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Thanks Sri!
Will update soon!😊
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Hi friends,

Here is the part 6-A of this FF!
Thanks for all ur response!
Sorry if it's boring, short and especially to be very late!
Working on a project alone and the fishing date is soon. So loads of work to do!

Hope u all like it!

Part-5 : Another simple day!

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Part 6-A : Those 20 days (Chakor's POV)

"A lot of things happened last 20 days in my professional & personal life. I learnt a lot about my sister and my surroundings. Never thought of our two families will be linked by love. Yes by love" Chakor repeated to herself while going through her diary.

Coming to the page where she has drawn a warning mark, she started to read it and remember that day:
I remember well Swami Vivekananda's quote "In a day, when you don't come across any problems - you can be sure that you are travelling in a wrong path", but that doesn't mean I have to face the same problem everyday: Mr. Suraj Rajvanshi.

Whenever I pass through the corridor, especially in front of his room, I just try to avoid falling on his sight but unfortunately, it happened not only once but thrice on the same day.

1)I was coming back from HR Dep with my focus on all the document they gave me and collided with someone. I was about to fall, so closed my eyes in anticipation but I felt a long muscular arm around my waist and a hand holding my left hand. Opening my eyes, I saw him and freed myself from his grip. Without uttering a single word I went from there, feeling his eyes following my steps.

2)During the lunch break, while going to the staffs quarters there was a pizza delivery boy who called me and asked me to give the parcel to Mr. SR. Seeing his afraid face of losing the job and finding no one else than me there, I took it and went in search of someone and found Mr. Pandey coming out of Devil's room. I called him to other side of the corridor and gave Devil's parcel to him. As I turned to go, again we collided. This time I didn't fall. I lifted my eyes to see his eyes firing at me and I went from there in silence please mode.

3) There was again a collision around 7 pm, but this time it was not me but him. I think he was having a serious talk with Mr. Pandey and I was with Mrs. Singh, talking about our new job in the corner of the corridor. Due to sudden heavy rain, floor tiles became slippery. He was passing by the side, when he slipped, collided with me and I closed my eyes in fear of falling, by god's grace he hold me with his one hand and the other hand was on pillar for support. Then I don't remember what happened for few seconds(or even minutes) after opening my eyes, before Mrs. Singh came to help me stand on foot. Without speaking a single word, he went from there.

"Seriously, I felt like slapping myself for being around him." saying this, she started to turn few pages and stopped seeing red heartin drawn on the corner of the page.

"Never thought my Imlu can hide something from me. Since our parents death in a car accident, I thought I was the only one with whom she shared everything."

It was just a day like any other since my arrival to this univ with few encounters with Mr. Devil, training classes and all, until I noticed them, so close to each other, with full of smile on their face in an embrace. Seeing them my face turned red, I don't know even now if it was dissapointment or angry. I dialled her number to hear her lie that she was in library. So I decided to speak to her alone in the evening.

While going back to the quarters, he came out of his car and stopped going inside his house seeing me. He came up to me and tested my patience by irritating me with Championship, competition ... In verge of tension, I screamed to stop him and took hold of his collar. And asked if he can't control his brother. Realising what I did and said, I let his collar and started to go from there when I heard "They are in love!" turning toward him, I tried to figure out how come he understood, what was going in my mind. And then pointing fingers in the opposite direction, he said "There they come!" I saw my sister Imli and Devil's brother Vivaan coming together holding hand in hand.

A lot of things happened that day :
- Imli promised that day she will not hide anything from me
- I got to know that they are in love since Imli's first year in this univ
- Imli was supporting that Devil as he is their only support for their love until that day
- Devil was just Devil for me but a best friend to my sister
- I saw him being himself with his brother and not a Rude

"Now I understand why there was hesitation in Vivaan's talk when we first met!
From that day, I wanted to not think bad about him as we are going to be relatives."

She again started to turn few pages and stopped seeing lightning symbol on the corner of the page.

The next day itself I went to his room during break hours to talk about our siblings. I thought he would behave normally, nope I was wrong! He was still a Devil from all side possible.

"What brings you here?" was what he said seeing me on his door step.
Composing myself, I entered the room and started to tell about my family. He stood up from his chair and came up to me to tell "What does it matter?". At that moment, my thought was : "Is he dumb or testing my patience?"
Letting it go, I asked if any of his family member knew about ImVan's love.
"Don't you have any other work?"
"A question is not an answer"
"Stop repeating the same thing always!" interrupting her talk
As I couldn't take it any more, I asked him to stop behaving rudely, showing my index finger as a warning indication.
He took hold of my finger with his ones as if it was a fish and said "Aawaaz Neeche!"
"Here, I'm just your Dean and nothing else!"
Saying this he loosen the grip on my finger and went back to his seat.

Seeing a different face of him was not new for me:
- Angry bird look in univ
- Calm and posed with his brother
- His carrying nature when it's necessary
-...

