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Kulasya.

@Kulasya.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Below are my entries for the Anniversary Contest . I really enjoyed it ⭐️ Hope u all like it 😊

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Kulasya.

@Kulasya.

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Posted: 8 years ago

TASK # 1

Caption the following pic in a humorous way. It cannot be longer than 5 lines.

Salunkhe Saying : " Phone pe lage khoon , fingerprints aur details se pata lagta hai ki yahi khooni hai . Sirf ek phone se ! Yaha pe agar Pradyuman hota to bolta , (Laughs) "Dekha Daya ? Ye Phone Hai ! "

Edited by Kulasya. - 8 years ago

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Kulasya.

@Kulasya.

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Posted: 8 years ago

TASK # 2

Visit the video (https://www.dropbox.com/s/thw3p6ciafoa848/Task%202.mp4?dl=0) and write a set of dialogues of your choice to match this scene. No more than 40 dialogues.

Abhijeet : Ha Sir . Salunkhe sir hai phone pe !

ACP : Kya Hua re Salunkhe ?

Salunkhe : Ahahahhaah . Boss aakhir tumhe bhi shauk lag hi gaya ! Jawan banne ka ! Mujhe in donone bataya ki tum Switzerland gaye ho hair viewing ke liye ! Wah !

ACP : Aeaye Salunkhe , Mai koi jawan bawan banne ke liye nahi gaya hu . Mai kaha jata hu to sirf kam ke liye ! Mai yaha hu to sirf case ke liye !

Salunkhe : Dekha ? Waha wo sirf kam ke liye gaya hai !

ACP : Aur nahi to kya ? Mai Jawan kyu banu ? Meri koi teri jaisi duniyabhar girlfriends ghum rahi hai ?

Salunkhe : Acchha ! Acchha ! Mere bap ! Thik hai !

(Note : I have lost this entry which I actually sent . I have written it again . So it may not be word to word correct . But content & dialogues are almost same)

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Kulasya.

@Kulasya.

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Posted: 8 years ago

TASK # 3

Imagine that it is the year 2100. What do you imagine the CID bureau to be like? Choice: (1) Write a vivid description such that people can picture this bureau in their mind. (2) Make a siggy/gif depicting this bureau.

Choice 1 :

Year 2100

ACP takes out a device . And on that he touches Abhi , Daya , Freddy & Salunkhe's faces . Contact is automatically done . When they accept , they all come before ACP . Actually they all in their respective homes . But because of technology it seems like all are in one room and in front of each other .

ACP : Mujhe aaplogon se ek jaroori bat karni hai .

Abhijeet : Lekin sir , aap bureau me kya kar rahe hai ?

Daya : Ha sir ! Aap to hamse bat ghar me bhi kar sakte the .

ACP : Vo isliye , kyunki hame ek mushkil case solve karna hai . Aur uske liye hame bureau ki hi jaroorat padegi .

Freddy : Eew sir . Mera aana jaroori hai kya ? Mai yahi se investigation karta hu . Waha aane ke liye abhi bahut thak gaya hu sir .

ACP : Freddy , natak mat karo . Tumhe bas machine me baithna hai . Jaldi aao .

Salunkhe : Boss , mera aana bhi jaroori hai kya ?

ACP : Yar salunkhe , tu to mera bhai hai re ! Chal aa ja . Forensic ka hi case hai .

All seat in their respective teleporting machine & at next moment they land in bureau .

In bureau there are robots everywhere . For the primary tasks . And they are doing this tasks very well .

All are greeted by ACP .

Daya : Sir aisa kaunsa case hai jo ye robots solve nahi kar payenge ?

ACP takes them to astronomy section . This section is realeted for astronomy cases . In fact now there is much of astro tours & investigations . Earth & mars have a joint contract , They are investigating on another planet who is many light years away . Those scientists are investigating on that .

ACP : And those scientists witnessed someone stranger there . Bahut sari security ke bad bhi . Koi aaya tha waha .
Those high tech cameras give them exact location of this incident . There is a sign of someone passing by .

Salunkhe : Thik hai . Anayalising section me chalo .

Analyising section is a very hightech section which can judge a living things temp . heartbeat , form & some signs on the body by just one second info .
Salunkhe looks at the data .

Salunkhe : Ye kaise ho sakta hai ?

ACP : Kya hua ?

Salunkhe : Boss , iska temp . aur form to human wala hi hai . earth ke . Lekin uske heartbeats aur fingerprints na hi insan ke hai aur na hi martian ke .

