ViTharv OS- The Anniversary!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey I am back with another OS on ViTharv!😳

Merry X'Mas🤗

This scene is out of the context. This is a scene I so want to see, but I guess we are not getting it, so I decided to give a vivid account of the scene!

My story starts when Atharv and Vividha have been married and Vividha has been expecting their first baby. Atharv was the perfect husband, the perfect lover and the perfect friend Vividha would have asked for; he was also the perfect son. Atharv factory was in good condition, and his business was expanding. He baought back the Haveli from Kailash Kashyap, who along with Ankit is in jail for their misdeeds. Uma, Guddi and Dadi along with Sujata stay with Atharv and Vividha now. In this scenario, Atharv had sent all the family members for a short trip and given his two servants holiday.

ViTharv OS- The Anniversary!


Vividha had a nice evening shower and then joined her husband for dinner. Atharv waited for her as she descended the stairs leading to the dining. He saw she was looking extremely gorgeous in her sixth month also. He was again mesmerized by his wife. She was the love of his life. Destiny had treated him like his favorite child by giving him Vividha in his life!



Today was special. Today was different. Today was the day when he had married Vividha Kashyap, now Mrs. Vividha Atharv Sujata. And they were going to celebrate it! It was their unison, their day, their celebration.



It was their first marriage anniversary. Both were equally excited, so much had happened in the previous year, before they were tied together, for eternity in this holy bond of matrimony. Vividha had faced the worst truth of her life, she had witnessed her father's true face, she had been brutally separated from the man she loved heart, body and soul. Her would be husband, the love of her life was mercilessly beaten in front of her. She had bargained her soul for his life and entered a forced marriage. But today, that was all past. She was back to where she belonged, alongside Atharv. From being a lover, she had turned protector and now she was his wife! The honour the name held, the warmth the relation held, it was beyond beautiful. A few months ago, she would not have believed her destiny would be so kind to her in the coming days, there was a bad phase, but now was the good phase. The clouds definitely had a silver lining.

This day was truly special for them. They had come a long way. They had fought their destiny, they had fought the society. There love emerging stronger than ever. Their love stood tall against all odds, their love witnessed every possible obstacle yet it came out strong, winning with flying colours.

He pulled a chair for her. But before she was going to take a seat; she caressed his cheek,


Vividha: "Aaj tumhaare baby se baat nahi kahoge kya?"


He smiled at her; it was a daily routine for him to talk with his baby right from the morning till the end of the day. He knelt in front of him and placed his warm hands on her belly;


Atharv: "Aaj tumhaare mom and dad ki anniversary hai..."


Vividha: "Baby ko kya pata anniversary kya hoti hai...kuch bhi nonsense..."


Atharv: "Baby ko sab pata hota hai..."


Vividha chuckled at his innocence. Since the day the doctor had told, the baby can listen to voices, he had been acting so cutely with the baby.


He got up and held her closer. He looked into her eyes; which showed the love she had for him; the trust that she had in him. She believed that they will be together forever!


Atharv: "Happy Anniversary Vividha! Aaj ek saal huya hai ki hum ek saath hai. Par aaj bhi hamara pyaar nahi badla; hamara ek doosre par se vishwas nahi badla."


Vividha: "Haan Atharv. Sahi kaha tumne. Hamare pyaar ko kisi ki nazar na lage!" she said as she landed in his arms.


Atharv: "Haan Vividha!"


"Waisi mera tohfa kaha hai Vividha?" he said looking intently at her!


She placed his fingers on her tummy; and looked at him with all the love; admiration and longing she had for this man!


Vividha: "Yahan hain Atharv! Bas kuch dinon ka intezaar aur tumhe tumhaara tohfa mil jaayega!" she said smiling in between her sobs!

He smiled wholeheartedly. He genuinely loved this woman. She completed him in every sense, and today she was carrying his baby. She is the woman he loved heart, body and soul; she was going to give him the best moments of his life. She had been a passionate lover, she has been a mature wife and she would be the gentle mother. His mother had been pampering her, catering her cravings when he wasn't around. There was a time when he thought she wouldn't stand up for their love, but she had proved him wrong every single time. Then she had stood up against her father for him, today she had stood up against the society to claim back what was hers. She belonged to him, in every sense.

