Ariya SS::Bas Mein Tere Kabil Nahi..(Completed)

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Part 4:-

Here Riya is in taxi going to her home..

She wipes her tears.she could hear "gunja sa he koi ek tara..ek Tara.." on radio of taxi..

She remember how she was so happy after that close moment with Arjun(when he kissed her n lost in her..)n then how she decide to finally confess her feelings to him..

Flashback:-

(Consider Riya is remembering this..)

Etf office:-

Finally Riya has decided to confess her feelings today..

She has come early..n thinking how to tell Arjun that she loves him..suddenly one idea struck to her..

Till then all had reached to office..

Choree,Riya,n Sam are in conference room..n Arjun is in his cabin..

Same time arjun's chai wala come inside with his tea..

Riya(readily take tea cup from his hand):-mein de dungi..

Chai wala nodded n left..

Here Riya come to arjun's cabin.. She saw Arjun is not there..she thought may be he is in washroom..

Riya(in mind):-Riya..yahi sahi chance he..

She wrote.."I love u" on one chit of paper n put it beneath cup of tea..

She knows Arjun will surely recognize her handwriting or will surely guess it will be written by her only..

N she left from there immigiately..

After some seconds she is sitting in conference room biting her nails in nervousness..

N next minute she saw Arjun coming out of his cabin angrily..he throws the tea in front of her on table spitting all the tea on her cloths..

Arjun(yell in anger):-how dare u..?how dare u miss Riya mukherji..? How dare u..?

Riya fearly stand up from her sit..n looking to her with big eyes..

Arjun:-tumhari himmat kaise hui muze ye kehne ke ke tum muzse pyar karti ho..(all other now get up in shock n looking to ariya)..khud ko kya samzti ho..?tumse has ke do baate kya karli tum toh sar pe Chad gayi mere..meri zindagi me meri roshni ki jagah Lena chahti ho tum..?meri roshni ki jagah..??are tum usake pairo ki dhul bhi nahi chu sakhti..?aur pyar..?pyar ki baat karti ho tum..?janti bhi ho pyar kya hota he..?

Riya:-mein..mein..

Arjun(don't let her speak):-shut up..just shut up..Jo bolna tha woh toh bol chuki ho..ab aur khud ko justify karne ki koshish mat karo..aur justify wahi karte he Jo galat hote he..tumhe kya lagta he tum jaise ladki Jo ek gun ko hath me lene se darti he woh ladki Arjun suryakant rawte ka pyar ban sakhti he..?tumhe kya lagta he tum jaise ladki Jo duty pe hote hue bhi apne dosto ke sath masti karne me busy hoti he..Jo apne kaam ko leke serious nahi..aise ladki Arjun suryakant rawte ko deserve karti he..?

Tears rolled down from her eyes..

Arjun:-tum mere pyar ke toh kya..mere sath kaam karne ke bhi kabil nahi ho..the girl like u don't deserve me..tumhare jaise ladki se toh mein pyar kya tumhari parchayi bhi na dekhu..meri roshni ko mere dil se nikal ke khud usaki jagah Lena chahti ho..?itni ghatiya ladki hogi meine socha hi nahi tha .ghin aati he muze tumse..the girl like u don't deserve not even a single bit of my love..

Riya run out of office hearing this with tears..

Flashback ends..

Tears rolling from her eyes..

Suddenly taxi stops in front of her house..she wipe her tears..pay to taxi driver..n walked hurrily towards her house..

She come to her bedroom.. N again lost in her memory lane..

Flashback:-

(Consider Riya is remembering this)

Riya come runningly to her room..n push herself on bed n crying heavily..

She has very much hurt because of the way Arjun reject her love..

Riya(while crying):-Arjun sir..mein ek baar aapka inkar sehen kar leti..par aaj Jo aapne bola woh mein nahi seh sakhti..mein nahi seh sakhti ..ye aapne mere self respect ko chot pahochayi he..ye mein nahi seh sakhti..mein ye samaz sakhti hu ke aap mera pyar accept na Kare. Apne wife ki jagah muze na dena chahe I can understand this..par jis tarah aapne mere bare me bate ki jaise mein koi ghatiya ladki hu..aapne kaha ke mein aapke Kabil nahi..aapne iss tarah mera aur mere pyar ka insult kiya..I can't tolerate this..I can't..

