New Asya OS - Shikaayatien (A super late Eid present)

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Hello Every1

Yes i know reading d title u must b think yeh kahan se jaag ke aa rahi hai 😆... but what 2 do I couldn't post it on time due 2 various reasons... & late hote hote yeh boht zyada hi late ho gya😳... But so what I've heard ki Eid ke ek week baad tak sab ek duje ke ghar wish karne jaate rehte hain... so samjho main tohfa lekeab aayi hun😉😆

So coming back 2 d topic this Os i wrote long back & when i couldn't post it many times i thought Eid ya mere B'day pe daal dungi... but hilariously dono nikal gaye 🤣 but jo bhi hai This OS is now out & I hope u all enjoy this very very late Eid present 😃


& Han Eid Mubarak 2 a
ll my frnds out here jinko main wish nahi kar paayi 🤗🤗

This OS is dedicated 2 a long list of ppl wid whom i share a really special bond we called frndship. Some r still active & some left but they all meant so much. I wanted 2 recall those days again so i mentioned all names who inspired & whom i met through their stories or when i turned writer & became really close.

Allo, Ashi, Tehsu, Rada, Binnu, Aish(Aishwarya),Depu, Mona aka Chnadni, J (Klondy), Mayur, Bano Jaana, Annie, Adu, Juhi, Aju, Trisha, Shailu,

Affu, Sara(Pinky), Yum yum, Sam di, Suri, Geeta, Marina(MrMrsAsyakhan), Juliet , Sarita, Aishwa, Srashti, Jhilmil(nikki), Titir, Bubble, Amna, Ashii, Kassur, Pia, Simran, Swapno, Chahat, Choco & Nims, Uma(Azo7), Ankie, Tamara, Playgirl, Noe


If I've missed some1 I'm extremely sorry😳 I m typing it in hurry jo bhi yaad the daal diye...phir yaad aaye toh I'll add again😉😃



U ppl have viewed this thread more than 400 times when i noiced that i was like what but it was funny too I m sure sabke reactions khali thread dekhke yeh honge😆😆


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But on 1 side this also shows their r still so many readers in this forum woh likes/ prefers 2 stay hidden 😆 & yes sorry too looks like this OS was very Sharmili muh dikhayi ke liye ready hi nahi thi🤣🤣 Ab kaan pakad ke main esse le aayi hun 😆... who will believe i have written this 9 months back😲 & 9 mahine baad iski delivery ho rahi hai like a baby🤣
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~*~ Shikaayatien ~*~


Khan industries was buzzing with activity. Employees were entering & moving towards their respective desks. Some were mingling together wishing & having casual conversations with their friends. But today was a bit different day as there was an interesting topic which was floating in the office which was connected to their boss & his new but very dear employee. Although gossiping anything unrelated to work was strictly prohibited by the boss yet they couldn't stop themselves.

Asad Ahmed Khan owner of the company entered the office & everyone hushed altering their conversation. Everyone wished him as he was walking inside towards his office. But Asad was no fool, he could easily sense the change in atmosphere. The way everyone stopped talking as soon as he entered & were looking at him & the hint of amusement on their faces clearly gave them away that they were probably discussing about last night.

Closing his jaw tightly making his muscles move with the movement he moved towards his cabin. As he entered, he kept his briefcase down a bit harshly on the table. Prasad came hurriedly & greeted him politely guessing him to be in foul mode seeing his rigid posture.

-Good Morning Sir. Prasad wished him.

-Morning. Has she arrived? He directly asked.

-No..Not yet... What's wrong sir? Has she done something? He asked concerned as he was Asad's most loyal employee & well wisher for a long time & knew about their delicate relation.

Asad gave him an angry stare shutting him up.

-Sorry sir!... Do you want me to call her?

-No when she comes just send her to me.

-Yes sir.

With that Prasad went out of his cabin.

After few minutes of calming himself Asad got back to his work.

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It was 12 in the morning yet there was no news of her. She was never this late infact she always managed to be in the office on time & sometimes before him. Than what happened today? Asad wondered. Will she be alright or was she embarrassed of what happened last night. Asad was angry in the morning but it turned to confusion & now to worry because of her absence.

Asad has just lifted his phone to call her to check when Prasad knocked & told him about Zoya's arrival. Asad heaved a sigh of relief nodding politely asking him to send her in.

