Unspoken Feelings.....

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hey everyone
Humera Here.
well this is an completely different concept n something which i never wrote before but i gave my precious day's n nights penning down this...
n i hope i dnt dissapoint u all...
its upon u guys now...
without any further due
here's the first instalment of Unspoken Feelings...

Credit of the TITLE goes to my sister...😊


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Unspoken Feelings

we see a lady lying on the bed with wires attached to her body...
she held a boy 's hand in her hand as if taking promise

lady - mujhse vaada karo ke tum Iska poora khayaal rakhoge... ispar koi aanch aane nahi dogey...
Issey itna pyaar karoge ke kabhi isey iski maa ke na hone ka ehsaas nahi hoga...
vaada karo mujhse bete...

boy weeps continuosly n nods his head n said

boy - i promise maa
mai Aapki saari baatein manunga
but please aap badle mei meri ek baat maanlijiye
mujhe... chodke mat jaiyie maa
please mujhe chodke mat jaiyie


lady smiles weakly n she took her last breath n closed her eyes

boy looks at her n shakes her

boy - maa

he again shakes her

boy - maa
utho

nurse came with doctor n doctor checked her pulse rate n sadly sighed n said to the boy

Dr - i am sorry
she is no more


boy looked at his mother n shouts loudly


boy - maaa



...


a man came out of his dream sweating badly n he looks everywhere n wiped his whole face n got up from the bed
he went towards the window n look at the sky

an old lady walks in the room n saw him standing near the window looking at the sky

she walks in n put a hand on his shoulder
he sensed her n quickly wiped his lone tear n turned towards her

old lady - phir se uss din ko yaad karraha tha Tu

man - nahi toh

old lady - jhoot mat bol
apni daadi se chupayega

she knows that being an introvert he never shows his emotions to anyone
she caressed his hair n said

daadi - raat bahot hogayi beta jaakar soja

he nods n she kissed his forehead n he went towards his bed n laid down on the bed

she caressed his hair n he quickly slept as her touch is all he needs when he remembers that dreadful day
when his mother passed away n unfortunately an angel came into his life on the same day



daadi smiles weakly n went out from his room n she went in. the other room which is not less than a fairytale princess room it was a big room with all types of teddy bears placed around the bed n in the centre of the bed there is a cute girl who is in her teenage n was hugging a photo frame while sleeping

she smiles n went towards her n caressed her hair lovingly n placed a soft kiss on her forehead

n then she slowly took out the frame n saw her grand children's picture in that

she caressed the picture n looked at the girl who was sleeping peacefully


daadi - ek dusre se itna pyaar karte hai
par kabhi nahi dikhate
kehne ko toh bhai behan hai
par rehte ajnabiyo ki tarah hai
pata nahi Inn do bacchon ke beech itni dooriyan kyun Aagayi
ek taraf ARMAAN hai jo Issey itna pyaar karta hai ke isey Halki si kharoch bhi kyun na aaye
dard se tadapta woh hai...
aur dusri taraf alia (daadi caressed her hair) jo armaan ko apna sab kuch maanti hai
uske bina ek din bhi nahi rehsakti
uska kaha har shabd iske liye pattar ki lakeer hai
aur toh aur ( she smiles with Lil tears in her eyes) apna surname apne bhai ka naam rakhliya
Alia Armaan Mallik

daadi smiles wide with tears in her eyes
she wipes her tears n placed the frame on the bed side table
she walks out of the room n went inside her room n took a lady 's pic n started talking to her

daadi - ananya
Tuney armaan se kasam toh leli
par uss kasam ko nibhate nibhate woh apne aapko kahin kho baitha...
alia ko dekhey bina uska din shuru nahi hota usey dekhey bina uski raat khatam nahi hoti...
aur alia uss bacchi ka mai kya kahun
itni sehmi sehmi rehti Hai...
uske bhaiya uske liye sab kuch hai
ussey darti bhi hai par ussey pyaar bhi bahot karti hai...
iss umr mei Bacche kitni shaitaniya karte hai
par alia chup chap rehti hai
Kisise zyaada baat nahi karti
Kisise zyaada milti jhulti nahi
bass apni hi ek alag duniya hai uski
shayad Jahan sirf woh aur uske bhaiya ka ehsaas hota hai...
Armaan ne bachpan se lekar aaj tak uski har choti cheez ka khayaal rakha
uske bole bina uski har qwaish poori ki
par shayad pyaar jatane mei peechey hatgaya...
jab raj ( armaan n alia 's father) iss duniya se Chal basa tumhare kok mei uska ansh chodkar
jabse armaan badal gaya
humne hamara hasta khelta armaan khodiya tha...
par jab tum bhi usey chod kr chali gayi woh poori tarah toot gaya...
uski zindagi mei shayad hi sirf ek hi maksat hai
apni maa ko diya hua vaada nibhana...
( daadi hugs her photo)




it's a story of a brother n sister
armaan n alia who loves eachother unconditionally
but due to some unknown reason they both stay away from eachother...
Armaan is 13 yrs elder than alia n
alia is 13 yrs old
he struggled alottt in his life
he spend his years of day's n night's in making money just to fulfil his Lil princess every wish...
now at the age of 27 he is a successful business man of the nation...

the story only revolves around armaan. n alia
n there is no ridhima 's role here...
it's about the pure relationship of a brother n sister who loves eachother from the core of their hearts but hold back their emotions as not to hurt eachother in any sense...

