Its My First Try Love You Anika_Two Shot OS :Part Two Updated

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I LUV U ANIKA _ TWO SHOT OS

PART ONE

Post Jungle mishap Anika and Shivaay reach home.

Anika realized that she is in love with Shivaay. The same incident keeps on repeating in her mind " I Love You Shivaay " . Now she has decided to stay away from Shivaay as she does not find herself worthy for SSO.

Anika is sitting with Saahil

Anika Speaks "Saahil pata hai jab tak mujhe nahi pata tha Shivaay mere liyae kya hai meri zindagi bahut aasan thi, ab bahut mushkil ho rahi hai, dum ghut rahi hai meri, mujhe lagta hai ab samay aa gayi ki hum dono yaha se chale jaaye."

Saahil says "par Anika didi SSO hamesha har kadam par aap ki saath dete hai woh aap ko nahi jaane dengae, ab kya problem hai aap baagad bille se pyaar karti hai itna hi na, bol dijiyae na unhae."

Anika says " tum chup raho Saahil tum nahi jaante hum dono ek dusrae ke liyae nahi bane hai, ab toh hum dono ne divorce sign kardiyae, Shivaay mujhe se pyaar kabhi nahi kar sakte, unka hum donon par bahut ehsaan hai aur mein unhae aur pareshaan nahi kar sakti. Kal apni kapde pack karlena hum jaa rahe hai."


Saahil " Annika didi meri baat toh suno ek baar... ". " Yeh dono hi buddu hai ek dusrae ke bina jee nahi sakte aur yeh baat samjh nahi sakte ab mujhe hi kuch karna padega."

Anika enters Shivaay's room and Shivaay is busy with his office work he lifts his head and sees Anika

He speaks " Anika kaha thi tum khana khane kyun nahi aayi theek ho na tum " she replies " woh mere pet kharab tha iss liyae juice pee liya mein ne " Shivaay asks

" tum sach mein theek ho na, so jao jaldi mujhe kuch kaam hai mein baad mein sota hu."

Anika walks towards her couch and sits on it facing Shivaay. Her gaze is fixed on him. She thinks " mein aap ko kaise batau mein kal jaa rahi hu hamesha ke liyae, yeh hum donon ke liyae behtar hoga, agar ab mein aap ko batadungi aap mujhe jaane nahi dengae, agar mein yaha ruk gayi khud ko aapse dur nahi rakh pavungi, kya karu mein???"


Mere dil ne chun laiya ne
Tere dil diyan rahaan
Tu jo mere naal tu rehnta
Turpe meriyaan saaha
Jeena mera haye
Hun hai tera, ki main karaan
Tu kar eitbaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil, tunhion jaan meri!


Shivaay raises from his place and walks towards anika he sits beside her and gently shakes her " Anika kya soch rahi ho tum?? mujhse kuch kehna chahti ho kya ???

Anika speaks up " Shivaay woh mein kal ghar jana chahti hu ???"

Shivaay asks "Ghar jana chati ho matlab, u see Anika aaj kal hum donon pe bahut attacks ho rahe aur iss time par tum apni ghar jana chati ho aur woh bhi akeli no way tum kahi nahi javogi."


Anika says " mein akeli nahi jaa rahi Saahil bhi mere saath chal raha aur mein promise karti hu apni khayal rakhungi pls mujhe jane dijiyae na"

Shivaay says " Theek hai agar tujhe koi imp kaam hai toh chali jaana aur shaam tak wapis aa jana. Aur yaad rakho agar koi bhi problem ho mujhe call kardena, theek hai na,Ab so jao tum"


He makes her lie down on the couch and gently covers her with the blanket and gets back to his work. Anika's condition becomes more miserable as she could not say Shivaay that she wants to leave him and Oberoi mansion forever. Tears start rolling down her cheeks and slowly sleep takes over her."


Anika's tears does not go unnoticed by Shivaay he is so concerned about her "I know anika past few days were very tough to both of us. Aur mere hote huae iss ghar mein tumhae bahut kuch sehna pada, iss jagah se dur javogi thodi dher ke liyae you will feel relaxed."


Shivaay goes to Anika and slowly and gently places a soft kiss on her forehead and says " You are the best thing that could ever happen in my life Anika, aur mein jaanta hu tum mere baare mein kya feel karti ho (he smiles widely) tumhae awkward feel karne ki koi jarurat nahi because I Love You Too."