He gently picked her up and walked with her in the kitchen. He placed her on top of the kitchen top, next to the gas stove. He released his arms around her.

Atharv: "I love you..."


He then passionately kissed her. They parted to breathe. It had been the most simplest of confession from the man himself. Earlier he had the fear of losing his most prized possession, his love, his Vividha. Today he had conquered his fear, he had nothing to lose. She was all his and he was sure of this! His mind had played its games, but not anymore. His heart and soul knew she was his for eternity. Nothing could change this very fact.



She was in awe of what she had heard. There was a time, when she had begged him to say these very words. He had regretted it later, fearing that destiny would play the same game it played with his mother. He had come a long way since then. She smiled remembering her confession, it was beautiful and the kiss, the most passionate. There were few words spoken, but both knew the gravity of the love! The despair in her voice, the longing in that kiss and the yearning to be with him. She loved him heart, body and soul!


She pulled him closer, close enough that even air couldn't pass between them. She interlocked her legs around his waist, and slowly without breaking eye contact started to unbutton his shirt. Though he wasn't surprised, he was a bit startled.


Atharv: "Yeh aap kya kar rahi hai..."


Vividha: "Apne pati ke saath romance, tumhe problem hai kya?"


Atharv: "Nahi...bilkul nai...infact main bhi...lekin..."


Vividha: "Lekin...tumhe dar lag raha hai...kahi tum mujhe chot pahuncha doge ya baby ko..."


Atharv: "Hmm..."


Vividha: "Its okay Atharv...tum mujhe kabhi bhi hurt nai karoge..."


That was all Atharv needed to continue his assault on her. He bit her upper lip, she moaned in pain. He tightened his grip around her, he bit her lower lip, and she dug her nails deeper in his flesh. He later traced her face with his lips, kissing her eyes, her cheeks and finally taking her lips in a passionate yet gentle kiss. He slowly unzipped her kurta and his bare hands were creating patterns on her waist. Both were lost in their moment of ecstasy, Vividha wanted him as much as he wanted her.


Suddenly Vividha realised that she has to show him something,


Vividha: "Thoda romance main break lete hai...mujhe tumhe kuch dikhana hai...chalo mujhe utha kar room main leka jao..."


Atharv: "Sure!"


With that he picked up his wife and walked her upto their room. He placed her on the bed.


Atharv: "Kya dikhana hai?..."


Vividha: "Ruko to zara..."


She pulled out an envelope and handed it over to Atharv.


Atharv: "Yeh kya hai?..."


Vividha: "Khud khol ke dekh lo..."


Atharv was ecstatic to see Vividha's sonography pictures. She pulled him in am embrace,


Vividha: "Last week tum bahut busy the na...tumhaare presentations aur meetings main...tum aa nahi sake the...to tumhaare liye ye layi main..."


All Atharv could do was melt in the arms of the woman, who was going to give the greatest joy of his life. He whispered an inaudible thankyou.


Vividha: "Mujhe change karna hain Atharv..."


Atharv handed her a loose white shirt and her flowery skirt. These were the best clothes that fitted her and didn't restrict her movements.


She held his hands, and pulled him near her.


Vividha: "Atharv mujhe neend aa rahi hai..."


He gently made her lie, and he slept besides her; his arm automatically resting on her bulging belly and his neck making way into her hair. He kissed her ear lobe; whispering a love you! She stirred and leaned back so he could give her support and whispered back a love you!



The End!


I hope I have lived upto the expectations of ViTharv fans!


Positive criticism welcome!😳


Love,

Mayu

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prabharajani thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sorry mayu,couldn't post as i was little busy yesterday

beautiful OS as always

it was refreshing, u focused on pregnant vivi and atharv, which is always in my wishlist

your OS is a welcome change after the stress we had gone through, a welcome for phase3 of jndsd, a welcome for atharv sujatha

the emotions which u bring out from vividha and atharv is too good and their romance with ypur penning always fascinates me, thk u for giving such a pure flow of romance and magic

kissing is their way of expressing each other's love and my, i like them kissing
the peace, the serenity is when theboth are held in each other's arms, their world lies in being together

i love them so much and love u too

keep writing, your writing always gives me a fress and happy mind

thks for penning such a beautiful Os
Edited by prabharajani - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mayu 🤗
This OS is so happy and sweet with Full of Vitharv love ❤️

Yesterday the day was good 👍🏼 we had so much if ShiVik, Vitharv and Atharva Comeback ...