10 minutes later when she didn't come Asad got up from his seat to meet her. He came out of his cabin & came towards Zoya's desk who was busy in some work. He stopped right behind her chair & she looked up sensing his presence.

-I asked you to come to my cabin.

Zoya opened her mouth to answer but he didn't let her continue

-Come to my cabin right now! Saying so he quickly walked back to his cabin.

Zoya gulped nervously knowing what will come next as she was very well aware of his temper. What she did last night was outcome of her anger & ego but was wrong & absolutely uncalled for. But what's done is done she can't change that & has to face the consequences now of her unreasonable behavior.


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Knocking softly she walked inside the lion's den silently praying to her Allah Miyan to save her from the angry lion. As she entered she noticed all the blindfolds were drawn & Asad was standing facing the wall size mirror making her face his back. His squared shoulder & rigid posture tensed her but she was not going to get intimidated.

-May I know why you did that last night? Asad asked in his intense voice breaking her chain of thoughts.

-Kal raat?...Kya kiya maine Mr Khan? She asked calmly trying to mask her nervousness.

-Don't try to act innocent Zoya. You know what i mean? I m asking you why you pulled that stunt last night? He sounded quite angry but still holding onto his composer.

-I don't understand what are you talking about.

-I m talking about that Kabir guy you were so happily hanging around with last night, not caring that i was also present in the damn place. He finally turned raising his voice a bit.

-Don't raise your Voice like that Mr Khan, I can talk more loudly than you. Zoya retorted back. And what you are thinking is absolutely wrong. I was not doing anything wrong, he's just a family friend. She replied nonchalantly.

-A family friend? It wasn't looking like that last night. He said menacingly


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- I admit he was behaving a bit out of the line.

-a bit?


She ignored him & continued speaking trying to sound convincing.

-But what i could do? Abbu asked me to accompany him at the party & i was just being nice to him.

-For god sake don't make such silly excuses. I don't have any problem with you being nice to the whole world but you were doing that purposely just to show me how much you are happy without me & how much you are enjoying that stupid Kabir's company?

-That's not true. You r just assuming things. She defended.

-Don't lie Zoya cuz you know you can't. I just don't get why you go to such extents to insult me.

-Asad! She gasped.


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-Than what other possible reason there could be for you doing that. Care to explain? Kya wajah thi ki aapne humare rishte ka bhi lihaaz nahi kiya Zoya. He questioned with hurt voice.

-Rishta!... kaisa rishta Asad. Except for the world we know there is no relation between us. Zoya said with pain.

-How could you say that? Asad said heart & voice filled with pain.

-why isn't that true? You tell me do you really care? Do you feel anything for me?


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Asad remained silent.

-Rishta jodna jitna asaan hai Asad nibhana utna hi mushkil? Aur humara rishta judke bhi adhura hai aur shayad adhura hi rahega. Khair that shouldn't be important cause we both know why we went ahead with that right. Atleast now you will be happy that the girl you disliked the most is out of your house & your life. Boht khush honge aap bhot bhot khush.


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Tears were streaming out of Zoya's beautiful eyes but she didn't care to wipe them & ran out of his cabin towards the terrace, her secret place where she many times went to lighten her heart & started crying.

For the first time she poured her heart out to Asad about what was in her heart. She was hell tired with all the facade. They were married for God sake...

She did purposely behaved sweetly with Kabir ignoring Asad cuz she thought maybe seeing her doing that Asad will get jealous & confess his feelings.

Kabir was her father's close friend's son & meeting with him once she realised he's a nice guy & when she told him about Asad & her & asked for help he happily agreed. Only in the party when he saw Asad he got scared seeing his well built body. Every time he & Zoya used to do secret talk after seeing Asad & his reactions seeing them together, he used to sweat saying he will be dead today which made Zoya laugh out loud but sadly instead of confessing Asad assumed her enjoying some other man's company.

She agreed it wasn't even his fault being in the circumstances they were in anyone will react this way. She did that to jealous him in which she succeeded but was disappointed because the result which she wanted she couldn't get.


She was just feeling sad for both of them. One change in their life turned everything upside down. And they themselves were also equally responsible for the situation landed upon them. Yet she had hoped that her idea would work. She felt like everything was going wrong & was fearful of their future.