Song plays in bg

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai
Tum se hi din hota hai
Surmaiye shaam aati
Tumse hi tumse hi

Shivaay lays down on his bed saying " jab sahi waqt aayegi tab mein tumhae bol dunga i promise." He goes into sleep...


Its two O clock Anika suddenly wakes up from her sleep she sees Shivaay sleeping and thinks " mein ye baat Shivaay se khud kabhi nahi bol pavungi chitti likh kar unki cupboard mein rakh deti hu woh jab dekhengae samjh jaayengae." She goes to the writing table and finishes her letter, all the while tears fell on the letter smearing the ink on letter at last she writes "aap ki Anika" she cries badly after that she packs her clothes and get ready to leave..


Its 6 Am in the morning

Saahil as instructed by her didi arrives at her room. Anika too is ready to leave she walks towards the door drops her suit case and turns around too see her Billu for the last time.


Imagine the song playing in background

Lafzon se jo tha pareh
Khaali pann ko jo bhare
Kuch toh tha tere mere darmiyaan

She walks towards Shivaay's bed he is sleeping like a baby Anika leans forward and gently brushes his hair..

Rishte ko kya modh doon
Naata yeh ab todh doon
Ya phir yunhi chodh doon, darmiyaan

She gently kisses his forehead and Shivaay shifts in sleep and holds her hand and murmers in sleep "Jaldi wapis aajao"

Benaam rishta woh
Benaam rishta woh, bechain karta jo
Ho na sake jo beyaan, darmiyaan
Darmiyaan...

Anika slowly without disturbing him frees her hand from his grip takes the letter there on the writing table folds it and keeps it in Shivaays cup board. She then leaves the room without turning back.

Precap:
Shivaay says "yeh kya paagalpanti Anika phele ghar chalo." Anika says " aap ko kya farak padta hai mein aap ki kya lagti hu, nahi aavungi mein aap ke saath"

Shivaay grabs her from behind "tum samjhti kyun nahi ki mein..."




this is my first ever os on shivika

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Amazing piece of writing dear...👏Waiting for his confession in the next part... update soon😳
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wowww yaar it is just awesomme plz continue im waiting for nxt part👏
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It's interesting
Continue soon 😊
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Awesome...
Eagerly waiting for your next update
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thank you guys for liking my work🤗
planning to post the update by 12am this night😆😆😆
if not you will get it by tomorrow😃
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Annika chali gayi .. go sso leker aao usse. ❤️
mansi you write so well.. v talemted girl 😎
waiting for an update. 😊


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This part is so beautiful n emotional...waiting fr next update...continue soon...
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PART TWO


Its 7.30 AM Shivaay wakes up

Rubbing his eyes he takes Anika's name

"Anika kaha ho tum yaar, azeeb hai lady kumbkaran itni jaldi ut gayi, chalo mein fresh ko kar neeche jata hu usse apni ghar drop bhi toh kara hai"

Shivaay comes downstairs and checks all possible places where Anika could be, surprisingly she is no where... In the way he meets Dadi Rudra and Soumya and asks if they have seen Anika. No one knows where she has gone he goes to check if Saahil is there or not he too is not there.

Shivaay thinks "its so un natural Anika ghar pe kisi ko bina bataye chali gayi woh toh aisa kabhi nahi karti, mein phone karta hu."

Anika phone starts ringing in Shivaay's room, Shivaay goes to his room and find Anikas mobile lying on the couch " yeh Anika bhi na apni mobile yahi chod ke chali gayi, abhi kisi ko bol kar mobile uss ki ghar bhijwadeta hu." Oh god! I am late aaj kitne saare meetings hai aur mein sirf tumhari wajah se late ho gaya hu Anika."

Anika at her home

She is very silent and is not at all responding to what Saahil is telling. Saahil shouts "Anika Didi kya kar rahi hai aap dekho kaise gande se baal banadiya aap ne aur yeh kya jootae ulte pehna rahi hai aap???" Anika comes out of trance and says " chup raho na Saahil mujhe thodi shaanti chahiyae. Ruk mein abhi tumhare baal theek karti hu, aur tumne apni saari books theek se rakh liya na aur woh report card pe sign kis ne kiya dikhao." Saahil replies" Anika didi woh kal mein ne SSO ko report card dikhaya aur unhone sign kar diya, didi SSO aap se pyaar karte hai."

