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Yash is none other than vicky alias arnav ...

Geet going to manali ...

Manu n khushi in km ...


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Yash is none other than vicky alias arnav ...

Geet going to manali ...

Manu n khushi in km ...



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Part 6

Geet: What he said with hesitate voice

Vicky: Papa not leave champ even one minute with smirked face

Geet: iam not asking about papa .oh ..maanji

Vicky: Oh geet iam not hear anything with teasing voice

Geet: Hey duffer iam talk about Manu papa

Vicky: Oh u talk about maan bro but till now he not come in our home

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Geet sad voice: Ok I will talk later and take care manu and cut the call

Vicky turned and shocked seeing that person in front of him.

Person: Vicky with angry voice

Vicky: Oh sexy ..iam talking my friend and his eyes looking ground with guilty voice.

pin drop silence room only heard Thudd..sound

Dadi slapped Vicky so hard ( poor Vicky his Hand carrying his own cheeks)

Dadi: Where is she, where is my child ,Vicky with grabbed Vicky collar

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Vicky: Dadi iam sry plzz forgive me

Dadi sit in sofa and Vicky placed his head in her lap. tears flowing in their eyes.

Vicky: Plz dadi talk me

Dadi: Why u people play with my feeling with hard voice

Vicky: Dadi plz first listen me and then u angry with me

Silent talk( flash back story)

Dadi: Where is she with teary eyes

Vicky: She went Manali for office works.she will come back after two days and champ is ur

Dadi stopped: He is my great grandchild , iam right vicky

Vicky: How u know about him

Dadi: First time I saw him , I found out he is my kibo child , my grandchild


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Manu enter Vicky room with smiling face and seeing dadi crying face

Manu: Badedade why u kai ( badidadi why u crying)

Dadi pickup Manu in her arm and Manu wiped dadi tears with his little hand

Dadi kiss his hand: Ur yasu make me cry

Manu angry face: Yasu why mak cre mummaa angel (yasu why u made cry my mummaa angel)

Vicky: Iam sry champ, I didn't it once again and not make cry ur mummaa angel

Dadi: Whose said to u iam ur mummaa angel

Manu: Mummaa say me( mummaa said to me)

Dadi: Then what u said ur mummaa

Manu sad face: Mummaa said ur darling and angel for her but iam her angel and darling to my. Mummaa

Dadi kiss his both cheeks : Ha ur angel for everyone and ur mummaa said lied u

Manu tried down to ground but dadi hold tightly

Manu:leave me with angry face

Vicky smiled and dadi confused

Vicky: My champ angry with u because u said his mummaa is liar

Dadi smiled: Oh little Manu iam sry , u mummaa never lie to anyone.plz forgive me

Manu cupped dadi cheeks: Badedadi dont ask srye . Mummaa said bade no ask sryee chota( badidadi don't ask sry to me, mummaa said elders not asking sry to younger)but mummaa and yasu asking me sry many time with naughty smiling face

Dadi kiss Manu forehead: I love u my little manu

Manu innocent face: But I have already grlfrend ( girlfriend)

Dadi mouth open wided: Whose ur girlfriend with shocked face

Khushi enter Vicky room : Iam his girlfriend

Dadi: Khushi beta ur parents helped my geet so much, thank u beta,thanks for everything

Khushi: Ur thanks remember me that she is not my sister.plz dadi dont say thanks once again

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Vicky pinned Khushi in wall: What do u said ur three months pregnant with smirked tone

Khushi: Arnav , plzz move if someone saw like that thinking is wrong way

Vicky: No problem and ur my wife and children of my mother, right Khushi gupta with mischievous smile and his hand carrying her cheeks with sensuously

Khushi: Arnav plz...with slow voice

Manu: Yasu with high pitch voice

Both separated their position

Vicky: Ha champ , why u shout dear

Manu: Where is papu with angry face

Vicky hit his forehead: Oh I forgot, wait I will call ur papa

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Vicky call maan and maan pick up the call

Vicky: Bhai where r u

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Maan: Farmhouse vicky

Vicky: Come to mansion bhai

Maan: I need lonely time vicky

Vicky murmuring: I will try to join his family but he want saint life, plz god help me

Maan: Iam not hear anything

Vicky: When will u come back bhai

Maan: Morning vicky

Vicky: Surely morning u will come back mansion

Maan: Yes iam coming

Vicky: Dont forgot, bhai

Maan : Good night Vicky and cut the call

Vicky: Champ ur papa come tomorrow

Manu:tomorrow with sad face

Hall

Dadi try to feed Manu dinner and Manu escaping everytime and roaming everyplace

Dadi: Manu baby eat little bit dear

Manu nods his head negatively

Vicky: If u not eat then iam not give my phone

Manu sad face: Yasu u r badoo

Dadi kneel down : Manu baby I will give my phone , u eat something dear

Manu kiss her cheek: Love u darling

Priya:maaji he called darling like our geet calling u with sad voice

Vicky and dadi emotional look to priya

Ram: today my rock star sleep with me

Vicky: No papa he sleep with me

Priya:no, vicky u not handle child in night time so my little star sleep with my room

