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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
It was sooo amazing !
From where do you churn out these stories & hats off to your thought process..so beautifullr written !!

You JUST CANNOT stop now !! You've made us taste blood now we want more !!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Matlab...!!!👏

title padh ke ye toh samaj aa gaya tha ki its related to "The Hair" 🤣

but marathon bhi aa jayega.. ye toh naa socha tha,...

Wonderful OS Dips. 🤗]
Loved it...!!!! ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Awww this is sooo adorable dear but still Hide n Seek is still my fav most beautiful story...I don't think I will be able to read the last part bcuz it will hurt like hell...atleast if I don't read last part I will feel Hide n Seek is still being continued...so sorry for the rant once again but thank u so much...


Love,
Spandana
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: sptrno

Awww this is sooo adorable dear but still Hide n Seek is still my fav most beautiful story...I don't think I will be able to read the last part bcuz it will hurt like hell...atleast if I don't read last part I will feel Hide n Seek is still being continued...so sorry for the rant once again but thank u so much...


Love,
Spandana


Arre read the end... I ll have more for sure... Mujhe dukhi baate aisehi jyada lihi nahi jaati 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
sooo amazing !
hats off to you
so beautifully written...
The Hair ...n Marathon...
loved it
thanx for PM...😊
thank you so much for the wonderful write up...
stay blessed...n take care


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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
You r amazing writer. His obsession towards hair and her Marathon... perfect combination.


"Shravan!! Agar next time se tumne ghar ke bahar kam kapde pehne to taange tod dungi tumhari..Rapunzel kahi ke.."...height of jealousy...
Loved jealous sumo... poor soul thinks, "I am not as hot as you are" ...

Loved every single line of OS.
Keep writing such amazing OS. Dil khush kar diya
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Marvelous!!!
I am clean bowled!!!
No words beyond that...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
yar..this os is amazing re writ more os
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Intazaar Rahega...
~~~~
UNRESS
🤣
THIS WAS SOOO COOOLLL..!!!!!!
Yaar kaise likh leti hai tu...Ur damn talented bae...Luv Ya..!!!!
Dono ke like ko eksaath merge kar diya...Outcome??MARVELOUS..!!!


Thank you 😳

Apne aap ko bade hero samajhte ho na tum.. nahi deti tumhara mousse... Aise hi aao aur batao kitni ladkiyaan marti hain tumpar galati kardi Sumo ne yaar...I was like Kaa asa mhanat aahes tu.???aata tu gelis..!!😆
SHIRT UTARA..!!!i juz shouted yaar...Black vest...same which he had in that epi when hez in Jim in aditya..??Yaar ye banda..☺️


You are too funny😆

He was put up on the screens like a Poster boy for the marathon for an entire minute...!!🤣 Sumo ka toh cooker he phat gaya..!!🤣🤣


This made me 🤣

Well, I like to keep them well set. Lekin dekho aaj to bikhre baalo me sau dedh sau ko giraya hoga maine Dedsau?? Ye banda toh shirtless saari indian ladkiyo ko giradi...Firangini bhi..!!😉😉
Shravan!! Agar next time se tumne ghar ke bahar kam kapde pehne to taange tod dungi tumhari..Rapunzel kahi ke.. 🤣
Shravan and sumo convo was tooo beautiful..❤️.Yaar u r too good deepti...*mujra*
End..??Well...NO COMMENTS...!!!😉😆😆
All in all loooved it...
Was rolling on the floor was almost every jealous dialogue..!!
Superrr se bohot bohot bohot bohot bohot bohot uppar vala update...!!!
Do give such dhakamas..!!
ANU😳



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