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SAMEERA

@sameera.2397

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Ha ha nice concept.
Good update dear

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Nandana_sunil

@NanduRosid

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Roli and Siddhant was about to get down the car when a strong wind blew..Irritated,they slammed the doors shut..

"why do you think Roli,That there is such a strong wind when the climate is extremely alright?"

"So..The powers seem quite strong right?"Roli asked,grasping the meaning of the question quite fast..

Siddhant replied with a smile ,which had blended rays of determination as well as admiration..

"Janeman aa..Janeman aa..",the radio sang..

Roli threw an irritated look at siddhant,but suddenly the look changed into a warning..It wasn't him who put the radio on..Moreover,There wasn't signal at this bungalow..

Siddhant too looked at Roli,warningly..

"So they aren't as we expected..Started showing signs even in daytime?good.."

Siddhant got down the car and walked towards the haunted bungalow..He dragged Roli too with him..

"Dont be alone..Always be with me.."

Roli looked at siddhant with a "what do you mean" expression..

"i mean..The powers are strong so.."

Roli got it,,"Its okay..I understand.." and then bit her tongue thinking about her stupidity..

Siddhant extended his hand to open the door..While the huge door opened by itself..

He was startled but thought to ease the situation."See Roli..I dont think we need stewards or stewardesses ..See..We got some good ones here,though invisible.."

Roli couldnt help but chuckle on this crazy joke inspite of the situation..Infact, it was for the first time he was cracking a joke..As for Roli..

"Hmmm..He's not that bossy .."

"Roli..Ummm..well..Dont take me wrong..",Siddhant mumbled while settling their things up the stairs..

Roli was surprised on this confusion of his.." No yaar..You just go on.."

"Well Roli..We would have to stay in one room..That is,The place is so dangerous ..So I Dont think you can manage alone..Roli..Its okay if you dont agree this..You can very well reject this opinion too.."

Roli got what exactly was he meaning..In fact,she was born in a village..So she was not used to all these..But she has to..It is for the government..

"no..Its okay..Lets...do that.."

Siddhant saw a deep scarlet spreading over her cheeks,but didnt show that he noticed..

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InToTheUnknown

@InToTheUnknown

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

ahem...ahem...entha evide nadakkunne???poocha kannadachu paalu kudichaal aarum kanillyannano??? randannevum oru roomilo...ithu prethangalekkaal dangerous paniyaanallo mole...hmmm...nokkaam...by the way njan Roli oru Malayalam dialogue parayunnathu imagine cheyyarunnu...Hmmm...update cheytho...naalu maasam kazhinju saukaryam pole njan vaayicholaam...

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was So Interesting and Different Concept.😊

Roli Character was so Interesting.😊

Roli is Tamilian,it was so Interesting.

Roli sees Ghosts,it was so Interesting.😊

But Her Parenst locked her in room because of this.😭

Roli along with Sid will become Dermatologists,it was so Interesting.😊

Please Continue soon.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaSweety-Anu

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Ramya sri

@Ramya-22

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

very different concept...finds it very interesting...update soon...

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SAMEERA

@sameera.2397

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Hope I will not be haunted by ghosts in dreams.
Hey just kidding.
Update is described quite realistic and could perfectly imagine.
It was like your update is being played infront me.
Nice effort.