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Asad was left speechless with Zoya's emotional outburst. He knew she would never do something senseless which could tarnish their family's reputation yet he couldn't control his emotions. Last night seeing her laughing & enjoying Kabir's company pricked his heart. And adding salt to it was her ignorance towards him. Yes he was not expecting her to run through the crowd & hug him tightly. OK! Mayb he would loved that; but still he wished that atleast she would behave nicely.

But now he knew she wanted him to accept his feelings by making him jealous. A soft smile played on his lips thinking she did succeeded in her task it was just his reservations to not speak his heart out which failed her plan. A chuckle escaped automatically thinking she rightly call him Emotional challenged & than he laughed lightly thinking how he now started thinking like her too.

But all amusement left his features when he remembered his ammi's warning. It was Eid the next day & she wanted Zoya her one & only ladli bahu to be in her home & attend with them the Eid function. After hearing an earful from his ammi in the morning he left promising her to talk to Zoya today & see now he has worsened their situation much more. He so wanted to know about last night that he upset her unintentionally & she will now probably not want to talk to him. Great just great this day can never get worst than this.

He sit back in his chair losing his tie a bit leaning his head on headrest to relax himself. And soon things which led both of them to this situation started coming back in his mind.


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Everyone in the family was so happy after Asad & Zoya said qubool hai to each other entering the sacred bond of Nikah. Although both pretended that all this was nakli & they were doing it for Dilshaad but both in their hearts knew that what they have done was real.

Between all this merriment 1 person was very angry & disappointed & that was the stone eyed cat aka Billo rani Tanveer. She tried all her schemes to stop the Nikah but failed. Even her master plan was a fail when she thought she will pretend sleeping with Asad on his wedding night as after doing the post marriage Rasam's Zoya devised a plan of her own, pretending that she is feeling sick & weak after the whole day functions. Thus Asad who was always her saviour decided to take care of her pleasing Zoya & his Ammi both.

But the happiness they shared was short lived as in her mad anger Tanveer called Gaffur revealing that Zoya is his daughter. Gaffur who was searching for her since years became elated & decided to bring her home not realising she's married now.

The same night he came shocking the Khan's but what shocked Zoya more was when Asad said she should go with his father.

But Only he knew how difficult it was for him to do that. How both of them thought that they will finally confess & start their life happily & here they were separated with a cruel twist of fate.

Asad's sole aim was to let Zoya chose herself as he knew how much she has carved for her father's love. And he himself promised her that he will help her in finding her father & now when she found him than how could he become selfish asking her to stay with him. His hatred for Gaffur was nothing for him compared to the love he has for her but she needed to make this decision herself. He was blinded by his confidence & ego that she will accept him & his family on her own.

On the other hand Zoya wanted him to stop her from going with her father. Yes she was happy to meet her father. Just in One day of her life she got her past & future together but lost 1 relation as well. She misread him that he doesn't want to accept her because she's Gaffur's daughter who she knew he hate so much. But she was not at fault & she should not be punished for her father's crime. But who was she kidding her hopes fell when Asad asked her to go with her father.

Thus both of them misread their actions & letting their ego cloud their judgment reacted accordingly. Zoya decided to leave hoping Asad will stop her which he didn't letting both of them to suffer in agony.

However cruel Gaffur be but he was a weak man when it comes to his daughters. In just one meeting he realised that Asad & Zoya loves each other and he wanted them to always stay happy but when he saw them not stopping each other he promised himself that he will unite them somehow cause he doesn't want to be the reason of ruing her daughter's life whom he got after years of separation.

The only person who was happy at that moment with all this was Tanveer who assumed that Asad hates Zoya after knowing her to be Gaffur's daughter. So she started playing her docile act to gain everyone's affection. She thought that soon the day will come when Asad marry her after divorcing Zoya & her dream of getting married to a rich man will come true.

For two whole days Dilshaad & Njma didn't speak with Asad blaming him for all this but once they knew his reasons they cried for both of them. Zoya on the other hand was always sad not even the Khan siblings or the presence of her long lost father cheered her mode.

But she also couldn't stay away from Asad so after suffering for 1 whole week after her marriage she came up with an idea of starting to work. When Gaffur suggested her to join his business she refused saying she already had job in DC, the one for which Asad gave her latter during her Visa issues. Knowing why his daughter wants to work there Gaffur agreed. So she joined & from last 1 month was working there.

