Suman's Realisation For Her Love: An Shraman os part 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hii guys...sorry guys u all have to wait for long but now i am back and this part goes like (athira this is for u and sorry buddy to let u wait for .)-

Part 5

And after sometime
Sumo- shravan tu ready h
Shravan- ha tu aaja
sumo- okk

Sumo comes out of her room at 11:30 to go out but then she remember something.

Sumo's pov
Are sumo tu kaise bhul gyi mamiji to gate lock krke soti h aur keys to unke pass hogi ab kya karegi tu soch kuch jldi. And suddenly something strikes to her. Are ha mai uss rashte se bahar nikal sakti hu jo maine invent kiya h ( it is the secret passage of sumo and shravan which sumo has finded out)
And then she comes out of her house.
Pov ends

As sumo comes out she gets shocked and angry too. She saw shravan and manya together.
Sumo- shravan ye yha kya kar rhi h
shravan- kya kar rhi h matlb she is also involved in this plan
Sumo- ye kb involved hui aur ye humara plan h iska nhi
shravan- ha pta h pr vo aaj na iska call aaya tha and she said sorry for her deeds and asked to spend some time with me to resolve prb and as we have to execute aur plan so i thought to involve her in the plan too so dono ka kaam ho jaega baad mai mai free nahi hu isliye
Sumo- tumne ise isehi maff kar diya
Shravan- ha mai tumhe bhi to kar deta hu to ise kyu nahi
sumo- mere mai aur iss mai koi difference nahi h
Shravan- tum dono hi mere dost ho haan tu meri thodi jyada achhi dost ho par ho to dost hi haina
Sumo- ha ( in sad tone )
Manya- agr sumo ko prb hai to mai chali jaati hu
Shravan- kyu use kya prb hogi haina sumo
Sumo- ha koi prb ne h u can also accompany
Shravan- okk great to chalo mere ghr pushkar to surprise karne
Then they go ahead to malhotra house

To ab hum teeno mai se kissi ek ko jakr pushkar ko uss jagah lekar jana h
Sumo- manya tum use lekar aa jao mai aur shravan uss jagah wait karte hai.
Shravan- nhi sumo manya mere saath vha jaegi aur tum use lekar aao
sumo- shravan par
shravan- par var kuch ne manya ko vo janta bhi nahi hai aur mai ne ja sakta kyuki mujhe vha jakr sab taiyaari karni h tum ne kar paogi
Sumo- theek hai mai hi jaati hu manya to kissi kaam ki nahi hai
Shravan- ruko yaar jaate hue pd deti jao baaki saman to mere pass hai hi
Sumo- hmm
She gives the pendrives to him and leaves.

Manya- tumhara plan kaam kar rha hai
Shravan- ha shayad par abhi i am not sure
Manya- hmm ho sakta h usne jo kha ho sirf gusse mai kha ho jealousy mai nhi.
Shravan- achha ab tum jao baaki ka plan baad mai execute karenge mai ne cahta uska mood aaj kharab ho pushkar ke birthday vaale din
Manya- i understand okk mai chalti hu byee
shravan- byee

Here, sumo reaches pushkar room and thought how can she make pushkar come with her
Suddenly an idea come in her mind

Sumo- pushkar utho jaldi
Pushkar- kya hai
Sumo- utho na pushkar
Pushkar's pov- i suddenly felt sumo's voice but how can it be possible. Again sumo's voice is heard i slowly open my eyes and sees her and sit on bed with a jerk.
Pushkar- sumo tum yha kya kar rhi ho
Sumo- vo pushkar actually mai shaam ko interview ki taiyaari karne ke liye shravan ke pass aayi thi aur taiyaari karte karte vahi so gyi aur ab uthi to vo room mai tha hi nahi aur kahi aur bhi ne dikha to mai soch rhi hu hum dono ko use dhundna cahiye na
pushkar- mai bhaiya to call karta hu
Sumo- maine call karke dekh liya par vo call pick ne kar raha so i think hame gps ke through jana cahiye uske phone ka gps hamesha on rehta h
pushkar- ha gud idea chalo
Sumo and pushkar comes out of the room and goes out of the house and traces his phone
sumo in between messaged shravan that they are on the way

Here shravan arranges everything there



The decoration part is like this. But there is also a device through which one can see vedios etc... and it is in open...

Pushkar and sumo reaches there and pushkar is shocked seeing this...and utter only one word beautiful...

This part is over.. i know this part is short but because i have e xams i will not be able to write more so i thought to post how much i have written but i hope u liked it...next part will update soon...please like and comment...and tell me ur views...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Kratzy this is awesome👏👏 poor sumo...she's so jealous🤣 loved it yar pls update soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update!!! So the jealousy track is on mode,I am here to enjoy it!!!!
Update soon!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hope i have meet your expectation as i have try my best to show the jealousy mode
And thanks to all who like it

Kishu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You know I like your story very much! And read all the parts. But could u pls send pm. It will be easier for me. Coming back to the chapter! Hope sumo realises soon! And shravan here is much smarter! Loved it totally!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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HMm socha har baar shravan ko hi kyu kam smart bnaya jae to isiliye bna diya jyada smart. Thanks for liking it.
Aur pm ab tk jitni updates hui h sab ki karni h ya jo mai updates karungi uske liye pm karna h. Please let me know this
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: kishugarg

HMm socha har baar shravan ko hi kyu kam smart bnaya jae to isiliye bna diya jyada smart. Thanks for liking it.

Aur pm ab tk jitni updates hui h sab ki karni h ya jo mai updates karungi uske liye pm karna h. Please let me know this


No no... Previous ones to I have already read! Next time jab bhi update karna.. Please pm me! And Shravan to humesha se smart tha! Yeh stupid cv wale barbad kar diya charcter ko!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Kishu...

Nice update... Sumo has started to feeling jealous ... Let's see how this work out... Pushkar's birthday is gonna be blast... Shravan is really caring he doesn't wanted to make Sumo upset on Pushkar's birthday so he sent Manya to home...

Continue soon

Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
#9
Shravan to hamesha se hi caring rha h sumo ke liye
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very good story
sumo starts feeling jealously ...
Lets watch she accept or deny love for him...
Do continue

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