Do you still love me? A MeghNal OS.

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PART 1:-
She looked at the clock hung at the wall, it showed 11:30pm, he hasn't arrived yet was the first thought occupied her mind.

Its not new for her, he has been arriving late from his office and she was quite used to it, but today she was desparately waiting for his arrival. She waited for him though she knew that wouldn't leave any impact on him!

She hated him, or loved him...nothing was sort of clear to her. Her mind and heart presented before her two different pictures...
One reminded her of her old romantic days with him, their laughter, his sweet love-filled gestures towards her, his words dipped in love-syrups...
while the other provided her of the picture of night filled with lights turned out to be a dark one...
Her mother, the one figure whom she didn't love but worshipped from the core of her heart, whose self-respect mattered her the most, being maligned by her in-laws. She felt bad at that time than when he too joined them to add a few words of his own to put down her mother and her.
She felt a strong pricking inside her heart, as if someone has stabbed her hard there, most probably his words played that role at that moment!
Time passed and everything was sorted. People around her tried their best to settle their differences, but failed each time. Maybe their differences created a huge gap between them which was not possible to be filled by their mere words, the lose was done. We say to choose our words wisely before we speak, and once it leaves our mouth, it cannot be taken back. Maybe his words at that night left deep scars in her mind which cannot be cured by their words of sympathy.
Coldness occupied their relationship. They were living their lives, but not together. They were together for them, but not for themselves. Their hearts called-out for each other, but they weren't able to remove those virtual barriers between them.
But today she waited for his arrival, maybe she couldn't take it any longer now. She wanted him, his absence was somewhere driving her crazy that night.

Her thoughts came to a hault with the sound of brakes being applied. He was there, yes he had arrived. She ran towards the main door to catch a glimpse of him.
He got out of the car carrying the same cold expressions, laughter and smiles has already left his gloomy life, after he made the biggest mistake of his life, he let her down, that probably been burning him from inside which could be reflected in his deep brown eyes.
But today was a different scenario, she was there, he took a closer look, yes she was there, standing at the entrance with a small smile on her face. His face lit-up seeing her, as if something has again brewed a new life in him. Her mere smile bought him back to life.
Both stood there, with their eyes speaking their heart's voice, something which couldn't be wrapped up in just mere words.
He took a few steps towards her, she too did the same, and finally they stood so close to feel each other's heart-beats.

"kahan the tum, tumhe pata hai main tumhara kabse intezaar kar rahi thi?"
Her words, though sounding like an angry teacher's words, had so much soothing effects on him. He stood there, transfixed, not knowing what to say. His mind and his heart were at fix, was she meaning it, or its just his imagination of her caring for him. Something made him blurt out those harsh words, which broke her once again:

"kya farak padta hai, aur tumhe kabse meri fikar hone lagi hai?"
With this he stepped inside the house, but looked back to realise that once again he lost the chance to make up with her. A tear skipped his eyes, but he controlled his emotions and made his way inside.

She stood there, frozen by his words. Mixed emotions flushed inside her. A mixture of pain and anger. She just couldn't control it any further and broke off into tears. She wasn't expecting this response from him, but somewhere she felt that all this was a mere reflection and reactions for what has happened in the past. She broke into tears as she couldn't take it any longer. Inside her heart she felt a deep pain.
She wiped her tears and stepped inside. She opened the door but didn't found him, maybe he went to take a hot shower.
She waited for him, but when he took long, so she started adjusting the bed. They slept together, with closeness, but it was just a formality with zero emotion between them. But today she wanted him, she wanted his presence by her side, she wanted to feel the touch of his rough hands on her body, yes wanted him today!
And there he came, with water still dripping from his wet hairs, with black tracks and bare chest, a towel hung around his neck whose one end was used by him to dry his wet hair.
She stood there, and stared at his sexy, well-tonned body. It was one of those sights she never failed to witness at any moment!
------------------------------------------ my first ever attempt to write something, hope you guys like this! Leave you comments!
Part 2 coming soon!