Dadi: Everyone stop , iam elders in the house so my decision is final decision

Everyone waiting for dadi decision

Dadi: My little Manu stay with me with little bossy tone

Everyone face fell down and Manu enjoyed his family so much

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Manu sleep in dadi room and dadi also slept next to manu

Midnight maan enter mansion and went straightly to his room and change his dress and slept his master bed

Manu wake up in sleep and searching his mummaa next to him but geet is not here and step down in bed went out room with sleepy face

Manu legs stopped in front of maan room and maan room door also opened

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Manu looking big geet photo in his room and it is enough for him and enter his papu room in his sleepy face

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Maan room fully geet photo everywhere and above bed placed maaneet big photo frames.

Manu not see maan face and thinking Geet sleeping in bed and his head placed maan chest slept in above maan

Maan sleep disturbed but he not open his eyes and he like that feeling and also thought if he open his eyes that feeling his vanished in air. In sleeping state maan protectivly hugs Manu both son and father sleeping very well

Morning

The sun rays disturbed maan sleep and maan wake up seeing beautiful creatures none other our cutie pie

Maan thought: Whose's this sunshine.he so cute and he look like my jaan and also sleep like my geet

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Manu sleep also disturbed in sake of sunrise but he tried to avoid sunrays so his face hide to maan chest more to maan vest

Maan smiled seeing his antics in sleeping state and closed curtain through remote

Manu sleep peacefully in above maan and maan carring his Manu hairs softly but he don't know why he did it everything

Maan starring Manu continuously and Manu wake up in sleep and rubbing his eyes

Maan closed his eyes and Manu seeing his papu in front of him

Manu: Papu with smiling face

Maan selfthought : Papu with closed eyes

Manu kissed face maan fully shout: Mer papu hai with excited voice and maan overwhelmed manu kisses

Vicky searching Manu and enter in maan room and seeing Manu sitting and kissing maan face

Vicky one side happy and other side jealous of maan

Vicky: Champ I searching everywhere and what r doing here

Manu: Yasu see papu mere papu hai

Vicky: Ha ur pa

Maan open his eyes : Vicky

Vicky pickup Manu in his arms : Ha bhai when u came back with tensed face

Maan wake up in bed but not liked Manu in Vicky arms and starring manu

Manu also want go with his papu arm but Vicky hold Manu tightly

Manu: Yasu leave me with angry face

Maan: Vicky , baby

Vicky: Bhai he is my friend child and my friend went to out of station so my champ stayed in our mansion for 2 days fastly said

Maan mind accepted what Vicky said but maan heart not accepted that Manu is not for him and his heart said baby is urs only ours

Maan snatched Manu in Vicky arm and hold protectively in his arm

Vicky: Champ come to me

Manu nods his head negatively

Vicky: Bhai give me

Maan nods his head negatively

Vicky murmuring : Both son and father dido and irritating me very well

Maan:Vicky u said anything with little hard voice

Vicky: No bhai nothing , champ come I will bath u

Manu placed head maan chest with sad face

Maan: I will bath him and u go bring his Dress

Manu kissed maan cheeks and show tongue to vicky

Vicky: Champ it is not good and u change ur team see ur papa

Maan: What u said with hard voice

Vicky: Oh I said papu, bhai

Maan: No u said papa

Vicky: Why I said papa and I said only papu

Maan: Why sunshine calling papu to me with doubt face

Vicky: I don't know bhai, why he calling u papu

Manu: I tell u with innocent face

Vicky murmuring: Champ plz don't say he is ur dad then surely he will kill me with his own hand

Maan: Ha sunshine tell me with eager face

Manu: Ur my papu that only I call papu

Vicky relived: Bhai u not going office today

Maan: No iam not feeling well ( maan want stay with his sunshine)

Vicky smiled: Ok bhai

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After maan fresh up come out bathroom only vest with towel in his neck

Manu already messed dress table and talc powder, comb everything spread down to ground , and manu combing hair with help of comb

Maan smiled seeing his antics: Sunshine what r doing

Unfortunately maan hand touch perfume bottle and bottle fell down into pieces

Maan shout: Sunshine

Manu:papu with crying face

Maan scooped Manu in his arm and nothing sunshine and rubbing his back


Maan twinkled his stomach and Manu laughed loudly

Vicky: What' s going on, laughing sound hearing next room

Manu stopped: Yasu lets go

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Vicky: Ha champ am also ready

Maan: Where r u going.

