my FF ( hum tum ) updated part 2 :)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi DMGinas😛

i've decided to make another FF. i've doing my aisa kyon hota hain bar bar FF but i want to make another. this one is completely different. after reading it can you plz tell me what i shall call it?😕

before i start i want to say that i really really like Catwoman's FF she rocks and she always inspires me.😃 firstly my intro from ridz point of view.

Great!! Marvelous! here i am stuck in the most humungous room in my house with the biggest jerk in the whole planet! Dr.Armaan Malik. i can't even believe he's a doctor. this is all my fault if only it i hadn't listened to him! Just look at him sleeping so soundly on MY sofa doing nothing! ... she walked to the door and banged on it..... Hellooo!! is anyone there?.... she gave up and looked through the window suddenly she had an idea. she went to the bathroom and filled a big bucket of water, she walked to Armaan on the sofa ... Sorry Armaan .... she splashed the whole bucket on him. armaan woke with a fright.

Wh.. wh..what's going on?...ridhimaa laughed. he looked at his dripping clothes..... Why did you do this?..Sorry Armaan i had no other choice, you're a very heavy sleeper...she turned away.. Urghhhhh i just wish i could jump out of the window!.. armaan got up... really oh plz do jump out atleast i'll get rid of you!... they each gave a nasty look... We have to do something, how are we going to get out.. armaan grinnes... why, its easy.. he walks to the door and says... you just turn the knob and.. the knob isn't opening Armaan someone locked us... WHAT!... ridhimaa sighed... yes i'm stuck here now with you!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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plz do comment😳 thanks for then names😃

PART 1

She sighed... yes i am!... armaan looked like he was about to faint... ridhimaa walked over to him... you know this is all your fault... how is it my fault!... well if you didn't come from America in the first place i would of lived in peace!... they stayed silent. ( now ridhimaa will tell you how she came in this sitution)

its a very long story but i'll tell anyway, what happened was.....

ridhimaa woke up, quickly got showered dressed and made herself a mug of hot chocolate. she looked at the fridge for some notes. Sapna : Di, gone out with Amit see you in a bit:).. she smiled they made such a sweet pair. she looked and the time and nearly spilled her mug on her...9:00!!! oh gosh i'm late, she went down to the parking lot and got her car out.... keerti is going to kill me... she reached the hospital and found out keerti was not there, she saw Lovely... lovley you seen keerti anywhere?.. well yes, she gone on a leave for a week... ridhimaa was suprised, she never left work.

after a long tiring day at the hospital she sat down on her sofa relaxing herslef a bit. she noticed the telephone messenger was glowing, she pressed the button;

' hey, ridzy you ok? i wanted to tell you dad wants you to come back to Calafornia, bring Sapna too yeah, we miss you love Angie'........

' hey basket!'... ridhimaa got off her sofa... oh no..' you alright, why am i asking this, can you open the door i've got some heavy stuff'.... what?

she walked to the door and opened the door..there he was standing at the door smiling.. i thought i'll give you a suprise! he walked in... OMG! Armaan what are you doing here!.. he smiled and sat down... long time no see eh!...

she sat down too.. yeah 5 years... she remembered when Armaan used to be at the hospital with her when they were interns. They used to fight like they've been enemies for decades!.. all silly fights they used to have but deep down they were really good friends. but then Amraan got moved to America with his dad after he met him for such a long time. It took a long time to convince him to go to America, he finally said yes and then that was that. they never saw each other....

why are you here anyway?... he smiled... you won't beileve this he said...

PART 2

WHAT?... she stood up shocked... armaan nodded...yeah i am... ridhimaa couldn't believe what he just said....say that again!. armaan sighed...i'm having an arranged marriage!.... ridhimaa still standing with her mouth open.... who on earth will marry a duffer like you?.... armaan hit her with a pillow... Oww, i was just joking... she laughed... by the way who are you getting married to?... well i don't know who it is... she got shocked again.... you mean you're getting married to someone you don't know!.....armaan stood up... yeah!... ridhimaa now stop looking at me like a pale ghost.... ridhimaa suddenly laughed. what, why are you laughing?......well.. um.. i... ridhimaa stopped laughing. was this really happening? she couldn't believe how 5 years went by so quick. so quick that he's getting married? ridhimaa felt uneasy for some reason she felt upset. armaan getting married?

