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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

Nyc update with lovely ending!!

Liked it!!
Naina was keyed up vowing to dadi's medicine
Raghav stretched his hands to help Naina and asked her not to get panic
Raghav gave top priority to dadi's medicine over ironing ballu's sherwani
Naina in her mystify and baffled state burnt ballu's cloth and was on tenterhook and edgy regarding the outcome
Raghav took entire censure on him and got thrashing from Ballu too
Raghav is really earnest and solemn
Naina came for Raghav's aid and accepted her fault
Nyc song
Raina moments and their kiss!!😳😉

hey anuuu...thanks dearie😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

Lovely & heart touching update

Thanks dear

thanks simi😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

Thanks for the pm

Will be waiting for the next update

welcome...will be updating soonish😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

nice update
poor raghav
koi nhi maar ki wajah se inka first kiss hogya 😉
I hope wapas awkward na feel kare yeh dono
Awesome raina scene

thank uuu...I'm happy u liked this chappy too...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

lovely update
that man beat raghav so hate him
good that naina gave some money.. they are so cruel...
raghav should give back to them
thnx for pm

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Nice chapter dear...

Loved her concern for dadi and the way Raghav helps her every time...nice to see how he tries to save her when sherwani got burnt bcoz of her...and when she saves her when he was being beaten up...the last part of your update was too good👏

thank uuu...I love ur comments dear...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Lovely and heart touching update.

These Mehras are not worth of Raghav, poor guy does so much and they don't value him and his work, Naina came for her husband's rescue aww that's sweet of her.
Beautiful song and RaIna moments.
Waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM dear.

hey ananya...thanks a lot friend... 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
I'm really sorry for the late update...and thanks all of u 4 liking the last chapter...here is the 10th chapter...

Chapter 10

naina and raghav are lying on the bed oppositely facing each other...

they are not sleeping at all...they are are thinking of what just happened a few hours ago...their first kiss...

no...it is not like they are feeling guilty or something...in fact both of them felt really good...but still it is quite awkward...

let's see what they are thinking about it...

Naina's POV

he bhagwan...yeh kya hogaya???kaise hogaya???

ab mai raghav se nazrein kaise milaungi???pata nahi woh kya soch raha hoga...

ek minute...raghav toh mera husband hai na...aur husband ke sath toh yeh sab normal hi hai...

chiii naina...yeh kaise besharmo wali baatein soch rahi hai...

bas ab bahut hogaya...raghav chahey na hi bole...mai kal usse apni dil ki baat bol hi dungi...


Manwa laage.. o manwa laage
Laage re sanware
Laage re sanware
Le tera hua jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya ka ye gaanv re
Manwa laage.. o manwa laage
Laage re sanware
Laage re sanware
Le khela maine jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya kahai daav re


Raghav's POV

raghav tu kabse itna romantic hogaya be?pyar ka izhaar toh kiya nahi...direct kiss kardiya...

tujhe itni ajeeb lag raha hai toh soch naina ko kaisa lagega...woh toh mujhe baki ladko ki tarah hi samjhegi...

waise mai itna kyu dar raha hu...mai toh uska pati hu...jo usse bahut pyar karta hai...

lekin mere pyar ke barien me usse toh kuch bhi nahi pata...

batana padega...batana padega...

ha raghav...dar mat aur kal subah usse sab boldey...


[color=brown]Tumhe apna banane ka junoon
Sar pe hai, kab se hai
Mujhe aadat bana lo ik buri
Kehna ye tumse hai
Tumhe apna banane ka junoon
Sar pe hai, kab se hai
Sar pe hai, kab se hai


Next Morning

raghav and naina both thinks of expressing their feelings to each other...

"naina mujhe tumse kuch jaruri baat karni hai...",raghav approaches..

"mujhe bhi tumhe kuch baatana hai...koi baat nahi tum pehle bolo",naina says...

"nahi...nahi tum pehle bolo..",raghav tells her...

"nahi...pehle tum..."

"pehle tum..."

"it is okay...pehle tum hi bolo..."

this argument stays for a few moments...then raghav decides to put a stop to it...

"thik hai...pehle mai hi bolta hu...mujhe tumse kehna hai ki...",raghav hesitates...

"kya kehna hai?"naina asks...

"I...I...l...lo...",raghav stumbles...

"I kya?"