No one in the staff except Prasad knew about their marriage which they themselves kept secret to avoid unnecessary gossip in office. Till now everything was well but Asad & Zoya's closeness, their electrifying chemistry could not be hidden from anyone's eyes. And this leads to hushed whispering amongst the staff members on their strict boss melting for bubbly Zoya's charm. Someone in the staff got wind of last night's events thus the topic was being discussed today in the morning. But the full truth of them being married is still a secret.

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Ringing of the phone brought Asad out of his thoughts. Seeing his Ammi's name flashing he sighed knowing he have to hear a lot of scolding now.




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It was Eid's night people were celebrating their most celebrated festival with great joy & enthusiasm. They were wishing & hugging each other. Laughter was echoing & every face was reflecting happiness. After a whole month of keeping fasts & praying to Allah for always been there showering his dua's, people were delighted & enjoying the festival.

Asad has hosted the Grand Eid celebration party. It was organized in the Sunshine orphanage the one he sponsors & his mom was an active volunteer of. From the last three years he was doing so for the children & many rich people supports him as well in the novel cause. Dilshaad was proud of her son & his accomplishments. He not only reached heights in his career but also was very humble & kind for always being there for doing such nice works.

Asad was present with Dilshaad & Najma. Meeting with everyone accepting their wishes being the nice hosts. All of them were missing Zoya very much today. Asad couldn't talk to Zoya as she left office the other day after their little argument in his cabin. She was not picking his calls & even refused to talk to him when he tried talking through Ayaan.

Dilshaad was the saddest with it after all it was their family's 1st Eid after the Nikah. She knew there were so many problems but she hoped that Zoya will come. She knew her idiot Son was EC just like Zoya says but she wished atleast she would be there with them on Eid.

It wasn't like they haven't met her after she left KV. She came to meet them many times in Home whenever Asad was not there and even arranged to meet many times for their lunch & shopping sprees which they were sure Asad didn't knew about. Only if they knew...

But there was no use of being sad & especially on Eid so she just wishes wherever Zoya stays she always stay happy & blessed. Sending a silent pray to the almighty she pressed her eyes when a small girl came running asking for sweets & she became busy with her..


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Asad was greeting some guests when Tanveer came from the side wishing & including herself in their conversation which Asad didn't liked. These days he used to feel irritated whenever he sees her anywhere close to him. He knew she was his friend but he was a married man now & he doesn't like when she forcefully takes care of him. Many times he tried to avoid her infact tried to ignore her presence as well but she was too chipko to have notice it on her own that Asad doesn't like her presence everywhere around him.

Sometimes he feels guilty as if he was committing some crime behind Zoya's back. She was his wife & the only one who has the right to take care of him or be by his side. Just like at the moment he wished it was Zoya standing beside him but seeing Tanveer instead spread anger across his body. He was just about to scold her when a business associates wife Mrs Bhalla who was Punjabi & was funny woman & loves dressing in bright colors spoke..

-Oh wow Mr Khan is she your wife?

-Nahi...

Everyone heard a loud sound & turned towards it. They saw a lady dressed beautifully in a tomato red colour floor length Anarkali with a heavy matching Dupatta.


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Light breeze was making her soft tresses blow softly. She took slow measured steps eyes locked with Asad's & sweet smile on their faces walked straight towards where Asad was standing. Effortlessly ignoring Tanveer who was seething in anger. Pushing her out of her way she comes to stand with Asad.

-Maaf kijiyega but Mr Khan ki biwi main hun Zoya, oops Mrs Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan or you can call me Zoya, Mrs. Khan whatever you like. She came & linked her arms with Asad answering cheerfully to the lady.

-Oh I m so sorry Mrs Khan. It was really nice meeting you. I m Mrs Bhalla.

-Same here Mrs Bhalla. Eid Mubarik

-Same to you Dear. And Mr Khan aapki wife toh boht hi Khubsurat hai. Aapko chand dekhne ki kya phikar aapke paas toh aapka Khud ka Chaand hai. She started laughing & others too joined her while Asad smiled & Zoya blushed. You both make a wonderful pair. Rabb kare Aapki jodi hameha yun hi bani rahe.

-Thank Mrs Bhalla. Both Asad & Zoya said at the same time & Zoya hugged her as well wishing Eid once again.

Zoya excused herself seeing Dilshaad at a distance & literally ran to meet her. Seeing Zoya Dilshaad & Najma's happiness new no bounds. Both of them showered their love at her & tight hugs & kisses were complimentary. Zoya felt really overwhelmed with all the love. This was what she always carved for & it was this family only who showered it in abundance on her.

