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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dunyiya Ke shor sharabey se
Door choti si Ikk basti thi

Woh Roz raat ko chaand ko dekhe
dheeme dheeme hasti thi

Hawaa bhi khushi se jhoomti thi
Uski zulfein uske gaal choomti thi

Raat k andhere main chandni ka saath tha
Haatho'n main uskey kisi ajnabi ka haath tha

Aankh Khuli toh pata chalaa
bass ik suhana sa khawaab thaa

Ajnabi ke khayaalo'n main woh har pal paagal hui
Soch ke apne sapne ko dill main uskey hulchul hui

Mann chahta tha k beh kar chaley
kisi ajnabi se phir woh miley

Abb khuwaab bun'ne lagi thi woh
Ikk saathi chun'ney lagi thi woh

Apna aap na dikhai de woh dekhe jab bhi darpan main
yeh woh hi thi yaa koi or man uljha tha iss uljhan main

Kisi ne usey yu'n apne rang main rang liyaaa
par woh pooch na saki uss ajnabi se...

Tum kon piyaa...
Tum kon piyaaa...


Holaaa...I Hope everyone is doing good...Miss you all...I'm writing something after a long time I hope its not lame...Also the title "Tum kon piya" is actually a pakistani novel and recent drama serial ...

Love-Jasmene😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Jasmene, my sweetie pie. How are you doing? Hope feeling better and totally recovered. Missed you. 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Namita_

Jasmene, my sweetie pie. How are you doing? Hope feeling better and totally recovered. Missed you. 🤗 🤗 🤗


Hi nami di How are you ?..I missed you too..Although I was not active on forum but still kept checking it time to time wanted to comment so many times on your caps but could't ...I'm fully recovered now Thank you for your good wishes and sincere concern...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chashmish786


Hi nami di How are you ?..I missed you too..Although I was not active on forum but still kept checking it time to time wanted to comment so many times on your caps but could't ...I'm fully recovered now Thank you for your good wishes and sincere concern...



That's great news. Well, you can get commenting now. Have fun. Welcome back.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Jas how are you ??
Glad to hear that you have fully recovered, we miss you here
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wooow. ...jasmine is Back with a bang...welcome back ...im sooo hapyyy...😛how r you dear? I missed you and your writings a lot you know ? Glad that you are fit and fine. ...takecare dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello Jasmine,it feels so nice to have u back,how are u?
By the way,the poem is really very well written,heart touching,is it your own...if it is then keep it up👍🏼
Welcome Back...🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello Jasmine!
H r u? Love all ur writings and this is so beautiful!
Glad u r back with bang girl!

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