armaan looked at her... ridhimaa what's wrong?... um nothing..i let me get you something to drink... she smiled and walked to the kitchen. why was she feeling like this? she should be happy that he was getting married, for some reason she wasn't. why? clearing all thoughts she brought armaan a mug of hot choclate and sat down... basket, you sure you ok?... yeah i'm fine... she smiled... oh yeah basket, i forgot to tell i'm going Calfornia, i'm getting enegaged there... omg! calfornia i'm going there too!.. when are you going?.. tommorow... me too! they smiled.. why don't we go together.... ridhimaa smiled ...yeah sure.

sapna couldn't believe her eyes. OMG! armaan you here.!.... armaan smiled... so howz my little sis doing? sapna runs to armaan and gives him a hug. ridhimaa smiled, she remembered when they were interns armaan always loved her like a sister. sapna are you ready?... yeah i am i got so excited. armaan got his bags... come on let go.

ma!.. ridhimaa hugged padma tightly and then she hugged sapna. padma starting crying.. oh mama don't cry.... she nodded. they were just about to step in the house when... hang on! armaan hurried in. padma was shocked... armaan! tum yaha!... armaan grinned and took her hand.. yep only for you... he was about to kiss it when shashank came. hey... don't even think about it!.. armaan let go and put his head down.. um.. sorry uncle.. i mean sir... woh. shashank laughed... hey i was joking and you can call me uncle, we're not in the hospital are we?.. everyone laughed. come on in... sapna went to her mum... mum you won't beleive this armaan is... armaan gave her a glare which meant i'll tell her myself. she spoke nothing.

hahaha, armaan you haven't changed at all.... everyone exept ridhimaa was sitting in the lounge like a big family.armaan decided he should tell them. ji... uncle.. i want to say something, i'm getting married. shashank smiled.. i know that beta. armaan got confused... i spoke to your dad he told me, he might be coming here any moment.... so atleast you can tell who i'm getting married to?... no not yet you'll meet her this evening.

meanwhile ridhimaa was sitting on her bed. she didn't feel like being downstairs. all the time they were talking about his marriage and she didn't want to here about it. she closed her eyes and saw armaan instantly, she opened her eyes... what was that? she couldn't understand what was happening to her? why was this marriage bothering her so much? suddenly she heard the door-bell.she went downstairs and couldn't believe what she saw. it was Dr. Keerti.

soory its a short part. i didn't have enough time and i'll update my aisa kyon hota hain bar bar tommorow. this part was not that good but more coming up........

keeti smiled. armaan couldn't believe keerti was here with his dad!.... hitler here! smiling i think i'm going to faint!

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armaan held her wrist. ridhimaa froze.... first you tell me why are you like this? you're always behaving like something's bothering you? tell me. or i won't let you go.

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ridhimaa picked up the phone... hello ... hey ridhimaa its me atul ... me and anjali have got a suprise for you!

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ridhimaa stared at him remembered all the times when they were interns. she laughed at all the funny memories. ridhimaa are you feeling something for him? she blushed.

plz do comment😳😳

Edited by mannyz_1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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its good...continue plz..how did they get stuck 2gether in te first place?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awsome! ummmm.... how about ...Aur Tum Aaye?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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umm looking at that what about....dosti se pyaar? or umm love at first sight? orrrr hum do ek kambre mein!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome!!! u can call it HUM TUM or anything u like
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey likin ur ff already
plzzz continue soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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pyaar ke do naam ek armaan ek riddhima! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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^^ very nice..so cute...umm.,,,cant think of any names right now because dont know much about your FF...sort of confused of how they got locked in the first place but I do like the intro..continue soon will suggest names when some come to mind!!

*Armaan* 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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first of all i would like to say your FF is awesome...plz do continue i really like the intro...
regarding the title of your FF...i got a few...

1.DIl MILLIE KYA

2.CROSS CONNECTION

3.YEH KYA HO RAHA HAI

4.JAB DIL MILE

I HOPE IT HELPS

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