T2 Ariya FF::Na Sikha Jeena Tere Bina Hamdam..(Completed)

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sahirakapoor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#631

Very nice update

Plz update epilogue soon

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#632

Originally posted by: ramshaasrar
Behn pehle bata hi deti ke next update Las part hoga...
Pehle shock ek dam starting main likha hai (Last part) ...haueee dil.ko dhakka lags mushkil se samjhaya phir sage padha ..to kamal update tha...or ye wala Arjun kahan milega bas ye batado...kitni easily san Handel ker liya isne...pori family ko sambhal liya..bina kisi pareshani ke...just loved it...m waiting for epilogue

Dear..pehale bolti ke ye last part he toh shock kaise milta tumhe..n tumhe toh pata he ke muze shock dena pasand he..lols..

Aur aisa Arjun tumhe kahi nahi milega sivay mere story ke..lol..

So keep reading..

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#633

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwwsssmmm Ending
Loved It
Superbly Written
Emotionally Beautiful
Keep Writing

Thanks dear..

Stay tune to read epilogue

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#634

Originally posted by: cuteariya
mind blowing chapter
but sad to know its last part 😭
poor aditya it was hard for him to know abt his birth truth 💔
thank god sayesha accept aditya even after knowing his truth & convince him to go back to home 🤗
she was very understanding partner 🤗
it was emotional moment at ariya's home 😭
subhrato & shomita also accept aditya with open arms didn't care adi is their half brother 🤗
ariya families moment was cute at least shomita crack some joke 🤣
after that subhrato & adi tease shomita 🤣
yippee adtiya killed that demon altaf 🥳
wow sasha also didn't mind the truth all they care is adtiya & love him as much as they love sayesha 🤗
finally everything is perfect adi & sayesha happily got married ❤️
subhrato also joined police & got married 😃
as riya said subhrato & adi cried in shomita's bidaai 😭
now waiting for epilogue

Thank u dear..

Really sayesha is perfect for aadi..

Their relationship is same as ariya they are more friends than lovers..

Love between the family would never let them separate..

Stay tune to epilogue

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#635

Originally posted by: SJ001
Amazing update,loved it...thnx 4 pm

Thanks dear

Stay tune to read epilogue

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#636

Originally posted by: sahirakapoor
Very nice update
Plz update epilogue soon

Thanks dear

Will try to update epilogue soon

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Bloomie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#637

awesome update

sorry for late exams

loved it

jaise Arjun ne Riya ko sambhala waise hi Sayesha ne Aditya ko sambhaal liya

Sameer ne bhi Aditya ko assurance de diya

happy family reunion!!!

Aditya aur Shubrato hi sabse zyaada roye shomita ki biddai par

ye toh hona thi bhai-beha hote hi aise hai

cont soon

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#638

Originally posted by: bloomie
awesome update
sorry for late exams
loved it
jaise Arjun ne Riya ko sambhala waise hi Sayesha ne Aditya ko sambhaal liya
Sameer ne bhi Aditya ko assurance de diya
happy family reunion!!!
Aditya aur Shubrato hi sabse zyaada roye shomita ki biddai par
ye toh hona thi bhai-beha hote hi aise hai
cont soon

Love it..

Sahi kaha bhai behen Ka pyar aise hi hota he..

Stay tune to read epilogue

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#639

Part 54(Epilogue):-

After some more years..

Everything is going well..

Arjun,riya,sam,aayesha,choree,sakshi are retired persons now..n they are spending their live with peace n with their grandkids..

One day..

Arjun wake up from sleep..n found riya is sleeping..

He get fresh n come out of washroom..n still found riya sleeping..

Arjun:-pari...come on pari..wake up..chalo..walk pe jana he na..?

Riya flatter her eyelids lazily..

Arjun:-come on pari..ham grand parents ban gaye he..par abhi bhi muze hi uthana padta he tumhe..

Riya make puupy face..

Arjun (kiss her forehead):-good morning..

Riya smiles lightly..

Arjun:-kya hua pari..?u look tired..

Riya:- I m feeling so low today..

Arjun:-ok..u take rest then..

Riya:-no..mein uthati hu..

Saying this she get up from bed n walking towards washroom..but couldnt her head is spinning..

Arjun hold her on time..

Arjun:-pari..kya hua..?/

Riya:-jun..

Arjun:-shubhrato...aadi..aadii..

All rush to arjuns bedroom..they admit riya in hospital..

All others(samsha,shomita n her hubby,choree,sakshi)has also arrived..

Arjun is very much worried..

Aadi n shubrato giving each other support n wishing their mother would get well soon..

After sometime..

Doctor come out..

Arjun:-doctor..??how is she..??

Doctor:-her bp is very much low..sugar level also dropped..she has started sinking..

Arjun:-doctor..plz..do something..plz save her..

Doctor:-hamne bahot koshish ki he..but she is not responding to treatment..i m sorry..

Arjun(with teary eyes):-what do u mean by this..??

Doctor:-unke pass bahot hi kam samay he..aap chahe toh unse aakhri baar mil lijiye..