Understanding what he meant, I started to move out of the room, when he said "Come to Caf next to mandhir at sharp 7 this evening!"
I just nodded and went from there. I didn't even know if he noticed my action or not.

"I know that personal life is different from professional but he is tooo much. With all those incident that happened since my arrival, I still don't know if I can call him Devil or"
"Didi" hearing her sister calling, she got up from her chair posing her diary on the table and went on the direction where her sister was standing and continued to think "I like working here as students are too cooperatives. Else the only reason I'm here is to be with"
"Didi" she is interrupted by Imli again.

Precap:
The sequel from Suraj's point of view!

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Thanks for reading friends!
Sorry again to be late & for this short update !
Next part will be a longer one on saturday!
Comment & hit the like button if It's worth it!

Part-6B : Those 20 days (Suraj's POV)

Any ideas for the coming track(SUKOR scenes) are welcomed!

- Maithili


Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
great upt
waiting for suraj's pov
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kavyabenerjee

Superb...waiting for next update


Thanks Kavya!
Hope u like the next part too!😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: srividhya68

great upt
waiting for suraj's pov
cont soon

Thank u dear!
Next part on saturday!
Started to think about it! Wish that u like it 2!
Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi friend,

Happy Christmas to all!😊
😉
Here is the 2nd part for those 20 days in Suraj's POV!
Hope u all enjoy it!

Part-6A : Those 20 days (Chakor's POV)

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Part 6-B : Those 20 days (Suraj's POV)
"Don't know if it's enmity of last birth or the way she is, but there is always something which pushes me to tease her, no I mean irritate her. I liked to play with her emotions."

As he was going through the contact list in his phone and stopped seeing the name "Billi Ki Rani" he starts to remember that event as if a video recorder is playing :

A lot of things happened that day, I'm sure it's since she is here. Whenever we meet in the corridor, there is atom bombs blasts. So there is nothing special about it. But the day I asked her to meet me in the Caf, my bad luck was with me. I was waiting out of the Caf when she came towards me and said
"You are tooo punctual!" even now, I don't know if it was a compliment or not. I just gave her a smile and we entered the Caf. When we asked a table for two, the personnel screamed "One table for a couple!".

The look she gave me was like "What the hell is this?"
The manager seeing me from his cabin came running towards us apologizing on behalf of the new personnel and explained him that there is no need to scream but he has to do the work by himself for me, their regular customer.

Few seconds after we got a table and when the server came to take the order, he asked "We have a promotion on dinner for couple would you like to have it?".

Why in the world they have to think us as a couple? was my thought at the moment but I still think the same. Can't two person of opposite sex go together to have coffee without being considered as couple. Let it be!

We explained him calmly that there is "No couple wouple here!". Since then we have been there for at least two times and he took care of not addressing us like that..

We ordered sandwiches and drinks, soft ones and started to talk.
"What did you want to say?" still in stiff mode
"We aren't at univ, you can behave normally!"
"I'm like that!" I know that by now she knew my different faces, anyway I don't care about it!
"Your wish!" I felt like she was in no mood to be here with me but no choice.
She went on to tell me about her parents even after I told her that Vivaan already talked about them.
She finished her monologue in 3 mins and 42 secs after repeating 1000 of times that she is and will always be there for her sister Imli in different modulations and different varieties.
And then she started to throw tones and tones of questions about Vivaan, my family ...
There was a moment I wanted to go from there but I don't know why I got that idea, I imagined her as a queen for cats, with whisker, meowing all the time and I had a great laughter inside me.
I told about my small family with my father, my brother and me. I assured her that my father will accept Imli without any problem and that her sister will be the queen of our mansion.
The server brought our dinner tray and served us before leaving us alone.
Suddenly I asked her "Can I have your number in case my father need to talk to you in future?" her eyes said she was confused at my sudden query.

She asked me to take her number from univ docs. Come on, does she think I will go through all docs to find it when she can, being present, here in front of me.
Finally she gave me her number and I stored it as "Billi Ki Rani".
Minutes passed, we finished our sandwiches and were waiting for coffee when she asked me about my mother. Hearing the word "mother" made me go crazy inside and out.
I couldn't control my anger so went from there without uttering a single word on that subject (PS I paid the bill before leaving the Caf).

I don't know what she thought of my reaction but the next day I think she thought me to be a monster.
It was around 7:00 PM when I called Vivaan, I don't know what happened on the other side, the call connected and I heared him telling "Bhai...". I felt he was talking to me but he continued "Bhai feels coupable for our mother's death. Don't take yesterday event to heart, Chakor di".

I couldn't hold on to my chair when I hear him tell about my weakness, my mother. So I went directly to the sports room, watching around if I can find Vivaan and asking to students outside if they saw Chakor. They told me she is inside so I went in. I saw her come out in her usuals, wet hair and holding a sports bag.

"Why do you want to know about my mother? It's your sister who is going to live in that house and not you! Can't you keep things to yourself? Where is Vivaan?" It was like my turn to launch bullets of questions.

