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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Itssanjh
This is one of the beat stories I hqve read on shraman! Lovely!

Thanks so much Sanjh for reading and commenting...Really happy could make you like it. 😊😊

Originally posted by: LubSha
Hi Malika,
Loved it. Very well written. That's Shravan and Sumo for us. Their personality and friendship was depicted aptly. Loved their banter and the way they confessed. Shravan was too cute when he didn't want to go see the doctor, and ziddi Sumo was great. Awesome OS. Keep writing more like these.

Lubna.

Thanks so much Lubna for the sweet comment...Its actually very good when a reply comes from an amazing writer herself 😊 ...Really glad you could relate to my depiction of ShraMan...And as for Shravu not wanting to go see the doc...well that was kind of wishful thinking😆...I feel that man was too perfect to be true sometimes (always standing strongly for others)...How I wanted to see his adorable and childish sides which he rarely got a chance to bring out (thanks to his ever tragic past). Like in that tattoo thingy...How cute he was to be so fascinated by it 😆 I would hv actually loved it if he went ahead and tried to decode the mystery and then asked about it from Sumo.

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anonymousanju

@anonymousanju

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

hey malika :) ...i am anju ... thanks god found ur os.. n i must say darling it was amazing...totally refreshing.. thanks god u didnt started from how shravu messed up all in front of media... god hated him that time...bt thanks to u :) ... finally preeta spoke up...n shravu man thats y i luv him...never mattered how much he said he hates her or dsnt care but man u always cared... n nirmu thanks god u confessed... sumo u needed to realise it babe ... n in room, how shravu felt dizzy.. god that kidnapping fiasco...man thanks god atlast he agreed to go meet dr arora... n how concerned she had become n how she assured him at hospital that she is with him.. n how he made faces like a kid while drinking milk...thats so cute... n then head massage...seriously his hair... man its amazing.. n at last finally they he confessed ...that was needed... n then their kiss ...omg m blushing.. n then how she teased him...didnt confess... they r impossible n thanks god she didnt tell him about ramu drama.. loved it a lot dear.. have send u a buddy pls accept n do me a favour ...whenvr u write smthng on shraman pls send me a pm :) .. love ya dear...:)

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Hey malika...i am dolly. ...this was beautiful and i loved ever bit of it. ...please write more...you write beautifully. ..hope to see you soon😊

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malika

@_symphony

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Nik03
Hey Malika...
This was soo cute dear!!
Loved Shravan's confession!!
There was love, anger, frustation, worry, care n above all two true friends who are in deep love with each other...They were our Shraman!!
Beautifully penned dear 👏
Can u plz cont it???? Its a request!!
I want sumo's confession also coz we never got her confession in the show also...plz consider if possible..
N do write more!!
Love
Nik

Hey Nik, thankyou so much dear for reading and commenting...I am rly happy you liked it. And I very well agree with the friends bit. Even in that scene before ShraMan were going to the registrar office that scene in car ...though Shravan said in a hint of sarcasm but actually he was so right...the best part of their marriage was that they knew each other inside out...And accepted and loved each other even despite knowing their worst shortcomings...So their friendship was the strongest foundation of their love, so strong that even when love would fall short...friendship wont let it fade 😳

Originally posted by: Jerry2308
Amazing OS... Wish we could see such sweet moments in the show instead of that media fiasco..

Hey jerry thankyou so much dear for your sweet words...really happy you liked my effort. And I so agree with ya...the media fiasco was so out of place. Just put in randomly without any logic. I wished they had come up with something more creative and sensible because Shravan abondoning his life aprtner was the biggest irony of the character himself...He could never do to anyone what he feared his whole life that too just because of an ego clash.

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