Ariya SS::Bas Mein Tere Kabil Nahi..(Completed)

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#491

Originally posted by: bloomie
awesome update
loved it
Arjun ne Riya ko officially propose kar diya
puri ETF khush ho gay
Riya reconciled with shree and chotu as well...yay!!!
u r right kuch cheezein personal hi rehni chahiye
Riya ke parents aa rahe hai
ab kya hoga?
will Riya tell them about her n Sikandar?
Arjun riya both tensed
cont sooon

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#492

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awesome loved it update soon thnx for pm

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Originally posted by: Ariyabestessfan
wow awsm part,i lovd itthanx for the p.mconti soonish

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Posted: 8 years ago

#494

Originally posted by: etfr
Superb Amazing update
Mind blowing
Emotional yet lovely one..
Beautifully written
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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: dipamanvar
Awesome update
Arjun ne Riya ko propose kiya
Riya k mom and ariya k shadi k liye ha kar de
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Posted: 8 years ago

#496

Originally posted by: SATRISHI
nice one dear

ab ye parents koyi problem nahi layyenge na???

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Posted: 8 years ago

#497

Originally posted by: sur1911
nice update
loved it
all happy for ariya n ariya too
proposal was nice
u r ryt something meant to share with someone special
now what twist riya's parents will bring
update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

#498

Part 12(Last Part):-

Next day Riya's parents come to Mumbai..she get happy to see them..

Same night..

Ariya talking on phone n they decides that Arjun will come tomorrow to meet her parents..

Both then try to sleep thinking next day everything will become alright..

Next evening:-

Sam's home:-

Arjun n Sam directly come to Sam's home after office..

Sam is now in his room n Arjun is waiting for him in hall anxiously..

Arjun(yell):-Sam aur kitna time lagayega..?

Sam(from inside room):-Abe aa raha hu ruk..

Arjun(mutter to himself):-pichale 10 minute se yahi bol raha he..

Sam come out of his room..he has ware black color suit(imagine him in kalki devi case)

Arjun stared him from top to bottom..

Arjun:-ham kaha ja rahe he..?

Sam:-Abe bhul gaya kya..?tune hi toh kaha ke aaj Riya ke parents se baat karne Jana he..aur mein bhi tere sath aau..?

Arjun:-shadi ki baat karne ja rahe he..shadi karne nahi..

Sam:-matlab..?

Arjun(sigh):-ek baat bata ham kisake shadi ki baat karne ja rahe he..?

Sam:-tere aur Riya ke of course..

Arjun(yell):-Abe toh fir tu itna kyo tayar hua he jaise ke tere hi shadi ki baat karne ja rahe ho..?

Sam(glaring him):-are saf saf bol na fir..itna chillata kyo he..(he remove the coat..)ab thik he..?

Arjun:-ha chalega..(Arjun has ware his usually office ware dress)

Sam shook his head in disbelief..

Sam:-dekh ek toh tere aur roshni ke shadi me ye sab karne ki zarurat nahi thi..kyo ki roshni ne already apne parents ko tere bare me bata rakha tha..aur usake parents already tuzse impress ho chuke the..issiliye directly tune hi Jake usake parents se baat ki thi..muze aane ki zarurat hi nahi padi thi..par iss baar..pata nahi kya hoga..

Arjun:-issiliye toh tuze sath le ja raha hu na..?Riya ne usake parents ko kuch nahi bataya..upar se jab unhe mere past ke bare me pata chalega toh..don't know what is going to happened.. Par mein sirf itna janta hu ke mein usake bagair nahi reh sakhta yaar..

Sam:-don't worry mein hu na..sab thik hoga..ham unse acchese baat karege..

Arjun nodded..

Sam n jun reach to riya's home..

Riya open door n smiles nervously to them..samjun give her assuring nod..

They both come inside home..

Riya's parents get little confused seeing the guest in house as Riya had not said anything to them..

Riya:-mom..papa ye..hamare etf chief he sameer rathod sir..aur ye he hamare second in command Arjun sir..

Riya's papa:-hello..

He shakes hand with both samjun..

Riya's mom:-Mr.rathod se mein mil chuki hu tumhe bravery award mila tha exora 2 ke liye tab tumhari treatment chal rahi thi aur tum hospital me thi..aur meine hi award accept kiya tha..tab Mr.rathod bhi the muze support dene ke liye..aayiye na..baithi ye aap dono..mein kuch chai..coffee ka dekhti hu..

