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Spandana

@sptrno

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Awww as always this was beyond beautiful adorable so love it!

Thank you so much!!

Spandana

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malika

@_symphony

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: pinky.padda
amazing
so romantic and cute
loved it

Thankyou so much Pinky for reading and commenting...Means a lot 😊😊

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb
This was the cutest thing ever ! I loved Shravan's confession and I love how Sumo calls him "husband", keep writing these "random" shots, they make me smile :)

Hey...Thankyou so much for the sweet words dear. Glad you liked the confession...I just wanted to keep it very simple and natural. 😳 And honestly these two had been pretty quick when it came to acknowledging each other with right..Just like how he started calling her Mrs. Malhotra even before we thought 😆

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malika

@_symphony

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: an_chau
Malika, this is simply beautiful! It leaves me with a "I wish..."

Hey Anu 🤗

Its so good to see you back!!

And really happy you could relate to the story and liked it...Means so much!! Especially when there were so many common things we wanted to see on ShraMan 😳

Once again thanks a ton dear 😊

Hope to see you around more often on the forum.

Originally posted by: Crazypiya
Simple amd sweet
Always wanted this things to be happen on the show.. But alas..
But niw m happy atleadt u fullfilled my wish...

Hey Piya...Glad you liked my effort. And I feel obliged to know my story could manage to fulfil even slightest of a wish related to this show (Though I know you are just being too generous to me 😳)...So thankyou so much dear...😳😊

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malika

@_symphony

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: bworm
Awww..that was so cute.

Hey dear...thankyou so much for dropping by and taking the time to read and comment. Means a lot!! And really happy you liked it 😊😊

Originally posted by: reshmanair356
That was so cute!!!!..loved the way she kept on referring to herself as his wife. ..or him as her husband..and loved the confession part. .gave me lots of solace.

Is there any way you could convert this into a TS and give us her love confessions as well...I mean if she could be more elaborate about her yearning..that would be healing.

Hey Reshma...Thankyou so much for your lovely words buddy. Glad you liked the confession bit. 😊As for converting this into a TS, I really don't have any idea right now...But will surely try to pen something down if possible. Till then, thanks once again for commenting and liking.

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malika

@_symphony

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Castile2
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Unress

A lovely title to a lovelier story!

Sumo using her brains to put two and two together 😛

"Khadoos nahin bahut sahi banda hai Shravan Sumo"

Go Preeta!! Show your boss who the hero is! 👏

Nimmo ne jaate jaate at least kuch toh sahi kiya yahan.. 😕

She went to confront him but got a confession!! 😆

"Cut that crap Sumo"
(Remember when he said to Adi "...does my face looks like I give a damn?" I tried imagining that expression here! 😆 )

These two dummies don't realize that they care for each other like no one else can!

And yes!

Shravan here was actually hurt after taking a hammer on the head! 😛

Only Sumo can get past this stubborn bull head!

Banda Papa se bohot darta hai!! 🤣

" Mrs Malhotra do you really think I can let you claim my whole room , my bed and ofcourse not to forget my bathroom so easily??"

"Please Sumo abhi koi mental hospital nahin khula hoga...I will take you there tomorrow" 🤣

"Very funny!! Now duck your stupid jokes and get that lazy ass moving. We are going for a check-up" 😆

Bossy Sumo and funny Shravan. Best combo!

Shravan is scared of the MRI check up?!! 😆

Loved the next scene to bits!! 😳

Hair massage though!! 😆

Possessive much Mr. Malhotra, eh? 😛

But the confession!! Uff 😳

And hey is there any chance we can get Sumo's confession too?

Just asking. 😊

Keep writing and we'll be waiting...

Love
Cas

Hey Cas 🤗

Your comments always leave me with a wide grin on my face!! 😳😃 Thankyouuu soo much for telling me what all parts you liked...It feels so fulfilling to know!!

And I have to agree with you, a bossy Sumo was all HEART!! I loved that side of her just like Niki did. That was what set her apart from the rest. As for Mr. Malhotra, well he always had an amazing sense of humor right 😉 But as much as I loved his witty side and his sensible/supportive side, I loved his cute grumpy side too...There was this child in him who always craved for love and companionship. How I wish we could see more of that side.

Will really try to continue this if possible...and thanks once again. Its you guys only and your comments that motivate me to write on ShraMan 😊😊

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deepoceaan

@deepoceaan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

excellent os

very well written

really loved it

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Swarnima

@Swarn283

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

How I wish all this had happened!

I'm sure you'll keep on bringing in these random stuffs more oftentimes

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Malika, this was so cute! And for once, the people around them didn't keep their mouths shut and let them know things they needed to know...

I still can't believe the 'creative' writes who were sane in the start thought the media thing, the public humiliation as the only thing that could be the 'thing' they give us closure... What the hell... God, I think we will always F*** pissed about it, for life, no matter how much the certain amazing tall man wants us to not bash the writers because he cares about us all...