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Tamihna thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is amazing! The words are so powerful , I'm looking forward to the next part!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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U know how excitedly I read tat and suddenly comes the end..It's so beautiful and I imagined MeghNal everywhere.. Really luved it.. Waiting for part two...😳😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I really enjoyed it!!! Loved it how you've kept both the characters as how they've shown in the serial! 😃 and now... of course waiting for the next part 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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loved it pls rite more n contine soonish
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 2 :-
She stood there for a moment gazing at this beautiful sight infront of her. He realised her gaze and looked up. His sudden actions got her lower her eyes to avoid any further embaressment. Somehow he knew her intentions, and a small smile crept on his face, but he supressed it to capture her further reactions
He moved towards the closet to take his t-shirt, but before he could do that, she took her steps towards the closet and handed him his t-shirt, keeping her back towards him, to avoid any eye contact.
He grabbed the t-shirt from her hands and held her hand, pulling him towards him with a jerk! She hit his bare chest, with eyes wide open in nervousness.
"kab tak apne jasbaton ko yun hi chipate rahogi, keh kyun nahi deti ki ab bhi mujhse utna hi pyaar karti ho tum jitna pehle kiya karti thi?"
She probably had the answer to his question, but hadn't got the courage to deliver it. Yes, she has loved him, always, and never been able to hate him, cos he was the only one to introduce her the new feeling called "Love". She loved him, his sweet gestures, his naughty talks, and his beautiful childish smile. She never got a chance to express her love to him, cos she wasn't that expressive as him, and somehow the circumstances moved her away from her confession. But today, she has got a chance to blurt her feelings out, to yell loudly that, yes, I do love you, but still words didn't leave her mouth for it.
She looked back in his eyes, feeling lost in them, maybe they too were the reason for her silence. He slid his arms around her waist and pulled her even more closer to him. His warm breath hit her soft face, and she couldn't able to hold it any longer. A tear skipped her eye, and he understood her position. He immediately gathered her in a hug. She somehow tried to resist intially, but failed and finally gave up herself into his strong arms. She cried and so did he. It was those unsaid emotions between them which flowed in the form of tears. They stood there in the same position finding solace in each other's arms, the best place at this moment for both of them. They broke the hug, and she could feel his intensified gaze fixed at hers, or her lips, the ones which wanted her to say her heart out.
"I Love You Kunal, bohot pyaar karti hoon main tumse!"
before she could complete her sentence, he captured her soft juicy lips in his and kissed her. She too replied for it and sucked his lips too. It intensified with each passing second, with their emotions getting mixed with their passion. They wanted each other badly, but were drifted apart by circumstances, but today, they just couldn't keep themselves away from each other! They broke the kiss for some air. He cupped her face lovingly and merged his head with hers. Tears continuosly flowed from her eyes, and he gestured her for no more. He wiped her tears with his rough fingers, and stood there looking into her eyes. She did the same.
"tum bohot bure ho, ek baar bhi tumne mere baare mein nahi socha, jab tum voh sab kuch keh rahe the?" Her questions made him feel his mistakes of the past, and a soft deep "Sorry" escaped from his mouth. That was enough to make her melt this time he grabbed him in an another hug, helding him more tightly. He too hugged her back as if trying to tell her that he would never let her go. He closed his eyes to inhale the scent of her hairs and smiled a bit. She realised their position and broke the hug and stepped aside from him. He stopped her by holding her wrist and twirled her to him making her to hit his chest again.
"kunal kya kar rahe ho tum, hato mujhe jana hai."
"itni asani se nahi topper, waise bhi tumne mujhe bohot tadpaya hai. Pehle hamari coffe date ke liye, phir mujhse shadi karne ke liye, mujhse apne pyaar ka izhaar karne ke liye, aur ab mere kareeb anne ke liye."
"tum na pagal ho, bilkul pagal!"
"pagal to hun, apni topper ke liye!"
He held her soft hands and brought them closer to his mouth and kissed it. She smiled and he came forward to kiss her again, but this time she moved back, but he held her again. Her back merged with his chest. He slid his hands onto hers and hugged her from behind. He removed the hairs from her shoulders and kissed her over there. A deep breath escaped her mouth, as she gasped his name in the most sexiest tone-"kunal". He made her face him, and all she could see his passion filled eyes. She smiled, and he took it as an approval. She too wanted to be his in every respect and her smile gave him all the answers. He picked her up in his arms and laid her on the bed.
Cut, cut, cut...lights off! I haven't turned that much asanskari to write further! Rest lies on your imagination!

So guys leave your comments below!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow!!!! This is so beautiful yaar! 😳 tomorrow I have my exam and I can't stop myself from coming to the forum to see any updates and I get this story in the form of a perfect gift! Thank You! It was very entertaining! 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shrividhya

Wow!!!! This is so beautiful yaar!😳tomorrow I have my exam and I can't stop myself from coming to the forum to see any updates and I get this story in the form of a perfect gift! Thank You! It was very entertaining!😃


awww...thats so sweet of you! Loved your response, do you want me to continue with it????
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Siya2202


awww...thats so sweet of you! Loved your response, do you want me to continue with it????

You have to continue! You write really well!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tamihna


You have to continue! You write really well!


i have just attempted and tried on my part, rest lies on MeghNal's magic!
Good to see so many positive responses! Will surely try to write more!

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