Sam jun sit on sofa..

Sam:-nahi aunty..ham baad me lenge..pehale woh baat hona zaruri he jisake liye ham yaha aaye he..aap bhi baith jayiye na aunty..

Riya's mom too sit..

Riya's papa:-kya baat he Mr.rathod..?Riya se office me kuch galati hui he..?kuch problem he..?

Sam:-uncle..mein yaha Riya ka boss banake nahi..balki Arjun ka dost banake aaya hu..

Riya's parents look confused to both samjun..

Riya's papa:-mein kuch samza nahi..

Sam:-Arjun aur Riya ek dusare ko pasand karte he..aur apni aane wali zindagi sath bitana chahte he..aur Arjun ka dost hone ke Nate mein Riya ka hath Arjun ke liye mangne aaya hu..

Riya's parents get shocked as Riya has not given any idea to them..

Riya's papa:-Riya beta..kya ye sach he..?

Riya nodded in positive with blush..

Both parents get happy that their only daughter has choose someone for herself..

Riya's papa (with little smile):-mana ke Riya ne aapko chuna he..par Riya ne aapke bare me hame kabhi kuch nahi bataya..shree chotu se ham mil chuke he..aur Mr.rathod Riya toh aapke bare me baate karte nahi thakti..woh aapko apna mentor manti he..par..Mr.Arjun ke bare me..

Sam:-mein samaz sakhta hu uncle ke aap Arjun se pehale baar mil rahe he..lekin..aap police department me kisi se bhi puch lijiye acp Arjun suryakant rawte kyon he..aapko woh bata denge..Arjun ke dushman bhi Arjun ki bahaduri aur sencierity ke gawahi denge..he is one of the best police officer in our department..

Riya's mom:-par..aise baate toh bado ko karni chahiye..kya aapne apne parents ko bataya he Riya ke bare me..?

Arjun:-ji nahi..actually.. Mere papa suryakant rawte bahot bade businesman he..woh chahte the ke mein bhi unka business sambhalu.. Par mein hamesha se hi police officer banana chahta tha..aur mere police officer banane ke wajah se woh muzse itne naraz hue ke unhone sare rishte muzse tod diye..aur meri mom toh mere bachpan me hi guzar gayi thi..

Riya's mom:-oh..I m sorry ..

Sam:-lekin uncle aunty..Arjun ek bahot hi accha insaan he..usaka khud ka flat he yahi issi city me..aur itni acchi job..aur fir ab woh 3 rd level officer bhi ban gaya he..matlab 1-2 saal me promotion toh hoga hi..he is well settled..aur agar usaki garentee leni he toh mein aakhe band karke woh le sakhta hu..

Riya's parents look each other n smiles..

Riya's papa:-OK..actually u have convinced me almost..but still we want some time to take final decision..

Arjun:-no problem..aap jitna chahe waqt lijiye.. Riya ke liye mein zindagi bhar intzaar kar sakhta hu..lekin ek aur baat he Jo muze aapko batani he..

Riya's papa:-kya?

Arjun:-meri pehale shadi ho chuki he..meri wife roshni ka murder hua tha..usake baad mein bahot akela ho gaya tha..par riya ke pyar ke wajah se hi mein aaj firse zindagi me aage badne ke bare me soch raha hu..

Riya's parents get shocked..

Riya's papa:-matlab ye aapki dusari shadi he..?

Arjun:-ji..

Riya's mom :-aur Riya tumhe ye sab pata he..??

Riya:-ha mom..

Riya's mom:-aur fir bhi tum ye shadi karna chahti ho.?

Riya:-par mom isame problem kya he..?

Riya's papa:-problem kya he..?

He glare Riya..he sigh n then turn to rathod..

Riya's papa:-Mr.rathod..Riya aapko apna mentor manti he..apna guru manti he..aur issi wajah se mein bhi aapki respect karta hu..lekin ye shadi nahi ho sakhti..

Sam:-uncle..Arjun aur Riya ek dusare se bahot pyar karte he..aur Arjun Riya ke liye best he..sirf usake past ke wajah se aap shadi se inkar kar rahe he..uncle ye thik nahi he..Riya bhi..

Riya's papa (cutting Him in mid):-meine Jo kehna tha keh diya..plz..mein aap dono ki insult nahi karna chahta..so plz..

Sam jun look each other..

Riya get teary..