Manu: Yasu , papu also come with us

Vicky: Champ , bhai not trust god so he not come to pooja room

Vicky: Bhai u not come that place

Manu look maan with puppy face: Papu

Maan looked his face and kisses his cheeks : Lets go sunshine

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Three of them enter pooja room and everyone shocked maan enter pooja room and everyone come behind them

Maan and Manu standing in front of idol and Vicky standing in back of them

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Dadi murmuring Vicky ears: What magic did my little manu with ur bro , he enter pooja temple

Vicky: Sexy wait and see our champ antics

Manu: Papu , arati

Maan: Sunshine in our house noone name is arati with confused face

Manu hit his forehead and mind voice: Why papu itna buddhu hai.he don't know pooja arati

Maan understood what manu tried to said him and bring arati plate

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Manu stopped: Bell

Maan hold his left hand to bell and right hand to arati plate.

Manu once again stopped : Papu

Maan: Now what sunshine

Manu: Song

Dadi: Vicky, if maan sing a song with his hard voice

Dadi and Vicky giggled and enjoy their cute talk

Manu: Yasu and bade dadi shut up

Both put finger in their lips.

Maan: Sunshine but i don't know arati song

Manu mind voice: What I will do, buddhu papu dont know song , if mummaa here she sing song very well.

Priya: Little star if u give me permission, I will sing bajan song

Manu nods his head with cute face

Priya sing bajan song and maan did arati.




part end


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PART 7


Khushi: Arnav why u love geet di more than ur siblings even ur parents

Vicky: Geetu is my best friend , we r birth in same day.we share everything in childhood now itself.i never hide anything to her.u know one thing khushi ,in Annie marriage what she did it for our family.

Flashback start

Geet room

Vicky enter geet room: Geetu where r u

Geet: Vicky 2 minutes I will come voice came from bathroom

Vicky seeing geet dairy and open geet diary and read it

Vicky don't touch my diary, u know very well, I share everything to u but not this wish

Vicky smirked face : Me, my jaan and my lovely wishes

1) in rainy day wishes

long bike ride with my jaan ( Specially tight hug )

In midnight wish to eat ice cream with my jaan but only one cream ( yeah iam not share ice cream anyone but ur my jaan right so I will share with u, idont mind)

I wish placed my head in ur shoulder and my hand hold ur hand tightly , walk with u every way ( even till my eternity i have no problem)

Geet snatched diary from Vicky: Vicky don't read my diary

Vicky: Geet iam not complete yaar, give me

Geet running out and Vicky run behind her

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Geet bumped someone and open her eyes seeing her jaan infront of her and maan hold her waist protectively

Maaneet starring each other and stupid Vicky disturbed

Maan : U not walk properly geet with angry face

Geet: Oh...maanji ..Vicky with stammering voice

Maan: Why u stammering

Vicky: She not fault, bhai, iam only chased her

Maan: U both not children, playing games and go check flower arrangements

Vicky: Ok bhai geet lets go dragged geet went out immediately

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Priya room

Priya and dadi arrange every jewellery

Geet: Aunty what r doing

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Priya: Come Geet beta u select ur jewellery

Geet: Already I have jewellery aunty

Dadi: Kibo select karo

Geet selected one necklace : I love this necklace

Priya and dadi smiled: But this is not for u

Geet face fell down and dadi carrying her hairs

Dadi: This necklace is traditional jewellery.this necklace my mother in law gave to me and I gave u priya bahu and now priya turn will gave to her dil

Priya: If u want this necklace then marry my maan

Geet little blushed: Iam not marry ur robot son aunty

Dadi: Then marry to vicky

Geet chuckled face: He is my buddy only my buddy

Priya: No maaji I will give this necklace only to my elder bahu

Geet: Ok if i will marry ram uncle u give me necklace darling with teasing tone

Priya twisted her ear: badmash What u said

Ram:priya why u hurting my princess

Ram: Geet , Vicky searching everywhere

Geet went outside

Priya: Maaji my wish also this necklace belong to geet only

Dadi: my wish see my maan and geet marriage but I thinking about maan behaviour.he run behind money.if he not take care of my kibo.i want my children happiness only

Ram: Maa he will change soon

Dadi: Hmm iam waiting for that moments

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Maan: Geet why u roaming behind me

Geet: Oh ..maanji, darling asking u

Maan nods his head: U r impossible

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Geet pout and Vicky smiled

Vicky: This song dedicated only for u geetu

Kadhal Cricket-u

vilundhurichu wicket-u.

unnai naanum paathadhaale aaneney
duck out-u. (2)

(It's love cricket game a wicket has fallen.I am a duck wicket
after seeing you.)

Romance romance
idhu thaan en chance
en vazhkai un kayyil
irukkudhuda.

