Unspoken Feelings..... - Page 4

wow cute part
loved dolly n alia
alia innocence n loved for her brother touch my heart
dolly bubbly girl loved how she loves alia n teach her like big sister
continue soon

amazing part simple hai but so beautiful story and please muje pm send kr Dena dear

I just read the first installment and it was beautiful...No Riddhima with Armaan is a bold move and I completely support you...There are so many emotions in this part...looking forward for Armaan and Alia...

The second part of this story was equally overwhelming, I maybe little weird but really like introvert Armaan...But I really want him to make peace with Alia...I am so happy he is trying to understand his feelings...O love the way Alia is enjoying shimla with pony riding and all...Hopefully she won't hurt herself or meet an accident...

Finally completed..
Mujhe ninni aarahi hai but comment bi karna hai..

To sunna ab vistaar mai..
Jab maine yai padhna start kiya to i thought yai story ok hogi..
Tune likhi hai achchi na bi huwi to bi padhni padhegi..
Agar nahi padhti to tu murder kar degi mera... Lol

but yaar i felt in love with this piece of work..
Yai Story buhat Unique hai.. But at the same time simple hai..

Jab maine padhna shuru kiy aur Armaan ka behaviour deekha..
To i thought wo usse khona nahi chahata issi liye pass nahi aata.. Kyuki wo jisse pyaar karta hai wo chod ke chala jata hai..
I was like arre common hai most of the FF's mai use hota hai.. So, what is new...

But tune simple way mai dikha ki reason wahi hai jo hona chahiye.. I mean uski Mom ki death..
And that i appriciate..

Aur is Stroy ki uniqueness in dono ka pyaar hai aik dusre ke liya..

And sab se badi baat
story ka naam is perfect...

Thank you #Humi for this new Unique and Innovation concept...
Love you a lot..

This is such a cute story yaar...
I love it so so so much!
Pehle to pls, PLS get Armaan and Aliya together...
Yeh aise itna cute hai to when Armaan accepts her to kitna cute story hoga!
The part where he talks to her on phone was so wow! Aliya was so happy!
And even that scene when she breaks the vase was described so nicely!
Hayy I loved everything actually...pls update soon (get them back together fast) and sorry for the late comment!