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Asad was watching her from a distance for a long time when he was mingling with people. Her radiant smile, those animated expressions & her cute pout filled his heart with content. His Ammi & Najma were also delighted to have her. He never saw them as happy as they were with her. He wished this happiness to stay forever in his home & he knew only Zoya can bring it by coming back. His Allah has given him 1 more chance & this time he was not going to lose it at any cost.


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He saw his Ammi going to meet some lady & made his way towards Zoya who was standing with Najma. Reaching close he cleared his throat to gain their attention.

-Tamatar you go i need to talk to Zoya. Yes after a little bit of effort & constant reminders by Zoya he started calling Zoya by her 1st name.

-No need Najma mujhe kisi se koi baat nahi karni. Zoya said to Najma refusing to even look at Asad.

-Zoya plz i need to speak something important. he urged.

-This is not office Mr Khan neither i m your employee. Therefore mujhepe koi bandish nahi hai kisi se bhi baat karne ki. Haina Najma.

She again said to Najma who was looking back & forth between the two lover's silly argument.

-Zoya mujhe aapse hum...Kuch personal baat karni hai. Aap plz...



Cutting him Zoya continued

-Najma...

-Enough. Asad said losing patience & hold Zoya's hand tightly. Najma see those Seekh kabaab's looks delicious go & try them & if u could control urself then save some for us also while me & ur Bhabhi finish with our talk. Saying so Asad started moving taking Zoya with him towards the terrace to have a peaceful place to talk.

He missed to see Najma who was sweetly scolding her Bhaijaan for pulling her leg but when her eyes landed on the Kabaab counter her mouth watered & she ran towards it forgetting her anger.

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Zoya who was constantly blabbering for Asad to leave her hand & punching him also with the tiny fists of her free hand snatched her hand out of his hold as soon as they reached the terrace.

-Allah Miyan what's wrong with you Mr Khan. ouch! my hand. Aap Insaan hain ke stone man. Itna zor se koi pakadta hai bhala. She cried.

-I m sorry Zoya. Wait let me see. Asad said concerned & comes closer trying to reach for her hand.

-No need Mr Khan. Jab apne solid haathon main haath liya tha tab sochna tha. Zoya said trying to hide her hand which was actually not that hurt she was just overacting to tease him.


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-I said I m sorry! Asad said looking guilty.

-It's Ok mujhe nahi chahiye aapka sorry thanku na kuch aur.. She said continuing her victim act giving stress on the word Kuch aur.


She turned & pretended to walk away when Asad held her hand again.

-Par mujhe chahiye. Aur jab tak meri baat puri nahi ho jati main aapko kahin nahi jane dunga.

Zoya remained silent & Asad assumed it his cue to continue.

-Aapko kaise pta chla is party ke baare main?

-Kyun ab aapko isse bhi problem hai Mr Khan? Zoya turned outraged with his question.

-I didn't mean that Zoya. Why you always misunderstand everything i say?

-Than why don't you say clearly what you mean? Jo baat dil main hai aap Jubaan pe kyun nahi late.

Both stared in each others eyes searching for answer to their unspoken questions? After few minutes they averted their eyes.

-Uff main bhi kis se expect kar rahi hun. Zoya huffed & whispered to herself.

-I know kal ki baat pe aap gussa hain & I m really sorry for that. But aapko hurt karne ka mera koi intension nahi tha woh main bas..

-I know aap karte kuch hain aur kehte kuch aor Zoya said not letting him finish.

-Allah Miyan what's wrong with you both. Najma cried who was hiding behind a wall.

She came out along with Dilshaad who hit her head lightly for getting both of them caught.

-Ammi! Tamatar! Zoya whispered.

-Jee han hum! Najma boastfully said.

-Ammi aap yahan? Asad asked feeling embarrassed to be caught like this.

- Ab kya karen Asad itne dino se toh koshish kar rahe hain hum ki kab tum Zoya ko apni feelings btao taaki hum meri Bahu ki rukhsati karwake usse ghar le aayen lekin tum ho ki bas pucho mat. Aree Even a tortoise will be faster than you.

Both girls giggled heartily at Dilshaad's comment.