(Romance Ramance,its my chance now,my life is in your hand.)

Yenna senja oththukuva
enna nee yeppa yaethukkuva.
ennenne venum sollu
unakkaaga enna maathikkuren.

(what should I do to confess you when will you accept me,tell me what you want I will change myself.)

Unnakkaaga enna maathikkittaen
aanalum nee madhikkalayae.

(I changed myself for you but you didn't respect me).

Irundhaalum unnai
mattum kadhal seivenae.
Neethaan en boomi
unna suththi varuvaenae.

(however, I'll always love you.you're my earth I'll circle around you)

Azhaga irukkura
ponnunga ellaam
arivaa irukka maattaanga.

(Girl's who are beautiful not intelligent)

Azhaga irukkura
ponnunga unakku alva
koduthuttu povaanga.

(Beautiful girls will dump you at any time)

Azhagum arivum
kalandhu ulagil
yaarul milla.

(No girls in this world are both beautiful and talented)

Unpinnae naan
suthuradhaal en arumai
unakku puriyavilla.

(coz I am behind you,you don't understand my awesomeness)

Kadhal Cricket-u
vilundhurichu wicket-u.
unnai naanum
paathadhaale aaneney
duck out-u

(It's love cricket game a wicket has fallen.I am aduck wicket after seeing you.)

Geet : Vicky iam not leave u run behind Vicky ...

Annie marriage day

Everyone busy their work and geet come downstairs with elegant choli.everyone eyes falls for geet she look like angel come from heaven

Maan starring geet and geet blushed seeing maan

Vicky : Bhai...

Maan not hear anything but starring geet

Maaneet eyes locked each other and Vicky pinched maan hand

Maan: Vicky why u pinching me with hard voice

Vicky: Why u starring geet bhai

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Maan: Iam not starred anyone and went inside with angry face

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Geet: My cute angry bird

Vicky: Kya bhai is cute.u only said him like that

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Telephone ringed and geet attend call

Geet: Hello

Girl: Can I speak with geet

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Geet: iam geet speaking

Girl: mam , ur parent in serious condition and come xyz hospital soon

Geet kneel down ground with shocking state

Girl: mam u hear me

Geet come out shocking state : mom ..dad with stammering voice and tearing rolling in her eyes.

Geet: dadi runout searching dadi, Vicky

Geet stopped hearing sunitha bua voice

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Bua: I want to stop this marriage but I have no reason to stop this marriage , if I stopped marriage today then this marriage never happening in future.

Geet mind voice: if bua know about maa and papa accident , she definetly stop annie marriage with arjun bhai.i am not said anyone about accident.

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Geet locked in room and crying vigrously : maa and papa plz don't go away from me

Dadi knocked geet room: geet beta, open the door

Geet wiped tears and splashed water in her face and open the door

Dadi cupped geet cheeks: why u crying bacha with worried face

Geet: oh... annie going away from me .geet hugs dadi tightly

Dadi wiped her tears: annie not going away from u

Annie marriage ritual start and everyone busy their works

Geet standing in corner of marriage hall and Vicky dragged geet in centre of hall.

Vicky tried to cheer up geet but everything is vain.

Everyone thing geet sad because of annie marriage but geet break down inside and tried to smile and mind fully thing about her parents

Maan looking at geet dull face and he not liked her sad face , he only seeing her smiling face, he want to go cheer up geet but his ego not allowed

Finally annie marriage finished and everyone went outside send off to annie and arjun except geet .

Geet sit down to ground and crying vigrously said mom and papa

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Vicky touched her shoulder and geet hug Vicky tightly

Vicky: geet why u crying

Geet: Vicky maa .. papa

Vicky: what happened to rano maa and uncle

Geet: accident

Vicky: tell me clearly

Geet narrated phone conversation with chocked voice and Vicky eyes moist hearing rano and mohinder accident

Geet: Vicky, I need to see maa and papa with srying face

Vicky: nothing happeneing our rano maa and uncle ..

Flash back end

Vicky: khushi , she hided her parents accident in sake of annie marriage. After she not saw her parents alive. If she went before atleast she saw her parents alive in few minutes. She only saw her parents dead body with teared eyes and khushi face tears flowing in her eyes

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Maan room

Manu : papu u love me with sad face

Maan: I love u so much my sunshine

Manu: if u love me then why u not come to see me

Maan: ...

Part end

next part - part 8

Precap: geet in danger both present and past . if maan save her or someone save geet

Maaneet in manali

maan and manu bonding and if maan know manu his own blood guessing guys..


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Nice amazing update
mannu n maan moments was so sweet
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Happy New Year 🤗
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wow fabulous update buddy fabulous
thanks for pm ..
and a very very happy new year to you too my Buddy always stay happy
love you..

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