"I...",raghav could not complete his words as sudha comes to his doorstep...

"arrey chachi ap?kuch chahiye tha kya?"raghav asks...

"ha...woh veer Moscow se wapas agaya hai...tumharey sath shaam ke meeting ke barien me kuch batein karna chahta hai...tum jaldi uske room me ajao...",sudha orders...

"ji chachi...mai abhi aya..."

raghav then looks at naina...

"naina...mujhe jana hoga...but mai wapas ake apni baat jarur pura karunga...waise tumhe bhi toh kuch kehna tha na?"

"koi baat nahi...tumharey laut ne ke baad hi kahungi...",naina answers...

raghav leaves his room and goes to veer to talk about the meeting...

naina is alone in her room pondering over what raghav was going to say...

"pata nahi yeh raghav mujhse kya kehna chahta tha?kya woh bhi...nahi nahi naina tu kuch bhi soch ti thi..."naina thinks to herself...

her thoughts got disturbed by a ringtone...

it is not her mobile,it is raghav's...

naina picks up the phone...

it is from the office...

"ap 5 minute baad call kijiye...mai raghav ko phone dekar ati hu...",naina tells the person on phone...

"okay mam..."

naina hurries to veer's room...

"toh naina ko tune bataya ki nahi?"veer asks raghav...

hearing this naina hides behind the door to hear the full conversation...

"kya baatene ki baat kar rahe he ap veer bhaiya?"raghav asks...

"cmon raghav...don't act so innocent...tujhe pata hai main kya bol raha hu..."

"bhaiya mujhe sach me samajh nahi araha hai..."

"wahi...naina se shadi nahi karne ka sab plan tha...woh sanju and all that drama...",veer says...

"please bhaiya woh sab purani batein hai..."

"purani hai toh kya hua?important hai...waise tera naina se shadi karna toh plan me tha hi nahi...toh phir?"

"bhaiya please yeh sab chodiye...kaam ke barein mein baat kartey hai..."

"achha soch...jab teri pyari biwi ko iss barein me pata chalega toh woh kaise react karegi..."

"maine apse bola na...",raghav could not complete his sentence as he hears a sound...

it is naina who has dropped the mobile from her hands hearing all these...

"naina...",raghav moans her name...

"ha main...kyu aur kuch kehna hai kya raghav?"naina says in a calm voice.

"naina...woh..."

"raghav tumhara office se call aya tha...tum call karlena..."

naina leaves the place in anger...

"naina suno toh...",raghav tries to stop her...

"le beta sambhal apni wife ko...",veer taunts him

raghav gives veer an angry look and goes after naina...

"naina please meri baat toh suno..."

"ab kehney aur sunne ke liye kuch bacha hi nahi hai raghav.."

"but naina tum ja kaha rahi ho?"

"jahannum mein...aur ha mere piche aye toh bahut bura hoga.."

"naina...tum..."

"tumhe sab pata tha?aur tumne phir bhi kuch nahi kaha...aur phir tumhe mujhpe taras aya aur mujhse shadi karli?"

"aisi baat nahi hai..."

"bas...aur kuch mat bolo..."

naina leaves from the house leaving a sad raghav behind...


Dil jude bina hi tut gaye
Hath mile bina hi chhut gaye
Ki likhe ne lekh kismet ne..
Baar baar rod akhiyan
Tainu jo na vekh sakiyan
Khole aaye aaj
Kudrat ne..Kataan main ki ve din
Teri soth tere bin
Main toh jiya na mara
Chan se jo tute koi sapna
Jag suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage
Koi rahe na jab apna
Jag suna suna lageJag suna suna hai toh..
Yeh kyun hota hai..
Jab yeh.. dil rota hai
Roye sisak sisak ki hawayein
Jag suna lage
Chan se jo tute koi sapna
Jag suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage
Koi rahe na jab apna
Jag suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage re...


after passing a few meters out of the house...someone presses a handkerchief in naina's mouth...before understanding anything naina gets unconscious...

raghav is sitting in his room with a broken heart...
but he does not know..his wife is being kidnapped...




so whom do u think kidnapped naina?
by the sorry 4 a short chappy...plz consider it as a trailer for the upcoming twist...😉plzzz share your views


Edited by lamia1210 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
raina were going to confess but that veer spoiled everything... now she is so hurt and angry on him..but who kidnapped her
thnx for pm

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