Sam jun get up n turn to left..

Arjun gives Riya little nod sadly..n both samjun left from there..

Riya(with tears):-dad..?

Riya's papa:-Riya..muze tumse ye umeed nahi thi..meine pehale socha ke mere beti ne Jo bhi ladka chuna hoga woh best hi hoga..par woh toh pehale se shadi shuda he..ye toh socho beta tum usaki dusari biwi kehlaogi..kabhi na kabhi toh usake past ke wajah se tum logo ko problem hogi hi..aur..

Riya:-nahi papa aisa kuch nahi hoga..aur muze farak nahi padta ke log muze unki dusari biwi kahe ya kuch aur..sach toh ye he ke mein agar shadi karugi toh woh sirf unse..aur kisi se nahi..unke bagair mein nahi jee sakhti.

Saying this she left from there with tears..

Next day was Sunday..Riya don't cone out of her room ..neither she eat anything..

Riya's parents get worried seeing Riya like this.. N get more tensed seeing her determination to marry only Arjun..

Next day..

Riya come out of her room n going to office..

Riya's mom:-Riya..ye kya bina breakfast kiye ja rahi ho..?kal se kuch nahi khaya..beta ab toh office ja rahi ho..plz thoda kuch khalo..

Riya:-nahi.. Mom muze kuch nahi chahiye..

Riya's papa:-Riya..ye kya pagalpan he beta..tumhe isse accha rishta mil sakhta he..bahot accha ladka mil sakhta he.. Tum ek baar thik se soch lo..

Riya:-meine soch liya he papa..Arjun sir se hi shadi karugi mein nahi toh kabhi nahi..

Riya's papa sigh..

Riya's papa:-beta aaj tak hamne tumhare har faisale me tumhara sath diya..tumhare career me ..har faisale me..aur hame koi problem nahi hota..ham khushi se Arjun aur tumhari shadi karwate agar ye usaki dusari shadi na hoti..

Riya hold her papa's hand:-kya farak padta he dad..?mein unke sath rishta nibhane me koi kasar nahi chodugi aur woh bhi muzse utna hi pyar karte he..fir sirf duniya kya karegi ye soch se mein unse dur kaise ho jau..?plz papa..

Riya's papa:-beta..har parents apni beti ke liye sabse Kabil insaan ko dundana chahte he aur tum..

Riya(cutting him in mid):-Kabil..?aap kehna chahte he ke woh mere Kabil nahi..??par sach toh ye he ke mein hi Arjun sir ke Kabil nahi hu..unke jaisa thoughts rakhne wala insaan sirf kismat wali ko hi mil sakhta he..plz papa..I can't live without him..plz..

She left to office from there..

Riya's parents fall in thinking..

Etf office:-

Arjun's cabin:-

Arjun:-kya hua Riya..?tumhara chehara yun utara hua kyo he..?tumne kal khana nahi khaya na..?kaha tha na tumse..sabse thik hoga..khud ko yun takleef mat do..(he cup her face)mein tumhe aise nahi dekh sakhta..

Riya(with tears):-woh samazte he ke aap mere Kabil nahi he..unhe kya pata ke mein hi aapke Kabil nahi hu..agar unhe bata du ke mein Sikandar ke sath..

Arjun(stopped her ):-Riya..

Riya:-agar unhe bata du ke shadi se pehale hi ham physically bhi ek ho chuke he toh..

Arjun(put his finger on her lips):-tum aisa kuch nahi kahogi unse..

Riya remove his fingers from her lips..

Riya:-bahot mushkilo ke baad paya he meine aapko..aap se alag reh ke ab jee nahi paugi mein..

Arjun:-trust me..plz..

Both hug each other with tears in their eyes..

Arjyn broke hug..n left from office..

Riya keep staring to his direction thinking where he left..

Riya's house:-

Arjun come to riya's home..

Riya's papa open door..

Riya's papa:-aap yaha..?dekhiye plz..aap..

Arjun(cutting him in mid):-kya mein andar aake thodi baat kar sakhta hu..?

Riya's papa signal him to come inside..

Arjun come inside n sit on sofa..n Riya's parents too..

Arjun:-uncle aunty mein janta hu ke iss shadi ko aap tayar kyo nahi he..aapka sochna bilcul sahi he ke mein Riya ke Kabil nahi..ha..sach me aapka sochna sahi he..Riya ke Kabil nahi hu mein..Riya jaise ladki Jo hazaro logo ki jaan bachane ke liye exora virus kha liya ..khud ki bina parwah kiye hue hazaro logo ki jaan bachayi.. Sikandar ko pakdwaya..aise ladki best deserve karti he..aur mein best nahi..

