PriVeer Story Circle - Page 94

How do you people even come up with these ideas?!

If anyone is not going to update now,can I post mine ?

Iam posting the next one guys. Hope you all find it Ok.

"Mr ACP! Last night you were possessed by a virgin's spirit". The inspector presses the breaks on hearing that.

"Hello" Commissioner Roy was still waiting on the walky talky that was no where to be found.
Upon the sudden pressing of the brakes the car screeched and Priyanka screamed. Ranveer " Varma? What's this?" Is this the way to push...He was busy lecturing his subordinate and suddenly wondered why isn't the youngest female Oberoi trouble maker not interested in this conversation? He was astonished to find her head glued with that of the front seat's head rest. She wasn't moving. And when he touched her shoulder taking her name she fell down with a thud backwards. There was blood oozing out of her head. He noticed the blood in the handcuffs that were hanged onto the side of the head rest. Before he could utter any thing else he heard a faint HELLO coming out from the walky talky that lying near his feet. He took it and answered " hello! hello? ". Then came the reply to which he answered he would be back to city soon and finally after making a respectful "OK Sir! Yes Sir! I will definitely Sir! " He cut it off. Inspector Varma was dumbstruck with the view as he moved his head back and uttered " Shit!! What have I done?".Ranveer looked back from Priyanka in the direction towards Varma and moved his eyebrows upwards. Varma gulped down which looked like a huge lump of something inside.

Ok! Friends so here's my first update for PriVeer. Forgive any grammatical errors as well as typing mistakes. Hope you find it enjoyable

Oh lord! Hope Prinku will be OK. Nice work, dimaag!

Originally posted by: Immaturebookie

How do you people even come up with these ideas?!

Never in a million years did I think we'd have a horror genre added to our thread and you guys are killing it👏

I do want to update but not sure if mine would be good enough at the moment. I guess I'd wait and watch and if inspiration does strike i will update😃

If no one else is around, I'll continue.. updating in another 30 mins.

Originally posted by: twerping

Oh lord! Hope Prinku will be OK. Nice work, dimaag!

Yeah! Lets see what's more in store for these two 😉 and thanks twerping 😃

Originally posted by: Tahiti-1

Goood job dimaag!!!
😊

Thank you Tahiti dear 😛 actually I didn't wanted to end their journey itni jaldi jaldi 😉 So let's see what has twerping been up to? Iam curious for twerping's update jaldi

Originally posted by: twerping

If no one else is around, I'll continue.. updating in another 30 mins.

Yes, twerps do the honours please and I'll go after you as I already have something ready. Just waiting too see how things go on 😆