Coming to OS ..

I just love how you always focus on their love, pain and happiness which they share together and still always end up in each others arms where they actually belong.😳

Atharva just cannot gurt Vividha in any state and especially when she is expecting and giving him the world's best gift .

Hopefully we see their reunion soon and thwir sweet moments too rather than all crap we watching but your OS gives us such sweet moments which we can always picturize so well on VITHARV.

they are just love ❤️

Write more and thank you for this one !

Merry Christmas !!! and Enjoy your Holiday 🤗
Edited by Shweta13 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow love it Mayu
When i saw your tweet that u post OS on If i was like on 7th cloud
Today is good day vitharv shivik vitharv OS Atharv sujata
I cant handle
Ok coming to OS i just love it the way they trust each other and love still and u write it with so much emotions.Love this OS i will gonna read it again.👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mayu🤗 Vitharv's love- As beautiful as always.

Forget seeing, simply reading and imagining them happy brings a smile on my face. They're just so perfectly made for each other.

I don't suppose we'll ever get to see all this on the show, but I do know that Vitharv would make amazing parents.

I've always found the father talking to his child during pregnancy cute..have watched it on so many shows. It's like a beautiful bond that's created even before the child faces the world. I love the bond...I loved that bit between Atharv and their child.

Again, Vitharv are so real. They love each other and they don't let go of any chance to express it. That's how they have always been...no inhibitions, open about their love and desire for each other. That's remained the same even after a year of the marriage and will always be the same.

Loved the Sonography bit as well. His happiness at seeing his little one...must be such a special moment. Vitharv are LOVE and they're beautiful❤️

Thanks for this OS Mayu...beautifully written and exactly how Vitharv are.
Edited by baubles - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Mayu!!
I finally came back to unres 😆 I can be a very laxed commenter haha

Anyway, firstly I want to say thank you so much for the PM 😃
I'm glad you sent me the link because this was just amazingly beautiful

A few lines that really stole the show for me:
She had bargained her soul for his life
She was back to where she belonged
The honour the name held

I am a HUUGE fan of one-liners, so while the whole OS was beautiful, these three lines are basically resonating with me ever since I read them!
You have such a flow with words! I especially loved the switching of POVs because it was so fluid! Not once did I have to stop and re-read something; the flow was perfect!

I sooo wish we get to see something even remotely similar to your OS in the show, but I know better than to have such expectations 😆

Regardless, papa Atharva talking to baby is sooo adorable! I could just imagine Vikram acting that scene out, with Shivani smiling as he did so.

You've really done an amazing job!

I especially loved how you stayed true to their characterization, yet you also had character development in the span of an OS too! It was beautifully written!

Thanks a lot, seriously, for sending the PM!!
I would looove to keep reading more stories from you!

Take care,
Hinal 🤗
Edited by basket_101 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mayu... 🤗 so sorry for the late reply!!

ViTharv love is something that we can't really pen down or express through our words. The intensity, the madness, the strong bond, everything, it's just unreal. For me they defoine love, always!! ❤️

The scene where Atharv was talking with the baby, it was just so cute, the bond you described it was so good. ViTharv would make amazing parents. 😳

Sonography part is my fav. I could totally imagine that scene while reading. Their cute family is going to be complete...and their special moments...It's just amazing the way you described their emotions, every details. 😳

I love this OS Mayu...It is just beautiful like their love.😳

Thank you for this one and please keep writing more and more and moreee!!!! 😃

Edited by Nira_Mukherjee - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow ! Mayu... another beautiful OS 😳
As always I just be in that scene...in Vitharv land...
I guess I always flows in your OS...that's the specialty in your OS...and that I only get in yours...
You are a great writer...👏 and this os is a happy one...loved it 😊

Vitharv wedding anniversary...patha nahi kab thak wait karna padega... waiting...

Keep writing 😳
Edited by Ultimatevikku7 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just got your pm

Amazing Christmas gift, thanks so much!

Your story was really beautiful and sweet

Hope to read lots more

Merry Christmas
Thanks again
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I just got your PM... Beautiful OS
Merry Christmas
Edited by _KOMAL - 9 years ago

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