry beta ur bhai with u.

Ragini remembered her parents word.she is not good for sanskar.she moved back away from him.

Sanskar: sweety what happened why u going back..

Ragini go hug to janumaa and janu seeing sanskar crying and worried face.

Raguram: who r u beta

Sanskar narrates everything about her,parent joined her to orphanage.janu,geet eyes moist

Sanskar: sweety,chello lets go our home.

Ragini nods her head negatively: iam not come with u bhai.i stay with di

Sanskar hurts his jaan words and cursing his parents.

Raguram understand both situation: sanskar beta,u trust me

Sanskar: yes uncle I trust u.u save my sister life.

Raguram: then allow ur sister with us. I will adopted ragini legally

Sanskar: but uncle..she is my sister

Raguram: ur little boy.now u not face this cruel world.if once again ur parents join ragini to any orphanage.what u will do.yesterday itself she is my younger daughter.

Sanskar : ok uncle but...

Raguram give phone number and address to sanskar:whenever u want to speak choti call this number.

Choti: bhai promise me u not go away from ur parents.

Sanskar: ur parents

Choti: yes there are not my parents with painful voice..i got my family bhai..with small smile appeared in face

Geet: bhai, I will take care my choti and iam also ur sister right.

Sanskar nods his head ,geet family come back to Chennai.

ragini mageshwari name changed to rageswari raguram. Choti more depressed so she got panicked attack in night time.geet parent took doctor.she take medication ..after some years doctor stopped medication.choti avoid sanskar call but geet close with sanskar. Sanskar come Chennai and spent time with geet and her parents.but choti away from him.sanskar got his new family...

FLASHBACK end

Janumaa: choti stop ur crying session.

Sanskar wiped his own tears: she is crying baby maa.she only know crying teasing tone

Choti glare to sanskar: I will tell angel u call me crying baby.she will beat u

Pinky: bhai,iam hungry...plz drive fast.

everyone giggled looking pinky face

next day morning

Geet enter km and dadi sit in sofa reading newspaper.

Geet: dadi...

Dadi: geet beta,early morning what r doing here .

Geet pout: dadi,why iam not come to mansion

Dadi:nahi beta ur papa allow to km with doubting face.

Geet:papa said not stay in km but don't enter in km he never said right hmm dadi now What r doing my angry husband.

Dadi: obviously what he will do in this time.exercise..go see ur angry hubby

Geet went to maan taichai room and maan practice tia chai with bare chest

Geet drooling maan hided behind in curtain & geet heart beat raised seeing in his handsome body: hey babaji why u give him manly body.every girls drooling and running behind him

Maan sensed someone looking to him and maan pulled geet hand and geet fallen maan bare chest.maaneet starring each other.

Chandu disturbed love birds:geet baby when u return back

Maan leave her hand: chandu what r doing here

Chandu: maan sir ur juice

Maan:chandu, u said iam not come to ur house then why u come today with harsh voice

Geet pout look to maan and maan glare to geet

Chandu: when I said maan sir

Maan: chandu...and went to his room

******

Geet placed maan dress ,wallet,watch arranged neatly in bed.maan come out after shower .

Geet smiled maan but maan get another dress went out his washroom back.

Geet : hey babaji how much he show his attitude

*****

Dinning table

Dadi ,Vicky,swara and maan sit in dinning table.geet served breakfast to Vicky and swara.geet tried serve maan and maan snatched bowl from geet hand and served himself.

Geet face fell down.everyone feel bad for geet.

Dadi: maan beta,don't do with geet..see her face she become sad.

Maan get up to dinning table and went out immediately.

Geet go inside and dadi stopped geet beta

Dadi: geet beta where r u going

Geet: kitchen dadi maa ,my hubby not have any breakfast so I will go to pack his breakfast and then go to my office.

Swara: u not angry with bhai.

Geet: no ...but he will face my sherni avatar in future soon with warning tone

Vicky: I will drop u bhabhi

Dadi: geet don't do any drama in office .maan not tolerate anyone do anything in his office.

Geet: I will handle him dadi .i know how to pacify my maaan with smiling face

Swara: but bhabhi now bhai is not maan .he is msk.noone pacify msk anger

Geet: he is msk but iam gmsk with proud voice

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Nice part maan angry in geet fir tried to kill her self geet guilty so choti parents left her becoz she us a girl nice cobtine soon

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Nice part maan angry in geet fir tried to kill her self geet guilty so choti parents left her becoz she us a girl nice cobtine soon

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I thought you update hope that to with maangeet past but I'm disappointed 😒