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daadi armaan alia all three of them seated in the dining table having their breakfast
armaan as always busy in his phn checking mails
daadi was applying jam on bread to feed alia
n alia playing with the spoons not making much voice

armaan eyes laid on her n she is dressed in her school dress with a ponytail looking cute playing with the spoons like daandiya

he smiles at her n was watching her every expression carefully
where as she got bored of playing daandiya with spoons n
sighed n started dangling her legs looked at daadi n then her gaze fell on her bhai who immediately moved his gaze from her n was busy in his phn
she smiles seeing at him

alia - daadi

daadi - haan ( placing the toast in her plate)

alia - mumma ko bhi bhaiya ki tarah gaal par dimples padte they???

she asked innocently n armaan looked at her n daadi looked at armaan

alia thought may be he will become angry n dropped her gaze n said

ri - sorry daadi ( slowly)

armaan - daadi mera hogaya
i have to go

daadi simply nods her head n alia felt bad hurting her brother n a tear rolled down her cheeks which she wiped soon
but armaan noticed that n he immediately turned his back at her not wanting to see her in tears

ar- ramesh uncle ( driver who is similar to his father's age ) school se pick karlenge
kisibhi friend ke saath ghr aane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai
wait till he comes to pick u

alia - ok ( in a mere whisper)

daadi looked. at both of them n she can't do much abt these two kids
she never understood what is keeping them away from eachother
she tried to talk to armaan many times abt his cold behaviour towards alia
but he always skip that topic n even gets angry often
so daadi avoids this discussion as things only get worse talking to him

armaan went after taking his belongings n alia ate little n she too got up from the chair taking her bag n daadi gave her tiffin n bottle which she kept in her bag n went from there bidding bye to daadi

daadi sat on the sofa thinking abt them
where as saroj

( one of the oldest maid in the house n she is like a support to daadi
she knows everything abt alia n armaan n daadi always gets sad n even burst into tears thinking abt them
how they are staying away from eachother
but saroj supports her n even give strength to her that one day these distance between armaan n alia will come to an end)

saroj - kya soch rahi ho didi

daadi - aur kya soch sakti hun mai saroj

saroj - baba aur alia baby ke baarein mei soch rahi ho na

daadi - pata nahi saroj
kabhi kabhi mera dil bahot darr jaata hai ye soch kar ke ye dooriyan Inn Bacchon ko kahin ek doosre se alag na karde

saroj - aisa mat sochiye didi
aisa kuch nahi hoga

daadi - kya karun mai Saroj
aisa kya karun ke armaan alia ko poori tarah apnaale
uski aankhon mei apni behan ke liye Chinta dekhti hun
Gussa dekhti
pyaar bhi dekhti hun
par kabhi ye samajh nahi paati ke Woh alia se doori kyun banaye rakhta hai
kyun usey apne paas aane nahi deta
kyun ussey pyaar se baat nahi karta
woh bacchi sirf uske pyaar ke liye tarasti hai
uski aankhon mei ek umeed dekhti hun mai ke Kaash armaan usey bass ek baar pyaar bhari nazron se dekhey
par har baar woh haar jaati Hai saroj
zyaada kya maang rahi hai meri bacchi
bass pyaar hi toh chahiye ussey
usne na kabhi apne maa ko dekha na kabhi apne baap ko dekha
sirf ek bhai hi toh hai
agar woh bhi usse pyaar nahi karega toh kaise jiyegi woh
kiske liye jiyegi

( by now daadi eye's filled with loads of tears n even saroj started weeping)

saroj - aisa mat kahiye didi
aap hai na alia ke paas
aap aur hum sab milke usey pyaar karte hai na
aur baba bhi toh ussey pyaar karte hai
bass dikhate nahi

daadi - kaisa pyaar saroj
ye kaisa pyaar hai
usey apne se door kiye jaaraha hai
usey takleef mei toh dekh nahi sakta
par anjaane mei hi sahi woh khud uske takleef ka uske dard ka kaaran bangaya hai
aur mera kya hai mai kabtak jeeyungi saroj
ek na ek din toh mujhe bhi mere bete aur bahu ke paas jaana hai
tab kya karega armaan
kaise sambhalega Khudko aur alia ko
tab kaise rahenge ye Dono
mere saamne hi anjaano ki tarah rehte hai
pata nahi mere na hone par kya haal hoga Inn Dono ka

saroj - aisa mat kahiye didi
aap kahin nahi jaane waali
dekhna ek din aapke saamne ye Dono haste muskuraate rahenge ek doosre ke saath

daadi - pata nahi woh din dekhna mere naseeb mei hoga bhi nahi

saroj - zaroor hoga didi
aap Fikar mat kijiye


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alia is sitting in the canteen of their school with her one n only best frnd dolly
who is like a sister to alia
she knows her in n out n even the unfamiliar bonding of her n armaan
she is like a pillar to alia
who makes her laugh
who makes her smile
n alia never cries infront of dolly
she do shares her sorrows with her but she never cried infront of her

dolly - ye miss dsouza bhi na
kitne projects Deti hai yaar
mera toh Mann karta hai khoon kardun mai uska
arey yaar chutti waale din toh hamey enjoy karne do
har baar project dena zaroori hota hai kya
idiot kahin ki

she was cursing miss dsouza for spoiling her Sunday by giving the toughest project
she kept on blaberring n alia was in her own world

she was just busy in writing something in her diary
as she always Penn down her feelings in diary


