The Dark Princess Chapter8 pg4 [Updates after March 3 2017 ] A/N@ PG1

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spatika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

awesome update.
continue soon.
thanks for pm.

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Verda_768

@Verda_768

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Hi harshita

Sorry for commenting late, as i m at nanny house.

Just now read it. It's too hot dear. It seems swasan bonding is becoming stronger. After reading the update,i came to conclusion that ethan n jason may be the villain in swasan life? Waise update mast tha,now waiting read further. How the story will take turn? How our swasan relationship stand infront of those creepy creatures? So post asap n thanks for pm

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elsanna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: elsanna
Res

Nice update harshu...😳

Update sooner

Tani

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1086832

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Finally got some free time from studies
Coming to update what to say It is so good love swasan more
Like how swasan bonding is developing
Really very nice and good update

👏 👏

Do continue sooner

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Hey harshu...

Nice chapter ..loved it...but im little clueless about what will happen next??i could not guess... As in story wise...its dark princess..i want to see swara's darkness...or anything...sanky easily adapted to these vampires...was little hesitant but he did...i want to know his feeling..why he never run away or asked swara to let him go...coz he is human ..always in vampires radar n swara a vampire...??? Why he stayed???will he convert willingly?? Curious...updatenext soon...

Love u

Talia

Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 9 years ago

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BarkhaSingh123

@BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Hey harshu...
Nice chapter ..loved it...but im little clueless about what will happen next??i could not guess... As in story wise...its dark princess..i want to see swara's darkness...or anything...sanky easily adapted to these vampires...was little hesitant but he did...i want to know his feeling..why he never run away or asked swara to let him go...coz he is human ..always in vampires radar n swara a vampire...??? Why he stayed???will he convert willingly?? Curious...updatenext soon...

Love u
Talia

Hi Talia

First and foremost thanks for taking time and going through the update. Also thanks for these questions you put. I will try to answer most of them.

1) Swara's Darkness- I am yet to add more to this element bit u see story had just begun so you have to wait until I update more of it.😉 Apart from that till now also as Sanskaar quotes Swara was his "Moon Princess" IE. She was a chirpy bubbly happy to go girl with least worries. She was unstable like Moon, like Moonlight is very vulnerable and can easily be affected by clouds she was the same. Easily affectable. Soothing and calm. Now this Vampire Swara, first of all she being a Vampire makes her dark in literal sense. Second Darkness here could be related to her stability and Maturity. She is no more vulnerable. She is very stable and Mature. These two elements don't make you a dark or grey charactered person but you see these two make you stable like darkness. Light persist for short time but darkness persists strongly everywhere in the universe. U can't kill it but just chase it away for some time. Same is with Maturity and Stable Minds. Such person can be childish at times but mostly they act wisely. You can take it as a positive trait of darkness.

2) Why Sanskaar stays with Vampires? Sanskaar comes into the picture as a lonely person. He had a boring life. What all he did was to cry over the loss of his parents and Friends. Here when he meets Swara in this loneliness and also that Swara whom he somewhere liked he got the spark of his life back. Till now he finds them harmless, they are not allowed to drink human blood without their will. Lucifer is almost a brother to him. Swara his love and Amaira a good friend. There is no reason why he should leave and go back to his sparkless life. Moreover now when in love with Swara he himself wants to be the one whom she could marry. He is not yet sure about being a Vampire but he doesn't even have a problem. (As mentioned in the story)

3) Sanskaar didn't Protest? I think here u r mistaken. Sanskaar did protest and he was in the worst state of horror until Swara calmed him down. He expressed that he wants to go away untill he came to know about Swara being his Shona. And also untill he started feeling safe.

Hope I answered your questions to a satisfactory level. Anything else then do ask again.

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BarkhaSingh123

@BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Res for ch-8 Harshi. 😳
Awesome chapter dear. 👏 Swara's concern for Swara was straight from her heart. 😳 Also loved when Sanskar tried to console her and calm her down. 😳 Lol! Luc and Amy teasing SwaSan. 😆 SwaSan moments were very romantic. ☺️ Loved it. ❤️ Just one thing sis that I think the word which u used will be "staring" instead of "glaring" coz we "stare" at someone lovingly and "glare" at someone angrily. 😳 Hope u won't mind me pointing out this li'l mistake dear. 😳 Update soon. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Thank you so much for correcting aheli. 😆 actually I just searched a random synonym of Staring and used it without much checking.

Thanks for reading

Apologies for the mistake.

Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

Thank you so much for correcting aheli.😆actually I just searched a random synonym of Staring and used it without much checking.

Thanks for reading

Apologies for the mistake.

Its completely fine Harshi. 😊 Plzz don't apologize. 😳