Shomita started crying..shubrato n aadi feeling the earth has snath beneath them..n arjun,,he has become numb n statue..

Sam:-aadi..subhrato..aao beta..apne maama se milo..

They some how make courage n goes to her room..

She slowly open her eyes..n found all around her..light smile crept on her lips..

Riya(soflty):-aadi..

Aadi:-mamma..

Riya:-apna..sayesha.baccho ka..khayal rakhna..subhrato..

Subhrto:-ha mom..

Riya:-khayal rakhna beta..aur aadi ,tumhara aur shomita ka pyar hamesha aisa hi rakhna..

Subhrato n adi get teary..

Riya(softly):-shomi..

Shomita come forwards..

Shomita:-mamma plz..aise baate mat karo na..aap thik ho jaoge..

Riya smiles lightly..

Riya:-shomita..apna khyal rakhna baache..

Shomita strated crying..

Riya:-jun..

Arjun sit near her..n hold her hand..

Arjun:-how could u..?tumne kaha tha tum muze chodke nahi jaogi..

Riya:-I m sorry jun..par sab dundala sa hota ja raha he..

Arjun:-pari..no..

Riya:-jun..u know..mein kehti thi na ke I just dont like ur sys dialogue..but actually I ..

Arjun:-I know..actually u love it..

Riya smiles lightly..

Riya:-aur..kayi baar gusse me mein kehti thi na..I just..just..

Arjun:-hmm..aur mein kehta tha hate me..??me too..

Riya:-par..mein..

Arjun:-I know..tum kabhi waha pe hate nahi kehna chahti thi issliye ruk jati thi..its always love..

Riya get teary..

Arjun:-aur mein bhi jo hate me..?kehta tha..woh actually..love me? hota tha ..aur me too..means I love u too hota tha..

Riya smiles with tears..

Arjun:-I love u..

Riya(very softly):-I love u too..

Arjun close his eyes n let the tears flow from them..

Riya(wisper):-look at me..

Arjun look to her..n their eyes meet..n the very next seconds her soul left her body..

Arjun:-pari..

He hug her...

Here shomita,subhrato n aadi has hug each other n crying very much..

Sam slowly walked to arjun..

Arjun still hugging riya..sam put his hand on arjuns back..

Sam(with heavy voice):-arjun..sambhal apne aap ko..arjun..

But arjun dont move..sam feels something different..neither he could hear arjuns crying..

Sam:-arjun...arjun..

He try to pull arjun away from riya..but couldnt he had hold her tightly..

Sam:-doctor..doctor..

Sam ki aawaz sunke baki sab bhi dekhne lagte he..doctor aate he..they make arjun properly lye on another bed..doctor check him..

Doctor:- I m sorry..he is no more..

All couldnt hold now..n strated crying very much..

Here..little far away from them..

Riya(soul) is looking to all her family..they are crying remembering her n arjun..

Arjun(soul )come to her..both look each other..

Riya(soul):-what is this jun..??tumhe rukna chahiye tha na..?hamare bacche kaise sambhalege khudko..??

Arjun(soul):-woh hamare bacche he..they are brave..woh dheere dheere sambhal jayege..

Riya stared him..

Arjun(soul):-aur kaise ruk jata tumhare bagair..?tumhare bagair jeena toh meine sikha hi nahi..

Riya(soul) smiles..

Riya(soul):-mein bhi tumhare bagair kaise aage ka safar katati..meine bhi kaha sikha he tumhare bagair rehna..

Arjun(soul )smiles..

Both look each other..

Dehleez pe mere dil ki..

Jo rakhe he tune kadam..

Tere naam pe meri zindagi..

Likh di mere hamdam..

Na sikha jeena tere bina hamdam..

Arjun(soul):-toh chale..??

Riya(soul) look back to her kids onces..arjun too look back them ..

Both then look each other..

Arjun(soul) forward his hand..riya(soul) gives her hand in his..n both started floating towards a stream of light to begin their new journey..

END..

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#640

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Hi everyone..

So here this story ends..

Hope u like it..

I hadnt thought ke ye story likhna mere liye itna mushkil hoga..jab ye concept socha tha toh I thought I could write it..but actually me it was not that much easy..

Iss story ke almost sare parts meine aakho me pani ke sath likhe he..kayi baar toh mein likhte likhate zor zor se rone lag jati thi..kayi baar other kaam me busy hote waqt agar mein iss story ke bare me sochti toh mein achanak se sad bhi ho jati thi..but finally..i completed it..

Thanks for ur lovely n encouraging comments..

Thanks to those people who are silent readers..

Tc to all..

N ab aapko aur bore aur emotional nahi karugi..note is ending here..

Bye..

P.S.:-kuch readers ne starting ke kuch parts padne ke baad(jaha arjun riya ko hurt karta he..)arjun ko bashing kiya tha..ye kehake ke arjun aisa kaise kar sakhta he..n all..but I told them to keep reading the story n at the end of the story arjun will be their favorite character of this story..i hope ke ab jab story end ho gayi he toh sach me arjun sabka favorite ban gaya hoga..