alia -( in her mind while writing)
aaj bhaiya ko maine phir se hurt kardiya
meri wajah se woh phir se sad hogaye...
i am sorry bhaiya
please mujhe maaf kardijiye
mai aage se kabhi aapko hurt nahi karungi
kabhi mumma ke baarein mei kuch nahi poochungi
kabhi koi aisi baat nahi karungi jisse aapko mumma ki yaad aati hai
aapko mujje punish karna hai toh kijiye par please mujhse nafrat mat kariye
mai Aapki daant sehsakti hun
aapka Gussa sehsakti hun
par Aapki nafrat nahi sehsakti please mujhse kabhi nafrat mat kijiye
please bhaiya

dolly looked at her who was busy writing something in diary

dolly - oye alia

she nudges her n she quickly closed the diary n kept it in her bag

alia - haan

dolly - ye tu kya likhti rehti hai diary mein

alia - kuch nahi
bass aise hi important notes point down karrahi thi jo project ke liye kaam aayenge


dolly - arey yaar Tuney abhi se kaam karna shuru kardiya
project par

alia - haan
aise free rehkar kyun time waste karna

dolly - pagal
ye free time nahi lunch break hai
Chal jaldi khaana khaale
hum basketball court jayenge

alia - mera Mann nahi hai
tu Ja

dolly - arey aise kaise Mann nahi hai
Chal jaldi jaldi khaa


she herself starting eating n alia again ate little from the tiffin box...



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Armaan's office


armaan is busy in giving assignments to his employees in conference hall n one man is noticing him
he is of same age of armaan n he is a financial advisor of his company
though he is his friend but his position in Armaan's company is not by the sake of friendship
it's because of his ability he is a financial adviser of Mallik enterprise
a great friend of armaan...

man -( in his mind)
pata nahi iss ladKe ko Koun samjhega ???
ye itni mehnat karta hai din raat sirf ek insaan ke liye aur woh hai alia
iska sabkuch hai
iski jaan basti hai Usme
uski har choti si choti zaroorat ka khayaal rakhta hai par pata nahi kyun usey apne aapse alag karta hai
kyun uske saath saath apne aapko bhi takleef deraha hai...

Armaan finished his conference n all went to their work

armaan was again busy in his file when that guy looked at him n said

guy - so

armaan looked at him n asked

ar - what???

guy - plan kya hai

ar - kis baat ka plan arjun

yes his name is arjun

arjun - ek hafte baadh alia ka birthday aaraha hai
iss baar kya karega
har saal ki tarah apne aapko kisi kaam mei busy rakhega.
ya phir koi gift. bhi dega???

armaan closed his file n looked at arjun n said

ar - usey kya gift dun
ye sab kuch toh uska hi hai

arjun - ghalat armaan
tu ghalath bolraha hai
ye sab kuch uska nahi hai
par jo uska hona chahiye
wahi uska nahi hai

ar - tu kya kehna chahraha hai arjun
saaf saaf bol

arjun - mai kya kehna chahraha hun ye tu ache se jaanta hai armaan
par phir bhi anjaan banne ki koshish karraha hai

ar- mujhe kya pata tu kya kehna chahraha hai

armaan sat on his chair n again took his file

arjun came infront of him n snatched his file from his hand n said

arjun - stop this nonsense armaan
bandh kar ye tamasha
kyun ussey itni takleef deraha hai tu
kyun uske saath dushmano ki tarah bartaav karta hai
uski ghalti kya hai armaan
uski kya ghalti hai agar uske aankh kholne se Pehle usne apni maa ko khodiya

armaan closed his eyes n clenched his fist with anger

arjun - usko har pal iss baat ki saza kyun deta hai tu armaan
agar Tuney apni maa ko khoya toh usne bhi khoya hai
Tere paas toh Teri maa ki yaadein hai
tere papa ke saath bitaye hue woh saare pal hai
par uske pass kya hai armaan kuch bhi toh nahi
na maa ki yaadein
na papa ki kahi hui baatein
kuch nahi hai armaan uske paas
sirf tu aur daadi uska sab kuch hai
tu kyun nahi samajh raha
alia ko kabhi Inn cheezo ki zaroorat nahi thi
usey sirf Teri zaroorat hai
tere pyaar ki zaroorat hai
ek baar uski taraf pyaar se dekh armaan
sirf ek baar
phir dekhna uske chehre par jo khushi hogi woh Inn sabse badhkar hogi...

armaan. angrily stood from chair n said

ar - tu shayad Bhool raha hai ke ye office hai
yahan personal baatein karna aur sunna mujje bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai
apne kaam se kaam rakhiye Mr arjun singhania...

arjun backed off n said

arjun - Kab tak armaan
Kab tak sachai se bhaagta rahega tu
aaj toh phir Tuney mujhe apne gusse se chup karadiya
par ek din tujhe ye baat ka ehsaas hoga ke Tuney Abtak jo bhi alia ke saath kiya woh kitna ghalath tha
aur shayad tab tak bahot der hochuki hogi armaan

he went from there leaving angry n emotional armaan behind

he closed his eyes n sighed sitting on the chair
he opened the drawer n took a photo frame n caressed the picture

it was a pic of alia smiling looking at the camera

ar - i am sorry alia
i am really very sorry
aaj tumhare aankhon mei phir se meri wajah se aansu aaye
mujhse Please Pyaar ki umeed mat lagao alia
mai tumhe woh pyaar nahi desakta Jiske liye tum tadapti ho
mai chah kar bhi ye nahi Bhool pata ke tumhe duniya mei laane ke liye maa mujhe chod kar chali gayi
i am sorry

