You are only mine (SS) part 2 and 3 updated

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Posted: 8 years ago
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HI GUYS THIS IS MY FIRST SS HOPE U LOVE IF U LIKED IT JUST IT THE LIKE BUTTON AS THE NUMBER OF PARTS WILL BE BASED ON THE NUMBER OF LIKE
THE STORY IS FROM THE DIVORCE SESSION

Suraj : what's this?
Ragini : chakor &your divorce paper...she said staring at him angryly and continued "get them signed soon!!"
kN : I need you to full fill this duty too!!
Suraj was shocked to hear the word "divorce" , even though he was behind her for divorce at this moment he felt very sad! With a heavy heart he nodded in yes and left from KN s room!
@chakor's house.
kasturi : you know chakoriya this is my 23rd kavarchaut! Kasturi said while preparing for karvachaut!
Chakor : wow maai it's a long journey!!
Kasturi : yaa! I still remember during our first karvachaut,your bappu also took fast for me and later he got gas trouble
Changan who entered the house with bhuvan and chakor started laughing hearing this and bhuvan was shying away...
Chakor : I never knew my baapu is soo romantic...chakor said while controlling her laughter.
Changan : Wait a sec!! This is chakors first karvachaut right?
Chakors face fade hearing this ,surajs face was coming on her mind! She rembered their cute njokh jhok...he calling her wild cat,their wedding night...she was missing him madly!!

Kasturi who found chakor lost, to change her mood asked her to go out for a walk!
Mean while Suraj was in his jeep going to chakors house with divorce papers.

Suraj's POV

Many things changed in my life ..!! Its like my life took a 360 turn...From an animal,I started living the life of a human!! I only cared for myself,my happiness,my problems!!! But when I saw chakor sacrificing her life to save three of us... I was shocked! How can someone put their life in stake.. But she did! She always showed the meaning of LOVE and LIFE to me ...but at those time I was blind...but now when I can see the truth around me ,she is going away!!...Its only a week since she left haveli but everything seemed to be so gloomy ,on top of that papa and ragini is back to trouble us...why are they in a hurry than us ,for our divorce...urghh I will kill that ragini devil one day!! She would have instigated papa for our divorce!! I don't know why I am feeling soo much pain!! And anger !!! As if I gonna loose ...her...I don't understand anything!! Now when I look at my life ... I think the girl who always irritates me! The girl whom I have hated once to core ! The girl whom I love to fight whole life...she is the only fun and happiness in it! ! I feel like I am going to be left alone!!

Chakor who was walking saw the village people preparing for karvachaut,which is tomorrow...chakor then remembers changans word...its my first karvachaut and I am...no!! Why should I think of fasting and for whom?? She said trying to coverup her thought and to console herself deep inside she wishes to take fast for suraj!!
Then she saw suraj jeep coming!! She was on cloud 9 .but she don't know the reason for her happiness!!her excitement!!Suraj step out of jeep and moved towards her...( Raabta song plays in bg) suraj &chakor both of them smile seeing each other.chakor is little bit blushing when she saw suraj staring @her!
Both of them came back to senses and started their tom&jerry show!
Chakor : So what is Mr.Rajvanshi doing here? She asked with raising eyebrow!
Suraj instantly shot " Just came to meet Mrs.Rajvanshi" suraj just realized what he said and bite his tongue!
Hearing this Chakor turn red ,but she control her self .
Chakor : So you started missing me huh?
Suraj : Me missing you...hahaa not even in dreams! I think its not me but its you who is missing me ...he said raising his eyebrows naughtily! And coming close to her!
Chakor : she playfully pushes him and said how can I miss a bore person like you she shot with a smrik!
Suraj : whom did you call bore? Me ?
Chakor : ya you are soo boring!!
Suraj : I am best in everything!
Chakor : Really ! Then prove it?
Suraj : hmmm...challenge accepted!! But on one condition if I am succesful in entertaining you ! Then you gotta do what I say...suraj said naughtly
Chakor then remembers the scene where suraj is asking a kiss from her! She was shocked and thought ,is he planning to ask it again!.ohh god what will I do now!!
Suraj from her silence realized what's she thinking and said "Not that one"
Chakor felt awkward and shy hearing his reply and noded to him accepting his challenge.
Suraj : So let's go!
Chakor : where?
Suraj : You only challenged me now ! So I thought to take you out!what do you say?
Chakor : that's cool! Let me inform maai &baapu
Suraj : Done !