She wipe her tears.

Riya:-aap ye kehte he na ke mein aapke kabil nahi..thik he mein aapke Kabil nahi..(with determination) lekin ab mein khud ko itna strong banaugi..khud ko aapke Kabil banaugi..itna Kabil ke aapko mere aur mere pyar ki respect karni hogi..mein khud ko aapke Kabil banaugi..

Tu safar mera..

Tu hi meri manzil..

Tere bina guzara

Aye dil he mushkil..

Tu mera khuda .

Tu hi dua me shamil..

Tere bina guzara

Aye dil he mushkil..

Muze aazmati he Teri kami..

Meri har kami ko he tu Lazmi..

Junoon he mera..

Banu mein tere Kabil..

Tere bina guzara..

Aye dil he mushkil..

Flashback end..

Riya wipe her tears ..she remembering all that moment.. She get very sad..

But her phone buzz..its from her mom..

She make her mood OK..n then received the call..

Riya:-ha mom..

Riya's mom:-are Riya..bacche kabse tumhare phone ka intzaar kar rahi thi kitne dino se..

Riya:-ha..woh mom mein kaam me Zara busy ho gayi thi..

Riya's mom:-accha..thik he..Tu bata Kolkata kab transfer ho rahi he Teri..?

Riya:-mom..muze promotion toh mil gayi he..

Riya's mom:-are wah congratulations ..we r proud of u my dear..tere papa ko bataya na woh toh itne khush honge ke pucho mat..

Riya:-thanks mom.. But muze transfer nahi mili..

Riya's mom:-kya..?

Riya:-ha..meine commissioner sir se request ki thi ke muze transfer chahiye..bit unhone kaha ke filhal mein etf me hi kaam.karu..abhi muze transfer nahi mil sakhti he..

Riya's mom:-thik he beta koi baat nahi..hamne socha tha ke tuze Kolkata transfer mili toh ham sath me rahege..par thik hi he..etf me kaam karna hi toh tera sapna tha na..mein aur tere papa koshish karege ke ham kuch dino ke liye Mumbai aa jaye tere pass..

Riya:-OK mom..

Riya's mom:-OK..thik he u take rest..u sounds low..take rest..gn..

Riya:-gn..bye..

She cut phone..n sadly trying to sleep which is far away from her eyes..

On other hand..sam come to arjun's home..

Arjun open the door..n saw Sam there..

He don't say anything.. Sam come inside n close door behind him..

Sam:-yaar I know tu mayus he..par isaka matlab ye toh nahi ke ghar aaye dost ko acchese greet bhi na Kare..

Arjun:-toh tu ye sikhane aaya he ke yaha ke guests ko kaise greet karte he.?

Sam:-are yaar..tu bhi na..accha chod..tu thoda shant ho ja..

Arjun:-kya shant ho jau..?tuze pata he Riya ab aur jyada naraz ho gayi he muzse..

Sam:-sun..muze toh lagta he ke woh itni bhi tuzse naraz nahi he jitna ki tu soch raha he..

Arjun:-kya bakwas kar raha he..?

Sam:-ha mere bhai..agar woh tuzse itni hi naraz hoti toh khud ko tere Kabil banane ke liye usane itni mehnat na ki hoti..

Arjun:-matlab..?

Flashback:-

(Consider Sam is telling this to Arjun..)

Riya ki chit padke Arjun usape gussa hota he..usaki bate sunke Riya rote hue office se chali jati he..aur usake Jane ke baad Arjun bhi office se bina kuch kahe chala jata he..

Sam is in his cabin..upset n thinking about Arjun n Riya..