he wiped his tears n kept the picture inside his table drawer


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dolly - alia Tera toh next week birthday hai na


alia - haan

dolly - arey aise sad kyun horahi hai

alia -mai kahan sad horahi hun

a girl came with two of her chamchi 's n said in full attitude tone

girl - sad nahi hogi toh aur kya hogi
apna bday kaise manayegi
uss din iske mumma ki 14 th death anniversary jo hai

alia looked at her with some tears n dolly looked at alia

dolly - oye Tina
apna mooh bandh kar Samjhi
warna Tera mooh tod dogi

Tina - kyun todogi mera mooh maine ghalath kya kaha
Sach toh bolrahi hun na
hai na girls

girls - yesss

tina - i wonder ke iske ghr par Kounsa occasion theek se manate honge
iski not so happening birthday ya phir iski mumma ki death anniversary

dolly - dekh Tina tu apne limits cross karrahi hai
zyaada bakwaas karegi toh principle ko jaakar complain kardungi
Samjhi

Tina - Ohh no
mummy mujhe Bachao
mai toh darr gayi

she started laughing with her chamchi 's n alia looked at her n controlled her tears n said normally

alia - tum sahi kehrahi ho Tina
mere ghr par do occasions bhi manate hai
mera birthday bhi
aur mumma ki anniversary bhi

dolly - alia tujhe Isey explanation dene ki zaroorat nahi hai
aur tu ( pointing her finger at Tina)
door rehna alia se Samjhi
agar ye chahegi na toh ek min mei tujhe aur Teri chamchiyo ko iss school se out karsakti hai...
tu shayad Bhool rahi hai iss school ke trustee iske bhaiya hai...
ek second ka kaam hoga iske liye tujhe yahan se bahar nikalne ka
par u knw what ye Teri tarah giri hui nahi hai...

Tina glared at her n she continued

dolly - aise kya aankhein phaad kar dekh rahi hai...
agar phir se alia ko pareshaan Kiya na toh tu mujhse nahi Bachegi Samjhi

Tina was abt to snap her back when dolly said

dolly - chal alia

she held her hand n went from there
where as alia was controlling her tears

Tina stomped her feet...


dolly - dekh alia tujhe uski baaton ko itni importance nahi deni chahiye. uska kya hai woh kuch bhi bolte rehti hai
par please tu uski baaton ke baarein mei zyaada mat soch
tu...

alia cut her in the middle n said

alia - it's ok dolly
i am fine

dolly - no u r not at all fine
insaan hi hai tu alia it's fine agar tu thoda sa rolegi
koi kuch nahi kahega
please apne aapko itni takleef mat de
apne andar itna saara dard mat chupa
please rodey alia
please


alia smiles weakly n said

alia - i am fine dolly
tu tension kyun lerahi hai
mujje kuch nahi hua

dolly was abt to retort when they heard a car 's honk
they both looked towards the car n saw ramesh waiting for alia

alia - ramesh uncle aagaye
mai chalti hun
bye

she went from there trying hard to control her tears which are ready to come out from her eyes

dolly looked at her retreating figure n said to herself

dolly - god ji
please iski sadness door kardijiye
please kuch aisa kardijiye jisse iski aur iske bhaiya ki beech ki saari dooriyan khatam hojaye
please god ji



alia sat in the car n she cried silently keeping her palm on her mouth...

she hides her face in her palms n sobbed lightly

ramesh saw her crying from the mirror n he really felt sad for this poor girl


he had tears in his eyes seeing her crying miserably
though he is a driver but he is very old servant in his family from her father's time
Armaan's father treated him as a family person n he helped him financially alottt...
ramesh always tries to cheer her up as Armaan's father used to tell him
whenever he will have a girl child
he will never bring tears in her eyes
he will pamper her like a princess
he will love her unconditionally
she will be daddy's princess
n ramesh used to pray that may his wish come true
but destiny always plays with our life's
Armaan's father passed away in an horrible accident n because of his death
her mother suffered from depression
which leads complications in her pregnancy
doctors told her earlier that they can only save anyone of them either mother or child
ananya wants to give life to this child so she said them to save her baby... she thought that without her husband her life is useless...

the car stopped in a traffic signal n armaan's car was besides alia 's car

he was tired of the noise pollution of this city n he angrily pressed the horn as it was getting on his nerves now

suddenly his gaze fell on ramesh n he looked at the back seat
there he saw his princess crying silently his heart pierced
he felt as if someone stab him on his heart
his eyes filled with loads of tears seeing her crying
her state was vulnerable
he wants to get down from the car n immediately wants to took her in a hug
he wants to assure her that everything will be fine
he wants to console her
he wants to take all her pain away
but he is the reason of her pain
he wants to shower her with loads of love n care but
something is stopping him to do that

he was bring out of his thoughts when he heard lots of horns
he saw that her car is no more infront of him
he looked here n there but can't find her
he started his engine n droves as fast as he can



