Devakshi SS: Being Crazy in love/CH-12/UPDATED/PG-58 - Page 28

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mygaby



2 more days😭


i love ur ss ...waiting like crazy...just one thing which i didn't like was when shona was shown desperate to taste dev and indeed she totally lost it and did everything to Dev...its like a rape ...priyanka ka movie baad aa gaya...could u tell y u thought it was right what shona did?????????????????


Thik hai sirf 2 din... Countdown starts 😆😆

And sri di ne yeh isiliye likha kyonki woh sona ki deewangi dikhana chahti thi shayad... Ki woh kaise pyaar mein andhi ho gyi... And d title itself says... Being crazy in love... That is called crazy... And crazy means insanity... And tasting dev was like being crazy for her... As she wanted to show how desperate she has become in his love... Hope i m able to clear ur doubt...
Aab sri di toh hai hi bolne k liye...
Strictly my pov... 😃😃 Baki ka kaam writer ki
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh


Thik hai sirf 2 din... Countdown starts 😆😆

And sri di ne yeh isiliye likha kyonki woh sona ki deewangi dikhana chahti thi shayad... Ki woh kaise pyaar mein andhi ho gyi... And d title itself says... Being crazy in love... That is called crazy... And crazy means insanity... And tasting dev was like being crazy for her... As she wanted to show how desperate she has become in his love... Hope i m able to clear ur doubt...
Aab sri di toh hai hi bolne k liye...
Strictly my pov... 😃😃 Baki ka kaam writer ki


ok acc to u its her going insane...that's a valid point...what i felt was when dev touched her first time , she discovered herself, her passionate side ...at that time she should have emotional breakdown instead she acted opposite ...if dev had also touched her and if they did made love that time, i would have understood but he didn't ...he was acting like a sex toy for her
Edited by mygaby - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mygaby



2 more days😭


i love ur ss ...waiting like crazy...just one thing which i didn't like was when shona was shown desperate to taste dev and indeed she totally lost it and did everything to Dev...its like a rape ...priyanka ka movie baad aa gaya...could u tell y u thought it was right what shona did?????????????????


sry
sometimes hum obsession,desperation ,aur love ko mix kar dete hain and that's what i did...waise bhi light grey (dark nahi kahungi ) fiction mein itna toh chalta hai. Dont worry iss fiction mein ,i wont make Sona/Dev kill anybody.😆

PRIYANKA CHOPRA'S movie...which one...main movies zyada nahi dekhti...maine last 'Chennai express' dekhi thi (that too on tv)...now u can understand my knowledge movies mein😕
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh


Thik hai sirf 2 din... Countdown starts 😆😆

And sri di ne yeh isiliye likha kyonki woh sona ki deewangi dikhana chahti thi shayad... Ki woh kaise pyaar mein andhi ho gyi... And d title itself says... Being crazy in love... That is called crazy... And crazy means insanity... And tasting dev was like being crazy for her... As she wanted to show how desperate she has become in his love... Hope i m able to clear ur doubt...
Aab sri di toh hai hi bolne k liye...
Strictly my pov... 😃😃 Baki ka kaam writer ki


Absolutely right my dear👏
secondly , mujhe yeh bhi batana tha Dev ka past jaan ne ke baad Sona sorry feel karegi.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: srilotus


sry
sometimes hum obsession,desperation ,aur love ko mix kar dete hain and that's what i did...waise bhi light grey (dark nahi kahungi ) fiction mein itna toh chalta hai. Dont worry iss fiction mein ,i wont make Sona/Dev kill anybody.😆

PRIYANKA CHOPRA'S movie...which one...main movies zyada nahi dekhti...maine last 'Chennai express' dekhi thi (that too on tv)...now u can understand my knowledge movies mein😕


aitraaz movie


well its ur thought of portraying love ...and i loved every bit of it except this scene...eagerly waiting for next update ...however, if u ask me if I was Dev in real life aaawara , after what she did with me , I would have never married her even though i like her ...Sona 's pure soul got a bit messy here in my POV...two lovers making love is one thing , one forcing to the other is another thing...


plz don't feel disheartened after reading this and stop writing ...m acting as critic coz i have been following this since a long time...its not like i read all at once go...



true fan sometimes can be harsh

Suman





Edited by mygaby - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: srilotus


Absolutely right my dear👏
secondly , mujhe yeh bhi batana tha Dev ka past jaan ne ke baad Sona sorry feel karegi.


Thank U di.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mygaby


ok acc to u its her going insane...that's a valid point...what i felt was when dev touched her first time , she discovered herself, her passionate side ...at that time she should have emotional breakdown instead she acted opposite ...if dev had also touched her and if they did made love that time, i would have understood but he didn't ...he was acting like a sex toy for her



She discovered her love for Dev ...but at the same time she was angry and crazy in love too ,that's why she used words like"RANDOM GIRL" and we know who such girls are .
Uss time woh kissi bhi extent tak jaa sakti thi...
Dev ne control kaise kiya? ,another question arises.
Dev is an experienced man...woh ab tak girls ko sex toys samajhta aaya hai...but for him Sona was not any of those girls...that's why Dev ne uss time Sona ke emotions ko samjha and decided not to touch her.
Socho agar touch kiya hota toh Sona ki preg ka update main likh rahi hoti.😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: srilotus



She discovered her love for Dev ...but at the same time she was angry and crazy in love too ,that's why she used words like"RANDOM GIRL" and we know who such girls are .
Uss time woh kissi bhi extent tak jaa sakti thi...
Dev ne control kaise kiya? ,another question arises.
Dev is an experienced man...woh ab tak girls ko sex toys samajhta aaya hai...but for him Sona was not any of those girls...that's why Dev ne uss time Sona ke emotions ko samjha and decided not to touch her.
Socho agar touch kiya hota toh Sona ki preg ka update main likh rahi hoti.😆


ok got it...no more doing ur bheja fry😆


do update soon😃









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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mygaby


ok got it...no more doing ur bheja fry😆


do update soon😃










Sona ki peggy 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mygaby


aitraaz movie


well its ur thought of portraying love ...and i loved every bit of it except this scene...eagerly waiting for next update ...however, if u ask me if I was Dev in real life aaawara , after what she did with me , I would have never married her even though i like her ...Sona 's pure soul got a bit messy here in my POV...two lovers making love is one thing , one forcing to the other is another thing...


plz don't feel disheartened after reading this and stop writing ...m acting as critic coz i have been following this since a long time...its not like i read all at once go...



true fan sometimes can be harsh

Suman





Hi Suman😃
Actually ,to some extent u r right...aur aisa bhi nahi ki i intentionally wanted to write such a scene...becoz i know i m very bad at writing such stuff and specially emotional scenes.
And jus aisi kuch story likhna chahti thi otherwise i know writing story is not my cup of tea. and i mean it.
@ bold Not at all...mujhe bohot achha laga...iss tarah ke discussions mein mujhe bohot interest aata hai...instead i am thankful to u...mujhe pata toh chala kuch toh aisa hai mere fiction mein jo ki discussion ka point ban sakta hai.thanku so much dear.😃🤗

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