Bird of cage has got a blade!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Now when you handed her a weapon
She is a Warrior in making.
She doesn't fear what you fear
Now you gotta think of a barrier
She is a bird of cage who has got a blade
Now whatever bleeds, loss is on your doorstep.

She was amid fire and what got burnt is their immortality. They spilled the beans and now she has words in her quiver. She would use each arrow to save her soul. Barbarians have turned saviors, when they think they will hold the rein, she would be the one riding away.

Plot! Plot! Oh my dear plot!
Why you hold such potential!

I never knew surviving could be that endearing. Shivani today gave me every reason to see dreams of a future where walls of berahampur would come crashing down. Each that character in that vicious place would play a role in it and that's something charming..

How I loved it when Shivani didn't refrain from showing her newly found weapon. Gulguli has unintentionally empowered that little girl and now that has given wings to Shivani's already strong will. They think they will tame that little rebel but she is already pro at giving impressions. It's gonna be worth watching each her attempt when she will crumble egos of Choudhary clan. Veer has swallowed his own spit and I can see the line on waiting. *Glee*
And beauty is something perpetual here. Shivani, the name of their destruction, doesn't wish to be a bolting threat. She is a threat they have brought by themselves, would save till their last breath and will regret it later. *Glee*
Her constant attempts to escape and each time she would not listen, they either have to gulp the broken ego or else kill the bird in whom life of Prince resides. Checkmate.

Oh my!
There's a lot fun on paper, now how I wish they execute.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Even though rangeela is supposed to be khaas element he i feel is the most ambiguously written character and not in a interesting way at all. He seems pretty..ordinary? Param is doing great but the character itself has not much to him
I loved shivani today! The silent warrior that she is. For all the rants against her tears she is standing up in her own way. I adore rashmi she faced the worst after roaring like a lioness yet that hasn't killed the person that she is in whatever way she can she supports shivani and fights for her. And then there is maldawali who seems to go by the policy make the best from what u have. She lost the life she had yet she wont let these people have the last laugh. She knows the power the place has and she is doing her best to get that.

^i replied this on another topic i'll repost it here.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You don't have to be so good at writing all the time! I feel like reading again and again! You explained everything so beautifully
I loved today's episode! Shivani's character is evolving so beautifully! Remember the first scene of Shivani in the show and last scene of today's episode! Marvelous! When she is exposed to cruel reality, she has become aware of her own hidden powers and knows how to use devil's weakness for her own survival! Loved the last scene! Actually whole episode was beautiful!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khyati8

Even though rangeela is supposed to be khaas element he i feel is the most ambiguously written character and not in a interesting way at all. He seems pretty..ordinary? Param is doing great but the character itself has not much to him

I loved shivani today! The silent warrior that she is. For all the rants against her tears she is standing up in her own way. I adore rashmi she faced the worst after roaring like a lioness yet that hasn't killed the person that she is in whatever way she can she supports shivani and fights for her. And then there is maldawali who seems to go by the policy make the best from what u have. She lost the life she had yet she wont let these people have the last laugh. She knows the power the place has and she is doing her best to get that.

^i replied this on another topic i'll repost it here.


Agreed
Rangeela's ambiguity has been a problem for me since start. I realized how he needs few more nails in coffin before he gets out. Just a guess. Shivani's survival is a favor on him otherwise he might have to bear burn of guilt his entire life. I hope he steps up soon. His character needs edginess.
Ladies in house are strong characters. Each of them are well crafted. And they perform well. I loved today's episode.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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loved the fire Shivani carried in ending scene and love your fiery words too.Shivani growth is so damn amusing.I love dialogue writer.The characterization of Shivani is so on point and dialogues justifies it and Niti in skin of Shivani what else we can ask for.We all shall see how that fragile girl gonna bring destruction in NoMercyLand. "Mama ji kehte the jo hota h uske peeche koi karan hota h aur aj aag k karan hamein pata chal gya k hamari Zindagi is ghr k lie ktni ahmiat rkhti h".
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: danceismyworld

You don't have to be so good at writing all the time! I feel like reading again and again! You explained everything so beautifully

I loved today's episode! Shivani's character is evolving so beautifully! Remember the first scene of Shivani in the show and last scene of today's episode! Marvelous! When she is exposed to cruel reality, she has become aware of her own hidden powers and knows how to use devil's weakness for her own survival! Loved the last scene! Actually whole episode was beautiful!