ACP : Matlab ?

Salunkhe signs him to come in robot section . Robot section is for investigating robots case . This section is specially desinged for the problems which can occur because of robots . This section also have a facility because of which robots can't 'listen' what's happening there .

Salunkhe : Ye ek robot hi hai .

ACP : Kya ?

Salunkhe : Ha. Baki chijon ki to nakal karva di . Par heartbeats aur fingerprints ki kaise ho sakti hai ?

ACP : Par robots aisa kyu karenge ? Unme to hamne intelligence bhara hai .

Salunkhe : Yahi to galti ho gayi . Ham hamara dimag chalane ka bajay robots par jor dal rahe hai . Ab to cases bhi robots solve karte hai . Wo samaj rahe hai ki wo insan ke upar hai . Aur unme ab hamari tarah selfishness ke gun aa gaye hai . Ab ek hi karna hai us planet par jake us robot ko dhundna hoga aur robots ka use kam se kam karna hoga .

In that same bureau there are vehicles to go on that planet . All sit into it . And it reaches on that planet in just 4 hours .

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Kulasya.

@Kulasya.

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Posted: 8 years ago

TASK # 4

Choice: (1) Write a short story (no more than 5 pages) on how Abhijeet and Daya would meet in the bureau after Daya had just been cleared of a murder suspicion that even Abhijeet suspected him of. (2) Depict this scene through a maximum of 5 siggies (unanimated).

Choice 1 :

( Note : As task was given after Daya got cleared , I didn't mention the case & Abhi's previous
doubts . So I wrote a short scene in the bureau , which happens after Daya gets cleared. )

Daya & Abhijeet are in the bureau . Atmosphere is tensed . Daya is under pain . Abhijeet wants to say something for a long time . But he is unable to . Finally he makes up his mind .

Abhijeet : Daya ... yar sorry yar ! Situation hi aisi thi ki ...

Daya : It's ok Abhijeet . Koi bat nahi . Sirf ab tum mujhse pahli jaisi ummid mat rakhna . We will remain good ... colleague !

Abhijeet : Daya , tum aise kyu bol rahe ho yar ? Ham to dost ...

Daya : Ham dost the Abhijeet ! Isliye jab mai fas gaya tha na , tab maine tumse ummid ki thi . Chahe kuch bhi ho jaye , mera dost mera sath dega . Uska mujhpe yakin hoga .

Abhijeet : Daya , maine bahut koshish ki thi ...

Daya : Koshish ki ? Abhijeet , tumhe bhi to lagta tha na ki wo khoon maine kiya hai ?

Abhijeet : Yar Daya , tab halat hi aise the ki ...

Daya : Nahi Abhijeet ! Tum ? Tum aisa soch sakte ho . Mai ye bardasht nahi kar sakta . Bhai ki tarah mana hai maine tumhe . Aur tum ? Jane do !

Daya turns his back on Abhijeet . Daya is hiding his tears . Abhijeet in a sad state, seats on the chair . His eyes are full of tears .

After some time Freddy enters .

Freddy : Abhijeet sir , ab to kuch kha lijiye . Jabse Daya sir case me fase hai, aapne kuch nahi khaya hai .

Abhijeet : Nahi Freddy . Bhuk nahi hai .

Daya quickly turns at him .

Daya : Abhijeet ye mai kya sun raha hu ? Tumne kuch nahi khaya ab tak ?

Abhijeet : Nahi yar . Aisa kuch nahi .

Daya : Mai kuch nahi sunne wala . Tumhe mai apne hath se khilaunga .

Abhijeet : Daya , lekin tumne mujhe maf to kar diya na ?

Daya : Pagal ho kya ? Bhai se koi mafi mangta hai kya , bade bhai ?

All starts smiling . Abhi-Daya both are in tears . But in happy tears

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Kulasya.

@Kulasya.

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Posted: 8 years ago

TASK # 5

Name a song that would match this photo.

DHAL GAYA DIN

HO GAYI SHAM

JAANE DO

JAANA HAI

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Kulasya.

@Kulasya.

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Task # 6Choice: (1) Write a mature love story for Abhijeet or Daya (your choice) where they are about to propose marriage to the girl. It must be a maximum of 5 pages. (2) Depict the same situation through either 5 unanimated siggies, 3 animated siggies, or a VM of maximum 1 minute in length.

