Junoon(A Devilish Love) Teaser/Page 54 ,12/2/2017

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Shaun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#301

Teaser must be about their past

maybe the first time Maan sees Geet

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Rainu Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#302

This story is so scary.. maan behaving like a total monster.. why is he torturing her so much..

Is the teaser regarding their past...

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#303

hi thanks 4 da pm n great update, well written! Poor Geet! Maan addresses as Mrs Geet MSK! Maan is so evil! update soon

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Shalini barman roy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#304

Feeling so bad for Geet .

Whenever she tries to run from Maan, Maan comes and captures her again.

Now feeling so scared for her.

Eagerly waiting for next update

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#305

Really geet tried but she end up hiding in a cupboard where maan find her unconcious then also he behaved cruelly... really koi aisa insaan kisiko naah de...

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zariya1234

@zariya1234

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Posted: 9 years ago

#306

i m in love with this story
love this junooni maan

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Mahika

@MGMahika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#307

Flashback in italic

Part 6

Mamma...mamma ...weeping one small kid for his mother. Papa chodo ...mamma but that man wont here anything and he was beating her continuously not caring about the child who is crying shivering to seeing all this crulity, suddenly saw one lady come with dagger and stabbed her not once but don't know how many times

His sleep broke with this nightmares that he was seen, it's now his habitual to see this horrible dream, his eyes turn red,he is sweating furiously,then turn to Geet seeing her sleeping peacefully he left from there not want to sleep like fearing of sleeping

FLASHBACK

Delhi

City of Delhi where everyone busy with their own life,founding their happiness wherever they got chances...but...but someone in all of them one person is or say he is only one person who is busy drowning himself into darkness...sadness, it's not like that he didn't got any happiness but he didn't want any happiness, he only want darkness for HIM for EVERYONE ...because he believed today or tomorrow everything will turn into DEMOLISHED so why don't he do that favour ? Because he only know how to crush how to destroy so he did ...does...and will do

Because he is the DEVIL for EVERYONE for HIMSELF

Reaching one of Kandahar , looking as usual dashing with his hard feature and his masculine figure that prominent with his black tight fitted dress and shinning shoes,that is sounding whenever he stepped there, he is heading followed by his ten or more guards with their guns surrounding him
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Please leave me ...maaf kar do mujhe...dubara aesi galti nahi hogi that man weeping continuously front of him who is their head

That Man removed his goggles bent on his level and smirk to see his forehead bleeding so as his every parts of body make his smirking grew but still he isn't satisfied and Fitch his gun from his waist pocket and put it on that man forehead who is bending on his knees helplessly waiting for his dark fate when he tried to betrayed him.

Ushne mujhe paise ki lalach di thi...mujhe maaf kar do mai lalchi ban gaya tha... Please mujhe mat maro bending on his legs weeping there for any mercy if he can got
...from this merciless human, who is nothing but a dead hearted creature...

Maan : Tch tch tch tch

Maan slowly take his gun from his (that Man)forehead to cheek then enter on his mouth and smirk devilishly looking at him with his dark brown eyes

Maan : Keep it ...he handed him his gun ,that man look shocked after sometime with his tremble hand he take that gun ...

His face grinning...he straight point that gun on Maan's direction, Maan's bodyguards got alert, in one second they all targeted him with their gun point who put their boss gun on their boss direction...

Man : Nahi Maan Singh Khurana,bohat ho gaya... you are the UNDERWORLD DON but for outside world you are living like a nice human being ...kabhi socha hai humare ware mein , harwaqt tumhare isharo pe nachna , drugs dealing,murders aur kya kuch nahi kiya maine tumhare liye, but mujhe kya mila ...huhh kya bolo...harwaqt yehi dar laga rehta hai ki kahi ekdin police ki hatho humari zindegi na khatam ho jai...aur yeh sab tumhari waije se ,,,I'm tired of running but not anymore, you have to die MSK DIE DIE

with this he pull the trigger and shoot him but shocked to see his gun have no bullets

Maan : Hahahaha...hahahaha his laughter filled with whole Khandahar

Man : Uaaa...mafi de do MSK he is now scared to death

Maan : Tch tch tch ...teri zindegi itni sasti hai, yeh toh mujhe pata nahi tha mocking with smirk, suddenly come close to him so close then grabbed his neck in his devilish fist

Maan : Gaddar...jaa bula ushko jiski waije se tuney mujhse MAAN SINGH KHURANA se Gaddari ki...jaa waha.with this Maan take his another gun from his another pocket and put that under his mouth

Whole Khandahar filled with only one sound ,that to Devil's Cruelty.

That man now laid there lifelessly , Maan bent and wiping his gun to his jacket

Maan : Suna tha woh bhagaban sabki kismat likhta hai, sabki zindegi aur maut wohi se tai hokey aati hai , par DEKHH Teri maut maine likh di, woh bhi aapni inhe hatho se...hahahahahaha...but ...but ...you know what PAGAL KUTTA AUR AWARA HATI BANDUK KI GOLI KHANE K LIYE HE HOTE HAI and YOU are also same... wearing his goggles left from there with his guards following him...

Maan reached Khurana Construction and as soon as he entered the KC whole office became a terror zone. The staff who was enjoying by now were back to their respective place fearing their MD Maan Singh Khuranna. They had knew Maan as a person who hardly lost his temper, he was a terror for the whole staff

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Apart from this other world one beautiful Angel like girl lost in her own world

Evening

Geet didi aap haar gayi

She is playing with some kids

Suddenly one car splash on her make her white kurta whole dirty and wet...she turn statute sometime looking at the car retreating figure...one car then another then one more then again another at least 5 car's..her face turn red with anger

Then she followed that car's , that car's stops in some distance,,,A Lavishing Hawali where is name plate showing KHURANA MANSION she is seeing with her mouth open...all car's enters in this big Mansion ,She is also tried to enter but guards didn't allow her or say barked at her ,,,she is looking so dirty like a almost beggar and that dirty clothes also make it more worst...

Tiptoe She climbed the wall and jumped inside with a thudd, then looking at surrounding if anyone could see her...no she is safe , slowly goes towards that hawali then suddenly saw one guard coming from this hawali so hide one of piller,,,suddenly felt something fall on her,it was cigar packet,,, look up only to see he was the one who splash that dirty muddy waters on her with his car...she is seething in anger, looking here and there her eyes caught something picking up that rock,,,rubbing that rock on her dress and directly aiming at him, who is now standing front of Window and smoking his cigar. Suddenly nowhere something hard hit his forehead make it slight bleed,,,he looks down and saw one girl giving her angry look standing with her hands on her waist

Maan : Oyeee

Geet : Kya oyeee , maza aya laughing like a crazy

Maan : GUARDS...

His shouts make shiver on her body

Maan gritted his teeth and come out from his Mansion just want to give her peace of mind

MG

Edited by MGMahika - 9 years ago

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Mahika

@MGMahika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#308

Click Here For -Broken Mirror(Reposted)-Part 1

Edited by MGMahika - 9 years ago

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myrah shaikh

@myrahluvsk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#309

Nice update
past n present loved it
waiting for next update

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Shaun

@Jade0001

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Posted: 9 years ago

#310

Something horrible had happened in Maan's past that he still lives those horrible night mares and maybe that's the reason he decided his life to be in darkness killing people ruthlessly yet going to office and maintaining his image

Geet playing with kids and Maan with his bodyguards passes her but at the same time their cars splashes water on her , she decides to teach the person a lesson and enters his property ting a rock his way

interesting now she came the devil herself waiting to see now what Maan reactions are