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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

This was sooo cute!!

The topic and characterization was spot on, hon! I literally laughed upon reading how Sumo drags in her whole family to participate in the marathon XD

Also, absolutely loved how Sumo was jealous and slightly insecure about her looks. That was a wonderful touch!

And by God, naughty Shravan Malhotra by the end of the OS was a TREAT!!!

Thank you for giving us such a beautiful piece.

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

OMG shravan ke killer looks and messy hair, hotness ki dukan

u r great dips ek hi OS me NIMIK ko nipata diya marathon aur hairs its too good.

Great OS 👏

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Beech me in hai,, the great Wall of China! 😆🤪

Arre. .Dips tod degi woh deewar. ..and knowing her..the doon to China road trip wala OS will feature that monster looking soup and that beautiful sari as well...

Khoobsoorat rishta hai Delta aur updates ke beech. ...zyada woh batate nahin. .aur kam Dips likhti nahin😆

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

I
Arre. .Dips tod degi woh deewar. ..and knowing her..the doon to China road trip wala OS will feature that monster looking soup and that beautiful sari as well...

Khoobsoorat rishta hai Delta aur updates ke beech. ...zyada woh batate nahin. .aur kam Dips likhti nahin😆

Ooh I trust her on that! ! 😊

The great Wall of China was used figuratively not literally! 😉

#OurPhootiKimat..!

The Great Wall of China is in China!! 😆

Trying too hard to avoid using disclaimer! 🤣 failed miserably though!

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

I
Arre. .Dips tod degi woh deewar. ..and knowing her..the doon to China road trip wala OS will feature that monster looking soup and that beautiful sari as well...

Khoobsoorat rishta hai Delta aur updates ke beech. ...zyada woh batate nahin. .aur kam Dips likhti nahin😆

ha ha thank you girls.. but no amount of chane ke jhaad ki height will make me write doon to china..

we will wait for some other IG posts before the next one 😉.. ye sab se mer aLost ka chapter likhne ka mood nahi banta.. 😭

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Ooh I trust her on that! ! 😊
The great Wall of China was used figuratively not literally! 😉
#OurPhootiKimat..!
The Great Wall of China is in China!! 😆
Trying too hard to avoid using disclaimer! 🤣 failed miserably though!

Goodness Carpe. ..are you for real😆...you used the wall figuratively. ..and I used it to move the story.ab Great Wall of China kahan hai. ..Yeh toh school mein padh liya tha behen😉

Ya...I did get your disclaimer in the first instance though.

Edited by reshmanair356 - 8 years ago

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Goodness Carpe. ..are you for real😆...you used the wall figuratively. ..and I used it to move the story.ab Great Wall of China kahan hai. ..Yeh toh school mein padh liya tha begen😉

Acha,,😳 mujhey laga wall kal hi China shift hui! 😆

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: deltadawn

ha ha thank you girls.. but no amount of chane ke jhaad ki height will make me write doon to china..

we will wait for some other IG posts before the next one 😉.. ye sab se mer aLost ka chapter likhne ka mood nahi banta.. 😭

Arey !! koi mahaul banwao bhai! 😳😆