Ishra- || Tum Hi Toh Ho || Part 14 on Pg 58 on July 19

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Hello Friends.My name is Sarthi. It's my first attempt in writing. So I hope you all will like my work.

Tum Hi Toh Ho


Character Sketch

Raman Kumar Bhalla - A famous and rich brain surgeon in Delhi.Very lovable, handsome and caring. Loves her grandmother very much.Single child of his parents.

Savita Bhalla- Grandmother of Raman Kumar Bhalla. Loves Raman very much.

Santosh Bhalla- Mother of Raman. Died in an accident.

Om Prakash Bhalla - Father of Raman. Died in an accident.

Mihir Arora - Friend of Raman ,but like a brother to him. Don't have anyone except Raman and Raman's grandmother.

Shagun-Elder sister of Mihir and wife of Suraj. loves Raman as her brother.

Suraj- Husband of Shagun .

Sanjana- Cousin of Suraj. Loves Raman but only for his money and want to marry him.

Ishra Iyer - Very bubble , loving , caring and only child of her parents. Loves her parents very much.A middle class girl. Runs orphanage of her father and Dentist by profession.

Vishwanathan Iyer - Father of Ishita. Died in an accident.

Madhvi Iyer - Mother of Ishita. Is in coma from last 6 years due to an accident.

Mihika Iyer - Friend of Ishita. Loves Ishita as her sister.

Janvi- Caretaker of orphanage.


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Part 14


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb character sketch 😊 and many congratulations on your very first piece of work 🥳
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This seems very intriguing 😊
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I'd love to read the prologue to get a better understanding of the narrative
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Congo on ur first write up
Lovely character sketch
Love to read more
Updt soon
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Congratz for ur first story dear
Nice prologue
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Nice prologue dear n congrats for ur first attempt.
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comgrats for ur first story dear👏👏
lovely character sketch 😊

continue soon . waiting for ur first part dear😃

thanks for pm 😊
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Prologue


Ishita- Good Morning Amma. Kasa ho aap Amma.I missed you alot amma. I missed your paysam Jo aap hamasha mara janamdin par apna haatho sa banati thi aur mujha khilati thi. I missed you soo much amma. Appa bhi mara saath nahi ha aur mara saath hota hua bhi mara saath nahi ho. Plz jaldi sa theek ho jayea. Apka bina aapki ishu bhaut akali ho gaye ha.

And start crying bitterly holding her amma's hand by remembering her old days with her parents.
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Dadi- Uth ja putter kitna soyega. Subha ka 10 Baja gaya ha.
Raman- Bas 2 min Dadi.
Dadi - Tere toh pichla 2 ganta sa 2 min chal raha ha.

Raman get up slightly and lay down on dadi's lap. Dadi stat caressing his forehead warmly and kissed his forehead with all her love.

Plz do like and comment
Edited by sharda_123 - 8 years ago
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Congrats for the first story. nice cs.

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