Suraj is living his time with her, he forgot about the divorce and is much excited to go out with chakor! Let's see what destiny store for them!
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PRECAP : SUKOR DAYOUT#

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it , you write really well when will you update next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Thahaanfan

Loved it , you write really well when will you update next part


here is the second part

Suraj was walking to and fro like a pendulum and is waiting for chakor about half an hour!! He was getting angry and was about to go to her house...when he saw Chakor moving towards him...He was awestruck seeing her beauty... She was wearing a yellow anarkali and some light jewel complimenting them .Her hair was left open and is dancing to the tunes of wind! Her deep brown eyes which is shying away without meeting his eyes is driving him crazy!! As she was moving Closer to him ,his heart beat was increasing.
Chakor was blushing like hell seeing suraj staring at her!She turned to a Red tomato from mango

Suraj's POV

Just before I was angry at her for being late but now I think I would wait for a thousand year to see her like this ...I don't know why I took my jeeptoday, kakka told me to take bike ,as its longtime I had a ride on it...chakor calls me right ,I am a idiot...Suraj then dreamt of him going in bike with chakor!

Now chakor came near to him and was standing in front of him,Suraj was looking at her lovingly.chakor also looked up to see him and their eyes meet...they were having a cute eyelock...their eyes were speaking to each other!!they were speaking about the unknown feeling in them for each other...both of them came back to senses and composed themselves ...there was an awkward silence between them which was broken by Suraj .
Suraj :get in fast!
Chakor : But where are we going?
Chakor said while sitting in jeep! They beginned their journey
Suraj : you will see when we reach,now no more questions ! Its already late. Don't know why ?girls take so much time to get ready...

Chakor :, you mean I took long time to get ready
Suraj : Wow chakor your tube light Glowed early today! He said while switching on headlight.
Chakor innocently said I only took 5 minutes ...
Suraj : 5 minutesmy foot!!you were getting ready as if you are going out with your bf...he said with a smrik
Chakor : you are complaining as if you are my bf ...she smriked back!

Suraj : I was stupid to wait for you!
Chakor : better late than ever...I came late... and you realized late that you're a stupid!! Chakor said while controlling his laughter!
Suraj : you are Impossible!!
Chakor : you tooo

Suraj was simultaneously driving and fighting with chakor!
The only word to describe suraj feeling is happiness ...the biggest asset in a persons life is to be loved,cared and Pamperd by someone.suraj has always carved for love in his life...he never showed it but deep inside he was longing for a happy life when it was denied or not given he became an animal! He forgets everything when she is around him!The time they spend their unending fights are the only reasons in his life to smile!
Back to sukor! ...chakor Is speaking like a nonstop radio and eating Suraj's brains..
Chakor : offo I am getting bored ...she said dramatically
Suraj looked at her with a question mark look and turned the jeep towards right ,they now entered a village close to aazadhghanch the time was about 7:00pm.mean while chakor continued her drama to irritate suraj.
Chakor's POV
Its time to have some fun!!! I will teach this idiot a lesson .He always irritates me now its my turn .see what I do to you Mr.Rajvanshi.

Chakor : come on Suraj ,Sing for me! She said cutely
Suraj : What ?
Chakor : I know your dumb!but deaf tooo

Suraj give her a death glare and she gives him a smrik...which he find little fishy!
Suraj in mind ...Ohh god what's she up to! I don't know when this wild cat get violent.What's cooking on her head! I am sure she is planning something to irritate me but.. why she asked me to sing
Suraj : Me & Singing. Are you gone mad!
Chakor : You have to sing!
Suraj :No way!
Chakor : So then admit that you loose the challenge!chakor asked while giving a evil smile
Suraj was dumbstruck to hear the word "Challenge"...he litrellaly forgot about that ...
Now suraj is Simultaneously driving the jeep,fighting with chakor,boiling his head to escape from challenge but he know he is trapped and is biting his nails also!!
Chakor was laughing inside, seeing his state .
She then started asking him to dance and sing ...etc. And is irritating him more and is having lot of fun! But after sometime suraj is giving no heed to her.He is ignoring her and is driving off silently. This irked chakor she cannot bear his silence . she is doing this much ,only to grab his attention! But instead he is ignoring her! She is hurt,she don't know the reason.She cannot bear his ignorance. She at least wanted him to try singing or anything to entertain! But his cold reaction make her feel that ,she is not important to him!
Chakor : you were saying that you are best in everything! What happens now?why are you ignoring me? If you cannot fullfill the challenge why did you aacept it? You are boring and will Remain boring...she said little angrly...Learn something from vivaan ..how he care for imli and look after her! ...
Suraj stopped the jeep.chakor was shocked by his sudden justure.Both of them are sitting in jeep . Suraj looked at her and said
Suraj : You are behaving like a typical wife's!! He said with a smile and raising his eyebrows...
Chakor was puzzled with his behaviour and later understood that he was acting to be ignorant
Chakor : you are a idiot! I won't talk to you!
Suraj starts laughing holding his stomach and mocked how she shouted "Learn something from vivaan". Chakor was embarassed. She felt shy and then started laughing with suraj.she hitted on his shoulder and he shouted cutely ouchh ouchhh
Chakor : stop your drama ...dramebaazz!you know how much I was hurt when...
She stopped realizing what she said and remained mum.Suraj was happy hearing this ,he was happy to know that his ignorance matters to her!that means he matters to her! Chakor was cursing herself for speaking her hear out!
Chakor who is sitting was facing away from suraj to avoid his eye contact. Suraj who is in the driver seat moved close to her,chakor could feel his hot breath on her neck ! Now chakor turned her face and both are facing each other!
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PRECAP : #SUKOR'S DANCE # ROMANCE