Choice 1 :

Abhijeet : Aur batao Daya , shadi kab kar rahe ho ?

Daya : Chodo yar Abhijeet . Shadi wadi . Mera koi pyar jaisi bat pe vishwas nahi . Ye sab filmy cheej hai .

Abhijeet : Nahi Daya . Tum dekho . Kabhi na kabhi . Tumhe pyar ho hi jayega .

That night Daya couldn't sleep for late . And when he slept he wake up with seeing a dream of a girl .

Daya : Abhijeet ko kya pata ki mujhe bhi pyar hua tha kabhi .

Daya is out next day & spending the day leisurely. And suddenly stops by seeing a girl. She is the same girl Sapna whom Daya had seen in the dream yesterday. He didn't know what to do. But the girl herself came to him.

Sapna : Arre Daya ! What a pleasant surprise! Pehchana mujhe?

Daya : Of course . Look Sapna , am sorry . In the old times ...

Sapna : Look Daya , forget all this . Let's start s fresh .

They both meet in a restaurant .

Daya : Meri jindagi to chal rahi hai, as usual . CID inspector hu . Criminals ko pakadta hu. Samaj aur desh ke liye kam karta hu. Ek alag sukun milta hai

Sapna : Wow! It's great.

(Sapna takes a dish.)

Daya : Are tumhe potato pasand hai, na? Isme jyada potato hai. Tum ye dish try karo. Bahut tasty hai!

Sapna : Daya , tumhe ab tak yad hai ?

(Daya just smiles.)

Sapna : Daya , tumhari koi girlfriend bani itne salo me ?

Daya : Hahaha . Nahi . Bilkul nahi. Acha , tumhare bare me bhi to batao. Kaisi chal rahi hai life ?

Sapna : Meri bhi achi chal rahi hai life Mai koi CID me nahi hu . Doctor hu main .

Daya : To ye bhi to bada acchha proffession hai . Good .

After that, their friendship got deeper. They start sharing their feelings with one another. Daya started feeling something more than friendship for her. He was confused as to what to do.

After some days, Daya again meets Abhijeet . But this time he wanted to talk with him something very important.

Daya : Yar , ab maine soch liya hai. Mai is bachelor life ka end karna chahta hu. Soch raha hu shadi kar lu.

Abhijeet : Bhai wah ! Kuch din pahle to kah rahe the ki tumhe pyar vyar sab filmy lagta hai . Aur ab ?

Daya : Yar ab samajh me aa gaya hai . Sacchha pyar film ki tarah nahi hota . Real pyar me you can be yourself only to that person outside your family & friend circle . You only think about that person . That person is like your soul . Agar ham serious bhi bate karte hai to bhi ek man ko jo sukun milta hai kya kahu ? Aur ...

Abhijeet :Bas ! Bas ! Mai sab samajh gaya . Tumne agar soch hi liya hai to ab samay mat barbad karo. Use propose kar do.

Daya : Ha . Maine aaj use Marine Drive pe bulaya hai. Mai wahi use propose karunga.

(And that evening, Daya and Sapna meet at the Marine Drive.)

Daya : Sapna , mujhe tumse kuch kahna Hai !

(Note : As given in the theme , I have written till he is just about to propose . 😆 )

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Kulasya.

@Kulasya.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Waiting for the reviews 😉 Thanks Shreya for the help 🤗

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Swathi

@swathi17

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wonderful entries Kulasya Bhaiyya 👏👏

Task 1: Good caption... Reminded me of CID memes 😆

Task 2: Jawan banne ka 😆 Convo between the two old jawans was really nice👏

Task 3: 🤣🤣 I just couldn't control my laughter... Bhaiyya, How did you feel while writing this? When I just imagine them...😆 Sorry Bhaiyya, If you wrote it on a serious note, then it's really appreciable... I don't know, but I couldn't help finding it funny... And yeah, the appearance is appealing, but the convo was really funny and enjoyable... Good attempt⭐️ 😊

Task 4: Well, you just changed Daya's mind with food...😆 Loved his concern towards Abhijeet 😛Cute story Bhaiyya...👏

Task 5: Apt one, Bhaiyya 😛 Enjoyed reading it😊

Task 6: A simple yet nice love story 👏 I know that you're not convinced with the concept 😳 Well, do you really like the love portion of cops?

Bhaiyya, I have given the review, which I felt honestly... I hope my reviews won't hurt you... But I really enjoyed reading your entries 😊