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Posted: 8 years ago
#21

Well Deserving Winning Baccha...πŸ‘β­οΈπŸ‘
You really coming up with Brilliant Ideas...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
now, Pallot coming with Critic FB...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Ž
Hold Ur Breath... not much...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


TASK 1: Extra Innovative and Appealing Caption really Bursting the Reader Mind...⭐️⭐️
its so Crisp and Gripped...πŸ‘πŸ‘
Totally Hilarious and Cool...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†



TASK 2: ahan, again U Played a Good Shot by adding Both Foodie Lovers...πŸ˜‰πŸ‘
I really Enjoyed that Hide and Seek Idea playing to Safe from Palak Paneer or Bhindi Bhujya...πŸ˜›πŸ‘
its really Sweet and Cute Convo...πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘
BTW, Task is Only Changing Dialogues Not adding any Scene...😈
U wrote Salunkhy Sir Coming although Salunkhy Sir already Present in that Scene...
aha... Parrot nay Ghalati Pakr lii...
Yu...😎



TASK 3: hahhahha...🀣
Bundle of Many Sci Fic Attempt Combine...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Amazing to Read that Door as Scanner Idea...πŸ‘πŸ‘
its really Cool...⭐️
I m Not much in Favor of Tech as it Crushed Human Skills...
BTW, Do U think after Seeing Current CID kay aisa ho skta hy...β“πŸ€”
Shades of Good Effect...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ



TASK 4: another Long Attempt...😊😊
I Loved that Letter and Sorry Card Idea...πŸ‘πŸ‘
Still after such Highly Communication Devices/Apps, We still Loved those Oldie Criteria...😳😳
U showed Daya Sir Extra Rude although Doing Same in Past with His Buddy...
Abhijeet Sir Rona also Little Shocking...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
but All and All...😊
Zabardast Attempt...πŸ‘πŸ‘



TASK 5: hahhaha...πŸ€£πŸ‘
Cool Faryad of Falling Chandelier...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
BTW, which Movie Song it was...?❓



TASK 6: again Extra Long Attempt...😊😊
Honestly, the Start is Cool Gripped...πŸ‘πŸ‘
Story turn Interesting when Shristi Suddenly Vanish in Air makes Herself Suspicious in Readers Eye...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Like Sharp Shine CCTV Footage and Showing Shristi to His Frnd...πŸ‘πŸ‘
BTW, Surprised, Bhai ki kitni Gehri Nazar hy Larkiyun pr...
College Choty Zamana Guzar gaya pr Larki ko Foran Pehchan liya...😑😑
ye bhi Bol skty thy kay ye Meri Class Mate sy Resemble krti hy...
pr Nahi, Direst Pakka... hunh...😑😑
Sudden Meeting and Shiristi Denying again makes Her Mysterious...πŸ‘πŸ‘
the Twist coming with Major Point...⭐️⭐️
U really Lime Light the Matter Classically Baccha...⭐️⭐️
I thought U make Her Abhijeet Sir Better Half.. BUT...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›
awww, Kum az Kum Screen pr tou Mery Bhai ko Kunwara rehny do...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
khair, the Diary Part is Not much Appealing...
the PEN DRIVE Idea is again Cool...πŸ‘πŸ‘
but I found the Story turn More Filmy...🀣
I Loved if U make it Ended Maturely...
its really Good and Lovely Attempt...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ


a Big Thank You so much for giving such Classy Entries and gives Us Opportunities to Entertain Us with Ur Brilliant Stuff...πŸ˜³πŸ‘πŸ˜³
again a Big Big Congrats on Your Winning...πŸ‘β­οΈπŸ‘
Stay Blessed... Always...😳😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: gadhadada


Well Deserving Winning Baccha...πŸ‘β­οΈπŸ‘
You really coming up with Brilliant Ideas...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
now, Pallot coming with Critic FB...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Ž
Hold Ur Breath... not much...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


TASK 1: Extra Innovative and Appealing Caption really Bursting the Reader Mind...⭐️⭐️
its so Crisp and Gripped...πŸ‘πŸ‘
Totally Hilarious and Cool...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†