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey :) both the parts were super cute 😳 also I was wondering are you on wattpad?? (I'm sorry I didn't mean to pry)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Their fights are so cute! Loved the two pieces! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Both parts were great,do update it soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good going! SuKor ki cute nok-jhok! And they're already falling for each other! Lovely story, update next part asap ; )
-Sanu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Immaturebookie

Hey :) both the parts were super cute 😳 also I was wondering are you on wattpad?? (I'm sorry I didn't mean to pry)


Yeah, are you? Because I am😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Immaturebookie

Hey :) both the parts were super cute 😳 also I was wondering are you on wattpad?? (I'm sorry I didn't mean to pry)


i cant get u
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Posted: 8 years ago
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part -3

The moon was smiling brightly seeing Sukor. Our lovely couple are now in a village named gavi,close to aazadhghanch. This place is known for its beauty, with grassy hills and mountains that freshen up the atmosphere. The Rivers that move down to infinity...each and everything are now brighten up by the dim moonlight!!
Sukor are in jeep facing each other, Suraj came more close to her,they were only millimeters !! Suraj was looking into her eyes with much love,affection and hope!!
Suraj : Do my ignorance matter to you? Do I matter to you?
He cupped her face ,tears were rolling down from her eyes and he cannot bear it...
Suraj : Once I used to be the reason for your tears but now its changed!
He slowly wiped her tears ,chakor is looking at him with much love and passion.She is melting on his sweet jestures!

Suraj then continued I wanna know chakor,I I wanna know Why you care for me Why my ignorance hurt youWhy you trust me! Why you Saved me I need answers to these questions...
Chakor looked at him with mixed emotion,she don't know what to say or how to react...
Chakor : it's nothing like that Suraj ! I didn't meant like that...She said without looking at his eyes!
Suraj : If you couldn't answer me at least answer your self !
Suraj found chakor sad! He brought her here to make her happy &to have fun .But what had happens now..she is sad and its all because of him.He then thought of Something!!
Chakor was in deep thoughts . she asked her self! Does he matters to me? Do I care for him ? Why can't I tolerate his ignorance.Why did I cry ? ... I feel soo much happiness, exitement and madness when I am around him? Why my heart skip when he is close by... I don't know ...I think I am thinking too much,its all misundestandings due to situations .I should talk with Suraj and clear everything ...she came back to senses and found suraj no where ,luckily the jeep was close to a street light but rest things all around were darkness! She got scared and is worried about suraj!She then senses a person,little far away from the jeep...the person is standing under need a tree..she cannot see him due to darkness...
Many bad thoughts were cracking in her head ...With broken voice she yelled,!!
Chakor : S...U...R.A..J! Is it you?j
No response came from the person. Chakor got more scared... the person was standing ,with his back him is facing towards her...chakor looked at the person with fear,curiosity & anticipation...
Then the person starts whistling !! And he turned and is coming towards the jeep!! Chakor is trying hard to see his face...as she cannot due to darkness!! Then the person came to light and is smiling naughtily...Its our Suraj ,He then put the song MATARGASTI in speaker on his phone and started dancing to the tunes!!
Chakor's mouth was wide opened seeing suraj's this side.
The music plays!!!

Matargashti khuli sadak mein
Tagdi tadak bhadak mein
Aule girre sulagte se
Sulagte se sadak mein
Chatri na thi bagal mein
Aaya hi na akal mein
Ke bhage hum ya bheege hum
Akkad mein toh socha phir
( suraj pulled chakor out of the jeep...he cutely forward his hand for a dance ,chakor showed him fake anger for troubling her...he then kept his hands on ears and started dancing around her!!)
Geela hua hain wo sukhana ho ho ho..
Chahe janana ya mardana ho ho ho..
Attention!
Phenka naya paansa
Phir de gayi jhaansa
Ainveyi mujhe phaansa
Teri aisi ki ho taisi zindagi
( now suraj forcibly made her dance ,he twriled her and turn her around..chakor was happy deep inside but showed anger on her face...now suraj came closer to her and whisperd in her ears "Sorry"she was shivering by his closeness.. His voice made her heart to skip...and both were looking at each other and are having a cute eyelock)
Phenka naya paansa
Phir de gayi jhaansa
Ainveyi mujhe phaansa
Chirkut zindagi you know
Na na na..
ting ding ding ting ding da..
Tu hi hai wo
Jis se khela tha main kho kho khela thappo
Tu hai Laila, Shirin, Sohni, Juliet
Sunlo! mujhko dhundo na jungle mele mein
Whatsapp pe hoon ha ha ha..
Na tera na mera zamana ho ho
Na ye zanana na mardana ho
Pakad paana