Anika shouts " Saahil mein tujhe kal kya bola apni umar ke baate kiya karo na, tum bas apni padai pe dhyaan do chalo late ho rahe ho tum." Anika gets up Saahil holds her and and ask her "Anika didi mein aaj apke saath yahi rukta hu kal se school jaavunga pakka aaj aap akeli mat raho pls..."

Anika replies " Sahil mujhe pata hai iss duniya mein sirf tum ho mere liyae abhi aur mein sach mein theek hu bas thodi dher akeli rehna chhati hu tum school jaa kar waapas aao tab tak mein bahar se saaman wagera le aati hu chalo ab."

At Office

Shivaay is very much tensed he is walking to and fro in his cabin

" Yeh Anika bhi na subah bina bataye chali gayi ek phone bhi nahi kiya, haa kaise karti phone jo ghar pe bhul kar chali gayi haad hoti hai kisi cheez ki, office se sidha jaa kar usse lena padega mujhe ab."

Then Shivaay's assistant comes and tell him the meetings lined up. Shivaay gets busy in his office work. Anika's thoughts keeps on disturbing him all the while he keeps himself focussed. By 3.30 Shivaay finishes all his work and postpones the other meetings and heads towards Anika's home.

Kuchh Khaas Hai Kuchh Paas Hai, Kuchh Ajanabi Ehsaas Hai

Kuchh Duriyaan Najdikiyaan, Kuchh Hans Padi Tanhaayiyaan

Kya Yeh Khumaar Hai, Kya Aitbaar Hai

Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad

Kya Yeh Bahaar Hai, Kya Intjaar Hai

Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad

There Saahil waits for her sister outside his school. Shivaay stops his car at Saahil's school on the way and he feels surprised as Anika has not yet turned up to pick Saahil which so unnatural. Saahil gets in without saying a word. Both Shivaay and Saahil reach Anika's house. Anika is not at home. Saahil says "yeh sab nah aap ki wajah se ho raha hai, aap ki wajah se meri Anika didi aap ki ghar chod kar aayi hamesha ke liyae..." Shivaay is shocked he says " Kya bol rahe ko tum hamesha ke liyae kya i mean uss ne mujhse kuch kyun nahi kaha, Saahil tum toh mujhe bata sakte the na."

Saahil says " Mujhe aap dono ke beech mein nahi bolna chahiyae mein toh baccha hu na, aur Anika di ne mana kiya batane se aur chitti nahi mila kya aap ko jo subah didi aap ki cupboard mein rakh rahi thi."

Shivaay looses his cool " tum dono na, mein subah se kitna pareshaan ho raha hu, kal mein ne tumhari didi se pucha tha kuch kehna hai kya, uss ne toh kuch nahi kaha, usse kya sirf apne ki padi hai mere baare mein kuch nahi socha bas decide kar liya, sahi nahi kiya tum donon ne."

Saahil holds Shivaay's hand and pulls him. Shivaay kneels down infront of him

Saahil hugs Shivaay crying "aap mere Anikaa didi se pyaar karte ho na aur boliyae ki aap hamesha unke saath rahengae aur unhae kabhi dur nahi jaane dengae."

Shivaay replies " Saahil rona band karo ." he breaks the hug and gently wipes his tears and say " har baat bolnae ki jarurat nahi hota hai, kuch baat bin bole samajh aa jaate hai, mein tumhari didi se bahut pyaar karta hu aur abhi jo haalat hai mein aise time pe kuch nahi bolna chata tha thats it."

He continues

"Saahil tum batao aaj tak mein ne kabhi bhi yeh kaha hai ki tum dono ghar chod kar chale jaaye, nahi na phir aise decision kyun liyaa tum donon ne, ab batao tumhari didi kaha pe hai."

Saahil replies " Anika didi ne bola ki usse akela rehna hai aur woh subah mujhe school chodne aaye aur shaam ko aayi nahi pata nahi mere didi kaha pe hai."

Shivaay asks Saahil to get into the car and he goes to oberoi mansion

Shivaay storms into his room opens his cupboard and searches for the letter. He finally finds it and takes it out and open it.