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alia got down from the car n ran in the house
where as Armaan's car stopped rite after she went inside the house
he rushed inside just to see her glimpse

ramesh saw his worried lines on his forehead n thinks that may be because of work he must be worried


alia was going up in the room when armaan stopped her

ar - alia

she stopped in her tracks n soon wiped her tears n slowly turned towards him

her face was all red but she kept a smiling face as if showing him that she is fine
but little did she know that he saw her crying in the car n just a look on her face he very well can understand that she must be missing their mother

alia - ji

ar - tum
( he looked here n there)
tum ghar kaise aayi

he wants to ask her that is she fine but asked something else

alia - ramesh uncle ke saath

ar - hmm
theek hai
apne kamre mein jao

alia - ji bhaiya

she went in her room quietly n armaan looked at her worried for her n he went back in his room
closed the door n sat on the bed

ar - kyun mai uske aansu Nhi dekh sakta
kyun ussey takleef mei nahi dekhsakta
kyun na chahte hue bhi uske dard ka Zimmedar mai khud banjaata hun


he took his parents picture frame from the table n said

ar - mom dad
aap mujhe chod kar kyun Chale gaye
mai kya tha
aur ab kya hogaya hun
alia ke saath na chahte hue bhi mujhe dooriyan banani padrahi hai
kyun uske takleefo ka kaaran bangaya
maa aapne toh mujhse vaada liya tha na ke mai Isey itna pyaar karun ke isey Aapki yaad nahi aaye
par mai aapka vaada nahi nibha paraha hun mom
nahi nibha paraha
i am sorry mom
i am sorry



other side in alia 's room

daadi came n saw her doing her project sitting on the study table

she went inside n caressed her hair

daadi - alia
Bacche abhi toh aayi school se aur phir se padhayi mei busy hogayi
beta thoda aaram karle

alia - nahi daadi
mujhe aaram nahi karna

saroj came inside n said

saroj - didi aaj phir se alia baby ne lunch theek se nahi Kiya

daadi looked at alia n alia bowed her head down

daadi - ye kya hai alia
tum har roz lunch theek se kyun nahi karti
subah breakfast bhi theek se nahi Kiya aur lunch bhi theek se nahi Kiya
aisa karegi toh beemar padh jayegi Bacche

alia- daadi mujje Bhook nahi lagti


ar - kyun

he came inside n everyone looked at him
alia stood besides daadi holding her corner of pallu n saroj n daadi looked at eachother

saroj - baba woh

he interrupt her

ar - nahi choti daadi
( alia n armaan address her as choti daadi because saroj is a part of their family from the time armaan 's parents got married n they respect her alottt)

ar-ek second
mai alia se baat karraha hun

looking at alia

ar - kyun Bhook nahi lagti tumhe
kya mai jaan sakta hun

alia - bhaiya
woh...

daadi - Armaan
Bete mai Isey samjha dungi
tu fikr mat kar

ar - nahi daadi
agar aise hi aap iske ghaltiyo par parda daalegi toh ye hum sabke haath se choot ti jayegi

daadi - bete isne ghalti nahi ki
bass iska Mann nahi Kiya hoga

ar - toh Issey kahiye ki apna Mann lagaye rakhe
aise apne health ko neglect karna theek nahi hai
har baar iska khayaal rakhne koi saath nahi rahega
isey apna khayaal khud rakhna seekhna chahiye
kal ko agar mujhe kuch hogaya...

alia - i am sorry bhaiya

she did not even wants him to complete his sentence so she speak further

alia - i promise aage se mai apna khayaal rakhungi ( her voice stuck in her throat)
aapko
kabhi kuch nahi hoga
please aisa mat kahiye

everyone felt sad hearing her soft sobs while daadi glared at armaan for making her cry n armaan came forward to stop her from crying but daadi showed her palm as to stop coming near her n took her in embrace

daadi - nahi rotey bete
hmmm
daadi hai na tere paas

armaan left the room n daadi caressed her hair n kissed on her head lovingly

saroj brings a glass of juice n said

saroj - alia baby
Dekho
maine aapka favourite juice banaya
mango juice
chalo jaldi jaldi ye peelo

alia came out of daadi 's embrace n wiped her tears

saroj came n gave glass to alia
she took the glass n started drinking it
daadi smiles n went from there
thinking to give armaan a piece of mind


in Armaan's room


daadi - ye kya tareeka hai alia se baat karne ka armaan

ar - daadi woh mai

daadi - kya woh mai
dekh armaan
agar tu usey pyaar nahi dena chahta toh usey takleef bhi mat dey
kabhi toh ussey pyaar se baat kar
hamesha usey darata hai...

ar - daadi please aap phir se mat shuru hojaiye.
iss baar maine usey zyaada bhi nahi daanta

daadi - tu Kab samjhega bete
uski koi ghalti nahi thi armaan usey kiss baat ki saza deraha hai...
aise karke tu na sirf alia ko chot pahuncha raha hai
balke ananya ki aatma ko bhi chot pahuncha raha hai
kitni takleef hoti hogi usey apni bacchi ko rota dekh
abhi bhi der nahi hui armaan
alia abhi bhi tere pyaar ke liye tarasti hai beta
usey ek baar pyaar se baat karke dekh
sirf ek baar

armaan couldn't hold his emotions back n said loudly

ar - nahi desakta mai usey woh pyaar Jiske liye woh tarasti hai
nahi karsakta mai aisa daadi
Jab mai uski taraf dekhta hun toh mujhe maa ki li hui aakhri saans yaad aati hai
woh 13 saal ka armaan yaad aata hai
Jisne apni maa ko marte hue dekha tha
aap hi batayie mujje daadi mai kya karun
kya karun ke ye yaadein mera peecha chode
kya karun aisa jissey woh pal mere dil aur dimaaq se mitjaaye
kya karun mai daadi

he sat on the bed defeated n tears rolled down his cheeks

ar - jo vaada maine maa ko diya tha
aaj tak usey nibhane ki koshish karraha hun daadi
par mai haar gaya
nahi nibha parahahun mai vo vaada

