Maaneet New ss HOPE- part 12- page 146-24-feb-17 - Page 62

Originally posted by: Linsie

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Fantastic update
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Originally posted by: Linsie

Originally posted by: Linsie

Fantastic update
thanks for the pm...

ferdouz, peru.c.patel, dpurva, Aakshitha, vyvyv, iyshuganesh, sathiyapalani, sam4u2015,

Hi guys thanks for liking and comments . if any grammatical and spelling mistakes in this part iam sry . plz read note and then continue story

NOTE

First thanks u so much. Previous part , before post I really scared, if anyone like maan amd manu bonding but everyone liked maan and manu bonding. Thank u so much buddies

In my both stories I give more nicknames to my lovely characters so don't confused

Characters and nicknames

Maaneet child - manu ,sunshine,little manu, champ, little star,rockstar,cutiepie,angel and chotu

( everyone thinking why iam not give maaneet child real name. I already choosed special name for my cutiepie, I will reveal in correct time. iam right anu di/dear)

Geet- kibo, buddy, jaan,princess

Maan- manu,jaan,robot,khadoos

Arnav - Vicky, yash, yasu

Khushi- pari

Dadi- darling,sexy,angel

Part 8

Maan room

Manu: Papu u love me. With sad face

Maan: I love u so much my sunshine with emotional voice

Manu: Then why u not come to see with sad face

Maan eyes tears rolling in his cheeks and in his heart anyone stabbbed with knife like pain

Maan scooped in his arms and kissed manu face fully

Maan: Sry sunshine sry..

Manu seeing his papu crying and he also start crying

Manu: Woh...

Maan wiped manu tears : Sry baby don't cry

Manu wiped maan tears and kiss his cheeks : Sryeee with babish voice

Miyra baby ( Annie ka daughter) enter maan room

Miyra: Badi Mamu noone love me , when baby ( manu) come to our house .everyone forgot me with angry face

Maan settled miyra in his lap: Baby everyone love u

Manu angry pout and seeing his papu ka lap to another baby

Maan smiled seeing manu possessiveness for him and settled manu in other side lap

Maan: Miyra baby , he is younger than u.so u only take care of ur chotu

Miyra: She is my chotu with smiling face

Maan look to manu: She is ur sister.don't angry with her.

Miyra kiss manu cheeks and manu also reciprocate her kiss

*******

Hall

Everyone seeing miyra and manu playing .specially maan not remove his eyes to manu

Annie:Vicky bhai, I know u crazy about phone but in one year u changed 25 th phone

Vicky pout face and mind voice: U people don't know why changed my phone continuously thanks to my champ.he only breaked my phone everytime.

Poor Vicky in mindvoice but manu already stole his 25 th phone

Thudd sound...

Vicky come out of thought and seeing his phone into pieces

Vicky: Champ not again. U created record.this is 25th phone u breaked.u never break ur mummaa phone.

Manu heared mummaa : Mummaa woh...woh mummaa with crying

( guys noone replace mother place)

Dadi: Vicky u remember his mummaa.

Vicky : Sry dadi

Maan pick up in arm: Sunshine don't cry iam with u right

Vicky pickup manu in his arm and murmuring manu ears: Champ stop ur crying then only we both talk ur mummaa through laptop

Manu stopped his crying: Yasu, lolipop( laptop)

Everyone thing baby talk about chocolate

Vicky: Champ , smile plz and tingling manu body

Manu smiling in sake of tingling

Maan fuming seeing Vicky and manu bonding.

*******

Vicky room

Vicky and manu in front of laptop and laptop already connect projector because dadi want see her kibo through project screen but she donot want come in front of her

Vicky called geet through his laptop

Geet connected video call to fraction seconds

Geet: Vicky why u not pickup my call

Manu: Mummaa with sad face

Geet: Manu baby, darling, sweetheart , dont be sad baby.u stay with ur family.

Manu: I miss u gestured open arms wide

Geet: I miss u so much with sad face

Dadi carrying geet photo through project screen and dadi almost seeing geet after more than 2 yrs

Dadi tears flowing in her eyes .

Geet: Vicky , how is everyone and manu not troubled anyone

Manu: Mummaa iam good boy

Geet: I know my baby is good and naughty child

Manu pout and geet smiled seeing his pout

Geet: How is my darling

Manu: Mummaa , badedade (gesture dadi is here)

Vicky: Oh geet, champ saying dadi take care him so much. U know geet my champ created his new record

Geet: It means u new phone is gone with laughed loudly

Dadi kisses geet photo through screen and manu seeing dadi kissed her mummaa

Manu possessive child right.

Manu kiss geet through laptop and Vicky chuckled seeing manu antics

Vicky pout face: u know geet maan bhai not leave champ with me. He is very possessive

Geet: one side happy manu got his father love but other side scared if he snatched manu from her.vicky got her emotional feeling in her face

Vicky: geet, manu is ur only. no one snatched ur manu from u

Geet: god snatched everything from me but god give me wonderful gift not a gift, he is treasure ,my manu, my baby. I cannot live without him. Now he is my soul. If he away from me surely I will die with emotional moist eyes

Vicky angry face: geet

Geet: sry baba, I need go to meeting,manu baby be a good boy.I am coming back ,I will call u

*******

Hall

Everyone enjoyed manu naughtiness except dadi because dadi in her room.khushi come to hall with worried face

Khushi: Arnav , geet di missing with worried face

Vicky: What u saying with shocking face

Khushi: Pinky call me said that geet di not come back hotel.it almost three hours she not back .

Maan: What happened to geet with same shocking state

Manu understand their talk and something happened to his mummaa

Manu: Mummaaa...with start crying

Maan scooped manu in his arm: Nothing happening ur mummaa and nothing happening to my jaan

Ram: What happening yaar.everyone talk about geet .