Riya's parents just hearing him..

Arjun:-sach me mein Riya ke liye best insaan nahi hu..par ye bhi sach he ke agar mein zinda hu toh Riya ke wajah se..bachpan se hi pyar ke liye tarsa tha..jab roshni meri zindagi me aayi toh laga uss pyar ki kami puri ho gayi he..hamari shadi ke baad toh jaise zindagi kya hoti he ye pata chala muze..par roshni ki maut ne muze tod diya..aur zindagi ka sirf ek hi makad reh gaya ke roshni ke katil ko saza dilwau..lekin aaj roshni ke katil Sikandar ko saza dilwane ke baad bhi agar mein zinda hu toh sirf Riya ke wajah..aur sirf Riya ke liye..warna meine kabhi nahi socha tha ke roshni ke katil ko saza dene ke baad mein kuch pal bhi zinda reh pauga..

Riya's mom:-mein samaz sakhti hu aap dono bhi ek dusare se bahot pyar karte he lekin..

Arjun:-meine career ke liye apna ghar choda..apne papa se dur ho gaya..issiliye mein acchese janta hu ke parents ki ehmiyat zindagi me kya hoti he issiliye mein kabhi nahi chahuga ke Riya usake parents se dur ho jaye..issiliye mein aapse promise karta hu ke mein aur Riya aapke marzi ke opposite nahi jayege..mein janta hu mein Riya ke Kabil nahi..meri already ek baar shadi ho chuki he..mein apni wife ko nahi bacha paya..par ye bhi sach he ke mein Riya ke bagair jee nahi sakhta..

Parents stared him..

Arjun:-mein ek aur wada aapse karta hu ke mere past ke wajah se mere aur Riya ke bich koi problem nahi hone dunga..aur roshni ko toh mein nahi bacha paya par aaj ke baad Riya ke liye koi bhi khatra pehale muzse takrayega ..muze Jo kehna tha meine keh diya..ab faisala aapka hoga..mein aur Riya aapke faisale ko respect karege..aur agar aap kahege toh mein Riya se aur usaki zindagi se hamesha hamesha ke liye chala jauga..

Saying this Arjun left from there leaving parents in thoughts..

Arjun don't tell Riya about this conversation ..n back to office..they get busy in new case..

Here Riya back to home..her parents told her what Arjun had said..

Riya(shocked):-unhone aisa kaha ke woh muzse dur chale jayege..?

Her parents don't answer..Riya fall on floor numbly..

Riya's parents rush to her worrily..

Riya's mom:-Riya tum thik toh ho..??

Riya:-woh muzse dur chale gaye toh mein jee nahi paugi mom..nahi jee paugi..

Saying this she started crying hugging her mom..

After some more days..Riya's parents finally agree for marriage of ariya as they realized that Riya won't marry to anyone else..

N one fine day finally ariya get married in simple way in a mandir..

Riya's parents seems not that much happy with the marriage but still they give their blessings to ariya..

After all rituals..ariya come to arjun's home..

Riya sitting on bed in arjun's room nervously..

Arjun come to room after almost pushing Sam put of home..

Arjun saw Riya sitting on bed waiting for him.

Arjun:-sorry..woh Sam bahot bore kar raha tha..ja hi nahi raha tha..usaki teasing khatam hone ka nam hi nahi le rahi thi..muze usse dhakke de kar ghar se nikalna pada..

Riya(shocked):-kya..?aapne aisa kaise kiya..?rathod sir ko..

Arjun:-no..not again..meine hamesha observe kiya he tum hamesha Sam ki hi side leti ho..

Riya(shook her head in disbelief):-he is our chief..n more than that he is my mentor..if I respect someone after my parents then its rathod sir..

Arjun:-thik he baba..thik he..ab kuch kaam ki baat Kare..?

Riya:-kya?

Arjun:-wahi Jo har koi apne first night after marriage pe karte he..

Riya blush..n Arjun started his romance..

Days goes on..

Ariya are happy with each other..

N seeing them happy specially seeing Riya's happiness,Riya's parents accept their wedding with all their heart now..

N etf team is as always happy..

(So here is the last part..will try to update epilogue soon)