daadi came n sat beside him caressing his hair

daadi - ek baar woh sab kuch bhula kar apni zindagi mei aage badh beta
jaanti hun Tere liye bahot mushkil hai par ananya ke liye alia ko apnane ki koshish kar armaan
sirf ananya ke liye

armaan wiped his tears n said

ar -mujhe iss baarein mei baat nahi karni daadi
aap please kuch der mujhe akela chod dijiye



daadi understood that his answer is no
she got up from the bed n went from there


next day

asusual armaan went early to the office
n alia went to school

at school


in the classroom

miss dsouza - so class
i hope u all are doing well this morning

all - yes mam

dolly n alia looked at eachother n smiles where as tina was blowing air on her nails n dolly mimicked her which makes alia smile

miss - well i have a great news for all of u

dolly - what ma'am

miss - be patient dolly

dolly smiles sheepishly n everyone laughs at her

miss - silence

everyone kept quite n miss dsouza continued

miss - day after tomorrow we r going to shimla
it's a 2 days trip to shimla n i hope everyone will enrolle their names to Mr bhatia who is our incharge

everyone squealed with joy n dolly clapped her hands

miss - quiet

everyone kept quiet n miss dsouza said

miss - i want each n every one of u to participate in the trip
am i clear


all - yes ma'am

miss - good


with that the class was finished n everyone were discussing abt what to wear n all that stuff

dolly - yayyy alia

she hugged her n alia smiles

dolly -finally mujje shimla jaane ko milraha hai
tujhe pata hai alia
mujje na bachpan se shimla jaane ka Mann tha
jab bhi holidays milti thi na mai mumma aur pappa ko bolti thi ke shimla jayenge
par woh Dono toh meri baat hi nahi maante they
ya toh nani ke yahan patiala le jaate they
ya phir bua ke yahan chandigarh
but ab finally shimla jarahi hun mai


she looked at alia who was engrossed in her thoughts

she nudges her

dolly - oye
kahan khogayi

alia looked at dolly n said

alia -bhaiya nahi manenge

dolly - kyun nahi maanenge
zaroor maanenge
tu ek baar pooch ke toh dekh

alia - nahi dolly
woh nahi manenge
aur mai aisa kuch bhi nahi karna chahti jiski wajah se woh mujhse naraz hojaye

dolly - alia
tu ek number ki duffer hai
arey tu bhul gayi kya
tere bhaiya iss school ke trustee hai
toh management ne unse poochkar hi toh ye trip decide kiya hoga na..

alia - haan ye toh theek hai par

dolly - par var kuch nahi
tu bass chalrahi hai mere saath n that's final
agar tu nahi poochegi toh mai tere ghr aakar tere bhaiya se poochungi
ok

alia - nahi nahi
mai khud poochlungi

dolly - good girl



mallik mansion

everyone was dining together silently
alia looked at armaan who was silently eating n she nervously asked

alia - daadi

daadi n armaan looked at Alia n daadi said

daadi - haan bete

alia - Woh... actually...
mujhe... aap... se... aap Dono se... kuch poochna tha...

daadi - haan bolo

alia - Woh ( she looked at armaan who was looking back at her) bhaiya
Parson... shimla...
i mean...

daadi - kya baat hai bete saaf saaf bol na

alia looked at daadi n before she replies back to her armaan said

ar - so u want to go

daadi n alia looked at armaan n alia said

alia - agar aap mana karoge toh nahi jaungi

she looked down n armaan looked at daadi who was confused abt their Lil conversation

ar - ok

she was sad that he did not gave her permission n armaan looked at her dull face n said

ar - make sure ke tum apna khayaal rakho
wahan daadi ya choti daadi nahi honge tumhara khayaal rakhne ko

she looked at him n asked

alia - matlab aapne mujhe... permission dedi

he looked at daadi n said

ar - daadi iski packing kardijiye
2 din ke liye shimla jarahi hai
school ki management ke saath

she smiles wide n daadi nods he got up from the table n was going in his room

alia - bhaiya

he stopped n turned towards her n she. said

alia - thank you

she smiles wide n her eye's shine with the happiness

for the first time his heart felt at peace seeing her smiling wholeheartedly
he never felt relaxed seeing her before
but today his Little gesture made her happy n that was like as if he achieved a huge thing in his life

he nods n went from there

she smiles wide n said to daadi

daadi - mai dolly ko phn karke batati hun ke bhaiya ne mujhe permission dedi
ok daadi

she smiles wide n daadi nods happily

saroj came n said

saroj - alia baby ko dil se muskurate hue dekh kar bahot acha laga na didi

daadi - haan saroj
aaj Pehli baar maine isey itna khush dekha
bass aise hi ye khush rahe hamesha
yahi Dua hai meri


saroj n daadi smiles looking at eachother


In Alia 's Room


alia - tujhe pata hai dolly
bhaiya ne shimla jaane ke liye permission dedi mujje

dolly - Wowww alia
it's amazing
maine kaha tha na woh mana nahi karenge
par tu maan hi nahi rahi thi


alia - haan dolly
aaj Pehli baar bhaiya ne meri baat suni aur toh aur bina daadi ke kuch kahey mujhe permission dedi
mujhe bahot acha laga


she smiles wide n dolly said

dolly - Woh toh manenge hi na alia
Kab tak tujhse baat nahi karenge
kabhi na kabhi toh unhe ye feel hoga na ke Woh jo karrahe they Abtak woh kitna ghalath karrahe they