Sam(in mind):-manta hu mein ke sikandar exist he ye baat mein nahi manta Arjun ki..aur ye bhi manta hu ke mein hamesha tere gusse ko roshni ki maut ki wajah bolta hu..par aaj tune gusse ki sari hade par kar di he..tune Riya ko iss tarah hurt kiya he ke ye aisa hoga meine kabhi socha nahi tha..ha..ham dono pehale ki tarah dost nahi rahe lekin aisa nahi ki mein tuze apna dost nahi manta..aisa nahi ke mein Teri care nahi karta..mein janta hu ke tu kitna akela ho gaya he roshni ke baad..aur meine hamesha Riya ki aakho me tumhare liye pyar dekha..aur muze laga wahi tera sath de sakhti he..par tu uss pyar ka iss tarah mazak banayega ye nahi socha tha..tune ye bilcul bhi thik nahi kiya Arjun..

Same time sam's phone rings..he immigiately received it as it from commissioner who ask him to meet him immigiately..

Sam come to commissioner office..

Sam:-sir..aapne u urgent meeting ke liye bulaya..?

Commissioner:-ek bahot hi important case he..hame altaf tak pahochne ki ek link mili he..

Sam:-that's really good news sir..

Commissioner:-lekin ye sirf ek choti so link he..isse altaf tak pahochne ka rasta bahot lamba he..hame khabar mili he ki rana Jo altaf ke liye kaam karta he..uss Rana ka ek aadmi ek baar me aksar aata he..mein chahta hu ke iss kaam ke liye kisi female officer ko chuna jaye taki woh easily uss baar me kaam kar sakhe..aur rana ke aadmi ke zariye rana tak aur fir altaf tak pahoch sakhte he..waise meine ek female officer ko chuna he..miss.vanita rao..subinspector in juhu station..waise toh jab final activity ki baat aayegi toh ye case etf ko hi milega..issiliye mein tumse janta chahta hu ke tum miss rao ke bare me kya sochte ho..?or u want to suggest another officer's name for this case..

Sam:-sir..jaha tak mein janta hu ke miss rao ek baar pehale bhi hamare liye undercover work kar chuki he woh bhi aise hi ek gangster ka case tha..sir issiliye muze thoda doubt he ke kahi koi usse pehchan liya toh hamara mission chaupat Jo jayega..

Commissioner :-toh tumhari nazar me koi officer he Jo ye kar sakhe..

Sam(after thinking):-sir..Riya. Riya mukherji muze lagta he..she can do this .

Commissioner:-hmm..lekin muze ye pata chala he ke usse shooting me kuch problem he..

Sam:-ha sir..thodi he. .but leave it on me .I will handle it..

Commissioner'-OK..miss mukherji ko abhi bulao .usake aane ke baad ham case detail me discuss karege..

Sam nodded..

Sam come out of commissioner's cabin..n was dialing Riya's number..but he saw Riya coming in front of him..

Sam:-Riya tum yaha..?

Riya:-ha sir..woh mein commissioner sir se request karne aayi thi meri transfer ke liye..

Sam:-transfer ke liye..?Riya aaj Jo kuch bhi hua usake wajah se tum..

Riya(cutting him in mid):-plz sir..muze isake bare me koi baat nahi karni..

Sam:-Riya stop it..usake kehne ke wajah se tum galat nahi ban jaogi..tum usake liye kitni Kabil ho ye baat woh khud nahi janta..

Riya:-agar woh kehte he ke mein unke Kabil nahi toh shayad sach me mein unke Kabil nahi hogi issiliye unhone aisa kaha..

Sam:-Riya..

Riya:-par..mein khud ko itna Kabil banaugi ke unhe ye manana hoga ke mein unke Kabil hu..unhe mere pyar ki aur meri respect karni hi hogi..

Sam get impressed seeing the determination in her voice..

Sam:-Riya..mere hisab se toh tum ek bahot acchi officer aur insaan ho ..aur tumse acchi jeevan sathi rawte ko nahi milegi..aur mere khayal se tumhe khud ko sabit karne ki koi zarurat nahi..lekin agar tum khud ko sabit karna hi chahti ho toh I have a perfect opportunity for u..

Riya:-kaise opportunity sir..?

Sam:-mein aur commissioner sir chahte he le tum ek undercover mission handle karo..let's go to commissioner sir..he will give us details..

After discussing case with commissioner,Sam n Riya come out of commissioner office..

Sam:-so Riya..r u ready for this ..?

Riya:-yes sir..