For each step I put forward, she stepped back, until she hit a bench and was about to fall when I hold her by her waist. She opened her eyes to look at me and then I don't remember what happened for few seconds before the current went off.
My grip on her left arm tightened, she asked me to let her go, but I couldn't as I needed someone near me at that time. She took her phone and turned on the torch light, gradually I let go of and followed her in order to avoid the dark.

On my way to the quarters, I tried to connect with Vivaan but he was unreachable. So I left a voice message scolding him for telling about our mother to his future wife's sister!

All this while she was walking in front of me, listening to all my talks and glancing at me here & there.

I still remember that day, it was a Friday evening before the starting of holidays around 8:00 PM.

When we entered staffs quarters, it was silent at 100% with no one around us. When she neared her house, I saw her stumble at first I thought she hit on something but then she was fainting, so I ran up to her and hold her to not let her fall and saw that she was unconscious.
I carried her up to my house and throw open the door before entering inside and putting her on my bed.
Luckily no one was there to see us like this.
I tried to wake her up by whatever ways possible(sprinkling water...), so I called a doctor for the first time in my life and it's for the one I didn't care about.

Yes, I changed my decision of not hurting her. I know how it feels losing mother, and she has lost both her parents, so I had some kind of soft corner for her. But sometimes, she is dancing on my nerves that I can't control my anger.

Doctor came and checked her to find out that Chakor had internal fever, so she asked me to take care of her, handing over the prescriptions and addressing me as Chakor's husband.

I didn't want to spoil doctor's mood so tried calmly to explain her. I hope she understood what I meant that day.

After doctor's departure I went to drug store to buy medicines. I don't know how I did that, but I was super rapido that evening, forgetting the anger she provoked and back at home to treat her.
I was near her when she started to move her toes and hands. She slowly open her eyes and suddenly they widened seeing me there.
She tried to got up but couldn't, turning her head analysing the room, she finally understood she was in my room!

"Why am I here? What happened?" with confused look
"Suhaag raat hone wala tha!" her reaction changed to my reply and I felt she was about to burst, so I decided to not let her speak "Ohh madam, don't think a lot. As you fainted I brought you here!" I saw a ray of relief on her face. "Imli is with Vivaan and friends. She said that you know about it!"

"She told me that they will be back in 2 days!" all the while she tried to sit so I helped her by putting pillows for her back support. "Did you tell Imli about me?"

"No, I wanted to know from you..." she didn't let me finish my sentence
"Don't tell, she will get hyper if she comes to know I fainted!"

I just nodded to affirm her wish!

After that, she was stubborn to go back to her house, she tried to get down, to stand up but she couldn't move a bit due to her high internal fever. So I suggested that she can stay here if she feels ok!

She had no other choice than to stay here.

She was the one after Vivaan to taste my cuisine, I didn't prepared a feast but I thought soup would be good for her health at that moment.

Imagine me helping someone, especially a girl to have supper, not in my lifetime! But it happened that day.

I didn't felt happy or bad for her but concerned as I'm the only one now to take care of her.
All the while we had a talk over my cooking skills, and the food we like... "Thank you Suraj!"
"If it's for soup, you have to thank my mom, who used to make it for me when I was..." seeing her reaction changed, I stopped there.

Her eyes told me she had loads of questions, it wasn't her fault but mine as I rewinded my words in my thought to find out my tongue has betrayed me.

I was about to go from there when I felt her soft hand hold mine to stop me from going.

"Why are you running from your past?"
"It's none of your business!"
I didn't want to hurt her, so tried to free my hand but couldn't.

She wanted me to cry out what I felt and I couldn't hold on any more too. So told her about my past, the past that is hunting me since last 10 years of my life!


Precap:
Chakor asks if he wants tea or coffee, screaming out from kitchen. And he tells her to decide!

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Thanks for reading friends!
Pls let me know if it's interesting or not!
Happy Christmas to u all once again!

Part-7 : Suraj's past

- Maithili


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved this update Maithu! So cute this was! ❤️
And the precap is so typically husband wife like, I love it! And very curious to know about Suraj's past too!
Update soon! Pretty please?

And a very Merry Christmas to you! 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey , I absolutely loved this update and you've made me so in love with this FF , update soon and a big merry Christmas to you
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: BreakingBlue

Loved this update Maithu! So cute this was! ❤️

And the precap is so typically husband wife like, I love it! And very curious to know about Suraj's past too!
Update soon! Pretty please?

And a very Merry Christmas to you! 🤗


Thanks a lot dear!😊
Super happy that u like it!

Started writing the next part, but can't continue due to Christmas celebration with family!
Will update it the sooner possible dear!

In the show even before their marriage, they were always fighting on one topic or other as married couple! That's their cute fight that made me fall in love with this couple!❤️

Thank u!🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Thahaanfan

Hey , I absolutely loved this update and you've made me so in love with this FF , update soon and a big merry Christmas to you


Glad u liked this FF!
It's all ur comments that make me write more else I would have given up!
Thank u dear!😊

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