alia - tu bhaiya ke baarein mei aise mat bol
mujhe bilkul acha nahi lagta

dolly - arey maine kya kaha

alia - yahi ke bhaiya ghalath they
bhaiya kabhi ghalath nahi they
unhone kuch bhi ghalath nahi Kiya


dolly - ab tu Toh tehri tere bhaiya ki chamchi
tujhe samajh nahi aayegi meri baat

alia smiles n said

alia - haan
meri marzi
mai bhaiya ke khilaaf kuch bhi nahi sun sakti Kyunki woh iss world ke sabse best bhaiya hai
sabse ache bhaiya hai
aur tu The Armaan Mallik ki burai mere saamne karrahi thi woh bhi The Alia Armaan Mallik ke saamne

dolly smiles n shook her head n said

dolly - ok meri bebe
nahi karti tere bhaiya ki burai
bass

alia - bebe???
ye kya hota hai

dolly - arey pagal
jaisa loag bore honey pe kehte hai na
meri maa kehkar
waise hi mai meri bebe kehti hun
unique style u see

alia laughed n said

alia - Acha Chal mai phn rakhti hun
bye

dolly - bye


alia hungs up the call n there she saw daadi n saroj coming inside with huge smiles on their faces


alia - kya Hua aap Dono mujhe dekh kar kyun smile karrahe ho

daadi - aaj tujhe itna khush dekh kar bahot acha laga bete
( she came n sat infront of her n caressed her hair)

daadi - aise hi muskurate hue rehna
bahot pyaari lagti hai


alia smiles more n saroj said

saroj - waise didi
hum alia baby ke bina itne din kaise rahenge
ghr toh ekdum suna suna hojayega
hai na didi

alia - Oho choti daadi
main hamesha ke liye nahi jarahi
sirf do din ke liye jarahi hun


daadi - do din bhi hamare liye do saal ke Barabar honge na bete
bachpan se lekar aaj tak hamesha hamari aankhon ke saamne rahi ab ekdum se do din tujhe nahi dekhenge toh
yaad toh aayegi na bache


alia - daadi ab agar aap aise bologe toh mai nahi jaungi


she hugged her n daadi smiles n said

daadi - mera Mann toh kehraha hai ke tujhe na Bhejun
par aise hi agar hum tujhe ghr mei baandh ke rakhenge toh tu bahar ki duniya kaise dekhegi
kaise enjoy karegi apni life


she came out of the hug n daadi said

daadi - tera bag pack kardeti hun

saroj - haan didi
ache se garam kapde rakhdijiye
maine suna hai wahan barf girti hai
aur bahot thand bhi rehti hai


daadi - haan saroj
mujhe toh Chinta Abse hi horahi hai
bete ( turning towards alia)
tu please apna khayaal rakhna
zyaada khuli Hawa mei mat phirna
aur ice cream toh bilkul bhi mat khaana
warna tujhe zukaam hojayega

alia - daadi aap tension mat lijiye
mai apni care karlungi
aap Dono toh kitni tension lerahe ho
do din ke liye hi toh jarahi hun na
aur mai wahan Akeli thodi hongi
mere saath mere teachers honge
aur dolly bhi toh rahegi na saath
aap toh jaante ho na daadi
dolly toh aap Dono se bhi zyaada mere peechey padi rehti hai
Jabtak mai uski baat na maanlu tab tak mera peecha nahi chodti

saroj laughs n said

saroj - haan didi alia baby sahi kehrahi hai
aap fikr mat kijiye
dolly alia baby ka ache se khayaal rakhegi

daadi nods n alia smiles


after packing her stuff daadi n saroj retired to their rooms giving loads of instructions to alia n alia took her diary n Sat on the bed all smiling


alia - aaj Pehli baar mai bahot khush hun
bhaiya ne mujje permission jo dedi
mujhe toh unse permission maangne mei bahot darr lagraha tha
laga ke bhaiya mana kardenge
aur jab unhone poocha ke kya mai jaana chahti hun toh mujhe laga ke Woh phir bhi mujhe mana karenge
par this time he surprised me
kitni jaldi maan gaye
aur smile bhi Kiya jab maine unko thank you bola
I hope n wish ke bhaiya hamesha aise hi smile karte rahe...
mai Unki saari baatein manungi woh jo karne ko bolenge karungi aur jo nahi karne ko bolenge woh nahi karungi
but bhagwaan ji badle mei aap bhaiya ko hamesha khush rakhiye ga
Unki saari wishes poori kardijiye
aur mujhe kuch nahi chahiye
ab bahot raat hogayi
mujhe neend aarahi hai
mai Sojati hun
good night



she closed her diary n kept near her pillow
she looked at her mother's photo frame n said

alia - good night mumma

she layed on bed n slept with a smile on her face


so the day arrives when alia is going to shimla
everyone in the house gathered in the main hall to bid bye to her

alia looked at daadi who had tears in her eyes n said

alia - daadi aap please mat royie na
warna mai jaa nahi paungi


she hugged daadi n daadi caressed her hair n said

daadi - apna khayal rakhna bache
mujhe Teri Chinta hoti rahegi
pahunchkar phn kardena aur khuli Hawa mei...