-Aur nahi toh kya bhaijaan bjaye iske ki main topic ki baat ki jaye aap dono toh sorry it's ok pe hi atke hain. Ya Allah Ammi mujhe toh sach main chakar aa rahe hain inke repeated dialogues sun sun ke. Waise Ammi ek idea hain kyun na hum ek kaam karen? Bhaijaan aur Zoya ko 1 handcuff main baandh dete hain aur 1 kamre main band kar dete hain phir jab tak yeh patch up nahi kar lete koi inhe bahar nahi nikalega.

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-Bilkul sahi kaha Najma, sach main tum dono na boht hi slow ho. Koi kahega ki tum dono ka Nikah ho chukka hai aur yahan dono se abhi tak apne dil ki baat hi share nahi ho rahi. Kya karun main tum dono ka.

-Par Ammi..Zoya tried to explain.

-Bas ab mujhe kuch nahi sunna. Boht seh liya hamne tum dono ki wajah se Mujhe meri Bahu ghar main wapas chahiye. Usse kaise lana hai yeh tumhari problem hai Asad. Get it? Dilshaad warned Asad pointing a finger at him.

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Asad nodded meekly.

-Ek baat aur Asad, agar tum Zoya ko nahi mna paye toh aaj khud bhi ghar aane ki koi zaroorat nahi. She gave the final ultimatum.

-Par Ammi..Asad started shocked with her threat, only to be ignored.

-Chalo Najma. Dilshaad turned asking Najma to follow.

-Best of Luck Bhaijaan. Najma showed thumbs up smiling encouragingly & left with Dilshaad.

Asad & Zoya was shocked & embarrassed after Dilsaad & Najma's surprise gate crashing their conversation. Both looked everywhere expect each other thinking what to do now. After few minutes pep talk Asad decided to break the silence as it was now or never.

-I m really happy ki aap aaj yahan aayi. Ammi aur Najma boht khush hain infact aaj kitne din baad maine unhein itna khush dekha hai. Asad began hesitantly.

-And you? Aap khush nahi hain mujhe dekh kar? Zoya asked innocently.. Han honge bhi kaise Aapko toh hamesha meri presence khatakti hai. she said sadly, face sobered looking at the ground.

-Aapko aisa lagta hai? Asad questioned shocked.

Zoya nodded still looking the other way.

-Bilkul galat lagta hai aapko. Aapke mere life main kya value hai yeh main aapko samjha hi nahi sakta. He truthfully told.


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-Liar, you r an absolute liar Mr Khan. Finally looking at his face she said. Agar aapko meri parvah hoti toh aap mujhe us din jaane hi nahi dete. But you! you didn't do that why? because you never wanted to marry me. Aapko toh main bilkul bhi pasand nahi thi. Meri dressing sense, meri soch, mera independent nature nothing. Aapne toh yahan tak keh diya ki I m a misfit. Her vision was blurring with the tears.

- And I was wrong. I was wrong all the time Zoya. Sach toh yeh hai that I had fallen for you the moment I saw u in Dargaah. Asad finally let it out getting teary eyed himself.


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Zoya sucked in a breath she didn't knew she was holding. In her emotions she said all her complaints to Asad. She always wished to hear his heart out but she never knew the day it will happen she won't be able to withstand the sweet pleasure of it.

Asad continued his confession not being able to keep his emotions at heart anymore. He doesn't wish Zoya to blame herself anymore. The word misfit effected her a lot & now he wanted to come clean to her that What he feels for her.

-Han Zoya yahi sach hai. Jo story maine us din Mr Bhatavdekar ko sunayi thi woh sach thi. Sab sach tha. Woh airport engagement, woh sari rasmein, Humara Nikah sab sab sach tha...hai. Kyunki main aapse Beintehaan Mohabat karta hun tabse jabse pehli baar aapko dekha tha. He revealed emotionally...Tab bhi jab KV main pehli raat aap galti se mere bed pe so gayin thi, Jab aapko Akram se bachaya tha, Jab Mangalpur main aapko almost kho diya tha. he shuddered remembering that...Woh har ek baar jab aapne meri Ammi ke chere pe muskaan bekeri thi tab bhi jab Najma ko bchane ke liye aap khud jail chali gayi thi, Jab aapne mujhe samjha tha jab meri Ammi tak mujhse naraaz thin aur tab bhi jab aapne apne silly Shayri se us makaan ko Khushiyon se bharkar apna bna liya tha.

-My Shayri is not silly Mr Khan. Zoya intruded with pout.


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-What..Zoya from all the things i said you chose to comment on that only. He asked in disbelief.

