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Priya21

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Posted: 9 years ago

part 1 is nice

character intro is sueprb ...geet become lawyer starting with party very good

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nadia khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

Lovely prologue sooo many characters so geet is a defense lawyer neel wants her to take case but geet denied without evidence she won't take it mahi seems interested in maan but he isn't there is a party for geet where all r invited sanaya is geets cousin neul is divorced geet has a little TIFF with zaid who was shocked to know she is sanaya sis loved sanaya Jay's fight seems there might be spark between them

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nadia khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

Lovely update geet and Sean work together seem something between them geet invites him for the party Neil's mom complain how he shouldn't have married her lived how Neil and ash fighting over donut while waiting for a suspect maan and mahi best friends maan had helped her once when a guy was going to force himself on her they both laugh abt it geet trying to make her client be brave and testify geet took sanaya for lunch Jay being a jerk zaud support sanaya

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Dilsay

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Posted: 9 years ago

its nice to see you back dear ...
nice concept ...

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-Halima

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow, you updated so soon!

Still can't get a complete grip on the characters but I guess it will take more time.

So Neil is in a relationship with Ash, while his mother is against it.

I am liking the bond Neil and Ash share, excited to see how their story progresses.

Geet still hasn't met Maan, hope they have a friendly relationship at least.

It seems like Maan has a soft spot for Mahi , maybe he has a crush on her or something

I feel like Jay deliberately picks fights with Sanaya, seems like he has the hots for her and that's the only way he can communicate with her.

Zaid is worried about Geet's reaction when she will see him there at the party 😆

Why does he dislike women though? Maybe he had a horrible past concerning bad women.

Anyways, looking forward to how the story will progress

You are a brilliant writer 👏

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Krupa

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Posted: 9 years ago

where are the updates?i read comments but i cant see updates?

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

waiting 4 u 2 repost! thanks

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piya27

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Posted: 9 years ago

Waiting to read the story

Very eager to know the plot of the story

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

hi will u b reposting???

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