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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: NimJ

Hi Mayu 🤗

I know I am late for Christmas wishes and I hope you had a great time. I am reserving my wishes for a very happy new year. I wish this new year brings you lots of happiness, love and many many good memories.

A very beautiful os,Mayu.I could read and imagine their blissful life ahead. All I need now is to see their happily ever after in the show.Every time I read your os I crave to see it onscreen and the possibility seems so distant with the tracks...And that thought makes me sad :(

Excuse my totally irrelevant rant on your os.Moving on,Vividha pregnant with their baby...Atharv talking to their child is so sweet.I could cry just thinking about it.

There was a time when he thought she wouldn't stand up for their love, but she had proved him wrong every single time.

This line is very significant for it shows her commitment to him.Loved this line especially because even after seeing y'days episode, I believe in her commitment and its above everything else.

I hope my comment makes sense...Loved this too...His mind had played its games, but not anymore. His heart and soul knew she was his for eternityLoved the os,Mayu.Thank you for writing about Pregnant Vividha again.I could never get bored of this



Nims baby🤗

Thankyou so much for the reply!

Isn't it bliss to see such scenes in the show, their life, their togetherness and their love! Their baby, her motherhood and his anxiety. ❤️

I am sure she will fight the world again for him and even if she has to fight him for their love, she will fight him too:)

Love,
Mayu


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ARCHRE

Mayu...🤗

Guess I am the last ...But here I am 😳 as promised ... Sorry for the extreme extreme delay 😕

I have read the last few OS that you have written after September and this is what I feel



What I love about your OS in general

the FEELS it generates for a reader ...

There is a certain characterization in the show which we all connect to and we love ...
Your OS captures that exact character traits and that is what touches the heart of a reader like me.
I feel it is easy to get a viewer connected with the visuals , but to get the same feel and emotion when one reads an OS is very difficult and your OS gives one those feels completely ...

It goes to an extent that we can actually visualize a scene just by reading it and feel good . Thats the beauty of your OS . It sometimes leaves you wanting those exact things to happen in the show 😳 ... that means you have progressed a step forward than the show itself 😊

The character development in sync ...and a beauty to read ...
You have captured Vividhas Boldness very well ... Atharvs weaknesses very well and more than that the essence of their relationship.

You have a way with words and all the OS ends with a feel that leaves you completely at peace ..
Thanks for all that you write and the opportunity that we get to read 😳

Can I demand an OS?...Seeing where the show is at the moment , there will be soon a point of recovery for Atharv .Vividha and the Atharv Sujatha coming face to face for the first time after their scheduled wedding day ... I would love it if you could pen that down as an OS ...I am absolutely sure it s going to be amazing ...😳 ...




Archie🤗

Its really nice to see your comment on my thread:)

Thankyou for the kind words. I am really glad that you could visualize the scene in my OS, it makes me really happy that I have really improved my writing.😳

Love,
Mayu

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