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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you so much.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sapnaf52

awesome update. ..deepti. .
rajmata happy seeing raga close. .
poor swarna feeling bad for her..
thanks for pm. .

Thanks so much Sapna..😳
ya dear Swarna is going through tough phase but she will be out soon..😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ..neelanjana

Hi Deep šŸ¤—

Nice update !
First Rajmata is very happy to see RaGa... She is happy for them !
RaGa moments were as usual lovely ā¤ļø
With each passing update I hate Laksh more and more 😔
Swarna 😭... I hope she come out from that hell !!
Thanks for pm Deep ā¤ļø

Thanks so much NIks...šŸ¤— ā¤ļø
me too hate Laksh..😔
but Swarna will meet Gayatri and than they will be more strong..ā­ļø

its my pleasure dear.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: abba12

Hi Deepti šŸ¤—

I am reallyyy sorry I know sorry doesn't work too as I always say it -P .

This is getting better with each part , rana g and gayatri are closer , and rajmata is lovely mom she wants then together ..

Laksh is as bad as he was in show , in fact worst here :-( .. I hope u give happy ending to swara šŸ˜›
Lovely part , keep writing :-)
Update soon :-)

Arre nahi koi baat nahi..šŸ¤— Amna don't be sorry yaar..
you came and reading ..it means alot to me..
thanks so much dear ..😳
so happy you loved it..😃

ya sure Swarna should have a better and happy future..ā­ļø

will try to update soon.šŸ˜›

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Posted: 8 years ago



Hello friends ... 😃
i am back with new update..😳

hope you are doing good..šŸ‘šŸ¼


thanks for reading this story with so much patience ..as i am late in update many times..😳

but you all are supporting me ..it means a lot.ā¤ļø

so sorry..just held up so couldn't update earlier..

i have replied you all..

pls give your valuable comments..will be waiting for it.😳

HAPPY NEW YEAR IN ADVANCE!! ā­ļø

take care...šŸ¤—


update in next post..scroll down.😳


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Ranaji were waiting for Gayatri in hall ..the effect of Gayatri s closeness was increasing on him and Gayatri too not remained unaffected by Ranaji..his charm ..

Swarna came for breakfast along with Laksh but they defo not looking happy..Ranaji noticed it..and Ranaji wanted to ask but stopped..as he thought to first observe more about it..than will ask anything..

Gayatri was looking so b'ful and Ranaji was just drooling on her ..why he couldn't saw this innocence before and this love before ..he said to himself..

Gayatri was also helping in serving ..even after Rajmata told her not to do and just sit with them ..but Gayatri told them ..she love to do it..

Gayatri came close to Swarna and suddenly she felt that she is hiding something ..she didn't get what it was but something was for sure..

She saw she is hiding her face with her pallu ..first she thought she is doing it out of respect as a royal tradition but she thought that Rajmata being not so orthodox ..didn't applied such rules or forced anyone to do so..

She thought to ask Swarna afterwords..so she didn't asked her anything that time..

Later Ranaji was getting ready in his room.. Gayatri was giving them the imp files and all stuff..

And Ranaji was thinking how quickly she started learning everything ..smart Gayatri..inspite she didn't study much..but she is indeed sharp minded..

He reminded of Sulakshna ..he always wanted his wife to take interest in his work too..but she was never interested..infact she was interested in keeping Ranaji to be with her.. and she stopped him at many occasions and when the work didn't got completed at time..Rajmata asked Ranaji and he felt very guilty about it ..but he was so addicted to Sulakshna ..that he just couldn't denied..many times..



"Ranaji !! Ranaji !! ..kya aap kuch soch rahe hai ??ye raha aapka rumal.."

[Ranaji !! Ranaji !! are you thinking something ?? here is your hankey..]

"Oh!! Gayatri who hum.."

[Oh!Gayatri..i was..]

he came to senses..than he looked at her ..and now get time to notice Gayatri once again..

he now get time to appreciate her ..how he could say it in front of all of them at breakfast..

"You are looking so b'ful Gayatri.."

"Kya ?kya kaha aapne..?? hindi main kahiye na ?

[What you just said ?? pls speak in hindi na??]

Than Ranaji smiled and embraced in her arms ..and explained her that he wanted to tell her in hall too but now saying that

"Aap bahut khoobsurat lag rahi hain Gayatri.." ..

He translated in hindi too.. Gayatri got embarradsed and her face turned crimson red ..

"Aap kahe toh aage se sabke saamne hi tareef kar diya karenge..kyu??"

[If you say than I will appreciate you in front of everyone..what say ??"

Gayatri blushed more and tried to free herself from his arms but he hold her tightly ..

"Ranaji aap bhi na ..accha ab aapko der nahi ho rahi ??"

[Ranaji you ..ok now you aren't getting late ??]

"Hmm Raniji ..aap kahe toh hum aaj kahin nahi jaate.."

[Hmm Raniji ..if you say I won't go today ..]

"Toh mat jayiye par ye jaan lijiye ki log jab kahenge k Ranaji toh Gayatri devi k aane k baad badal gaye hain..kaam kaaj main dhyan nahi hai ..phir hume dosh mat dijiyega.."

[So don't go than but see when people will say that after Gayatri devi coming into Ranaji's life ..Ranaji has changed ..than you won't blame me ..]



Gayatri said in taunting but very sweet tone that Ranaji couldn't help but smiled and suddenly thought came in his mind that Sulakshna never pointed out this ..infact if possible she always was ready to go for riding..trips..journeys ..but not ready to anything for subjects or do some hard work..strange ..but there was much difference between two queens whom Ameerkot witnessed..