alia - nahi ghoomungi
ice creams bhi nahi khaungi
aur apna khayaal rakhungi
Parson se aap baar baar yahi bolrahe ho
aur maine ache se yaad karliya

she giggled n daadi kissed her forehead n saroj said

saroj - mujje Aapki bahot yaad aayegi alia baby

alia hugged her n said

alia - mai jaldi aajaungi choti daadi



alia went outside n there she saw ramesh standing smiling at her

ramesh - apna khayal rakhna alia baby

alia - aap yahi se mujje bye bolrahe ho
mujhe school drop nahi karoge

ramesh - nahi baby ji
aaj hum aapko school drop nahi karenge

alia - toh mai kiske saath school jaungi


armaan - mere saath

everyone looked at armaan who came wearing his three piece business suit n daadi n saroj smiles widely
as for the first time he is dropping her to the school

ramesh smiles too n alia looked at armaan with shock written on her face

armaan looked at her n said

ar - chalo


she nods n for the last time hugged daadi n armaan took blessings
from her as it's his daily habit whenever he goes out he took blessing from her by touching her feet

they both sat in the car n armaan droves the car



daadi joined her hands n said

daadi - aaj mere dono Bacche Pehli baar saath jarahe hai
bhagwaan aise hi inhe saath rakhna hamesha




in car

alia dnt knw what to talk as for the first time her brother is dropping her to the school
n she is sooo happy from inside but as he is besides her she controlled her excitement n happiness

where as armaan kept a straight face
so many emotions he was hiding from her
for the first time she is going away from the house n more over for the two days he can't see her in the house which was slightly disturbing him
though he dnt talk much with her but deep inside his heart he craved to see her smile
n he wants to give every happiness which she deserves

alia looked outside of the window n armaan looked at her n a tear trickle down his cheek but before she caught him crying
he wiped his tear away quickly

she looked back at him n he turned his gaze towards the road

she played with her fingers n said nervously

alia - bhaiya


ar - hmm

alia - thank you
mujje school drop karne ke liye


armaan did not said anything n she waited for his reply
but like previous night
he did not smiles back when she said thank you n she looked down guiltily

he looked at her n smiles slightly

the rest of the ride was silent n alia 's school arrived n she got down from the car n said

alia - bye bhaiya

armaan - apna khayal rakhna

alia - aap bhi

she turned to go n armaan waited until she gets inside the school

he controlled his tears n put back his sunglasses n went away

after armaan's car went
alia looked at the view n said by having Lil tears in her eyes

alia - i will miss u bhaiya

she controlled her tears n went inside the school



on the other hand

armaan looked at the frame of alia sitting in his cabin n was smiling remembering her talks

flashback


alia - tu bhaiya ke baarein mei aise mat bol
mujhe bilkul acha nahi lagta



alia - yahi ke bhaiya ghalath they
bhaiya kabhi ghalath nahi they
unhone kuch bhi ghalath nahi Kiya

alia smiles n said

alia - haan
meri marzi
mai bhaiya ke khilaaf kuch bhi nahi sun sakti Kyunki woh iss world ke sabse best bhaiya hai
sabse ache bhaiya hai
aur tu The Armaan Mallik ki burai mere saamne karrahi thi woh bhi The Alia Armaan Mallik ke saamne



he smiles listening to her but then his gaze fell on daadi n saroj who were coming towards alia 's room so before they saw him he went to his room quickly


arjun came inside his cabin n saw him smiling n said

arjun - kya baat hai
aaj bada khush lagraha hai


armaan quickly hide alia 's frame in the drawer of his desk n said with straight face

ar - kya??

arjun - kya kya
main toh tujhse pooch raha hun ke aaj itna smile karraha hai toh koi khushi ki baat hogi na
hai na!?


ar - mai smile nahi karraha tha
Tu bekaar ke assumptions mat laga
waise mai tujhe hi bulane waala tha
Mr mehra waale project ki file kahan hai
mujhe Usme kuch corrections karne hai

arjun - haan ye le


armaan. completely succeeded in. changing the topic n they both were busy in doing their work



Here is the first installment
Hope u all like this one
Oh my god i am sooo nervous 😕
Drop in your comments n hit the like tab please
With love
HUMERA

























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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
I hate u humz...Tune rulaya Mujhe Gandi bachi
It's amazingly senti What I love most Is. This type senti yet loved update I m not disappointed I m super happy to read that yet emotional too.
U see me n my bro don't talk much Though he love me so much but we don't have proper Convo... I mean he is 5yr elder plus reserved one
So he talk less So yet I relate to it so much
Hats off
Next part de Jaldi se jaldi
chal beth ja aabhi likhne
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Omg...!! Noddy...
This was super awesome... hm normally jitni bhi stories pdhte hai sabhi love stories hi hoti hai..bt ye toh "one in a million" hai..

Totally loved the concept n the way sab ke emotions ko btaya hai.

Update next soon..



Edited by Dik.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Abbe tu mujhe itna rula kyu rahi hai? Jaldi se Armaan aur Alia ke beech mein sab theek karde. Samjhi?!?!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
very emotional and heart touching nice part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Hey dear
It was really very touchy part ...
U know its more hurting when u know the person love n cares for u😭 but is not expressing tht
U portrays emotion in wrds so well👏
Keep up
Post next part soon
N yea plz update DMHTST😳
Love ya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
humimeee this is superbbb.. and unique obe.. totally loving it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: DMGThings

Abbe tu mujhe itna rula kyu rahi hai? Jaldi se Armaan aur Alia ke beech mein sab theek karde. Samjhi?!?!


tu mujhe update de... samjhi??? 😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
hi humera,today i got time and read this new story and its good but tum riddhima ko inke beech la sakti ho sab kuch thik karne ke liye,riddhima ke bina arman adhura lagta hai,uski entry bhai behen ke rishte thik karne ke liye kar sakti ho..waise i loved this concept too..pm me when u ud..love..
punam di

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