Sam:-Riya..I m not underestimating u..but truth is truth..aur sach ye he ke shooting me abhi bhi tum thodi kamzor ho..

Riya nodded..

Sam:-but tumhe mission ke nikalne ke liye thoda waqt he..so mein tumhe train karuga..

Riya:-thank u sir..

Sam:-so tommorow morning 6 ..be ready..I will be there to pick up u..

Riya:-yes sir..

Flashback end..

Arjun(angrily):-matlab..tumne hi Riya ka naam uss khatarnak mission ke liye suggest kiya tha..?

Sam:-hmm..

Arjun(angrily):-tune Riya ko training bhi di..?

Sam:-ha..

Arjun(angrily):-aur agale din office me jab Riya nahi aayi toh tune hi kaha ke Riya ki transfer ho gayi he..tune zoot bola...??

Sam:-ha..lekin mein kya karta..wahi toh hamara plan tha..matlab sabko lage ke Riya ki transfer Kolkata research desk ho gayi he..taki agar usake mission ke dauran kisi ko usape shaq bhi hua toh unhe Riya ke transfer ke bare me hi pata chale..

Arjun:-aur jab meine pata kiya tha Kolkata research department me..toh muze pata chala tha ke sach me Riya waha pe kaam karti he..

Sam:-ha..woh bhi hamari setting thi..Riya mukherji banke ek dusari hi ladki research department me kaam kar rahi thi..taki mission ke dauran kisiko Riya ki true identity revel na ho..

Arjun:-aur jab..

Sam(cutting him in mid):-yaar tu aise bhadak mat .meine ye sab tuze issiliye bataya kyo ki muze lagta he ke woh tuzse itni naraz nahi he jitna tu soch raha he..agar woh tuzse itni hi naraz hoti toh khud ko tere Kabil banane ke liye..khud ko prove karne ke liye itna sab nahi karti..usane woh mission hi issiliye accept kiya tha taki woh khudko prove kar sakhe..warna woh toh transfer lene ki soch me thi..

Arjun fall in thinking..

Sam:-dekh..tu jyada soch mat .Jake usse baat kar..usse apne dil ki baat bata..

Arjun:-yes u r right..mein jata hu..

Saying this he get up..

Sam:-oye..kaha ja raha he..?

Arjun:-Riya se milane..

Sam :-Abe ghadi toh dekh le..mana ke usse pyar karta he..par kya raat ke 1 baje usse milane jayega..?

Arjun look to watch..

Sam:-Abe..itni raat ko koi sharif banda ladki se milane nahi jata..

Arjun:-toh fir samaz le ke mein sharif banda nahi hu..

Saying this Arjun left..

Sam:-oye..

But Arjun already left..

Riya's home:-

Riya open her eyes when she hears doorbell in ringing continuously.. She feels her eyes heavy..she didnt come to know when she fall in sleep while letting her tears out..

She come out of her thought when she hear door bell again started ringing.. She look to watch its 2 in night..she get alerted..she took gun in her hand..n come to open door..she first saw through magic eye n saw Arjun is standing outside door..

Riya(shocked):-Arjun sir..?iss waqt..?

She open door immigiately thinking what urgency made him come here this time..

Arjun come inside..

Riya(tensed):-kya hua..?

Arjun saw gun in her hand..

Arjun:-Riya chaho toh iss gun se muze maar dalo..par muzse baat karo plz..

Riya(angrily):-kya..?ye aap kaise baate kar rahe he..?

Arjun:-wahi bol raha hu Riya..Jo muze kabse bolna tha..par tum toh muzse baat karne ko tayar nahi..bas muze ignore Kare ja rahi ho..

Riya(turning her face):-aap ye sab bolne itni raat ko aaye he..?

Arjun:-sorry tumhe itni raat ko disturb kiya..par aaj mein tumse woh kehke ki rahuga Jo muze kehna he..

Riya:-dekhiye Arjun sir..aap..

Arjun(cutting her in mid):-I love u Riya..

Riya stared him shocked..

Arjun:-I really love u..

Riya come out of her shock..n open her mouth to say something.. But Arjun don't let her..

He cup her face..n started kidding her face all over..