"Ranaji mujhe galat mat samajhiye ...

main aapke aur praja k beech kabhi nahi aana chahti ..

bas hamesha aapka saath dena chahti hoon.."

[Ranaji don't get me wrong ..but I never want to come between you and the subjects ..i always want to be with you..to help you..]



Gayatri was looking so innocent saying this..Ranaji cupped her face and kissed her forhead ..

"You are so sweet Gayatri ..aapke itne rang hai ..aur roz ek nayi Gayatri hum dekhte hain..aur aap hume roz hairan kar deti hain..aap insaan k roop main ek heera hain..heera..hume app par garv hain.."

[You are so sweet Gayatri ..you have so many shades ..everyday I see a new Gayatri and you amaze me everyday ..really you are a a gem of a person ..proud of you Raniji.]

Tears came in Gayatri's eyes..she was loving more and more Ranaji..

"Hmmm ..aapki aankhen jaldi baras jaati hain Gayatri ..inhe rokiye..Ameerkot main baarish acchi hoti hain..kahin aisa na ho baad aa jaye .."seeing her teary eyes ..he said to make the mood light..

[Hmmm..your eyes showers easily ..stop them..Ameerkot has goof rainfall ..i fear if flood not happen ...]and smiled looking at her ..she was rolling her pallu on her fingers ..blushing more..and trying to say something but couldn't say..

He lifted her chin up and said .."Ok Raniji ..hum jaate hain par kal aapko hamare saath ek jagah aana hoga ..aap Rani hai ..praja se milna aapka farz hai..chalengi na!!"

[Ok Raniji ..i am going..but you have to go with me at one place..being a queen you have to meet subjects..you will go na!!]

"Ji jarur chalungi ...jo hukum your highness.."

[Yes I will go for sure..as you say your highness ..]

"I am impressed .."he said to himself ..Gayatri is learning herself many words of English too..

Just than a servant came and said Rajmata called him..he went after caressing Gayatri's face..

"Hum chalte hain..apna dhyan rakhiyega.."

[I am going ..take care of yourself.]

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Next day Gayatri and Ranaji went to a near by village..there they have to go on horse for some distance..as the way was like that ..no car could go there..

on horse Gayatri wasn't ready to sit on horse back as she was scared..Ranaji tried to convince her ..nothing will happen but she refused to take chance..he even said in fun is she a coward ??..but

she said she can walk but won't go on horse..

Ranaji was not at all angry but he was enjoying this one other shade of Gayatri ..

He decided and lifted her on horse..and himself sit on horse too and started horse riding to the destination...Gayatri honestly didn't expected this..she said to him that she is sorry that he has to take her like this ..she didn't meant to bother him..but he said ..no worries ..if have to do ..he can even walk miles with her in his arms..just listening to this she was like on top of the world and she felt heat on her cheeks ..first she was all shy by going out with Ranaji like this on horse..so close to him..and secondly his warm breath touching her face..when ever he came more close or horse run fast ..

Don't know if deliberately or suddenly but Ranaji's cheeks touched her cheeks a bit and she blushed more and more..

"Gayatri kya hua ..hum acchi gurhsawari nahi kar rahe kya ..koi takleef toh nahi?"

[Gayatri what happened ??am I not riding well??]

"Nahi who aisi koi baat nahi hain..aap ..woh .."

[No its not like that..you ..actually..]

She couldn't explain ..than he said ..ok fine ..i will teach you horse riding too..and seemed he understood ..that's why he again touched his cheeks with her cheeks and pretended as if nothing happen..

And he started explaining some tips for good horse riding and eventually they have to stay there for one day so he took out some time and teahed her again...needless to say that Gayatri enjoyed a lot ..

There were some cute -lovely moments in the trip

She was a free bird there ..she roamed in the houses of villagers along with Ranaji ..talked to them ..listened to their problems ..and spent time with her love too..her Ranaji..

And he too took care of her very well ..enjoyed after long and feel how its nice to be with someone who's all caring and loving ..he too enjoyed with Gayatri and plus they both did many good deed for villagers in short span of time ..they extended their visit for one more day ..and both shared alotof things ..subjects were so happy to see their king and queen there..

All in all they had great time there..and Ranaji made sure about their security too ..now also he was so worried about attacks on Gayatri..

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Here in palace Swarna was waiting for Gayatri as she could not met her till now..she thought ..hope Gayatri Bhabhi come back soon so I can talk to her..

But one thing she did ..she tried not to go in front of Laksh ..when he came drunken ..she waited ..and when he slept off ..she slept on couch and also woke up early before her..

She was saving her somehow..

Gayatri too was aware of that she had to talk to Swarna as soon as possible but she regretted she couldn't till now on all this hurry for village trip..

Two days passed like this.

Now news came of king-queen coming back..she felt relieved.

Gayatri and Ranaji were smiling looking at each other..they were in the car and Ranaji was driving.





Thanks friends...ā¤ļø

Deepti.😳

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Updated. 😃
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Sending pms.😳
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Deeps happy New Year to you too in advance.
Beautiful very very beautiful update, loved it.
The update was like a poetry loved it, RaGa moments in their room were beautiful, Ranaji teasing Gayatri with her tears was fun.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Advance Happy New year Deep.
Super update.
Well Written.I like ur way of writing.
Ranaji was comparing his two wives.
He is happy with Gayathri.Because of her concern.
They spend some time for eachother.
She is blushing..
Thanks for pm.

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