Its written like this,

Shivaay aap ne aaj tak mere liyae Saahil ke liyae bahut kuch kiya hai, aap ne har halat mein mere saath diya, mujhe nahi pata kab aur kaise par mujhe aap se pyaar ho gayi, Yeh toh galat hai na Shivaay aap kaha aur mein kaha,

ab mere zindagi mein aap mujhse jyada important ho gaye, mein bhi kitni paagal hu aap jaise achi khandaan mein,mujh jaise bahu jispe maa papa saaya hi na ho kaise fit hoti,

Mein aap se duur jaane ki kitni koshis karti hu aap khud mere paas aa kar mujhe aur jyada pareshan karte hai, Mere liaye aap se duur jana kitni mushkil hai aap nahi jaante hai, aisa lag raha hai khud se bahut dur jaa rahi hu

Phir bhi mera jaana jaruri hai kyun ki mein aap ke liyae nahi bani hu aur mere jaane se sab kuch theek ho jayega, aap jyaada mat sochiyae mein aap ko chod kar nahi jaa rahi hu, mein bas apni jagah jaa rahi jaha mujhe hona chahiyae

Aap mere zindagi ban gaye ho I Love You Shivaay

Alvidaa

Aap ki

Anikaa

Siske siske naina kiske

Saawan bundiya dhal jaye re

O Siske siske naina kiske

Saawan bundiya dhal jaye re

Lachke machke baadal sach ke

Jiya kaahe ghabraaye re

Saiyan naa jaa re

Saiyaan Saiyaan naa jaa re..

Soona soona angna re

Saha naa jaaye kahaa bhi na jaaye

Kya kar diya Anika tum ne Shivaay wipes off a lone tear from his eyes and he is all set to get his Anika back home. Saahil asks " kya likha Anika didi ne" Shivaay replies " Mein tumhari didi ko le kar aata hu tum yahi raho ."

On the way Rudra and Soumya stops Shivaay and ask is everything ok, Shivaay says everything is fine and ask them to take care of Saahil.

Shivaay drives off in his car and he is very tensed and totally clueless as where to search Anika, He searches all possible places but Anika is no where.

Kaise Bataye Kyun Tujhko Chahe

Yaara Bata Na Paaye

Baatein Dilon Ki Zuban Aankhon Ki Tujhe Samjhayen

Tu Jaane Na

Tu Jaane Na

Tu Jaane Na

Tu Jaane Na

Hmmmil Ke Bhi

Hum Na Mile

Tumse Na Jane Kyun

Milon Ki Hai Fasle

Tumse Hai Jaane Kyun

Anjane Hain Silsile

Tum Se Na Jaane Kyun

Sapne Hai Palkon Tale

Tum Se Na Jaane Kyun

Kaise Bataye Kyun Tujhko Chahe

Yaara Bata Na Paaye

Baatein Dilon Ki Dekhon Zuban Ki Aankhe Tujhe Samjhayen

Tu Jaane Na

Tu Jaane Na

Tu Jaane Na

Tu Jaane Na

At last finally

He sees her, his Anika sitting on a rock on roadside from there the city actually begins and it is a view point from where you can see the most beautiful sunset. Anika is in deep thought she even doesn't know from when she is sitting facing the other side. Shivaay parks his car and just get down the car he is now standing behind her. Anika did not notice because she is in deep thought.

Shivaay just walks ahead and he is shattered to see Anika in that a condition.

Uski aakhon se aasu ruk nahi rahe phir bhi woh aasu pochte huae muskurarahi hai.

She talks to herself

Anika yeh tumhari zindagi hai, aur tumne aaj tak akeli hi jiya, par aaj aisae kyun ro rahi ho jaise ki tumhari andar kuch toot sa gaya ho. Azeeb hai mein ne kabhi nahi socha mujhe bhi pyaar hogi aur yeh toh bilkul nahi socha ki meri pyaar mujhe nahi milegi. She laughs

Yaar anika tu badi gadi cheez ho tujhe pyaar bhi hua toh kisse the great Shivaay Singh Oberoi se kaha woh aur kaha tu. Ha ha laughs. Tujhe yaad hai yeh jagah, bachpan mein tu yahi sochti thi jab tujhe pyaar hoga tu yahi batavogi usse aur dekho na mazak banadiya tumne khud ki zindagi ka...

Slowly the sky changes its colour from blue to orange and it is time for sun set. Sun is beautiful bright red coloured, birds started flying back to their nests its lovely scene.

All the time Shivaay stood behind Anika without saying a word. He is actually feeling the intensity of pain Anika is going through.

At at the right time he stepped forward bent a little and wishpered in Anika's ear "i love you Anika"

Anika is startled with the proximity and for her its really something which she has never expected, She suddenly jerked back and is in Shivaay's arms.