TASK 2: ahan, again U Played a Good Shot by adding Both Foodie Lovers...πŸ˜‰πŸ‘
I really Enjoyed that Hide and Seek Idea playing to Safe from Palak Paneer or Bhindi Bhujya...πŸ˜›πŸ‘
its really Sweet and Cute Convo...πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘
BTW, Task is Only Changing Dialogues Not adding any Scene...😈
U wrote Salunkhy Sir Coming although Salunkhy Sir already Present in that Scene...
aha... Parrot nay Ghalati Pakr lii...
Yu...😎



TASK 3: hahhahha...🀣
Bundle of Many Sci Fic Attempt Combine...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Amazing to Read that Door as Scanner Idea...πŸ‘πŸ‘
its really Cool...⭐️
I m Not much in Favor of Tech as it Crushed Human Skills...
BTW, Do U think after Seeing Current CID kay aisa ho skta hy...β“πŸ€”
Shades of Good Effect...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ



TASK 4: another Long Attempt...😊😊
I Loved that Letter and Sorry Card Idea...πŸ‘πŸ‘
Still after such Highly Communication Devices/Apps, We still Loved those Oldie Criteria...😳😳
U showed Daya Sir Extra Rude although Doing Same in Past with His Buddy...
Abhijeet Sir Rona also Little Shocking...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
but All and All...😊
Zabardast Attempt...πŸ‘πŸ‘



TASK 5: hahhaha...πŸ€£πŸ‘
Cool Faryad of Falling Chandelier...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
BTW, which Movie Song it was...?❓



TASK 6: again Extra Long Attempt...😊😊
Honestly, the Start is Cool Gripped...πŸ‘πŸ‘
Story turn Interesting when Shristi Suddenly Vanish in Air makes Herself Suspicious in Readers Eye...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Like Sharp Shine CCTV Footage and Showing Shristi to His Frnd...πŸ‘πŸ‘
BTW, Surprised, Bhai ki kitni Gehri Nazar hy Larkiyun pr...
College Choty Zamana Guzar gaya pr Larki ko Foran Pehchan liya...😑😑
ye bhi Bol skty thy kay ye Meri Class Mate sy Resemble krti hy...
pr Nahi, Direst Pakka... hunh...😑😑
Sudden Meeting and Shiristi Denying again makes Her Mysterious...πŸ‘πŸ‘
the Twist coming with Major Point...⭐️⭐️
U really Lime Light the Matter Classically Baccha...⭐️⭐️
I thought U make Her Abhijeet Sir Better Half.. BUT...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›
awww, Kum az Kum Screen pr tou Mery Bhai ko Kunwara rehny do...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
khair, the Diary Part is Not much Appealing...
the PEN DRIVE Idea is again Cool...πŸ‘πŸ‘
but I found the Story turn More Filmy...🀣
I Loved if U make it Ended Maturely...
its really Good and Lovely Attempt...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ


a Big Thank You so much for giving such Classy Entries and gives Us Opportunities to Entertain Us with Ur Brilliant Stuff...πŸ˜³πŸ‘πŸ˜³
again a Big Big Congrats on Your Winning...πŸ‘β­οΈπŸ‘
Stay Blessed... Always...😳😳


Very happy after getting grilled from parrot πŸ˜›πŸ˜†
I am a kid na, then how can I give a matured ending to the love story? Well I'm not very much experienced in that... Just gave a try in story... πŸ˜‰
Both of them cried especially Daya 😳
Thanks a lot for such a long review... πŸ€—

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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
Just finished task 4 & 6 . Both little long but I liked it very much . Especially Srishti's story . I understand writing a love story is difficult . But still u have done it very well .
swathi17 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Kulasya.

Just finished task 4 & 6 . Both little long but I liked it very much . Especially Srishti's story . I understand writing a love story is difficult . But still u have done it very well .

Actually my entries are long because I wanted to show everything clearly... I just want everyone to know all the details... Yes Bhaiyya, I agree with your point... Writing a perfect story, be it any genre, is quite difficult... I am just improving, even now I am not a very good writer 😳

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