I am happy I have got people who get my gibberish. 😆
And when my grumpy Mano says it, I am the happiest.

You put all I want to say in layman language. 😆
Shivani's survival skills have always been interesting. I love this girl when she make small adjustments just to execute bigger plans.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shiryasachdev

loved the fire Shivani carried in ending scene and love your fiery words too.Shivani growth is so damn amusing.I love dialogue writer.The characterization of Shivani is so on point and dialogues justifies it and Niti in skin of Shivani what else we can ask for.We all shall see how that fragile girl gonna bring destruction in NoMercyLand. "Mama ji kehte the jo hota h uske peeche koi karan hota h aur aj aag k karan hamein pata chal gya k hamari Zindagi is ghr k lie ktni ahmiat rkhti h".


So true.
Shivani realizing her strength in that No mercy land has to be endearing. That's why this character had started low key. This character has to climb the best growth graph.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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U ve got magic in ua hands adii..!
I dnt knw how do u write it so well evrytime..👏
Coming to d epi, i totally loved it, for v finally got to see a new
Shivani so daring n confident..thankz to Gulguli jii for spilling thngs out in presence of all...Shivani finally got d key dt wld hlp her open doors of behrempur...
Hope she ll mke use of it wisely n confidntly..
More power to the "1 Woman Army there".. shivani..
N love to "THE WRITER" you..
L33ya___



Edited by sherapP - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😊 It was a bang on reply by Shivani to maldawali - now She knew how precious her life is for Choudhary family.. I am loving the gradual growth in Shivani's character.
Niti Taylor is a treat to watch as always.
The will power & determination I saw in SHivani today..
I am glad Niti Taylor chosed Ghulaam where she has got huge scope to perform.


Edited by sagarikadas - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Once again a post worth applauding for its beauty ...the right use of words, the sensitivity to get inside the minds of the characters and come up with the relevant matter...wonderful!
Thank you for the feast for the soul...👏

Shivani, the warrior...once again very aptly put by you!
Seemingly a cry baby...a completely deceiving impression!
Woe to all who consider her such. She has never left any opportunity to make her stand well known.

The burning of Rashmi's tongue, walking on burning coal, forced to go through a marriage ritual, betrayal by whom she considers her husband and all other atrocities
1: never stopped her from speaking up even as tears of pain, horror, fear, betrayal spilled from her eyes in a continuous stream.
2: never stopped her from running away at every opportunity.
3: never stopped her from seeking help.

NOT ANYMORE...

Shivani after losing hope of any help from a saviour in form of husband and others...have finally latched onto a stronghold that she was smart and quick enough to see in the dialogue between Gulguli and Veer in the aftermath of the escape from fire.
"...She has to stay alive for Veer to stay alive too..."

The words from Gulguli's mouth removed any doubts that she was saved for herself. The astonishment and disbelief soon brought the fact home that she can survive now. Like you said it well,
"Gulguli's has unintentionally empowered the little girl ...given wings...to...already strong will"

Thus we see the birth of new Shivani "the warrior " ...Who has gained some ground from where to put up a struggle for her existence on her own conditions. What she tells Maldawaali in the end is all telling ...
" Jab is ghar ki dor humari zindagi say jurree hoi hai to ub hamay koi bhi nahi maar sakta."
She found the silver lining to the cloud !

And yes as you said this fight by Shivani.will be " worth watching" each step of the way.

Edited by arshimanan - 8 years ago

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