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Posted: 9 years ago
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In anticipation of today -

He tripped
He turned
His eyes wept
His Heart Burned .

He looked at the pile of wrapped up lies
He searched the truth in their lying eyes
His love, now smoke and ash
His dreams, shatter and crash.

He crumbled like a house of sand
He held his grief with a trembling hand
His eyes splintered with heavy tears
Voices echoed, pulled at his ears.

His eyes, they splintered with heavy tears
Like a broken mirror, reflecting glorious years.
Voices, they echoed in his ears
as the violent wind proclaimed his fears.

His love, now smoke and soot-
dying embers beneath his foot
His dreams, they shatter and crash
like a glass ceiling, broken in a flash.

His eyes wept
silently, his rage crept
His heart burned
His life, upturned.

Silently, he came undone
Slowly, he broke into a run
Whispers of undying love
came from a mourning dove.

Night walked in, wearing black
filling darkness into every crack
He stood alone in an empty space
confused and in a daze.

Whispers of undying love
wafted in from up above
He heard the silent cries of a gentle dove,
perched near a tall alcove.

Slowly, he broke into a run
to find the early morning sun
He followed the dove into the maze
in search of a peaceful place.


From the deep crevices of his heart
emerged a love that never did depart,
As dawn broke the nighttime sky
he awoke to a soulful cry
The dove, a symbol his love
Smiled at him from up above.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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How can u be so freaking amazing in poetry ? Every line depicts Atharv today 👏👏
you are phenomenal in poetry😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beagle! are u into poetry? this is so soulful. i just cannot praise you enough. that last stanza is filled with hope. so apt for our Vitharv.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow !! This is so apt for Atharva today.
He will cry, run, be angry but in the last he will find his solace and be in her arms and that love will never depart from his heart anytime

This is so so beautifully written

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