( chakor who sensed their closennes pushed suraj and was composing her self but lately she realized that suraj was on ground blabbering "fatso wild cat"...she give him an angry look and forward her hand for help.Suraj hold her hand and give her a smrik...she was confused by his reaction...all her confusion got clear when he pulled her too on the ground!!She looked at him angrily but suraj started laughing holding his stomach.. ...Now suraj got up and forwarded his hand for her help!! She thought to do the same, pull him on the ground...but before she could hold, suraj took his hand and showed her his tongue!! ...)

Chakor : you idiot ,I will kill you? She yelled at suraj and started chasing him...
Suraj : Someone plzz save me from this Wild cat!!!
They were running ,then suddenly chakor was going to fall and suraj holder her in right time. Chakor hands were on suraj chest and suraj was holding her by waist ...chakor looked at him and both have an eyelock...he was completely lost in her beautiful eyes ,through which he could see himself...
After sometime Chakor came to sense & is trying to free herself from suraj, but he was in his own world thinking about their lovely moments...
Chakor : Suraj!! Suraaajj!!eyy helloo...
Suraj :No response
Chakor then shakes himm
Suraj : No response
Chakor finally stepped on his foot with her high heeled shoes...
Suraj: mummmyyy!!!!
Chakor was laughing seeing his state...suraj was standing in one leg , holding his other and is jumping in pain!!!
Suraj : hey you fat cat,I saved you from falling and you kept your elephant leg on my soft leg!!
Chakor : you idiot!! How dare you call me that!!
Suraj confused "what"
Chakor : angrily yelled Fat
Suraj : what ,when did I call you fat...fat no way ...fat huhh...fat really ..let me see you...you look little fat! But I won't call you fat! Becozzz faaatt...
Chakor : you monkey!donkey !fool!..stop it ..now you said it a 100 hundred time ...your impossible!! I don't wanna talk to you...
Saying this she walked angrily and suraj is calling her from behind
Suraj :hey fat cat...chakor turned back and glared at him..he said " I mean wild cat" he give her a idiotic smile and is walking behind her through the village...
Suraj : after walking behind this wild cat I became a hungry cat hey wild cat stop!! I am hungry...
Chakor : What? Really? Till now you were eating my brain and still hungry...she said aangrly
Suraj then saw a dhabha (hotel) near by..he pulled her and they made their way to dhabha...
Suraj whose stomach starts singing is at the peak of hungry he ordered mostly everything and raised his eyebrows to chakor to order...
Chakor : you have ordered for about 10 people , I don't think food is left ,for me too oder
Suraj : I was bearing you from evening ...so obviously I am hungry!!
Waiter was laughing seeing their njokh jhok
Suraj glared at her and signelled the waiter to get the food
When the food came suraj started gulping everything into his mouth and chakor was looking at him ...she was smiling seeing him eating like a kid !she remembered the old suraj...the arrogant, egoist and stone hearted man...whom she hated before and the person now sitting in front of her ,both have great difference... old suraj used to be the reason for her tears and this suraj leave no stone to make her smile! Chakors chain of thought was brokened by suraj who stuffed food into her mouth but her gaze was on him.They started chatting & eating.

After having food suraj took her to a hill top,the whole village could be viewed from there.such a pleasant sight to the eye,which is enhanced the moon light...the cold breeze touching their body is giving them goose bumps!! Chakors eyes were shining like a tiny star after seeing the view ,she looked at suraj said " its beautiful suraj,never seemed something like this,I feel like I can touch the sky and hold the moon who is smiling at me!"
Suraj looking at chakor and said " beautifull' and smiled!

Both of them sat their and spend whole night looking at the moon,where they could see each others face...
Morning:::
Moon has bid bye and now sun is waking up from his nap! Suraj worked up listening to the music of birds ,he found chakor sleeping peacefully on the ground close to him! He smiled at her and thought to bring coffee for her from the dhabha ...so he left to dhabha...chakor who was sleeping peacefully was disturbed my our Sun...she woke up and found suraj no where
Chakor : ohh god ! Not again!where did he go now ?
Saying this she also started walking,she thought may be he will be near the jeep!!soo she headed towards jeep!!
But to her badluck he was not their, in the mean time suraj with came to the hill with two glass of hot coffee...he was tensed as he didn't find chakor there!
Mean while chakor was near jeep...suddenly her eyes stuck to something inside the jeep.she took it from the jeep and tears were rolling down her cheek...it was like her world turned upside down!

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