Arjun(muttering while kissing her):-I m sorry..I m sorry..uss din meine tumse Jo kuch bhi kaha woh sab..woh sab..

But he couldn't complete.. Riya push him away with all force..

He look her shocked..

Arjun:-Riya..meri baat suno ..mein..

Riya:-mein aapke Kabil nahi hu..aap chale jayiye yaha se..

Arjun:-Riya I know tum ye sab issiliye keh rahi ho kyo ki woh sab meine uss din kaha tha..meine tumhe bahot hurt kiya tha na..plz..I m sorry.. But..I really loves u..I was just ..

Riya(yell on top of her voice):-meine kaha na aapse..mein aapke iss pyar ke Kabil hi nahi hu..just go..just go..

Arjun:-nahi..nahi jauga mein..aaj puri baat kahe bagair nahi jauga..

Riya(yell):-aap nahi jayege..?thik he mein hi chali jati hu..etf chod ke..job chod ke..ye city.
Aur desh chod ke hi chali jati..

Arjun:-Riya stop it..

Riya:-u stop it..aur isse pehale ki yaha par sari society aur security guards ko mein bulau aap yaha se chale jayiye..

Arjun(with tears):-Riya.. Plz..meri baat toh suno.. Mein sach me bahot pyar karta hu tumse..

Riya took deep breath..n push him out of door..n lock door immigiately..

Arjun(banging on door):-Riya..open the door..Riya..plz..Riya..

Here Riya collapse on floor n started crying..

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kaveriw2008

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Posted: 8 years ago

#162

Aur kitna rulaaogi...i know ye bas start hai mujhe bucket leke baithna padega...😭 😭 😭 😭

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manasvi..

@manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#163

amazing update

loved it

omg arjun insult riya so much, its really very bad arjun

but ri is determined to prove herself

sam help ri n she got uc mission

now arju. is proposing ri n she is rejecting him

he deserve this

but i think there is some other problem with riya

update soon

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balan04

@balan04

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#164

Oh This is the reason why riya was behaving oddly...
There might be some reason why arjun bursted on her that day
Hope everything becomes well with ariya
Nice update
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm 😊

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aarushi04

@aarushi04

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#165

Awsum update...

Arjun is so stupid

Aftr insulting riya like that in front of everbody...

Hw can he jst assume that ri will accept his apology...

But why riya had to punish herself...

Y she is ignoring Choree...?

Y she is still telling him that wo arjun ke kabil nai...

Its not riya who doesnt deserve arjun...

But its arjun who doesnt deservs an amazing girl like ri !!

Continue soon

Thnx fr pm

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Suzie

@etfr

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#166

Superb update

Emotional yet nice

Oh... Ri really got hurt with Arjun's word

But now when he is requesting her what is the problem?? Why she always says she is not Kabul for him

Anyways Nicely written

Thanks for PM

Continue soon

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Shanafr

@Shanafr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#167

amez super awesome update

loveit

thanks for pm

cont soon

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gauri

@ariya143

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#168

ohhh what a update
i my crying dear..
how rud arjun talk..
pur riya ...
n now trun is riya to
reject arjun praposal ..
continue soon ..
waiting for next .
gud going dear ..

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Mishthi_Shivsai

@Mishthi_Shivsai

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#169

Finally the mystery is out di though i guess not fully.

This is the reason behind riya's abnormal behaviour and choree's guilt.

Riya was mercilessly insulted but i still think arjun didnt do it in the spur of the moment. There was a sort of deliberation in it. Coz no body can just say such words with this intensity. As if he was hell bent in keeping riya away from him.

Its gud that riya decided to fight back and sam helped her.

Ha ha sam decided to tell all the secrets to arjun which transformed him to a not so sharif boy.

So pushing his ideality to the back seat for the timebeinghand went on to apologize only to be thrown out. Poor boy ab papad belo. Pyar karne se pehle bhi nehi sochta aur na hi nafrat karne se pehle. Ab yeh toh galat baat hui na.

Anyways next updt bhi jaldi jaldi post karna di.

With most of my guesses coming out to be true, i just cant wait to see whether the remaining ones will meet a similar fate or not.

Gud day di.