New Asya OS - Shikaayatien (A super late Eid present)

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

Trailblazer

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Awesome OS Dear👏😊

I did not liked how Asad can't express his love while his mouth can't stop insulting her😡

Asad was jealous seeing Zoya wid Kabir but still keeps Tanu in his house. Hypocrite.

U did not showed others knowing Tanveer's true face

Loved how Asad accepted Zoya even on knowing she is Gaffur's daughter

Loved their confession scene in d end😃

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Awesome update

Loved reading it to the core

Beautiful concept and execution of plot

And lovely title. The best choice for this amazing work

I seriously love your writings

Please try to update your stories sooner

Will be waiting impatiently 😊

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Hello Jas...😊

Hope you are doing good...😳

Well Eidi agar aisi hoo toh ASYA Fans ke liye harr din hee EiD hogi...😎

This was an Amazing OS 👏

You see i must tell U this , that you know i am not a good judge about how good a Writer should be...but by reading your work...i can tell you that you are a very good Story Teller... , Yeh ASYA ka Asar hai yaa Real mein U aachi kahaniyan banati hoo woh toh nhi pata...but the way you write , your work in a way grabs our attention...👍🏼

This was also a very good take on ASYA's married life after that 10 day challenge...i mean this version is very good...and Innovative too...

But sincerely speaking , yeh Jealous karne ka idea khair aise fictional world mein chal jaata hai...par real life mein i really H.A.T.E this stupid thing...😡...aur mein jab bhi yahan stories mein bhi aisa kuch padtha hu na...meko bahut gussa aata hai...jaise i remember i think Aapi ki ek story thi recent waali #KAYA ki...jismein Zoya ko ek bimari thi...uss time ka track bhi meko bilkul pasand nhi tha...and also Noe's story ZPAD...i am soorry i am getting side tracked...but haa yeh mera view hai...isko padhke ignore kardena...sochna mat 😆😳...

You Know in addition to this wonderful plot...the GIF's selected were also spot on...and it also helped in imagining the scenes...so Good job their...👍🏼

Baki I loved reading this OS...👏

Thank You for counting and remembering me in that LIST...i am grateful to you for that..😊

Take Care..😃

Edited by MayurChan - 9 years ago

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Jassu this is like the cutest OS I have read...ahaha Asya already married still no confession..gafoor uncle beech mein kuding and Asya separation ...jealousy tracks..MU...silent tension between...

Shikaayatein...and then confession...

Sab kuch pack karke ek masala entertainer Bana diya tune...👏👏

Too good...

And yes one more thing thank you for mentioning me everywhere in your posts...

Love u inna saara...

And 3 4 OS likhde the unme set his is just one right ?

Rest u still have to post..

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Aur ha bhool gayi

Gifs to Ekdam dhaasu 😆

It enhances the story in a way...

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Pritha roy

@0Bella0

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Awsum plot dear
And the pics were cherry on top
loved reading it to core

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

This was so beautifully written

Love it

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Awesome !!!!

This is something I really loved to the core...beautiful read with those gifs...it gives the real feel to each scene...great job 👏👏

And the title...Shikaayatein...sounds so nice...

Loved everything about it...after all it has Jas's unique touch...

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Sabse lengthiest & kam response wali OS😆

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Eid present logon ko pasand nahi aaya tha zyada I guess thinking caps on🤔

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