Maan: Dad , geet is missing and my jaan is missing

Ram: What u said maan , u people know where is geet but u not tell about us.u both thinking iam nothing for u

Maan: No dad two days before only know geet in Delhi but Vicky hided everything for us.he is very well now where is geet this year.

Ram : Vicky is it true with hard voice

Vicky:ha papa before itself l know where is geet and champ is ur with guilty voice

Maan: My child ,sunshine is my own blood.iam right Vicky with emotional voice

Vicky: Bhai

Maan: Why u hided it from me . this years I thinking u helping me to find geet but iam wrong. U only hided every clue about geet. U give wrong information about geet everytime. I trust u Vicky but u break my trust with heavy voice

Vicky: I already told bhai that iam not helping u , iam helping her.

Maan: why Vicky

Vicky shout: because she don't want see ur face bhai. She really hurted because of u. in one years I hard time me, u know how much time i compelled her come back our family. Finally she arrived delhi. But u penetrated that she nothing for u.once again she shattered. Even she got promised from me. I never say truth anyone one. U all know very well .i never break to her promise.

Maan: Vicky , I thought she move on her life with guilty voice

Vicky: bhai that day u saw park geet with man. It is me. Iam with her

Maan: I know Vicky ,today I got every information through my personal detective.

Khushi: jiju and arnav stop ur fighting , plz think about geet di

Priya: hey bhaghan why u play with my family. One side give me happiness and other side give sad. happy for my grandchild infront me or sad for my geet is missing

Maan: no mom, I will find her, I will get back her home.u will take care of sunshine, I will go to manali.

Vicky: bhai iam also come with u

Khushi: iam also come with u jiju

Vicky: no khushi u stay with champ. Me and bhai will going to manali

Maan kiss his manu : sunshine don't cry. I will go and come back ur mummaa. Ur good boy right

Manu nods his head: papu I need my mummaa

Maan: ur mummaa never go away from u

Manu: come back soon with my mummaa

Maan: yes sunshine this time iam not leave her alone. Vicky lets go

Maan and Vicky went out

****

Maan flight

Maan closed his eyes thinking his past painful life

After annie bidaai , maan went meeting to outstation ,he don't know rano and mohinder accident.

Geet , Vicky and family members reached hospital.but geet ka bad luck her parents already died .

Geet shocked state that she not speak to anyone even she not cry.

Everyone sad about geet parents die and other side worried about seeing geet state

Vicky calling maan many time but he not pick up Vicky call and even he send message but no reply for him

After two days but geet state became same. She not eat anything . everyone tried hard but she not speak single word. She only starring her parents photo

Other side

Maan meeting finished and check it his mobile but no missed call and messages

maan phone ringed and maan pickup call

maan: hello

man: maan beta where r u, everyone calling u many time but u not pick anyone call

maan: oh uncle my phone not with me. My phone with ur daughter NT

NT father: but I already informed NT ,two days before geet parents died .

Maan: what rano aunty and mohinder uncle died.how it is happened with shocking state

Nt father: come back soon everyone need u specially geet I worried about her so much.she not speak anything

Maan close his eyes imagine geet state: geet

Maan: uncle iam coming ,u stay with my family

Nt father: I will and cut the call

Devil nt come infront of maan

Maan: naintara why u not inform geet parent died with angry voice

Nt:maan ,they are just ur neighbour

Maan: u think they are just my neighbour, no rano aunty in my heart she is my mother place and mohinder uncle ,he is my friend and my geet ( my geet words really emotional and god only know why maan said my geet ) u never understand and I will give u ten minutes and pack ur thing soon.we need go back to delhi

NT mindvoice: every time I tried impress maan family but my every attempt failed .they love that behanji geet. I don't know what special thing for her . even maan also said my geet. No maan u r only for mine. I never allow geet next to u.maan treat me only iam his friend and business partner daughter but maan seeing way geet it is different. I deleted every missed call and messages in maan phone. I don't want this time maan stay near with geet. Everyone treat her like her khurana mansion ka princess with irriating face

*****

KM

Dadi sitting in hall with sad face and arjun & annie enter in mansion

Annie hug dadi tightly and cried vigrously and dadi eyes tearing flowing like river.

Arjun: dadi where is geet with moist eyes

Dadi: she stay in handa mansion with her parents room.

Arjun: dadi I will go check geet and annie u stay with dadi

****

Handa mansion

Geet starring her parents

Man: geet beta , I know u lost everything but ur property ,ur handa industries everything under me.if u adjust me, u will get ur property back ( guys I think u understood what he trying to say) with lustful eyes.

Man try touch to geet shoulder and that time one hard slap to man face

Arjun: stay away from my geet. What u think she is orphan. Iam with her. She is my sister with heavy hard angry voice

Man: how dare u slap me. This is my property and get out my place.

Geet not in real world and her face no reaction.

Arjun protectively hold geet shoulder and come out to mansion

KM

Arjun narrated everything to maan family and Vicky not control his angry.

Vicky: how dare he talk my geet this way. I will kill him with my own hands with angry voice

Bua: Vicky, how many people u will kill. We will join geet to any other orphanage

Everyone shout: bua/sunitha

Arjun: no need it. Geet is my sister. She is with me in my home

Annie: ha arjun ur right.

Dadi: when I will live ,she is not orphan ,sunitha. She is my child. She stay with me with angry tone.

Geet sitting in sofa with hugged her knees and dadi carrying her hairs

Flashback end

Maan flight land to manali.maan and Vicky come out of airport .

Part end

NEXT PART - part 9

Precap: I give only guessing😉

Past: if maan will bring geet from that hell or he leave her alone in hell

Present: if maan will find out geet or not .

If maan will bring geet back to km or not

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