-So what do you want me to do dance like I won the world cup. Agar aap sach main mujhse pyaar karte hain toh mujhe kyun nahi roka aapne? kyun kaha jane ke liye? Zoya complained folding her hands & looking aside with a pout.

-Maine aapko ghar chodne ke liye nahi kaha tha Zoya i just wanted you to decide on ur own. I know Zoya how it hurts when you can't make your own choices. I know how u suffer many times when your choices are made by others & i didn't wanted you to suffer. You had your share of sufferings Zoya & I didn't wanted you to go through that again. That's why i just gave you choice to decide for yourself but what did you do? You also went away with your father not thinking twice of your actions & you call me EC.


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By the end of his speech tears were flowing from both their cheeks. Zoya stepped forward eliminating any distance between them & clutched his Kurta in her hands.

-I m sorry Mr Khan. I m so sorry. I thought you don't want to stay with me after knowing i m related to him. I thought you hate me now. She cried clutching his Kurta in her hold.

-I can't hate you Zoya. I never can. My love is not that weak. Asad assured her holding her face delicately in the palm of his right hand while the other was wrapping her waist.

-I know & I m sorry.

-Bas ab bas. Najma sahi hi keh rahi thi kab se hum bas sorry it's ok pe hi atke hain. Now I want to hear what i waited for so long now. So will you plz say those three magical words.


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-Par aap hi ne toh kaha you don't want to hear I m sorry. Zoya teased.

Asad gave him a NOT-SO-FUNNY-LOOK.

-Allah Miyan Mr Khan look at your face. Zoya teased trying to control her laughter but failing.

-Really I look funny to you. I'll go & find someone who will find me romantic enough. Waise bhi there are many beautiful girls out there tonight. Asad said to tease her back & removed his hands from her waist trying to free her.

Zoya took his hands which he was removing & encircled them back around her waist & again clutched his Kurta this time more tightly making their faces come really close & said angrily..

-Acha Aap jake toh dikhayiye mujhse door phir dikheye zra. Aur kiski itni Himat ki meri Shouhar ki taraf aank utha ke dekhe ankhen na nikal lun main uski. Zoya said angrily.

-Acha par aap aisa kyun karengi? If you don't love me than why will you do that han...Asad acted all confused & curious.

-Kyunki haq hai mera. Biwi hun main aapki. Aur aapse boht boht boht Mohabbat karti hun. Zoya said it with so much of sincerity & intensity that all amusement left Asad's features. Their eyes were locked with passion making it spread throughout their bodies. I love you Mr Khan...I Love you. She said again looking directly in his eyes.

-I feel blessed Zoya. I love you too.

After their intense declaration of love Asad pulled Zoya in for a passionate hug making their hearts rejoice in their ribcage beating in perfect sync with each other.

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Sound of the firecrackers made them come out of there embrace. Both of them looked at the sky which was shining brightly with many colours spitting after the rockets burst in the sky. Both smiled looking at it & than faced each other smiling lovingly.

-Eid Mubarik

-Eid Mubarik Jaan

Asad kissed her forehead & took her in his embrace once again while both of them looked at the sky once again enjoying the fireworks.



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Finally posted super duper long OS boht mushkil se cuz content was so long & i got so many warnings 😆 but finally ho gya...

Hope u enjoyed it... ignore grammatical errors plz... & yes Eid part main kuch mistake hui toh let me know I'll correct it😊...TC (bowing down ka bhi emo hona chaiye tha)

There won't be 2 much space so directly coming 2 point😳 Heartiest wishes from my side again🤗 & enjoy karo, Mast raho... par padne ke baad comnt zaroor karo🤣

1 saath 3 long long updts diye hain padne ko ab be genrous ok & han keep disturbing me 4 updts or my laziness will come back in action 🤣...Over & out😎

Edited by jas91 - 9 years ago
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IBP koi nahi padta meri story kyun khali pili res karti rehti hai 😕😆

khair i have so much unres pehle running 2 threads
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Boht boht Shukriya aapka😆🤗

Yeh thread kal unres hoga abhi lyt is about 2 go 😆 tab tak FS & FF enjoy karo PMs bhi kal ayenge😳...

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Beautifully written OS dear
Loved it
Thanks for pm in advance
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simply beautiful...LOVE it,
do write more
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Cute os
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Very nice

I liked it alot

Love the confession part

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