Jab jab tere paas main aaya,

Ik sukoon mila

Jise main tha bhoolta aaya,

Wo wajood mila

Jab aaye mausam gham ke,

Tujhe yaad kiya

Ho

Jab sehme tanhapan se, Tujhe yaad kiya

Hmm, dil, Sambhal ja zara

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Dil yahin ruk jaa zara

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Aisa kyun kar hua janu naa

Main janu naa oh oh,

Anika says stammering "Shivaay aap yaha, aur kya kaha aap ne abhi."


Shivaay makes her sit properly and wipes her tears with his handkerchief he keeps it back in his pocket. Anika is actually shocked and totally clueless and is not able tp respond to what is happening.

Mein ne kaha " Shivaay Singh Oberoi Apni biwi Anika Shivaay Shing Oberoi Se Pyaar Karta Hai"

He then shouts aloud that his voied echoes "I love You Anikaa"

Shivaay now kneels down infront of her forwarding his hand "Meri iss berang zindagi mein rang bharogi, mujhse pyaar karogi, tere paas aur koi option nahi hai just love me, kyun ki mein tumse pyaar karta hu."

Mila hoon ab jo tum se

Hai dil ko mere kasam se

Sukoon mila, sukoon mila..

Tujhe hai paaya Rab se,

Hai dil ko mere kasam se

Sukoon mila, sukoon mila..

Har pal haseen sa huaa hai

Saanson ko tune chhuaa hai

Badhi tujhse nazdeekiyaan

Sukoon mila, sukoon mila..

Anika too kneels down she raises her hand and touches Shivaay's face and then she says "aap sach mein yaha ho."

Shivaay takes her into his embrace she cries on his shoulder. They remain in the same position untill she is pacified.

This is how Anika's dream comes true she finds her true love and that place and that feel is magical

Finally she breaks the hug. Shivaay asks "tumhae aisa kyun laga ki mein tumse pyaar nahi karta, tum mujhse keh deti Anika, mein kabhi kisi ke liyae aisa feel nai kiya jaise tumhare liyae kiya, tum yeh baat janti ho, dubara mujhe kabhi chod ke jaavogi toh mein m..." She closes his mouth. And says "kabhi nahi and hugs him."

And she wishpers in his ear " I love Shivaay." their hug becomes tighter as they bind in a beautiful bond.

Both of them stay there and see the sunset. Later Shivaay turns Anika towards her and slowly raises her and then its bliss as they become one.

Anika and Shivaay both of them smile at their stupidity and realize, sahi waqt wahi hota hai jab hamae woh ehsaas ho jata hai, aur zindagi ki baaki responsibilities ruk sakte hai..

While they are walking to their car suddenly two thugs get hold of Anika from behind, Shivaay says "chodo usse kuch mat karna warna..."

Thugs "arre yeh toh wahi admi hai na Oberoi wala tv pe bhi aata hai aur jiska shaadi kisi aur ladiki se shaadi hua , toh yeh ladki koun hai"

Anika laughs " aise pucho na bhaiyya, ek min, chodiaye mujhe unhae bol dijiyae ki mein uss ke saath nahi jaa rahi, aap ko pata hai ki mein koun hu nahi na puchiyae unse ki mein unki kya lagti hu"

Shivaay says " Anika kya kar rahi ho ghar chalo, aur aap dono kya aise roj roj chori karte rahogae, hatte katte ho kaam kar sakte ho na yeh meri office address hai kal aa ke mere factory mein kaam karo dono, tum logon ke liaye nahi toh apni biwi bachon ke liyae socho."

Thugs realize their mistake and say "saab bahut bahut aabhar aap ka hum kal aa jaate hai time pe, madam aap jaaiyae hamae maaf kar dijiyae."

Shivaay and Anika walk towards their car then thugs call them from behind "saab mem saab aap ki kya lagti hai" Shivaay repllies "meri biwi hai Mrs Shivaay Singh Oberoi."

Saab dhyaan se jaayigae Thugs wave them off untill they reach the curve and they vanish, Shivaay and Anika laugh loud till they reach home. After reaching home Saahil comes running towards them and shivaay lifts him up and both of them kiss him on his cheek.

Its is just a beginning of Shivika and it goes on...

Thats all folks

Hope you like the story

Will come up with new work soon

Pls drop you comments

Yours

manas😳

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Wonderful ending...❤️..Both of them r so cute..
Do come up with more stories soon...😳

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